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Duca - Mirai no Melody

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[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

Battle wrote:




[k. Insane]
01:05:131 (4,5) - decrease in spacing here is kinda awkward, you could just move 5 to the left a bit to still maintain the emphasis for 6fixed
01:06:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - the jumps kinda feel like there's not really something being focused on for emphasis here so try to make what you're focusing on a bit clearerfixed

01:14:095 (4,5,6) - ctrl +g 4,5? in any case the angling from 3 to 4,5,6 is pretty awkward and doesn't emphasize the drums here much so maybe consider using sharp movement in increased spacingfixed

01:15:741 (1,2,3,4,5) - same kind of thing with the emphasis stuff, rn you're not really emphasizing the vocals or the drums here so the pattern feels offfixed

01:24:887 (2,3,4,5) - same thing about the whole high to low spacing, especially here since you just did a really big jump patternfixed


mostly kind of the same spacing kind of issues as your insane, plus the jumps in the kiai feel pretty overdone considering they're basically full screen jumpsfixed


anyways good luckkkk
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Title:Mirai no Melody
TitleUnicode:未来のメロディー
Artist:Duca
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Creator:Hanazawa Kana
Version:Kamiya's Insane
Source:想いを捧げる乙女のメロディー ～あふれる想いを調べにのせて～
Tags:[Kamiya] eroge galgame ensemble Omoi o sasageru otome no merodi afureru omoi o shirabeni nosete
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thank you for your modding~ :)
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Hanazawa Kana
k uped
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
I am back

[General]
  1. I can help u add a video , let me know if u like to add it!
  2. Metadata here :
    http://www.ensemble-game.com/18.otomelo ... movie.html
    Screenshots : https://imgur.com/a/pjzgikA
    add "Nekusam" to tags as well !
  3. 確保副歌每一個鼓點都有下clap的音效，像是Melody難度你在這邊下的音效01:04:583 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我個人不大喜歡個人特製的random音效 如果要我推的話我這個會稍微要求一點 xD
  4. 整體音量調高10%左右我覺得會比較好 現在的音效聲有點小
[Melody]

  1. 既然是Extra難度HP不妨調到7吧!
  2. 00:14:643 (3) - Miss clap ? (applied in all diff)
[Kamiya's Insane]

  1. Use the same color set for this diff like other diffs if u are not intended. xD
  2. 00:14:643 (7) - Miss clap here?
  3. 00:59:643 (1) - Miss clap end
  4. 01:05:497 (6) - Whistle start , same as 01:17:204 (1) -
  5. 01:23:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這裡難度太高了已經不是Insane該有的了我覺得 看要不要換個pattern或者是在把距離縮小多一點
  6. 01:37:509 (1) - 看要不要也像其他難度改成spinner 這樣就算100%也還有spinner可以做些分數的差異，甚至可以統一結尾時間 有何不好呢 xD
[Insane]

  1. 00:30:192 (6) - 看要不要Ctrl+G讓他有點分別，不然會以為00:29:643 (3,4) - 跟00:30:009 (5,6) - 是連在一起的拍子
  2. 00:59:643 (1) - 感覺開頭應該有些什麼音效才對建議你使用grumd的Hitsounds copier 可以確保你每個難度的音效都能夠一致
  3. 01:36:229 (1,2) - 看要不要後面的part一起拉近一些 最後這個跳特別大 要是不小心漏了到時候你的vote可能也會不小心落了 QQ
[Hard]

  1. AR設定為6.5~7吧! 現在的AR這Spread不大OK
  2. 01:21:412 (4) - 看起來少了個NC
  3. 01:27:448 (5) - ^
  4. 01:30:375 (5) - ^
  5. 01:36:778 (3,4,5) - 這裡間距應該跟01:36:412 (2,3) - 一樣打起來比較順暢
[Normal]

  1. OD調到4 HP調到3.5或4之間 不然N到H差距太大了
對我來說沒什麼大問題了 音效用的差不多在叫我回來看看 8-)
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

bossandy wrote:

I am back

[Kamiya's Insane]

