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Irreversible
vert: no fix..

09kami: in your diff.. 00:58:472 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - this is so difficult :( maybe you can decrease it just a little bit..
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09kami

Irreversible wrote:

vert: no fix..

09kami: in your diff.. 00:58:472 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - this is so difficult :( maybe you can decrease it just a little bit..
emmm I think ok


and all done
Hollow Wings

110 wrote:

[HW's Another]

我感觉全都走oldloop那种无论间隔长短固定间距会牺牲很多精彩吧 不过或许这就是激霸(
不过希望老大前面能不吝nc多下一点
01:17:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 有点浪费 三小时做完的玩意别太较真了。
高潮部分反而太简单了

Vert wrote:

[HW]
00:54:181 (2,3) - why jump here pitch.
00:55:173 (6,7) - ^ shift track.

tutuhaha wrote:

[HW]
像我的话会在00:18:231 (6) - 00:22:198 (6) - 这些diff加NC,嘛不过只能算是个人喜好问题可能....... 这段节奏足够慢,不加nc更加体现ds梗特点。
thanks for modding!
Ryuusei Aika
some chinese mappers are not good at english so mods to chinese are written in chinese for convenience, poke me if anyone need detailed explanation in english

General
龍が如く 維新!这个应该在source里(官网的感叹号是全角的),然后加进source之后把tag里重复的去了
把 ryu ga gotoku 青木 千紘 加进tag,后面那人是编这首曲的
有几个难度00:32:687 - 漏whistle,01:14:340 - 漏clap,你等他们都改完了看一下
Metadata source to whom may concern

kanor's Normal
00:26:985 (5,6) - stack有点破坏blanket,建议这俩向右下手动移一个4x4

Yugu's Hard
00:15:827 (4) - 可以拉远一点,比如和00:17:563 (4) - stack在一起的位置,突出人声
00:40:125 (4) - nc一下不然后面相同四个滑条的pattern和前面混一起了
00:52:026 (1) - 不好看,后面那块扭在一起了也有点难读,建议改成这样,然后00:55:497 (2) - 加个圈再突出人声
01:01:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 2.77星你摆这个要杀人吧,建议换成这种渐进的节奏
01:23:761 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 首先两对2和3的blanket太差了,其次两个4全是单点有点莫名......我都没听出来有什么特殊的,建议都换成1/2滑条
kiai的直滑条梗为什么不用到最后

Hyper
00:10:373 (1,2) - 拉开点吧
00:35:166 (1,2) - / 01:01:943 (1,2) - ^ 不然其他都拉开了这几个间距不一致看着不太爽(看到副歌有间距比较小的部分,但是感觉是sv上去了的原因,前面还是尽量视觉上一致比较好感觉)
00:25:745 (1) - 这个为啥nc,感觉也没啥特别的,去了好点
00:55:497 (2) - 这个没必要跟乐器,1/4跟不准而且把最重要的人声都淹没了,建议直接换成个圈
01:08:885 (1,2,3) - ds怎么前面1.57后面1.47
01:09:877 (1,2,3) - / 01:12:852 (1,2,3) - ^ ds也不一致,稍微调下
01:21:778 - 01:25:745 - 这一段你是想每个圈接滑条都高ds还是就一致ds?我看着前半段是第一个思路后半段是第二个思路也不知道你是想用哪个,还是就单纯的复制粘贴出了问题,建议统一一下,我看着挺明显的

tokiko's Insane
00:16:075 (8,9) - since you used mainly overlapped pattern before, using overlap for 00:16:075 (8) - too can make your pattern looks much more interesting. here's my suggestion: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/n3IFCy9.jpg
00:35:662 (5) - can change it into a 1/4 slider so it'll follow the music in a more sexy way

Dynamix's Expert
00:32:191 (3) - 这里怎么NC了......感觉这里是另起一段主歌了,去掉比较好,也能跟前面那人声区分开来
01:22:150 (3) - 这种有点杀人,如果是单纯的三连还好但是这里带了1/8滑条真的挺难打,建议这段类似01:22:026 (2,3) - 的地方都搞成01:26:241 (1,2) - 这样子

