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Floxytek - Dominus

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Topic Starter
Poggo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 декабря 2016 г. at 10:45:06

Artist: Floxytek
Title: Dominus
Tags: Revy collab Akemi_Homura skulls MystykAMV Mystyk la riposte 06 Katty Pie Katty_Pie
BPM: 190
Filesize: 8589kb
Play Time: 05:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Impudence (5,5 stars, 1254 notes)
Download: Floxytek - Dominus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Very big thx Mystyk for amazing SB <3

mod this <3 play this <3 rank this <3 yeaah~~
Revengexsoyah
4 Hours making this HOLY SHIT :(

Max. Score : 2.151.980
Max. Combo : 1.765

Download: Floxytek - Dominus (Katty Pie) [soyaH's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Poggo
Very big thx ^^
Revy
:3
Topic Starter
Poggo

Revy wrote:

:3

^^'
HeatKai


dafuq

later I irc mod the taiko mapper
Topic Starter
Poggo
OK ^^ ;)
Tshemmp
Hi. Please remember that some points are only my personal opinion, so you don't have to fix them if you don't want.

[Impudence]
Remove the countdown?
The purple combp color is really hard to see sometimes on this BG, I suggest changing it.
00:21:553 - SV*2,0x :o maybe reduce it a little bit to 1,5x for example?
00:43:342 (1) - RNC?
00:48:395 - same as 00:21:553
00:54:553 (8,9) - instead of circle-slider maybe use slider-circle? Feels better imo.
00:57:079 (8,9) - ^
01:23:763 (2) - ctrl+r?
01:33:553 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like this stacks. You can try this for exmaple:
96,192,93553,6,0,B|136:176|160:208|196:192,1,100,0|0
272,272,93868,1,0
240,112,94026,1,0
416,192,94184,6,0,B|376:208|352:176|316:192,1,100,0|0
188,308,94500,1,0
324,76,94658,1,0
01:39:868 (5) - this double repeat doesn't feel good
01:44:605 (3) - I don't like how this slider is covered with 01:43:658 (1), this kind of back jump is somehow unexpected. Also the flow would be better if you copy 01:44:289 (2) and paste it 01:44:605 and ctrl+h ctrl+j it.
01:45:868 (3) - ^
01:55:816 - add circle here with NC, it just feels better
01:56:132 - ^ but without NC ofcourse
01:58:342 (3,4) - maybe change the sequence so that (4) comes first and then (3)? This would increase the flow imo.
02:05:289 (1,2) - these return sliders don't fit imo, they take the speed out of the map.
02:26:289 (1,2) - all stacked on the same spot, it feels a bit tight so to speak. Maybe place them like this
02:29:763 (12) - make this to one long slider until 02:30:079 and move the spinner to 02:30:395 end shorten the spinner so that it fits again. At the moment the spinner just starts too early.
03:10:026 (3) - don't stack this under (1) imo
03:11:289 (3) - ^
03:13:342 - 50% volume
03:14:605 - 60% volume
03:15:868 - 40% volume
03:17:132 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the music
03:19:658 (7) - NC and this repeat slider is too long imo. Maybe you can shorten it to 03:20:210 and add a second repeat slider 03:20:289 with 3 repeats.
03:34:026 (3) - this back jump is hard to see
03:39:868 (1) - 2,0x SV is very surprising here.
05:01:974 (1) - RNC
05:02:605 (1) - ^
05:03:868 (1) - ^
05:15:237 (1) - ^
05:19:658 (1) - unsnapped slider
05:21:553 (1) - RNC
05:22:816 (1) - ^

That's it, I hope some points will help you.
Topic Starter
Poggo
Tshemmp thx ^^ you very much helped me^^
ReVeNg3r
Set offset to 5171 and it will be perfect

I love SB <3
Topic Starter
Poggo

ReVeNg3r wrote:

Set offset to 5171 and it will be perfect
Thank you ^^
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested.

[Taiko]
- Remove countdown and letterbox during breaks.