  1. Use the same color set for this diff like other diffs if u are not intended. xD叫香菜弄下
  2. 00:14:643 (7) - Miss clap here?fixed it
  3. 00:59:643 (1) - Miss clap endfixed it
  4. 01:05:497 (6) - Whistle start , same as 01:17:204 (1) - fixed it
  5. 01:23:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這裡難度太高了已經不是Insane該有的了我覺得 看要不要換個pattern或者是在把距離縮小多一點fixed it尽量缩小了 尽力了;w;
  6. 01:37:509 (1) - 看要不要也像其他難度改成spinner 這樣就算100%也還有spinner可以做些分數的差異，甚至可以統一結尾時間 有何不好呢 xD
嘛 其实吧 我觉得这个短话条一方面挺合适，第二呢 就是加combo数(逃)不过boss酱说必须得改的话！我也是会义不容辞的！（理直气壮）


對我來說沒什麼大問題了 音效用的差不多在叫我回來看看 8-)
太感谢啦~！thank you for your modding！

改
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TitleUnicode:未来のメロディー
Artist:Duca
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Creator:Hanazawa Kana
Version:Kamiya's Insane
Source:想いを捧げる乙女のメロディー ～あふれる想いを調べにのせて～
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268,228,57448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,141,57631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,284,57814,6,0,P|288:316|184:268,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,195,58729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,141,58912,2,0,P|268:184|268:224,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,52,59278,2,0,P|248:68|216:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,272,59643,6,0,P|120:244|144:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,64,60192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,172,60375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,300,60558,2,0,L|196:260,5,40,8|8|8|8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,320,61107,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,288,61290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,172,61473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,200,61656,1,12,0:0:0:0:
156,200,61747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,200,61839,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,88,62022,1,12,0:0:0:0:
292,88,62113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,88,62204,2,8,L|244:80,1,40
196,28,62387,2,2,L|140:40,1,40
84,64,62570,6,0,B|116:108|84:156|84:156|52:200|96:272,1,191.999994140625,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,376,63119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,200,63302,2,0,L|156:200,1,95.9999970703126,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,63668,2,0,P|304:64|352:80,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,144,64034,1,6,0:0:0:0:
344,232,64217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,81,64400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,296,64583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,144,64765,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,64948,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,156,65040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,156,65131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,272,65314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,248,65497,2,0,P|68:200|80:148,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,65863,2,0,P|180:164|148:192,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,44,66229,2,0,P|200:24|280:120,1,191.999994140625,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,66778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,108,66961,5,6,0:0:0:0:
280,104,67143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,200,67326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,264,67509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,67692,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,264,67875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,252,67967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,240,68058,2,0,L|364:136,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,155,69339,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,208,69522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
279,250,69704,2,0,L|384:248,2,95.9999970703126,2|6|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,70253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,268,70436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,70619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70985,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,324,71168,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,356,71351,6,0,P|324:304|300:264,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,71717,2,0,P|344:188|288:176,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,72083,6,0,P|160:212|184:172,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,72449,2,0,P|140:96|196:84,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,72,72814,5,12,0:0:0:0:
160,264,72997,1,12,0:0:0:0:
456,160,73180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,73363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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16,248,73820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,140,74095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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280,240,75375,2,0,P|328:236|372:256,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,336,75741,5,6,0:0:0:0:
370,255,75924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,340,76107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,248,76290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,96,76473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,72,76656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,72,76747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,72,76839,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,188,77022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,77204,6,0,P|220:128|224:12,1,191.999994140625,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,77753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,188,77936,2,0,L|344:292,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,78302,2,0,L|272:180,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,308,78668,5,4,0:0:0:0:
275,165,78851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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275,165,79217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,79400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,264,79491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,140,81046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,179,81229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,228,81412,2,0,L|352:280,2,95.9999970703126,2|6|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,179,81961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,264,82143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,140,82326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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116,216,82692,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,264,82875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,95,83058,5,6,0:0:0:0:
188,264,83241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,52,83424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,308,83607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,56,83790,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,308,83973,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,84156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,176,84339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,84522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,52,84704,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,352,84887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,192,85436,5,8,0:0:0:0:
343,180,85528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,168,85619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,156,85711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,144,85802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,200,85985,6,0,P|316:280|384:272,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,236,86534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,84,87083,2,0,P|420:72|352:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,164,87448,1,6,0:0:0:0:
408,152,87631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,312,87814,2,0,P|448:252|448:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,164,88180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,88363,2,0,L|376:336,2,40,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,164,88729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,232,88912,2,0,P|396:196|292:232,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,89461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,224,89643,6,0,P|128:252|176:264,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,90009,2,0,P|156:136|176:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,16,90375,1,6,0:0:0:0:
160,96,90558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,56,90741,2,0,P|64:40|116:40,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,91107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,91290,2,0,L|360:72,2,40,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,72,91656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,91839,6,0,P|124:172|152:244,2,160,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,92754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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324,176,93119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,52,93302,1,6,0:0:0:0:
512,124,93485,2,0,P|508:172|476:216,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,80,93851,2,0,P|336:40|360:4,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,124,94583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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84,268,96229,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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308,88,97326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Hanazawa Kana
谢谢boss 我今天回去整体再看一遍、