Irre's Extra
00:02:935 - any special reason to add a note here? seems like an incident for me, since you followed the instrumental quite well on 00:06:158 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:21:282 (15,16) - those repeated sounds are actually changed their tune on these two sliders, can try something different (like ctrl+g 01:21:530 (16) - and set NC on 01:21:282 (15) - ) to make them follow the music better

HW's Another
01:13:348 (1) - 这里怎么不也1/8跟下人声,感觉那样挺爽的
01:21:282 (3) - ^

MMMMMMMMaster!!!!!!
01:21:282 (1,2) - 这段音乐跟之前的不一样,有点变调,可以玩点其他花样比如弄成俩1/4滑条
01:29:712 (1) - 出界了

改完叫我
Yugu

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

some chinese mappers are not good at english so mods to chinese are written in chinese for convenience, poke me if anyone need detailed explanation in english


Yugu's Hard
00:15:827 (4) - 可以拉远一点,比如和00:17:563 (4) - stack在一起的位置,突出人声
00:40:125 (4) - nc一下不然后面相同四个滑条的pattern和前面混一起了
00:52:026 (1) - 不好看,后面那块扭在一起了也有点难读,建议改成这样,然后00:55:497 (2) - 加个圈再突出人声 换了一种形状
01:01:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 2.77星你摆这个要杀人吧,建议换成这种渐进的节奏 行8
01:23:761 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 首先两对2和3的blanket太差了,其次两个4全是单点有点莫名......我都没听出来有什么特殊的,建议都换成1/2滑条
kiai的直滑条梗为什么不用到最后 摆出来感觉有点丑就不用了
辛苦啦 :)

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384,233,66778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,213,66902,2,0,L|424:123,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,90,67398,2,0,L|320:180,1,90.000000298023,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,148,67894,6,0,L|216:238,1,90.000000298023,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,219,68389,2,0,L|109:129,1,90.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,103,68761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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343,238,70745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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345,115,71365,2,0,L|255:115,1,90.000000298023,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,115,71860,6,0,L|56:115,1,90.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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227,243,72728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,284,72852,2,0,L|154:284,1,90.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,202,73348,2,0,L|30:202,1,90.000000298023,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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247,279,75084,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,242,75207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,198,75331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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339,109,76323,2,0,P|384:131|415:177,1,90.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,216,76819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
509,200,77067,2,0,P|466:228|411:231,1,90.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,161,77563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
345,302,77811,6,0,L|237:286,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,317,78307,2,0,L|239:330,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,288,78679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,246,78803,2,0,L|181:232,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,147,79298,2,0,L|302:161,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,76,79794,6,0,L|244:63,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,147,80290,2,0,L|123:134,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,176,80662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,218,80786,2,0,L|179:231,1,90.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,244,81282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,312,81530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,81654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,325,81778,1,4,0:0:0:0:
382,201,82026,2,0,P|376:222|374:245,2,45.0000001490115,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,157,82522,2,0,P|487:178|489:200,2,45.0000001490115,10|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,137,83017,2,0,P|325:152|312:170,2,45.0000001490115,0|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,84,83513,2,0,P|488:83|509:89,1,45.0000001490115,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,45,83761,6,0,P|418:26|457:10,1,45.0000001490115,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,61,84009,2,0,P|326:36|343:-2,1,45.0000001490115,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,123,84257,2,0,P|269:107|253:68,1,45.0000001490115,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,195,84505,2,0,P|277:197|238:180,1,45.0000001490115,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,288,84753,6,0,P|201:266|199:243,1,45.0000001490115,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,287,85001,2,0,P|112:274|127:257,1,45.0000001490115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,214,85249,2,0,P|42:218|65:216,1,45.0000001490115,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,110,85497,2,0,P|32:128|49:143,1,45.0000001490115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,111,85745,6,0,P|140:145|133:170,3,45.0000001490115,10|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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57,223,87232,2,0,P|72:192|93:176,3,45.0000001490115,10|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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156,108,88224,2,0,P|160:141|153:166,3,45.0000001490115,10|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,196,88720,2,0,P|172:211|146:212,3,45.0000001490115,6|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,267,89216,2,0,P|108:242|99:218,3,45.0000001490115,10|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,222,89712,5,0,0:0:0:0:
tokiko