00:02:170 - There's a clear drum snare here so 5-plet may be more appropiate. Try dkddk
00:10:223 - I believe you can have other variation other than spamming kdddk...
00:20:328 - nothing wrong but you can add more variation like using d d K in later stage as a progression
00:47:486 - Use dkk dkk for the last two expresses the increasing in tension well imo
00:48:434 - Don't use consecutive sliders because they will broken (the last slider point is missed)
00:52:855 - k
01:05:171 - the music doesn't give any beat at the 4th tick so putting k there sounds a bit odd. Try ddkdddk
02:01:065 - K
02:05:802 - same as 01:05
02:34:065 - add a note here? Even though the music sounds like that it feels a bit empty.
02:46:223 - same as 01:05
03:12:118 - I guess in this section you need to put more finishes, not by past logic, but refer to the recent accent patterns.
03:37:381 - d as indicated in the music
03:44:486 - same as 01:05, you may consider ddkkddk here
03:50:802 - triplet sounds more suitable here
04:29:960 - same as 01:05
05:29:249 - the note should be placed here.

In overall a nice trial, the diff presents the feeling of techno stuffs and sounds nice. The problem is you can try to stream up some necessary positions so accumulate the tension and accelerate the beat to fit with the song. Also you may need more variation instead of copying stuffs (dddkddk appearing many many times), otherwise parts like ddkdkdk ddkdkdk ddkdkdk they gets really boring.
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you ^^ fixed all)
GamerX4life
my mod:

[General]
  1. sometimes overmapped
[Impudence]
  1. 00:37:065 (3) try this: http://puu.sh/v1Ty (better flow)
  2. 00:39:434 (6) delete circle and put (7,8,9) to 00:39:434
  3. 00:39:749 put (10,11,12) to this place and add circle at 00:40:144 (then it looks like this: http://puu.sh/v1V6 )
  4. 00:42:749 (12) cut the slider to 00:42:907 and add circle at 00:43:065
  5. 00:44:723 (9) delete circle
  6. 00:55:065 try this: http://puu.sh/v1Y0
  7. 00:57:907 (13,14,15) add a slider instead of them ( from: 00:57:907 to: 00:58:065 )
  8. 00:59:644 try this: http://puu.sh/v1Zn
  9. 01:53:565 (13) delete circle
  10. 01:55:223 in my opinion: sliders, which end at the white tick really feel bad in songs like this
  11. 01:56:486 same
  12. 01:57:749 same (i won't pick it up anymore)
  13. 02:01:223 i would cut the spinner to this, so you can add a note at 02:01:381
  14. 02:03:671 put (9) to this point (and add a note at 02:03:907 ?)
  15. 02:19:065 try this: http://puu.sh/v22c
  16. 02:23:802 try this: http://puu.sh/v22y
  17. 02:36:355 add something like this: http://puu.sh/v22Z and delete this note at: 02:36:434
  18. 02:51:513 same
  19. 02:54:434 (1,2,3,4) prolong the slider like this: http://puu.sh/v23s
  20. 03:58:855 nice mirrored sliders :)
  21. 04:05:171 try this: 04:05:171
  22. 05:12:118 This streams don't fit the music and it feels really overmapped
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Poggo
;) Thx for mod ^^ ;)
Hitomi May
Привет, у меня появилось немного настроения для мода

Мне нравится скин

[Стандрат]

00:11:013 (8) - лучше бы звучало, если бы был стрим тут. До следующего круга
00:21:592 (1) - можно сделать реверс, так как после нижнего слайда рука так и просится вверх пойти, но как хочешь
00:38:013 (1,2,3,4) - вот эти, чтобы ровными были, могла бы скопировать один и просто покрутить
00:46:855 (5) - нк
Часть Реви смотрится рандомно немного
01:51:276 (1) - финиш сюда на начало
01:52:539 (5) - нк
02:10:223 (1) - может заглушить начало? как в музыке
02:14:013 (2) - здесь и дальше новое комбо на одиночных кругах
02:30:434 (1) - тоже приглушить немного бы
02:36:355 (11) - add circle
02:54:434 (1,2,3,4) - slides will sounds better if you end it in blue ticks. All slides in blue ticks
03:32:328 (1,2,3,4) - немного (?) кривой квадрат
04:55:460 (5) - I hear a note in this place. Btw I think that your parts are very good :3

Найс сб, но я чувствую её будут удалять, ибо даже у меня чуть л не приступ эпилепсии был, хотя я только модила
Вообще мне понравилась карта
Хорошая работа
Надеюсь у вас всё получится)
mancuso_JM_
As we promised in game about two weeks ago xD. Mod4Mod