回来了

bossandy wrote:

I am back

[General]
  1. I can help u add a video , let me know if u like to add it! 如果可以的话就麻烦你啦。。我是对剪video完全不懂lol
  2. Metadata here :
    http://www.ensemble-game.com/18.otomelo ... movie.html
    Screenshots : https://imgur.com/a/pjzgikA
    add "Nekusam" to tags as well ! 好！
  3. 確保副歌每一個鼓點都有下clap的音效，像是Melody難度你在這邊下的音效01:04:583 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我個人不大喜歡個人特製的random音效 如果要我推的話我這個會稍微要求一點 xD 好，那我把除了四萌以外的diff音效都复制一下
  4. 整體音量調高10%左右我覺得會比較好 現在的音效聲有點小我把音效文件所有的音量提了40%
[Melody]

  1. 既然是Extra難度HP不妨調到7吧! 好的好的
  2. 00:14:643 (3) - Miss clap ? (applied in all diff)fixed
[Kamiya's Insane]

  1. Use the same color set for this diff like other diffs if u are not intended. xD 改好啦
[Insane]

  1. 00:30:192 (6) - 看要不要Ctrl+G讓他有點分別，不然會以為00:29:643 (3,4) - 跟00:30:009 (5,6) - 是連在一起的拍子 我改了一下 怎么感觉还是有点看不出。。。
  2. 00:59:643 (1) - 感覺開頭應該有些什麼音效才對建議你使用grumd的Hitsounds copier 可以確保你每個難度的音效都能夠一致 复制好以后这里有whistle音了
  3. 01:36:229 (1,2) - 看要不要後面的part一起拉近一些 最後這個跳特別大 要是不小心漏了到時候你的vote可能也會不小心落了 QQ哈哈哈 改了改了 后面间距我都拉小了一点 结尾良心一些
[Hard]

  1. AR設定為6.5~7吧! 現在的AR這Spread不大OKoke
  2. 01:21:412 (4) - 看起來少了個NCd
  3. 01:27:448 (5) - ^d
  4. 01:30:375 (5) - ^d 感觉坐着坐着就忘了放nc。。尴尬
  5. 01:36:778 (3,4,5) - 這裡間距應該跟01:36:412 (2,3) - 一樣打起來比較順暢改了。。就是感觉是不是间距有点大
[Normal]

  1. OD調到4 HP調到3.5或4之間 不然N到H差距太大了ok
對我來說沒什麼大問題了 音效用的差不多在叫我回來看看 8-)
谢谢boss chan~
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Did a IRC mod in game
  1. Some NCs in Insane diffs
  2. A simple rhythm change in Hard diff
  3. Add video in all difficulties
Everything looks fine for me , fun map , I can do this

Bubbled!
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
modding it currently ~ will post soon

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Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
K took longer than I expected and no format this time

