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a bit busy with exam
[easy]
good luck
a bit busy with exam
[easy]
- 01:18:021 (1) - seems pretty weird that this is the only snare you skipped , the others rhythm around here you kinda follow the snare like this consistent imo (01:21:354 (2) - 01:24:021 (2) - 01:29:354 (2) - 01:32:021 (2) - ) so i think it would be better to add note here 01:26:688 - to make the rhythm a bit more consistent
- 01:39:688 (2,3) - the transition here is a bit awkward imo , suddenly introduce the 1/2 gap like that can make player a bit surprised and confused imo i think try to make rhythm like this would make the player can react to the transition better
- fine for me
- 00:03:021 (1,2) - this looks like 1/4 spacing tbh cus the way they spaced so low and the 1/2 sapcing before 00:02:854 (6,1) - just already make player thinking that 1/2 spacing would be like that so changing them so different like this just make the player confusing so it would be better to space them a bit like 00:04:021 (4,5) -
- 00:15:521 (3,4,5,6) - why this 1/2 spacing different from the others , would be better to make the 1/2 spacing here a bit more consistent with other 1/2 spacing around here ( use 1.2x spacing)
- 00:21:354 (5,6,7,1) - same
- 00:57:688 (1) - is this supposed to snap to 1/1 ? the current one just make the rhythm here 00:57:688 (1,2) - play really awkward due to weird rhythm gap there , make this 1/1 slider would make rhythm sound a lots better
- 01:35:021 (1,2) - i think combine the double repeat 1/2 reverse slider there with the jumps just make this a bit hard for player to play it , player will have to focus on the slider track first but since they see 01:35:688 (2) - appear before the slider end so they're gonna thinking like they have to catch (2) fast since at this point the player are still develope skill in jumps so they can play them really well and then easilly miss like 1 repeat of 01:35:021 (1) - so i think it would be better to just try to simple this a bit by decrease spacing a bit so that the player can react to it better
- 01:47:688 (3,4) - why the spacing suddenly so small when the music doesn't change much here ? would be better to make spacing a bit more consistent here
i don't like how you stack thing like 00:12:354 (1,2) - normally i think stack work better with something that sound same or similiar like 00:34:188 (3,4) -00:45:354 (4,5) - but in this case it's not so it make it feel pretty weird and awkward there , stack should be use to emphasis something that sound similiar or same imo at this level
- 00:18:354 (3,4,5) - improve the pattern thing here a bit ? somehow it looks a bit off for me , try move 00:18:604 (4,5) - to around x168 y272 ?
- 01:18:854 (6,1) - i think a higher spacing would emphasis the beat here better and give nice impact
- 01:56:188 (4,1) - similiar to above , try move 1 to around x315 y164 ? so it would emphasis the beat on 1 better like 01:55:521 (4,1) -
- 00:18:854 (8) - blanket looks kinda off from here , you can improve that a bit
- 00:20:688 (3,4,5,4) - stack for better aesthetic ?
- 00:24:521 (2,3) - 00:24:688 (3,4) - i think make these spacing a bit higher would express the beat better here , the beat there sound more emphasized than 2 so i think it would be more reasonable to use the higher spacing to emphasis that
- 00:30:021 (3,4) - not really sure what you're following here but i find them pretty weird that you skip the red tick beat here 00:30:188 - i think that red tick sound similiar to the most previous red tick there so i think it would be better to map it to make the rhythm stay consistent to make thing flow more smooth and consistent , try this rhythm ?
- 00:40:021 (1,2,3,4,1) - mm i don't find anything in the music that go more intense or something like that so the spacing increase here just feel weird for me so just make spacing stay the same like 00:39:688 (1,2,3,4) - to make it a bit more consistent with the music
- 00:42:021 - adding note here would make the rhythm transition a bit better here
- 00:55:354 (2,3,1) - i don't find anything in the music that feel static to emphasis the stack there like that , the rhythm in the music here just keep going on without anything to emphasis a stop movement flow thing like stack so i think if this is not stacked it would be a bit more consistent with the music
- 01:28:688 (2,3,4) - i think consistent spacing would make flow here better like 01:27:021 (1,2,3) -
- 01:45:688 (5,6) - i don't think the high 1/4 spacing flow like that would work well here because i don't find the beat or music there to be so intense to make the high spacing fit the music there like that , would be bette to try to decrease spacing here a bit to make thing a bit more consistent with the music or you can try to make flow a bit more intuitive like 01:48:021 (2,3,1) - , eventhough idk what suggestion flow to use for this lol
- 01:51:688 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - make them like uhh on the same line ? would make the pattern looks better imo
- 00:05:688 (1,2) - make the flow here a bit symmetry with 00:05:354 (3,4) - ? I think that would make flow a bit better here
- 00:27:021 (1) - current position make the pattern there 00:26:521 (3,4,5,1) - feel a bit messy and off imo , i think maybe move it to around x92 y228 would be better
- 00:36:021 (4) - I think stack this with 00:35:354 (2) - head would make the overall pattern here 00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - feel a bit more together or something like that
- 00:37:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not really sure what these circles are folloing in the music , tbh it's just sound like this part 00:35:021 - or00:32:354 - so i think it would be better to try to change the rhythm here a bit to make thing feel a bit more consistent currently this just feel a bit confusing of what you're following here and it kinda feel unexpected tho that the rhythm just change to something completely different when the music is not
- 00:48:021 (1,2) - this rhythm would work better imo because the 1/4 slider there would just help emphasis the strong beat here 00:48:021 - while the 1/4 circles help emphasis the consistent sound at 00:48:188 - 00:48:271 - , currently i think your rhythm kinda make the 00:48:188 - feel weird and give a bit awkward feeling by mapping it as sliderend and you even give a strong hitsound for them which also make it worse
- 01:25:688 (1,2) - spacing feel a bit too much imo , something like this 01:28:354 (1,2) - 01:21:021 (1,2) - would be enough now , that 1/4 doesn't sound standout much that it need to space so high like that imo
- 01:41:188 (2,3) - should just make the spacing or flow equal with 01:41:021 (1,2) - since the beat actually sound same , try move 3 to around x272 y108 ?
- 01:42:354 (3) - any reason why the curve has to be so edge like that , later similiar part i don't see you using this edge curve much tho (01:44:354 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:021 (1,2,3,4) - )
- 01:44:188 (5) - ctrl+g would make flow here feel 01:44:021 (4,5,1) - better
- 01:49:021 (1) - why is this nc ? the similiar part before this i don't see use nc (01:43:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) so delete nc there to make nc a bit more consistent ?
- 00:09:021 (5,6,7) - consistent spacing would improve flow here a bit imo
- 00:16:854 (3) - I think ctrl+h then reposition this make the flow here 00:16:688 (2,3) - better
- 00:22:688 (6) - i think this should snap to 1/4 i can only hear beat at 1/4
- 01:25:688 (1,2) - i think the rhythm sound better when you ctrl+g the rhythm here , 1 just sound so strong and fit for the 1/4 slider better imo
- 01:31:521 (4) - make this asymmetry with 01:31:354 (3) - ? would make pattern and flow looks better imo
- 01:48:354 (1) - ctrl+g would make the flwo 01:48:021 (4,1,2) - here better and make it consistent with the circular flow idea that you're trying to do around here
- 01:51:688 (3) - nc to indicate the change in spacing there ? currently the spacing 01:51:688 (3,4,5) - just looks like 1/2 spacing for me here so i think nc would help the readability here a bit
good luck