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Topic Starter
Iceskulls
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
-Kyra-_old
Maware, Im the first! owo Im beginner, so Im sorry. And my english is very-very lame. ><"

[General]
  1. Nitori-chan, Sound Holic, Touhou... Omg!! *-* Nice... xD
  2. Everything is okay~
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:603 and 00:51:036 - Dont make short breaks, if the song still have a nice rhythm.
  2. 01:41:192 (3) - Dont use short sliders at normal diffs, like this one. Delete 01:41:640 (4) and add a repeating slider.
    Starts at 01:41:192 and ends at 01:41:911
  3. 01:41:192 (3) and 02:18:664 - These breaks... Add notes or sliders.
  4. 02:26:484 - ^
  5. 03:32:461 (1) - Use another slider pattern. You used it much.
  6. 03:49:476 (1) - Move this x: 256 y: 192.
  7. 04:18:133 (1), 04:28:431 (2), 04:46:789 (2), - New slider pattern, please.
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:453 and 00:46:513 - Add notes, sliders etc...
  2. 00:50:596 and 00:52:956 - ^
  3. 01:52:834 (3) - Do you like this slider, huh? :D
  4. 02:11:171 - B-Break again... ><"
  5. 02:18:391 - ^
  6. 02:25:381 - ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:44:493 - Stop with these breaks :o
  2. 00:50:573 - ^
  3. 02:12:233 - ^
  4. Delete the short breaks, and add some note, slider.
I had problems with the same slider patterns and the short breaks. But the song is catchy, your patterns are awesome. Im not a good modder, but hope you liked it. Good luck!
See ya~
-Kyra-_old
Btw, it was the M4M! ;D
Neil Watts
Hi, from my modding queue~

Oh, I love this music =3 Nitori-chaan!!

Shihori - Kaze no Kioku

-Normal-
- 00:17:237 (2) - Put a clap here
- 00:24:401 (2) - ^
- 00:31:565 (2) - ^
- 00:33:356 (2) - ^
- 00:35:148 (2) - ^
- 00:38:730 (2) - ^
-- I'll not quote all the soundmapping problems, but I highly recommand you to entirely remap the sound mapping.
Place a clap on every downbeat. See the Music Theory to learn more.
- 02:54:065 (1) - slider not in rhythm - try this http://puu.sh/9JSp4/ff58eed35f.png

The general mapping is excellent, but you just really have to remake the sound mapping.

-Hard-
Same comment concerning the sound mapping for this diff.
I found nothing. Good job ! :D
This mapset is really well-mapped, except the sound...

-Lunatic-
Same comment on the sound mapping. :(
- 01:44:103 (1,2,3) - to avoid
- 01:45:446 (2,3) - swap the position of these circles
- 02:08:953 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - to avoid - try to replace a part of the stream with a 1/2 slider and reverse arrows.
- 03:22:498 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
- 04:12:759 (1,2,3) - to avoid
- 04:19:252 (6) - change the placement of this slider
- 04:49:700 (1,2,3) - to avoid
- 04:51:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

And...That's all what I can find ^^
You're really a good mapper, but really, please change this sound mapping.
I don't think you can get ranked with it. (This is just my humble opinion, but an experienced modder should be able to know.)

Use your claps on the downbeats to enhance the rhythm and fill the rest of the music with some soft whistles (or what you want).
I know it's long but I had to do it with my own beatmap.

Good luck ! :D
ono
random mod because shihori \o/

General
I think the offset is slightly off. It sounds better when you change it to 14,573

Lunatic
00:18:155 (1,2) - this plays oddly imo. this sounds better for the music, maybe you can give it a try?:


00:35:281 (1) - i think having this as a slider is quite detracting to the music. maybe change it to just a single note and same combo with the 1,2 previous to it?

02:09:423 (8) - this slider puts a gap in an otherwise beautiful stream :( a bit awkward as well, since the tick in the middle of the slider has an equally strong drumbeat as the rest of the stream.

02:24:871 (6) - maybe you should increase this by 1 or 2 reversals so that it finishes off the section nicely on the big white tick (and suits the music)

04:24:423 (9,10) - maybe remove these?

it's a fun map! <3
Topic Starter
Iceskulls
Topic Starter
Iceskulls
-Kyra-

-Kyra- wrote:

Maware, Im the first! owo Im beginner, so Im sorry. And my english is very-very lame. ><"