Melody

00:32:936 (6) - hmm imo I feel like the spacing should increase some more here instead of lower to emphasis the beat here

nothing else really for this map


Kamiya's Insane

00:41:716 - missing clap here due to top not mapping this part
could fix slight mess up overlap 01:03:668 (4,3) -
imo I feel this note right here shouldn't be given as much emphasis in terms of spacing compare to the others notes in this jump pattern since there isn't nothing here aside from vocals and I think lowering the spacing would help give more emphasis towards 01:13:363 (4) - (don't have to lower it too much btw)


Insane

OD too high for this difficulty imo ~ please lower it down to 7.5 for better balance for spread and playability
HP to possibliy 5.5 for spread reasons (right now its the same as the hard diff)

00:40:619 (1,2,3,4) - tune down this pattern please ~ this was quite hard during testplaying don't quite seeing why you choose to do 3/4 extended sliders in this difficulty and made them all spaced out when you didn't even choose to do so in the higher difficulty - imo I feel this sorta overdone for this low difficulty and should make it more similar to the top (slightly nerf of course)
- I didn't mention the other 3/4 sliders like this earlier only because they are more simple and more understandable (altho I rather see them gone too >.>)
^ 00:47:936 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - same for this pattern - I suggest reduce the spacing on 00:50:314 (2) - to be more easier to play for this

Hard

Ur Current AR is WAY too low for a Hard - this makes the map harder to read than it really should for hard players (such as myself) and its play awkwardly
Please used 7.5 AR (I would suggest just AR 7 but I still think that is too low)

00:41:716 - same thing about missing clap
00:48:119 - Probably just me but I think the sv for this section is a tad too slow for the song in this section and it kind of feels a bit awkward when playing
Possibly raising to .8x will still be slow sv for ya but feels more fitting with the song around here and plays better (shouldn't require much adjustments if ya do go with that)


Normal
00:41:716 - same thing about missing clap
More in a general thing but I do feel you may want to reduce some of the 1/2 in the non-kiai some (and maybe buff the kiai just a bit if ya do that)
because right now it feels like the non-kiai is more denser than chorus which ain't too much of a problem but then I look in the kiai and you simplify more (01:02:570 (1,2) - like here where you could have made 01:03:119 - clickable)
basically simplify a bit in the non-kiai
not expecting much for saying what I said above but I figure I mention it

General
01:25:985 - why is the song lower in volume than at 00:12:814 - ? the rhythm here is basically identical (if not slightly higher at the end) so the volume shouldn't be 40% and instead make it 50% please for all difficulties

I think that should be about it so call me back for recheck
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Hanazawa Kana
Thank u hailie
ok im back

Hailie wrote:

K took longer than I expected and no format this time

Melody

00:32:936 (6) - hmm imo I feel like the spacing should increase some more here instead of lower to emphasis the beat here moved a little

nothing else really for this map

Insane

OD too high for this difficulty imo ~ please lower it down to 7.5 for better balance for spread and playability
HP to possibliy 5.5 for spread reasons (right now its the same as the hard diff) k

00:40:619 (1,2,3,4) - tune down this pattern please ~ this was quite hard during testplaying don't quite seeing why you choose to do 3/4 extended sliders in this difficulty and made them all spaced out when you didn't even choose to do so in the higher difficulty - imo I feel this sorta overdone for this low difficulty and should make it more similar to the top (slightly nerf of course) simplified
- I didn't mention the other 3/4 sliders like this earlier only because they are more simple and more understandable (altho I rather see them gone too >.>) e,i simplified a little at 00:15:741 (1) - as well
^ 00:47:936 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - same for this pattern - I suggest reduce the spacing on 00:50:314 (2) - to be more easier to play for this try my best and reudced some

also i want to ask 00:24:704 (2) - does it give weird feeling when playing?i always lost combo when i testplay it,or its because my lacking in ability to read low ARs

Hard

Ur Current AR is WAY too low for a Hard - this makes the map harder to read than it really should for hard players (such as myself) and its play awkwardly
Please used 7.5 AR (I would suggest just AR 7 but I still think that is too low) ok!