[General:]

- Skin: You are missing the approachcircle.png and the reversearrow.png to complete the Circle Skin. You must add it in the folder
- Tags: --> There is an extra space between Revengexsoyah and skulls in tags, you should fix that for consistency between each difficulties
--> Add soyah in tags (Previous name as Ravengexsoyah) because if you try to find ranked mapsets with this name you can find it. Also try to add Collaboration on here, I could see some maps with a Collab in the mapset that contain this tag, in my opinion is better to respect that.
--> You're missing an underscore in Akemi's name, because must be Akemi_Homura, try to fix it please

[Impudence:]

- Settings:
--> In my opinion fit perfectly HP Drain Rate 7. If I were you I'll increase it by 1 Tick (HP+1)

Katty Pie:
00:18:434 (Spin): This ''weird'' rhythm starts 1/2 back in my opinion (in 00:18:276), I think that it's better if you move this one 1/2 back and then make it bigger by 1/2.
02:03:749 (9): Following the Instrumental, this 1/8 Slider should start 1/4 back. The rhythm starts here and in my opinion this kind of things are not difficult in this kind of difficulties. After that add another repeat in 1/8
02:12:749 (1,1,1): Why you use this Combo Spam? These notes are following the same thing in the music and belong from a same pattern. (1,2,3) is better, just Remove the New Combo on the 2nd and 3rd note
02:16:697 (2,3,4,5): Follow better the music if you move (3) to 02:16:776 and (4) to 02:16:855 to make a 3-plet with 2. If you listen the music, is really better. Also you can use this notes position:
03:39:434 (2): A triple Clap sounds fine here with (1) and (3), try to add a Clap in this note too
03:39:907 (T): To be sincere, I don't like this Slider Speed change, doesn't fit at all, the change is not to high. You should remove this Inherited Timing Point (Green Line) and mantain the Slider Velocity as before. If you do that, I feel unnecesary this New Combo too, try to remove it
03:54:818 (x): You Really need a note here, fit perfectly with drums. Try to move (7) nearer as it is now from (8,9,10) and then add this New note.

Revy:
00:39:592 (7,8,9): Stack correctly this pattern, (9) is out of this Stack. You just have to move (9) to (x:272 y:240)
00:42:749 (12): Following the Instrumental, this Slider should be in 1/8, fit perfectly with it. Also, you should unstack from (11), because made it invisible the first reverse arrow (If you mad the first thing obviously). I had think soemthing like this, the spacing is totally reasonable following the map in general.
00:52:339 (10): Listening the music, you are missing a Clap at the end of this Slider
01:00:434 (7): The same with this note, add a Clap please
01:05:486 (7): (^)
02:23:802 (3): Try to make this Slider in 1/8 (again) with a lot of repeats, fit better with music Really. With a lot of repetitons this Slider have to finish in 02:24:118 (on a Downbeat)
02:36:355 (x): You should add a Note here, following the instrumental fit perfectly and without it sounds empty. I highly recommend that
02:51:592 (6): Sounds in the music, you should add a Clap in this note
04:31:776 (x): Add a note, to follow better the Instrumental

Akemi_Homura:
01:26:013 (1): Looking this long Stream, makes a good sense if you add a Finish at the beginning of this Slider. Is useful to emphatisize the beginning of a New Pattern
01:31:065 (1): (^)
01:34:855 (1,2): These Sliders looks a bit weird at the hour to play the map (especially at the end of it, where the have a weird Curve). Plays better if you do a Simple Blanket to this one, is more playable. Try something like that:
03:15:907 (1,2,3): I really don't like this antijump, in a jumping map is like it kill the flow. I prefer to see a ''jumping pattern'' try to looking for some of symetry, I could find something like that:
03:19:697 (1): I think that you can make a mix with this Slider following the Vocal + the Drums. Try to make 2 kick Sliders in 1/4. The first one must start on here and finish in 03:20:486 (Where the vocal ends) and the other kick Slider have to Start in 03:20:565 and have to finish in 03:20:802 (Marking the end of the Drums). Here a Screenshoot to explain me better :P
03:21:276 (Storyboard): In my opinion Akemi_Homura (the name in the SB) should disappear when you press the last note before the Break Time section (so, here), makes more sense. Try to Fix it please
03:21:434 (Break): You should drag this break to 03:22:855 (Where the music change in the Rhythm), plays better with music and with the Storyboard. Or at least map still to here.
04:58:065 (5): For a better flow, stack this note properly with the previous Slider (3). You just have to move this note 1 grid right
05:22:223 (1): Fit better with music if you replace this Slider to a 3-plet in 1/4. (First note here, second note in 05:22:618 and the last one at the end of this Slider)

