Normal
Let's begin.
So my first concern goes for 00:22:171 (22171|2,22471|0) - , 00:24:571 (24571|0,24871|2) - etc. At the beginning you used here a 3/4 LN. Now you suddenly changed to 1/2 and 1/4. So.. you see what's wrong? There's an inconsistency which needs to get fixed.
this are actually confusing me even now, the synths for sample like 00:22:171 (22171|2) - sounds long, some modders pointed out that it should be 1/2 LNs according to the synth but i felt not. gonna do some rearrange on it.I suggest to 00:38:371 (38371|2,38521|0) - CTRL+G these notes. To have a jack for 00:38:671 (38671|2) - too. Since you switch hands here i find it actually pretty cool and not too hard to play. Having only 00:38:821 (38821|1,38971|1) - as jack is a bit meh.
applied01:16:771 - Little suggestion for this part to make it more accurate to PR. Comes pretty cool:
nice01:36:796 (96796|1) - It would fit better if you follow the two strong sounds at 01:36:721 - and 01:36:871 - (Idk how to describe this sound lol) However, i think you get what i mean.
i did it before but changed considered it feels like i suddenly ignore the synths. change it back~01:51:046 (111046|2) - Why is this suddenly a LN? You haven't use a LN at 01:41:446 (101446|2) -. I find this LN doesn't fit here so better use a normal note. It has a quiet difficult rhythm for a Normal too..
Hard
00:04:446 (4446|1,4496|0) - CTRL+G feels better here. If applied, move 00:04:646 (4646|1) - to 3.
oh cool00:08:371 - So i can tell you that this here will probably cause spread problems:
I would suggest to either buff the Normal or nerf it in the Hard.
i think its fine about the difference between them, but if its necessary to get changed, i'd probably nerf the hard diff since the normal need to get nerfed due to the SR.00:25:171 - When you map stuff like this you should watch for one important point. Let not happen 00:25:921 (25921|0,26071|1,26071|0,26221|1) - this. First jack on 1 and then on 2. Try to always splitt them to different hands. It feels way more comfortable to play.
Same here 00:26:221 (26221|2,26371|2,26371|3,26521|3) - then.
good lesson for me! applied00:27:571 - This part here could also make spread problems to Normal. This here is a Light Jumpstream, the Normal uses a single LN with a single 2/1 Note.. so..
will consider this00:39:571 - This here could also cause spread problems to Normal..
01:04:021 (64021|3,64171|3,64171|2,64321|2) - Like explained before. Try to avoid stuff like this.
rearranged some01:05:971 - While i am not really sure about the previous mentioned spread problems, i can tell you to 100% that this here is
unrankable.
You have a single LN in Normal and go for 1/4 burst
with 1/8 pattern in it in the hard. It should be pretty obvious that you can't do that here. You should really buff the Normal
and remove the 1/8 notes from this here.
01:12:446 (72446|2) - Would move this to 4 because the sound has not the same pitch like the next note, therefore it should not be mapped at the same column.
moved. the sounds are slightly different so..01:12:446 (72446|2) - hint hint, spread.
01:25:171 - Same goes for this part.
01:35:071 (95071|2) - This long note is
Wrong Snapped. Please move it 1/4 beat down.
oups, moved01:44:221 (104221|0,104371|0,104521|0) - Try to avoid such triple jacks. You did it well in the entire Map so you should keep this until the end. Arrange the pattern here a bit to remove the triple.
rearranged01:57:721 (117721|3,117796|2,117871|3,118321|1,118396|0,118471|1) - Are you really really sure you want to make here one-hand trills? I don't thin they fit at all and you haven't really make use of 1H-Trills so far.. i would arrange the pattern here.
rearranged, just realised rip02:03:571 - Same spread problem as mentioned several times before already.