00:41:716 - same thing about missing clap ok!
00:48:119 - Probably just me but I think the sv for this section is a tad too slow for the song in this section and it kind of feels a bit awkward when playing
Possibly raising to .8x will still be slow sv for ya but feels more fitting with the song around here and plays better (shouldn't require much adjustments if ya do go with that) ok


Normal
00:41:716 - same thing about missing clap fixed lol
More in a general thing but I do feel you may want to reduce some of the 1/2 in the non-kiai some (and maybe buff the kiai just a bit if ya do that)
because right now it feels like the non-kiai is more denser than chorus which ain't too much of a problem but then I look in the kiai and you simplify more (01:02:570 (1,2) - like here where you could have made 01:03:119 - clickable)
basically simplify a bit in the non-kiai i tried hard to fix this,hope it will works
not expecting much for saying what I said above but I figure I mention it

General
01:25:985 - why is the song lower in volume than at 00:12:814 - ? the rhythm here is basically identical (if not slightly higher at the end) so the volume shouldn't be 40% and instead make it 50% please for all difficulties fixed for all diffs

I think that should be about it so call me back for recheck
ooooo
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

Hailie wrote:

K took longer than I expected and no format this time

Kamiya's Insane

00:41:716 - missing clap here due to top not mapping this partfixed
could fix slight mess up overlap 01:03:668 (4,3) - fixed
imo I feel this note right here shouldn't be given as much emphasis in terms of spacing compare to the others notes in this jump pattern since there isn't nothing here aside from vocals and I think lowering the spacing would help give more emphasis towards 01:13:363 (4) - (don't have to lower it too much btw)fixed

I think that should be about it so call me back for recheck
all fixed~ thank you so much!! :)
Cheri
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Cheri
sorry again

Insane -
also i want to ask 00:24:704 (2) - does it give weird feeling when playing?i always lost combo when i testplay it,or its because my lacking in ability to read low ARs
hmm I seem to play it just fine but I think the spacing on 00:25:253 (4) - 00:26:716 (3) - shouldn't be that high since it ain't that it intense and most jumps ain't really that high in general so reduce it



Normal -

01:02:936 - 01:05:863 - 01:14:643 - 01:17:570 - missing claps

that really should be it hopefully
Hanazawa Kana
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Hanazawa Kana
all fixed~
Cheri
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Cheri
all good <3
Kibbleru
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melody

01:33:485 - was the SV change here intentional btw?
you don't do it in the intro 00:20:314 - so it seemed a bit weird for me


kamiya
00:42:448 (2,4) - thank god these are rankable now eh? xD
Hanazawa Kana
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Kibbleru wrote:

melody

01:33:485 - was the SV change here intentional btw?
you don't do it in the intro 00:20:314 - so it seemed a bit weird for me
yea,its on purpose,the former one i use overlap to show the drum,the latter one i use anti-flow and higher sv to show the drum,its ok imo

kamiya
00:42:448 (2,4) - thank god these are rankable now eh? xD
yea its rankable,when u play it,U can see the reverse arrow clearly
thank u kibb baby for checking this~~
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Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
no, i mean covered repeats are no longer unrankable.
Hanazawa Kana
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Lol
Its not unrankable as long as more than a half reverse arrow can be seen when playing (This is what i heard from other mappers just now)
-Asuki-Chan-
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-Asuki-Chan-
GARBAGE MAPPING AND WAY OUTDATED
Hanazawa Kana
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-Asuki-Chan- wrote:

GARBAGE MAPPING AND WAY OUTDATED

Yes u r right
And welcome to give 1 point~
Dored
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Dored

-Asuki-Chan- wrote:

GARBAGE MAPPING AND WAY OUTDATED
What is the good mapping in your eyes?Can you map the same song to show your good mapping?
If yours is better than this map,OK,good luck to you on ranking it!
If not,please don't disrespect other's map.
Vert
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-Asuki-Chan- wrote:

GARBAGE MAPPING AND WAY OUTDATED
can you rank a single map before barking in other mapsets?
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