[General]
  1. Nitori-chan, Sound Holic, Touhou... Omg!! *-* Nice... xD
  2. Everything is okay~
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:603 and 00:51:036 - Dont make short breaks, if the song still have a nice rhythm. :arrow: No I want that short breaks it goes with the song ><
  2. 01:41:192 (3) - Dont use short sliders at normal diffs, like this one. Delete 01:41:640 (4) and add a repeating slider.
    Starts at 01:41:192 and ends at 01:41:911 :arrow: No 2 times repeat slider is not good for normal diff
  3. 01:41:192 (3) and 02:18:664 - These breaks... Add notes or sliders. :arrow: Same as first break
  4. 02:26:484 - ^ :arrow: ^
  5. 03:32:461 (1) - Use another slider pattern. You used it much. :arrow: Okay
  6. 03:49:476 (1) - Move this x: 256 y: 192. :arrow: That will make it overlap (3) so no
  7. 04:18:133 (1), 04:28:431 (2), 04:46:789 (2), - New slider pattern, please. :arrow: No because they go with the song
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:453 and 00:46:513 - Add notes, sliders etc... :arrow: Same as normal
  2. 00:50:596 and 00:52:956 - ^ :arrow:^
  3. 01:52:834 (3) - Do you like this slider, huh? :D :arrow: I find it go with the song like the middle of that part has a bass beat
  4. 02:11:171 - B-Break again... ><" :arrow: Same as normal
  5. 02:18:391 - ^ :arrow: ^
  6. 02:25:381 - ^ :arrow: ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:44:493 - Stop with these breaks :o :arrow: I use short breaks there because it feel like a warmup before the actual song
  2. 00:50:573 - ^ :arrow: ^
  3. 02:12:233 - ^ :arrow: ^
  4. Delete the short breaks, and add some note, slider. :arrow: ^
I had problems with the same slider patterns and the short breaks. But the song is catchy, your patterns are awesome. Im not a good modder, but hope you liked it. Good luck! :arrow: The breaks are really a personal preferences so someone who map this song didn't use the same breaks as mine
See ya~
Thanks for the mod


Neil Watts

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

Oh, I love this music =3 Nitori-chaan!!

Shihori - Kaze no Kioku

-Normal-
- 00:17:237 (2) - Put a clap here :arrow: Okay
- 00:24:401 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^
- 00:31:565 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^
- 00:33:356 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^
- 00:35:148 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^
- 00:38:730 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^
-- I'll not quote all the soundmapping problems, but I highly recommand you to entirely remap the sound mapping.
Place a clap on every downbeat. See the Music Theory to learn more. :arrow: I forgot about downbeat XD
- 02:54:065 (1) - slider not in rhythm - try this http://puu.sh/9JSp4/ff58eed35f.png :arrow: Okay

The general mapping is excellent, but you just really have to remake the sound mapping. :arrow: I gonna do it ;^;

-Hard-
Same comment concerning the sound mapping for this diff.
I found nothing. Good job ! :D
This mapset is really well-mapped, except the sound... :arrow: I will make it better

-Lunatic-
Same comment on the sound mapping. :( :arrow: It gonna be better
- 01:44:103 (1,2,3) - to avoid :arrow: Why? Not too hard jump
- 01:45:446 (2,3) - swap the position of these circles :arrow: Okay
- 02:08:953 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - to avoid - try to replace a part of the stream with a 1/2 slider and reverse arrows. :arrow: Okay
- 03:22:498 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ :arrow: Okay
- 04:12:759 (1,2,3) - to avoid :arrow: No, not too hard jump
- 04:19:252 (6) - change the placement of this slider :arrow: Changed pattern
- 04:49:700 (1,2,3) - to avoid :arrow: No, not too hard jump
- 04:51:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ :arrow: Watered down

And...That's all what I can find ^^
You're really a good mapper, but really, please change this sound mapping.
I don't think you can get ranked with it. (This is just my humble opinion, but an experienced modder should be able to know.)

Use your claps on the downbeats to enhance the rhythm and fill the rest of the music with some soft whistles (or what you want).
I know it's long but I had to do it with my own beatmap.

Good luck ! :D
Thanks for the mod

onoz

onoz wrote:

random mod because shihori \o/

[box=General]I think the offset is slightly off. It sounds better when you change it to 14,573 :arrow: I agree

Lunatic
00:18:155 (1,2) - this plays oddly imo. this sounds better for the music, maybe you can give it a try?: :arrow: Change (1) and (2)


00:35:281 (1) - i think having this as a slider is quite detracting to the music. maybe change it to just a single note and same combo with the 1,2 previous to it? :arrow: Will consider it

02:09:423 (8) - this slider puts a gap in an otherwise beautiful stream :( a bit awkward as well, since the tick in the middle of the slider has an equally strong drumbeat as the rest of the stream. :arrow: Converted to stream

02:24:871 (6) - maybe you should increase this by 1 or 2 reversals so that it finishes off the section nicely on the big white tick (and suits the music) :arrow: Okay

04:24:423 (9,10) - maybe remove these? :arrow: No

it's a fun map! <3Thanks for the mod[/box]

