fanzhen0019 wrote:

免费mod

General

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  offset有一点点提前 你看着加几ms 主要这曲子的drum是manual的所以随机误差是存在的，我觉得现在这个海星，如果你是听到最后那个部分才这么判断你的话那只能说如果硬要这么搞得多红线了，曲子里面很多地方都有一些误差，总之downbeat对上了就可以了。

Easy

Hitsounds

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  nothing

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:18:279 (1) - 会不会有点短了
2. 01:41:479 (1) - 同上
3. 01:43:479 (2) - 没对准 难看 要么就再歪点
4. 02:51:879 (1) - 完全重叠没问题吗 要不要稍微放歪点

C-Hard

Hitsounds

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  没啥 建议你music音量调低听一遍 觉得可以补的补一下

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:32:679 (3) - 这个没对准2肯定不是故意的吧
   不知道为啥这个难度老提示我update 点了还是有

C-Insane

Hitsounds

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  没东西

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:41:079 (1) - 往下点吧
   没东西

Dance

Hitsounds

1. 00:38:545 - 少whistle了吧 嗯。
2. 00:50:145 (4) - 你可以考虑加个drum finish 会好听些 不过默认音量很大 可能得改一下绿线 试过了，不好。
3. 01:02:945 (4) - ^ 还有一些其他同样的地方 不赘述了 比如02:13:345 - 之类的后面的KIAI基本都有 这曲子很light的不想搞那么多累赘。
4. 01:18:679 (4) - 少东西了 嗯。
5. 01:44:145 - 01:44:279 - 这里都可以上clap 不好。
6. 02:33:879 (4) - 多了whistle 可以删掉 嗯。
7. 02:42:545 - 我倒是觉得这可以加whistle 本来上面的121212听起来就有点软了 不好。
8. 03:24:679 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -　可以稍微加一点吧 随便加了点。
9. 03:33:745 (1,1,2,3,4) - 这里也是 这里倒没啥要加的。。。

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:11:879 (1,2,3) - 为了DS统一 可以把这三个整体挨着00:11:745 (6) - 吧 这图ds你还想统一。。。 好吧你有理，我改了。
2. 00:38:145 (3,4) - 可以叠00:37:079 (7) - 下面 不好，妈耶，你这太强迫症了
3. 01:10:679 (4) - 动一下 可以
   
   图

   
4. 02:58:279 (1,2,3) - 这三个可能成三角形比较好看些 这边是ds为主导了，排版靠边
5. 03:11:479 (3) - 叠03:10:279 (2) - 下面还能做四边形 不叠
6. 03:33:745 (1,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得太随便了 你要不要考虑重新摆一下 沃日。。。原版那个被ban了，现在这个是妥协的产物，不想改了。

我摸完发现摸错set了 低难度全废 别看了 我还不知道那个HW''和你现在的Dance差得多不多 凑合看吧 不好意思
offset问题是两个set都有的

Bubblun wrote:

nm req.

Dance
https://puu.sh/AxhFW/3fbdf9d983.txt <= IRC
03:09:345 (8) - I think this note should be brought to https://puu.sh/AxhYx/560e4765d3.png to give more spacing to 03:09:479 (1) - like done at 01:03:079 (1) - 02:26:279 (1) - 02:56:679 (1) - make sense, changed.

Other diffs looked good. Call me back.

defiance wrote:

y does the normal have a dot at the end....

Syph wrote:

maybe adding a . to everything would be a good idea to satisfy all the ocd people

1. 02:48:279 (4) - Should be 1/3 (02:48:545)
2. 02:31:745 (3) - increase hs volume for the slider head?
3. 01:56:545 (3) - ^

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Collab Insane]

1. 02:48:279 (4) - Should be 1/3 (02:48:545) fixed.
2. 02:31:745 (3) - increase hs volume for the slider head? true, fixed.
3. 01:56:545 (3) - ^ ^

也來做op啊 可以啊，你开坑我做图。我其实远古时期开了个坑但是一个物件都没摆233： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122903

Kuron-kun wrote:

Hi there! Some small converns about hitsound volume/usage below:

on Collab Insane: 02:31:745 (3) - wasn't this supposed to have higher volume than the rest? When listening to the song at 100% you can barely hear anything there and it's almost inaudible and inconsistent with the rest, specially when they have 100% volume. It seems like it was caused due to top diff muting this slider as it was a sliderend, not a clickable object. you are right, already fixed.

01:44:012 (6) - forgot a clap on sliderend? 01:44:279 (7) - and this one should probably be a whistle instead. true, fixed.

on Collab Hard: 01:44:145 (4,5) - you didn't hitsound those beats, even though they are hitsounded in other difficulties. added some effect now.

02:55:479 (2,3) - aren't these a bit too far from each other? Ctrl + G on (3) would definitely be a more expected movement and a lot more readable to Hard players. make sense, changed.

03:14:945 (2) - probably another missing whistle since drums didn't change there. about this, this tick is actually following the vocal or bass track's beat, which is not in my hs system's track which always following drum beat. add whistle or clap are neither a good choice, so i chose to leave that hs blank here.

Lasse wrote:

the volume issues on collab insane really need to be fixed, they make gameplay feel really weird on these spots since there is suddenly nearly no feedback on clickable objects. it seems they are only like this because the volume settings were copied from top diff where they are sliderends ofc.

snapping on 02:48:279 - and 03:01:079 - on collab insane also seems questionable when looking at how the whole diff handles this rhythm and also just with the song in general, should probably both end on the next 1/3 tick instead? yeah ofc.

make sure to also look over the more minor suggestions were posted


really cute map though!

Hollow Wings wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年7月7日 at 21:47:58

Artist: Ishida Yoko
Title: Negai
Source: ああっ女神さまっ
Tags: Ah! My Goddess OPEN YOUR MIND 〜小さな羽根ひろげて〜 多田彰文 ただ あきふみ tada akifumi ending ed Pata-Mon Suzuki_1112 1112deng
BPM: 150
Filesize: 8518kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Collab Hard (3.2 stars, 511 notes)
2. Collab Insane (4.5 stars, 619 notes)
3. Dance (5.37 stars, 657 notes)
4. Normal. (1.93 stars, 290 notes)

Download: Ishida Yoko - Negai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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石田燿子 願い

bg by me
sb by me

my four years ago map with slight changes. love this song and the animation so much, hope you can love it as well.

Collab Hard with Pata-Mon (B)
Collab Insane with Suzuki_1112 (B)

collab parts

00:00:000 - 00:21:479 A
00:21:479 - 00:50:279 B
00:50:279 - 01:19:079 A
01:19:079 - 01:44:679 B
01:44:679 - 02:13:479 A
02:13:479 - 02:43:879 B
02:43:879 - 03:09:479 A
03:09:479 - end B