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

tokiko's Insane
00:16:075 (8,9) - since you used mainly overlapped pattern before, using overlap for 00:16:075 (8) - too can make your pattern looks much more interesting. here's my suggestion: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/n3IFCy9.jpg fix fix, my square pattern wasn't perfect anyway
00:35:662 (5) - can change it into a 1/4 slider so it'll follow the music in a more sexy way sure
thaanks
z1085684963
猪八戒背媳妇
DJMax

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

Dynamix's Expert
00:32:191 (3) - 这里怎么NC了......感觉这里是另起一段主歌了,去掉比较好,也能跟前面那人声区分开来
01:22:150 (3) - 这种有点杀人,如果是单纯的三连还好但是这里带了1/8滑条真的挺难打,建议这段类似01:22:026 (2,3) - 的地方都搞成01:26:241 (1,2) - 这样子

都已修改
Topic Starter
09kami

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

some chinese mappers are not good at english so mods to chinese are written in chinese for convenience, poke me if anyone need detailed explanation in english

General
龍が如く 維新!这个应该在source里(官网的感叹号是全角的),然后加进source之后把tag里重复的去了
把 ryu ga gotoku 青木 千紘 加进tag,后面那人是编这首曲的 fix
有几个难度00:32:687 - 漏whistle,01:14:340 - 漏clap,你等他们都改完了看一下 fix
Metadata source to whom may concern
fix artist 青木 千紘


kanor's Normal
00:26:985 (5,6) - stack有点破坏blanket,建议这俩向右下手动移一个4x4 这个没什么大碍我顺手改了

Hyper
00:10:373 (1,2) - 拉开点吧 fix
00:35:166 (1,2) - / 01:01:943 (1,2) - ^ 不然其他都拉开了这几个间距不一致看着不太爽(看到副歌有间距比较小的部分,但是感觉是sv上去了的原因,前面还是尽量视觉上一致比较好感觉) fix
00:25:745 (1) - 这个为啥nc,感觉也没啥特别的,去了好点 fix
00:55:497 (2) - 这个没必要跟乐器,1/4跟不准而且把最重要的人声都淹没了,建议直接换成个圈 fix
01:08:885 (1,2,3) - ds怎么前面1.57后面1.47 fix
01:09:877 (1,2,3) - / 01:12:852 (1,2,3) - ^ ds也不一致,稍微调下 fix
01:21:778 - 01:25:745 - 这一段你是想每个圈接滑条都高ds还是就一致ds?我看着前半段是第一个思路后半段是第二个思路也不知道你是想用哪个,还是就单纯的复制粘贴出了问题,建议统一一下,我看着挺明显的 其实是因为没开DS手摆的原因 开DS统一了下

MMMMMMMMaster!!!!!!
01:21:282 (1,2) - 这段音乐跟之前的不一样,有点变调,可以玩点其他花样比如弄成俩1/4滑条 fix
01:29:712 (1) - 出界了 fix

改完叫我
edit : HW's Another
01:13:348 (1) - 这里怎么不也1/8跟下人声,感觉那样挺爽的 fix
01:21:282 (3) - ^ fix
req for hw ↑

ok 上面几个改的难度我也改了
smallboat
[kanor's Normal]

00:48:059 (8) - 這個加NC比較好,因為全部的diff只有你這個diff的這段沒有加上新的NC

[Hyper]

00:56:984 (1,1) - 這邊應該沒有單一NC的必要,簡單一點的diff別太濫用較好
01:03:927 (1) - 所有diff裡就這diff滑條結尾的音量是88%,其它都5%,這兒背景音樂沒有鼓聲,而這結尾硬要來一聲聽起來挺突出。

[tokiko's Insane]

00:19:794 (6) - This slider slows down to make NC difference
01:22:646 (1) - Few have ever seen the blue line for the first NC, this sounds like I think 01:22:274 (2) - This slider is the first stress,
now that this NC setting is too late, it is recommended to cancel the NC.