I'm gonna remap the hitsounds now and I got distribution to network problem when upload so I will try update the map tomorrow
Edited : Moved to WIP becaues remapping hitsounds
Edited 2 : Updated
Cerulean Veyron
Hi, M4M here ~

[> General <]
  1. Resnap Inherited points in all diffs.
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:20:841 (3,1) - It's a bit unblanket, Move (1) to x:288|y:52. If you're following this, fix the next notes.
  2. 00:36:961 (2,1) - The flow broke here, try make a symmetry at least.
  3. 00:40:543 (2) - Move this slider to x:256|y:248 for greater flow.
  4. 00:50:841 - You should add notes here, the rhythm won't be well-played when it's not complete(This'll be the same reason on other diffs as well)
  5. 00:55:767 (1,2) - Same as 00:20:841 (3,1) -, Move (2) on x:408|y:180.
  6. 01:08:752 (1,2,3) - The flow here almost break. Remap (1) slider to blanket the circle (2) with (3) slider.
  7. 01:35:170 (1) - Two grid up this slider for better blanket.
  8. 01:45:468 (1) - Curve this slider like 01:46:811 (3) - for symmetry.
  9. 01:49:498 (1,1) - Overlap, or on purpose?
  10. 02:02:707 (2,2) - ^
  11. 02:18:602 - Same as 00:50:841 - .
  12. 02:42:558 (2,3) - Curve these notes for better flow.
  13. 02:54:087 (1) - 1/4 BSD slider on Normal? the rhythm is bad here.
  14. 02:55:767 (1) - Move to x:372|y:244, it's kinda close for blanket, so yeah.
  15. 02:58:229 (2,2) - Same as 01:49:498 (1,1) -
  16. 03:13:005 (1,2) - Did you do this rhythm on other parts? instead of circles, add a 1/2 slider her.
  17. 03:34:722 (2,3) - Jumps on Normal diffs is unrankable. Plus, it overlapped with 03:32:483 (1) - , Or on purpose?
  18. - Needs a bit of improvement, but nice mappings!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:18:826 (5,1) - Overlap, or on purpose?
  2. 00:19:946 (1) - Move this slider to x:120|y:96 for blanket.
  3. 00:30:244 (3) - Curve this slider like the previous two sliders, for a greater pattern.
  4. 00:47:931 (4,5,6) - Curve the flow with these notes. Straighty...
  5. 00:53:975 (6,4) - Still unstacked, Reposition the slider's end.
  6. 01:04:722 (3) - One grid right for better blanket.
  7. 01:07:408 (6) - Add NC?
  8. 01:27:110 (3) - One grid up and right, for better blanket with 01:26:214 (1) -
  9. 01:45:244 (5) - Same as 01:07:408 (6) -
  10. 01:56:662 (4) - ^
  11. 02:14:349 (1,3) - Small overlap there.
  12. 02:38:080 (1,2,3) - DS is strange here.
  13. 02:45:020 (7) - Same as 01:07:408 (6) -
  14. 02:48:602 (1,2,3) - Unperfect little jumps, try remaking those sliders blanket the circle (2) at least.
  15. 02:57:558 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:38:080 (1,2,3) -
  16. 02:59:125 (3,4,5,1) - Make a square or diamond formation.
  17. 03:14:796 (4) - Reposition the slider's end down, since the flow is almost broke.
  18. 03:46:587 (3,4) - Make symmetry here, and to avoid the overlap with 03:45:916 (1) -
  19. - Same reason with Normal, but better mapping than it! Good diff to play! ^^

Can't mod Lunatic diff(to avoid big mod), But nice song anyway, Good luck~
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, M4M here ~