[soyaH's Taiko Oni:]
(I'M GOING TO DO THAT IN SPANISH)

Settings:
--> Me parece que es mejor si aumentas en un Tick el HP Drain Rate y el Overall Difficulty. Juega mejor para esta clase de dificultades (HP, OD +1)

Mod Info:
d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

--> Antes que nada. TENES 72 UNSNAPPED NOTES!!! Asi que debes hacerle resnap a todas las notas.
--> Solo puedes colocar 3 Breaks en las dificultades de Kiai, debes remover 1 o reacomodar un poco las que tienes
--> Ajusta el Audio Lead-In (Manualmente en el .osu notepad) en 2000 (Actualmente esta en 2018)

00:10:223 (T): Me gustaria que empieces con los Normal Hitsounds a partir de aca, juega mucho mejor en mi opinion empezar desde este Super Largo Stream. Intenta agregar una Inherited Timing Point (Linea Verde) aqui con Normal Hitsounds

I'm tired to mod the Taiko xD (I just mentioned some General Stuffs). Sorry :(.
That's All for the moment.
Good Luck with your map Katty ;)
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you mancusojuanmattos <3 you very help me \o/ fixed almost all :oops: :oops: :oops:
Strawberry
[General]
`Firstly, I think it's necessary to reverse select "Enable countdown"
`The same thing in "Letterbox during breaks"
`Maybe to add a little Music Track will be better? Just suggestion.:3
`The map is pretty good!!!!

The mapset is okay broadly.Some nazi and suggestions from me >< sry.I hope it will be useful for your map.
Go.
[Impudence]
00:06:434 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:06:749 (7) - 1 grid down, to make this stream seems better.:D
00:10:223 (1) - 1 grid right and up. The same reason as 00:06:749
00:21:592 (1,2) - wow..maybe you can make them more good-looking?:p ok,just suggestion>< don't mind.
00:32:644 (8) - Also from some suggestions.The note is hard to read when the storyboard is twinkle..so I suggest to make this note not be covered by 00:32:328 (5,6,7) -
00:39:749 - I haven't seem any reason not to add a note here.
01:31:697 (3,5) - stack them better? It's easy to fix.
01:32:013 (4,6) - ^
01:59:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - put them to a rounded circle? Although now is not bad to seem..
02:26:013 (11) - same as 00:32:644 (8) -
02:45:907 (10) - ^
02:48:434 (11) - ^ (These just suggestions!you can keep them but I hope to make them better if you came up with a new pattern
02:50:960 (4) - ^
03:03:907 (2) - change to a 3note-stream?
03:34:223 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - wow...these..
code
136,80,214223,1,0
111,79,214302,1,0
88,89,214381,1,0
72,108,214460,1,0
70,132,214539,1,8
76,156,214618,1,0
96,170,214697,1,0
04:05:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ah-oh.make the circle perfect :3
04:51:276 (1,2,3,4) - Mad jump!!!the same bgm as 04:50:644 (1,2,3,4) - ..I suggest to reduce the spacing @.@
04:51:907 (5) - change to a circle and a 1/4 slider? you can make them in a same shape as 04:51:907 (5) -

These all I can do. ;P Ganbatte!
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx Strawberry ^.^ you very help me)
OnosakiHito
Oh, I will mod this map after I mapped my version for another mapper, since this could interrupt my own style.
Topic Starter
Poggo

OnosakiHito wrote:

Oh, I will mod this map after I mapped my version for another mapper, since this could interrupt my own style.
ahahahaa lol ok :3
KokoroStudiox3
I do not remember if the taiko has to be like the other difficulties
but I will put this anyway

inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Impudence] :
Combo1 : 0,124,249
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 139,23,255
SliderBorder : 198,250,250

