[Confession]
Your map says that you need an epilepsy warning btw, no clue why. Stop bugging the editor!
Some undermapped blue ticks at the beginning:
00:17:236 - 00:24:620 - 00:26:466 - 00:28:774 - 00:30:159 -
01:06:286 - would be better aesthetics if this was somehow curved with white sliderpoints. Also, would love to see this with a higher SV, maybe 1.10-1.20x
01:20:120 (1,2,3) - would be better to emphasise them by spacing. I think simple 1/2 sliders also fit better than return sliders here.
01:51:504 (1) - the correct rhythm here is
https://puu.sh/vorgE/26188f6be6.png. Triples you have now are overmapped and you are undermapping other sounds. If you still decide to keep the triples though, don't make them so emphasised. The only really strong sound in the tripple is the last one and it is one of the hardest parts of the map.
02:29:235 - undermapped but I guess it's fine
02:41:235 - ^
02:46:312 - wait, that's overmapped. Probably missed such an overmap in the first chorus, too. Who knows, go scoop it out.
02:52:312 - same
02:54:043 (12) - IMO bad placement, this should be on the right while the slider somewhere on the left
02:54:274 (1) - bad aesthetics. Make a curved slider of some sort, don't be lazy!
WHY DO SOME GHOST HITCIRCLES APPEAR IN THE BREAK TIME EXPLAIN THIS 0BPM GUY I'M SERIOUSLY SPOOKED. APPEARS WHEN PLAYING IN EDITOR, TOO
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/786152503:17:120 (2,1) - unneccessary spacing emphasis. Also accomponied with a new concept that you are introducing to a player. Out of nowhere spacing + new concept = spook
03:45:966 - this combo feels unintuitive and kicksliders you place feel oversimplified. Well... I tried to come up with a rhythm that is intuitive and is also simple enough.
http://puu.sh/vosIG/384d0fd939.png I will also show how I recommend to stack it:
https://puu.sh/vosQR/5b3cde9c2c.png (don't look at spacing/aesthetics/slider shapes, objects were placed to show you how it should be stacked to be played comfortably while staying intuitive)
04:21:055 - the correct rhythm here is
http://puu.sh/votb3/214d5109d1.png - what you have is unintuitive/overmapping
Same problems for third kiai as before (some sounds overmapped/undermapped) so look out for those if you agree on my sentiments for the other two choruses.
04:35:928 (2,2) - emphasis on (2)s and then emphasis on 04:37:197 (1) - (now that I think of it, I guess it is fine because it is completely different song bodies.
04:51:851 - you missed the inherited timing point by 1ms
04:59:351 - some hitsounds rape ears. Like this one. (note: didn't look into hitsounds in this mod because had to look carefully whether your rhythms were correct)
Have fun -Moo-
I hope my mod was fulfilling enough.