01:27:728 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is very difficult to read, beats and background music all sound like hits. there is no way to understand
how this side is listening , tell me why if you can.
[Dynamix's Expert]

00:38:885 (1) - 如果這個note能和00:37:522 (2,2) - 形成個三角形也許可以讓pattern更好。
01:17:811 (1) - 這個pattern運用有點可惜,建議可以部分疊著做間距漸變跟01:21:778 (1) - 一樣。

[Irre's Extra]

01:19:794 (9) - You fotgot too add NC for here? (Combo too long)

[MMMMMMMMaster!!!!!!]

00:30:208 (1,1,1) - 這個3個的滑條聲(whistle)誤加到了? (可以跟Hyper對照一下)
Topic Starter
09kami

smallboat wrote:

[kanor's Normal]

00:48:059 (8) - 這個加NC比較好,因為全部的diff只有你這個diff的這段沒有加上新的NC fix

[Hyper]

00:56:984 (1,1) - 這邊應該沒有單一NC的必要,簡單一點的diff別太濫用較好 fix

01:03:927 (1) - 所有diff裡就這diff滑條結尾的音量是88%,其它都5%,這兒背景音樂沒有鼓聲,而這結尾硬要來一聲聽起來挺突出。 fix

[MMMMMMMMaster!!!!!!]

00:30:208 (1,1,1) - 這個3個的滑條聲(whistle)誤加到了? (可以跟Hyper對照一下) fix 这里是hyper忘加了

thx for mod
tokiko

smallboat wrote:

[tokiko's Insane]

00:19:794 (6) - This slider slows down to make NC difference sure
01:22:646 (1) - Few have ever seen the blue line for the first NC, this sounds like I think 01:22:274 (2) - This slider is the first stress,
now that this NC setting is too late, it is recommended to cancel the NC. fix fix

01:27:728 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is very difficult to read, beats and background music all sound like hits. there is no way to understand
how this side is listening , tell me why if you can. reworked rhythm a little, should be easier to read now
thank you
Topic Starter
09kami

tokiko wrote:

smallboat wrote:

[tokiko's Insane]

00:19:794 (6) - This slider slows down to make NC difference sure
01:22:646 (1) - Few have ever seen the blue line for the first NC, this sounds like I think 01:22:274 (2) - This slider is the first stress,
now that this NC setting is too late, it is recommended to cancel the NC. fix fix

01:27:728 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is very difficult to read, beats and background music all sound like hits. there is no way to understand
how this side is listening , tell me why if you can. reworked rhythm a little, should be easier to read now
thank you
ok done
Irreversible
http://puu.sh/ALStw/0c83136a04.txt

sorry for gugu

ryuusei all fixed

smallboat: i prefer keeping this combo, idk the sound is all the same ^_^




our avatars <3 XD
Topic Starter
09kami

Irreversible wrote:

http://puu.sh/ALStw/0c83136a04.txt

sorry for gugu

ryuusei all fixed

smallboat: i prefer keeping this combo, idk the sound is all the same ^_^




our avatars <3 XD
ok fix
DJMax
[Dynamix's Expert]

00:38:885 (1) - 如果這個note能和00:37:522 (2,2) - 形成個三角形也許可以讓pattern更好。 这个是为了和后面pattern相一致,所以只能先保持吧
01:17:811 (1) - 這個pattern運用有點可惜,建議可以部分疊著做間距漸變跟01:21:778 (1) - 一樣。 已修改
Ryuusei Aika
dynamix's diff hasn't been updated yet :/
also @irre seems you wrongly set nc on 01:21:530 (1) - while i actually mean to set it on 01:21:282 (15) - ._. (both 01:21:282 (15,1) - have different tunes of instrumental with before)

other things are fine for me
Topic Starter
09kami

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

dynamix's diff hasn't been updated yet :/
also @irre seems you wrongly set nc on 01:21:530 (1) - while i actually mean to set it on 01:21:282 (15) - ._. (both 01:21:282 (15,1) - have different tunes of instrumental with before)

other things are fine for me
all fix
Ryuusei Aika
鼓動
[名](スル)
1 心臓が血液を送り出すために規則的に収縮・拡大すること。また、その音。「心臓が激しく鼓動する」

2 気持ちや物などが震え動くこと。また、震わし動かすこと。「新思潮の鼓動」
smallboat
Confirm these problem fixed by my checking, so let go to Qualifed
tatemae
gratz
pw384
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