[> General <]
  1. Resnap Inherited points in all diffs. :arrow: Fixed
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:20:841 (3,1) - It's a bit unblanket, Move (1) to x:288|y:52. If you're following this, fix the next notes. :arrow: Okay
  2. 00:36:961 (2,1) - The flow broke here, try make a symmetry at least. :arrow: Okay
  3. 00:40:543 (2) - Move this slider to x:256|y:248 for greater flow. :arrow: Okay
  4. 00:50:841 - You should add notes here, the rhythm won't be well-played when it's not complete(This'll be the same reason on other diffs as well) :arrow: I will consider it
  5. 00:55:767 (1,2) - Same as 00:20:841 (3,1) -, Move (2) on x:408|y:180. :arrow: Okay
  6. 01:08:752 (1,2,3) - The flow here almost break. Remap (1) slider to blanket the circle (2) with (3) slider. :arrow: Okay
  7. 01:35:170 (1) - Two grid up this slider for better blanket. :arrow: Okay
  8. 01:45:468 (1) - Curve this slider like 01:46:811 (3) - for symmetry. :arrow: Okay
  9. 01:49:498 (1,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? :arrow: Purpose
  10. 02:02:707 (2,2) - ^ :arrow: ^
  11. 02:18:602 - Same as 00:50:841 - . :arrow: I will consider it
  12. 02:42:558 (2,3) - Curve these notes for better flow. :arrow: Okay
  13. 02:54:087 (1) - 1/4 BSD slider on Normal? the rhythm is bad here. :arrow: Moved to white ticks
  14. 02:55:767 (1) - Move to x:372|y:244, it's kinda close for blanket, so yeah. :arrow: Yeah,Okay
  15. 02:58:229 (2,2) - Same as 01:49:498 (1,1) - :arrow: Purpose
  16. 03:13:005 (1,2) - Did you do this rhythm on other parts? instead of circles, add a 1/2 slider her. :arrow: Stacked
  17. 03:34:722 (2,3) - Jumps on Normal diffs is unrankable. Plus, it overlapped with 03:32:483 (1) - , Or on purpose? :arrow: Wrong DS XD my bad
  18. - Needs a bit of improvement, but nice mappings!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:18:826 (5,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? :arrow: Purpose
  2. 00:19:946 (1) - Move this slider to x:120|y:96 for blanket. :arrow: Okay
  3. 00:30:244 (3) - Curve this slider like the previous two sliders, for a greater pattern. :arrow: Okay
  4. 00:47:931 (4,5,6) - Curve the flow with these notes. Straighty... :arrow: Okay
  5. 00:53:975 (6,4) - Still unstacked, Reposition the slider's end. :arrow: Fixed
  6. 01:04:722 (3) - One grid right for better blanket. :arrow: Okay
  7. 01:07:408 (6) - Add NC? :arrow: No
  8. 01:27:110 (3) - One grid up and right, for better blanket with 01:26:214 (1) - :arrow: Okay
  9. 01:45:244 (5) - Same as 01:07:408 (6) - :arrow: NCed
  10. 01:56:662 (4) - ^ :arrow: ^
  11. 02:14:349 (1,3) - Small overlap there. :arrow: Fixed
  12. 02:38:080 (1,2,3) - DS is strange here. :arrow: Why? DSx1.2 on all notes there
  13. 02:45:020 (7) - Same as 01:07:408 (6) - :arrow: No
  14. 02:48:602 (1,2,3) - Unperfect little jumps, try remaking those sliders blanket the circle (2) at least. :arrow: Moved (2) NE
  15. 02:57:558 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:38:080 (1,2,3) - :arrow: I'm sure DSx1.2 on all notes here
  16. 02:59:125 (3,4,5,1) - Make a square or diamond formation. :arrow: Diamond lol ,fixed the placement
  17. 03:14:796 (4) - Reposition the slider's end down, since the flow is almost broke. :arrow: Okay
  18. 03:46:587 (3,4) - Make symmetry here, and to avoid the overlap with 03:45:916 (1) - :arrow: Nice
  19. - Same reason with Normal, but better mapping than it! Good diff to play! ^^

Can't mod Lunatic diff(to avoid big mod), But nice song anyway, Good luck~
Thanks for the mods
Rirakusu
From my modding queue :)

Hard

1. 00:36:065 (1,3) - Make their tails end at the same place.

2. 01:23:528 (6) - I recommend you to end that slider at 01:22:408 (3) - (change location of 01:22:408 (3) - to achieve this)

3. 02:51:289 (3) - Try to end this slider at 02:50:170 (4) -

4. 03:41:438 (1,2) - These two sliders aren't perfectly mirrored.

5. 03:46:587 (3,4) - I think it's better to make this two sliders mirrored.

6. 04:38:304 (6,7) - Make these two parallel.

Lunatic

1. 00:48:602 (1,2) - Not perfectly mirrored! A quick tip: You can use flip horizontally and vertically to achieve a pair of perfectly mirrored sliders!

2. 01:48:602 (6,7,1) - Hope that you can stack the circles on the slider's head...

3. 02:08:975 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can curve this stream like a tri-point slider...although curving it like that increases difficulty.

4. Because you have tons of jumps and star patterns I think AR9 will work better (or you can try AR 8.5?).

Maybe that's all :D It's a nice map I can say :)
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my modding queue :)

Hard

1. 00:36:065 (1,3) - Make their tails end at the same place. :arrow: That will break the spacing so no

2. 01:23:528 (6) - I recommend you to end that slider at 01:22:408 (3) - (change location of 01:22:408 (3) - to achieve this) :arrow: No

3. 02:51:289 (3) - Try to end this slider at 02:50:170 (4) - :arrow: No

4. 03:41:438 (1,2) - These two sliders aren't perfectly mirrored. :arrow: Looks fine

5. 03:46:587 (3,4) - I think it's better to make this two sliders mirrored. :arrow: The flow to the next note would be bad because low spacing