- [soyaH's Taiko Oni] :
Combo1 : 252,27,32
Combo2 : 0,255,255

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Impudence] : 0
- [soyaH's Taiko Oni] : 1996

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [Impudence] : 1
- [soyaH's Taiko Oni] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Impudence] : Revy collab Akemi_Homura Revengexsoyah skulls MystykAMV
- [soyaH's Taiko Oni] : Revy collab Akemi_Homura Revengexsoyah skulls MystykAMV ← between Revengexsoyah and skulls there is a space of more

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Impudence] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:644, ends on 01:10:855
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:01:381, ends on 02:11:486
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:802, ends on 02:51:907
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:539, ends on 04:12:749
Kiai #5: Starts on 04:32:960, ends on 04:41:802
Kiai #6: Starts on 04:43:065, ends on 05:23:486
Kiai #7: Starts on 05:29:249, ends on 05:29:407

- [soyaH's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:644, ends on 01:10:855
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:01:381, ends on 02:11:486
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:802, ends on 02:51:907
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:539, ends on 04:12:749

[Impudence]

00:06:434 (3) - Add NC.
00:08:960 (3) -^
00:18:276 (1) - Add a finish.
00:30:434 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:40:539 (1) - Add a finish.
00:50:644 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:00:749 (1) - Add a finish.
01:20:960 (1) - ^
01:33:592 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:36:118 (1) - Add a finish.
01:38:644 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:39:907 (5) - Add NC.
01:46:223 (1) - Add a finish on the end.
02:00:118 (1) - Add a finish.
02:20:328 (1) - ^
02:30:434 (1) - ^
02:39:276 (1) - ^
04:53:170 (1) - Add a finish on the start.

nice :)
Topic Starter
Poggo
Yeah my trouble with hitsonds ^^' very big thx ^^
Lizellota
Hiiiii my lovely moe <3

[App]

00:30:434 - finish
00:32:960 - может быть сюда финиш? вроде неплохо звучит, да и в ритм, если да, поставь везде тогда :3
00:39:276 (5) - NC?
00:39:907 (10,11,12,13) - 1 grid left
00:41:802 (9) - NC?
00:44:171 (8) - ^
00:50:644 - finish
00:56:960 (1) - NC?
00:59:802 (1) - clap
00:57:907 - whereee is finish :<
01:02:960 (1) - clap
01:04:855 (1) - ^
01:05:802 (1,1,1) - maybe put claps on the spinners?
01:33:592 - finish
01:36:118 (1) - ^
01:38:644 - ^
01:53:644 (9) - remove clap
01:53:802 - finish
01:55:223 (1) - NC instead of 01:55:855 (1) ?
02:18:907 (7) - NC, i think
02:20:328 (1) - finish
02:30:118 (3) - clap
02:30:434 (1) - finish >.>
02:35:486 (7) - NC?
02:39:276 (1) - finish ._.
03:54:749 ~ 03:55:065 - может лучше слайдер впихнуть с 1\8?
04:00:118 (5) - NC
04:00:749 (1) - remove NC

That's all i think~

Lovelovelove <333
BCI
here comes a little suggestions~
collaboration in tags

[Impudence]
00:12:749 - этот стрим чутка не в ритм имо, вот так звучит => http://puu.sh/ORK7 ну или что-то подобное
01:02:960 (1) - RNC then add NC on a next white tick
01:30:434 (3) - NC for your combo pattern?
01:32:328 (5) - NC and RNC on next (1)?
04:24:118 (7) - NC and RNC on (1)

офигенно <3 удачи :з
Roxas
Hi moe

[General]

Sb is :Q___________

[Imprudence]

00:18:276 (1) - Add finish
00:24:749 (3,1) - Why there aren't clap? o.o add clap here xD
00:42:434 (11) - Add clap at starts slider
00:42:749 (12) - Add clap only at starts and end slider (so not in the repeat)
01:04:855 (1) - Add clap
01:05:802 (1,1,1,1) - Here make a volume climb because the volume of the song goes up :D
02:50:644 (1) - Remove NC
04:22:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why here you put clap in 1st and 3rd white line when after you make a big part with clap in 2nd and 4th white line? Check it :P

Good luck moe ♥♥
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