6. 04:38:304 (6,7) - Make these two parallel. :arrow: Okay

Lunatic

1. 00:48:602 (1,2) - Not perfectly mirrored! A quick tip: You can use flip horizontally and vertically to achieve a pair of perfectly mirrored sliders! :arrow: Looks fine

2. 01:48:602 (6,7,1) - Hope that you can stack the circles on the slider's head... :arrow: Hmm..will consider it

3. 02:08:975 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can curve this stream like a tri-point slider...although curving it like that increases difficulty.
:arrow: Will consider it
4. Because you have tons of jumps and star patterns I think AR9 will work better (or you can try AR 8.5?). :arrow:AR8 because low bpm + AR9 because jumps = AR 8.5 xD Good idea

Maybe that's all :D It's a nice map I can say :)
Thanks for the mod,I give kudosu because you take time to look at my map eventhough it not on your song priority at your modding queue ;)
idodgebull3ts
From my queue

Normal and Hard look great as they are

[Lunatic]
00:25:990 (6) - The second stream and slider feel a bit off (for example there's no beat on 7 at all), try changing it to something like this
00:33:155 (2,3,4,5,6) - You're following 3 different parts within the stream, 2 is the same as the preceeding slider, then you've got 3 hitting with the percussion, and the rest on the guitar. I'd suggest moving 2 out on its own and having the stream start on either 3 or 4. Also there should be a note at 00:33:714
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm so I guess if you're being consistent with these ignore the above suggestion
01:48:602 (6,7,1) - The flow here feels off. I see what you're trying to do with lining it up to stack with the start of the 3 slider from earlier, but I think it would play better if you blanketed them below it instead.
01:52:296 (2) - I think this would flow better if you moved it to x208y256
01:53:528 (1) - This breaks the flow again. Maybe try changing it to something like this
02:04:498 (5) - Try moving this to x304y200 so it matches the curve of the slider and flows better from the previous note
02:24:199 (3) - So you're not being consistent with how you place the notes leading into sliders like this (not here but a several times later on, for example 02:45:916 (3) - and 02:46:587 (1) - where you curve them instead of having them in a line) I'd recommend changing them so they either all curve or are all lined up
03:14:349 (1,2,3) - This might flow better if you moved them to 1: x344y328 2: x376y320 3: x409y304
03:22:408 (6) - Maybe change the stream so it has a smoother curve?

Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

idodgebull3ts wrote:

From my queue

Normal and Hard look great as they are

[Lunatic]
00:25:990 (6) - The second stream and slider feel a bit off (for example there's no beat on 7 at all), try changing it to something like this :arrow: Fixed
00:33:155 (2,3,4,5,6) - You're following 3 different parts within the stream, 2 is the same as the preceeding slider, then you've got 3 hitting with the percussion, and the rest on the guitar. I'd suggest moving 2 out on its own and having the stream start on either 3 or 4. Also there should be a note at 00:33:714 :arrow: Okay
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm so I guess if you're being consistent with these ignore the above suggestion :arrow: Fixed
01:48:602 (6,7,1) - The flow here feels off. I see what you're trying to do with lining it up to stack with the start of the 3 slider from earlier, but I think it would play better if you blanketed them below it instead. :arrow: Stacked (3)
01:52:296 (2) - I think this would flow better if you moved it to x208y256 :arrow: Okay
01:53:528 (1) - This breaks the flow again. Maybe try changing it to something like this :arrow: Okay
02:04:498 (5) - Try moving this to x304y200 so it matches the curve of the slider and flows better from the previous note :arrow: Okay
02:24:199 (3) - So you're not being consistent with how you place the notes leading into sliders like this (not here but a several times later on, for example 02:45:916 (3) - and 02:46:587 (1) - where you curve them instead of having them in a line) I'd recommend changing them so they either all curve or are all lined up :arrow: Fixed slider curve
03:14:349 (1,2,3) - This might flow better if you moved them to 1: x344y328 2: x376y320 3: x409y304 :arrow: Okay
03:22:408 (6) - Maybe change the stream so it has a smoother curve? :arrow: I will Consider it

Good luck with your map
Thanks for the mod
Faan
saw this in your modding queue, so here is the m4m request~

t/199932 this is my map, don't have to mod all difficulties but would be nice if you do
thanks

Normal:
00:18:602 (2,3) - I guess blanket chould be slightly improved
00:23:975 (1,2) - yeah, like it's a bit over-curved if you know what I mean
00:37:856 (1,2) - this can difinitly become a blanket
00:53:080 (1,2) - with lesser-curve I believe this can be improved
00:55:767 (1,2) - curve 1 a bit more
01:19:498 (2,1) - ugly, maybe try make it more blankety
01:35:170 (1,2,3) - try make 2,3 straight line with 1
01:39:647 (3) - not sure about this one, but you can try to extend it to the blue tick
01:44:125 (3,4) - make it straight
02:05:617 (1) - I suggest move it down a bit because the turn is too sharp causing uncomfortable movement
02:20:841 (1,2) - straighten it
02:55:319 (2,2) - overlap
02:57:110 (2,2) - stackable
04:10:990 (1,2) - suggest blanket

Hard:
00:18:826 (5,1) - ugly overlap
00:36:065 (1,3) - ^
00:41:550 (3) - move it to the next blue tick(rhythm)
00:54:199 (1,2,3,4) - chould've like make this a square or something
01:20:841 (- mssing note
01:34:274 (3,4) - blanket better
01:59:796 (2) - turn into slider
02:20:841 (1,2) - blanket this
02:50:170 (4,3) - overlap

Similiar problems through the map, I don't like some ofthe repeaters rhythm-ise

Lunatic:

AR8.5->9
Don't really like the streams at the start, feels like overmap to me
lots of stacking problems, I'll just point out a few

00:25:990 (6) - NC
01:01:140 (4,2) - dont like how it overlaps
01:09:199 (2,1) - stack perhaps?
01:30:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - try make a better star with compose
01:52:408 (3,2,3) - stack perhaps?
02:38:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - better star pls
03:17:035 (3,5) - stack
03:22:408 (6) - NC
04:15:244 (1,2,3) - straighten
04:48:155 (6,1,3) - stack...
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Faan wrote:

saw this in your modding queue, so here is the m4m request~

t/199932 this is my map, don't have to mod all difficulties but would be nice if you do
thanks

Normal:
00:18:602 (2,3) - I guess blanket chould be slightly improved :arrow: Improved a little
00:23:975 (1,2) - yeah, like it's a bit over-curved if you know what I mean :arrow: ^
00:37:856 (1,2) - this can difinitly become a blanket :arrow: Okay
00:53:080 (1,2) - with lesser-curve I believe this can be improved :arrow: Fixed curve so it a perfect blanket with (2)
00:55:767 (1,2) - curve 1 a bit more :arrow: Looks fine
01:19:498 (2,1) - ugly, maybe try make it more blankety :arrow: Change slider shape
01:35:170 (1,2,3) - try make 2,3 straight line with 1 :arrow: Okay
01:39:647 (3) - not sure about this one, but you can try to extend it to the blue tick :arrow: Looks fine
01:44:125 (3,4) - make it straight :arrow: Okay
02:05:617 (1) - I suggest move it down a bit because the turn is too sharp causing uncomfortable movement :arrow: Change pattern
02:20:841 (1,2) - straighten it :arrow: Look fine
02:55:319 (2,2) - overlap :arrow: Fixed
02:57:110 (2,2) - stackable :arrow: Not stack but change pattern a little bit
04:10:990 (1,2) - suggest blanket :arrow: Fixed (1) a little

Hard:
00:18:826 (5,1) - ugly overlap :arrow: Fixed
00:36:065 (1,3) - ^ :arrow: Fixed
00:41:550 (3) - move it to the next blue tick(rhythm) :arrow: Okay
00:54:199 (1,2,3,4) - chould've like make this a square or something :arrow: It's diamond pattern
01:20:841 (- mssing note :arrow: Added note
01:34:274 (3,4) - blanket better :arrow: Change pattern because I can't blanket it (3) need to be same as (1)
01:59:796 (2) - turn into sliderOkay
02:20:841 (1,2) - blanket this :arrow: Okay
02:50:170 (4,3) - overlap :arrow: Fixed

Similiar problems through the map, I don't like some ofthe repeaters rhythm-ise

Lunatic:

AR8.5->9 :arrow: Okay
Don't really like the streams at the start, feels like overmap to me :arrow:I follow the guitar sound in the music
lots of stacking problems, I'll just point out a few

00:25:990 (6) - NC :arrow: Okay
01:01:140 (4,2) - dont like how it overlaps :arrow: It looks fine for me but I will consider it
01:09:199 (2,1) - stack perhaps? :arrow: Okay
01:30:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - try make a better star with compose :arrow: First mod about star DS >.< well done
01:52:408 (3,2,3) - stack perhaps? :arrow: Okay
02:38:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - better star pls :arrow: Okay
03:17:035 (3,5) - stack :arrow: Okay
03:22:408 (6) - NC :arrow: Okay
04:15:244 (1,2,3) - straighten :arrow: Okay
04:48:155 (6,1,3) - stack... :arrow: Stacked (3) and (4)
Red means change
Blue means no change
Thanks for the mod
- H i N a -
Hi M4M~

กรรม คนไทยเหมือนกันนี่นา งั้นม็อดภาษาไทยละกัน แต่ถ้าต้องการ eng ก็บอกได้นะ :v


Normal

00:27:110 (1,1) - ช่วงนี้เราว่ามันยากไปสำหรับ normal นะ น่าจะเอา 00:28:901 (1) ออกแล้วให้สปินถึง 00:28:901
00:29:349 - ถ้าเอาออกตามด้านบนตรงนี้จะว่าง ให้ใส่โน้ตตรงนี้
01:04:274 (2) - add clap ตรงหัว slider ?

Hard

02:17:707 (4) - ตรงจุด reverse slider ให้เอา clap ออก
02:37:408 (4) - add clap ?
02:38:304 (2) - ^
02:38:752 (4) - add clap จุดนี้
02:42:558 (4) - remove clap ตรงท้าย slider
03:10:095 (1) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:19:274 (6) - ตรงจุด reverse slider ให้เอา clap ออก
04:19:946 (1) - add clap
04:20:393 (3) - remove clap
04:20:617 (4) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:21:289 (2) - remove clap
04:22:184 (4) - ย้าย clap จากหัว slider มาท้าย

Lunatic

00:24:423 (3) - add clap ตรงหัว slider
01:05:953 (3) - ย้ายโน้ตไปที่ 01:06:065 จะเข้ากับจังหวะเพลงมากกว่า
02:09:759 (11,1,2) - เอา clap ออก
02:21:289 (3) - add clap
03:09:647 (5) - ^
03:21:737 (4) - remove clap
04:12:110 (5) - remove clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:13:229 (3) - remove clap
04:13:453 (4) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:39:199 (7) - add clap

เท่าที่ดูมีประมาณนี้แหละนะ (การม็อดของเราจะเน้น hitsound กับจังหวะเพลง เราจะไม่ม็อดการวางโน้ตเพราะว่ามันเป็นสไตล์ของแต่ละคน lol~)

Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi M4M~

กรรม คนไทยเหมือนกันนี่นา งั้นม็อดภาษาไทยละกัน แต่ถ้าต้องการ eng ก็บอกได้นะ :v
:arrow: กำ hello Hina ภาษาไทยก็ดี xD


Normal

00:27:110 (1,1) - ช่วงนี้เราว่ามันยากไปสำหรับ normal นะ น่าจะเอา 00:28:901 (1) ออกแล้วให้สปินถึง 00:28:901 :arrow: Ctrl+G (1) ละกัน สปินเดียวรอดูมอดอื่นๆ
00:29:349 - ถ้าเอาออกตามด้านบนตรงนี้จะว่าง ให้ใส่โน้ตตรงนี้รอมอดคนอื่นมาเพิ่มเติม
01:04:274 (2) - add clap ตรงหัว slider ? :arrow: รู้สึก hitsounds เราจะเละเดียวแก้ใหม่

Hard

02:17:707 (4) - ตรงจุด reverse slider ให้เอา clap ออก
02:37:408 (4) - add clap ?
02:38:304 (2) - ^
02:38:752 (4) - add clap จุดนี้
02:42:558 (4) - remove clap ตรงท้าย slider
03:10:095 (1) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:19:274 (6) - ตรงจุด reverse slider ให้เอา clap ออก
04:19:946 (1) - add clap
04:20:393 (3) - remove clap
04:20:617 (4) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:21:289 (2) - remove clap
04:22:184 (4) - ย้าย clap จากหัว slider มาท้าย
:arrow: แก้ hitsounds หมด วางผิดที่ = =

Lunatic

00:24:423 (3) - add clap ตรงหัว slider
01:05:953 (3) - ย้ายโน้ตไปที่ 01:06:065 จะเข้ากับจังหวะเพลงมากกว่า :arrow: Okay
02:09:759 (11,1,2) - เอา clap ออก
02:21:289 (3) - add clap
03:09:647 (5) - ^
03:21:737 (4) - remove clap
04:12:110 (5) - remove clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:13:229 (3) - remove clap
04:13:453 (4) - add clap ตรงท้าย slider
04:39:199 (7) - add clap
:arrow: เดียวแก้ hitsounds ให้เหมือน diff อื่นๆ

เท่าที่ดูมีประมาณนี้แหละนะ (การม็อดของเราจะเน้น hitsound กับจังหวะเพลง เราจะไม่ม็อดการวางโน้ตเพราะว่ามันเป็นสไตล์ของแต่ละคน lol~)
:arrow: ที่แน่ๆเราต้องแก้ hitsound ด่วน xD
Good Luck :D
แดง คือ เปลี่ยน
น้ำเงินคือ ไม่เปลี่ยนที่ตามมอด
ขอบคุณมากที่ มอด hitsound xD
Thanks :D
hehe
[GENERAL]

picture looks stretched, you should fix it
you might wanna lower AR a little, 8 to 8.5, it is genuinely too high. AR9 generally for 160-170+ BPM

[LUNATIC]
weird timings on a lot of parts, also please use DS!

00:24:423 (3,4) - too plain, despite music. won't highlight subsequent areas where this occurs, it is kinda obvious
00:25:990 (1) - this note doesn't belong imo, the beat starts on the blue tick, so maybe try and play with sliders to fit it?
00:29:573 (2) - this or surrounding sliders can be positioned better to blanket
00:33:155 (2,3) - remove (3), and space 2 like a jump
00:35:281 (1) - awkward blue tick slider, this whole area is kinda weird
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - messy stream, use Convert slider to stream function under Compose tab.
00:41:102 (9,10) - delete (9), and jump (10)
00:42:446 (3) - streams start on blue tick, try not to
00:56:438 (3,4,5,6) - no line patterns here, maybe zigzag
01:01:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so weird, change (7 slider can change to 2 circles): 01:05:953 (3) - use triple or slider to map note on bluetick
01:06:289 (4,5) - this two sliders should be moved forward 1/2 beat, map the filler
01:17:035 (5,6,7) - should be circle > slider > slider
01:30:692 (5,6,7,1) - slider > slider > slider
01:51:289 (6,7) - this part is better mapped to the instrumental behind
01:53:528 (1,2,3) - awkward to play
01:57:334 (9,1) - add circle inbetween to make triple
01:59:796 (2) - ds properly
02:00:020 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - change: 02:08:975 (4) - this whole stream, maintain ds. it should be same throughout, or small>big
02:35:393 (3,4,5) - please do circle > slider > circle
02:56:438 (3,4) - could use a triple
03:36:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - bigger space
04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - generally bad flow
04:31:028 (4) - mapped to song, but blue tick feels weird
04:32:931 (5,6,7) - vocals start at 04:33:155

GOOD LUCK! :)
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

handsome wrote:

[GENERAL]

picture looks stretched, you should fix it
you might wanna lower AR a little, 8 to 8.5, it is genuinely too high. AR9 generally for 160-170+ BPM :arrow: I will consider this each mods I got suggest different AR

[LUNATIC]
weird timings on a lot of parts, also please use DS!

00:24:423 (3,4) - too plain, despite music. won't highlight subsequent areas where this occurs, it is kinda obvious :arrow: Okay I changed to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848378
00:25:990 (1) - this note doesn't belong imo, the beat starts on the blue tick, so maybe try and play with sliders to fit it? :arrow: Beat start on red listen carefully xD
00:29:573 (2) - this or surrounding sliders can be positioned better to blanketOkay
00:33:155 (2,3) - remove (3), and space 2 like a jump :arrow: No
00:35:281 (1) - awkward blue tick slider, this whole area is kinda weirdI changed (2) to slider that end at blue now I follow the beats in the music
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - messy stream, use Convert slider to stream function under Compose tab[color=#FF000]I like to create a stream manually fixed a little bit tho[/color].
00:41:102 (9,10) - delete (9), and jump (10) :arrow: Okay
00:42:446 (3) - streams start on blue tick, try not to :arrow: Fine beat start at there and (2) also on blue
00:56:438 (3,4,5,6) - no line patterns here, maybe zigzagHmm...I will consider this
01:01:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so weird, change (7 slider can change to 2 circles): :arrow: Okay01:05:953 (3) - use triple or slider to map note on bluetickAdded circle here 01:05:841 -
01:06:289 (4,5) - this two sliders should be moved forward 1/2 beat, map the filler :arrow: Ctrl+G (4) no change in pattern
01:17:035 (5,6,7) - should be circle > slider > slider :arrow: Okay
01:30:692 (5,6,7,1) - slider > slider > slider :arrow: Okay
01:51:289 (6,7) - this part is better mapped to the instrumental behind :arrow: Hmm.. I will consider this
01:53:528 (1,2,3) - awkward to play :arrow: Okay extend slider to red line
01:57:334 (9,1) - add circle inbetween to make triple :arrow: Okay
01:59:796 (2) - ds properly :arrow: Okay
02:00:020 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - change: :arrow: Okay02:08:975 (4) - this whole stream, maintain ds. it should be same throughout, or small>big :arrow: Fixed
02:35:393 (3,4,5) - please do circle > slider > circle :arrow: Okay
02:56:438 (3,4) - could use a triple :arrow: Okay
03:36:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - bigger space :arrow: Okay changed DS to 2.0x
04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - generally bad flow :arrow: Changed (5) slider curve
04:31:028 (4) - mapped to song, but blue tick feels weird :arrow: Fine the vocal sound strong so I have to put a note there
04:32:931 (5,6,7) - vocals start at 04:33:155 :arrow: Okay

GOOD LUCK! :)
Red means change
Blue mean no change
Thanks for the mod :D
MrKosiej
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only i seen on this forum
map that got deleted
and mod4mod things :?:
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