Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera · forum

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-02-17T06:15:35+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 16, 2009 at 2:35:11 AM

Artist: Shiraishi Ryoko
Title: Taiyou no Kakera
Source: Himawari!!
BPM: 166.05
Filesize: 14064kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.77 stars, 202 notes)
Sushi971's Normal (3.71 stars, 116 notes)

Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From himawari! enjoy the opening theme Taiyou no kakera

Last edited by Gens 2010-06-26T16:25:46+00:00, edited 94 times in total.

Sir Minelli

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Sir Minelli 2009-02-17T07:01:02+00:00

All i can say to you is this: http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&n=5

Good luck doing it again, i saw you had the "rythm" (at least). But still you have ALOT to learn.

Timing = Wrong
Spacing = Wrong

Too many mistakes to mod.

Once you learn a bit more about beatmapping by reading carefully the link i posted, THEN and only THEN, start asking for a modder.

-Standing for what you believe in is right, even if you are standing alone-

Download: Kagamine Rin - Melancholic (eldnl) [Normal].osu

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Jarby

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Jarby 2009-02-17T08:03:14+00:00

Sir Minelli wrote:
Nothing important, anyway

Don't be an elitist bitch. At least try and give the correct timing and offset.

BPM: 168
Offset: 1112 (This is probably wrong, but is better than no offset.)

Resnap all notes after changing this (From the drop down menus at the top, Timing>Resnap All Notes)
Use the distance snap tool to ensure your notes have correct spacing.

Good Luck!

EDIT: Use Distance Snap. It's at the bottom right of the editor screen.

Drezus

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Drezus 2009-02-17T22:53:06+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2009-02-18T20:21:23+00:00

The timing isn't right, and that's going to cause a lot of problems. Try this:

BPM: 166
Offset: 1,076

And then resnap all notes and recalculate slider lengths.

You're starting to get the hang of it. Places like 00:21:31 - In Normal are actually pretty fun, though hard to play unless you expect the spacing changes. That's the main problem here (aside from the timing): the spacing is really inconsistent, and that usually makes a map hard to play (in a bad way). Try mapping with Distance snap on; it'll make the distance between notes relative to the time between them.

Sushi

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Sushi 2009-02-19T17:09:57+00:00

Same BPM, offset 403

There are still some timing problems :

00:09:168 (1) -> (5) : Move the notes 1/4 Beat earlier (they have to be on red and white Ticks)
00:34:921 (8) : Move to 00:35:101 (White Tick)
00:37:902 (5) : Move to 00:37:812 (Red Tick)
00:38:083 (6) : Move to 00:37:992 (White Tick)
00:38:354 (7) : Move to 00:38:263 (Blue Tick, 1/4 Beat snap divisor)
00:38:625 (8) : Move to 00:38:535 (Red Tick)
00:38:806 (9) : Move to 00:38:715 (White Tick)
00:39:348 (11) : Move to 00:39:257 (Red Tick)
00:39:528 (12) : Move to 00:39:438 (White Tick)
00:45:312 (1) : Move to 00:45:221 (White Tick)
00:45:854 (2) : Move to 00:45:763 (Red Tick)
00:46:939 (5) : Move to 00:46:848 (Red Tick)
00:47:299 (6) : Move to 00:47:209 (Red Tick)
00:54:257 (2) : would sound better 1/4 beat earlier
00:54:980 (5) : would sound better 1/4 beat earlier
01:00:854 (4) : Move to 01:00:763 (White Tick)
01:01:035 (5) : Move to 01:00:944 (Red Tick)
01:07:541 (1) : Move to 01:07:450 (Red Tick)
01:08:083 (2) : Move to 01:07:992 (White Tick)
01:10:251 (spin) : Starts at 01:10:341 (Red Tick), Finishes at 01:13:233 (Red Tick)
01:14:227 (1) to 01:18:925 (7) : Move all the notes 1/4 Beat earlier (they have to be on red and white Ticks)

After correcting those errors, use the distance snap tool on all notes and resubmit.

EDIT : Starred

Last edited by Sushi 2009-03-04T16:24:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sir Minelli

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Sir Minelli 2009-02-19T22:02:05+00:00

JarJarJacobs,

Worry about your modding and ill worry about mine.

-Standing for what you believe in is right, even if you are standing alone-

Sushi

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Sushi 2009-02-20T22:00:47+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

vytalibus

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vytalibus 2009-02-20T23:11:46+00:00

Hard:

00:21:00 (3) - Too far-spaced.
00:21:90 (3) - ^
00:27:42 (1) - Put this forward by one blue tick. It should be in the white tick afterwards. Then, adjust the spacing.
00:29:04 (7) - ^
00:35:10 (8) - Kind of too close. Readjust this so that the starting point is spaced right, and make the end point closer to the next hitcircle.
00:41:42 (7) - Space this right.
00:56:78 (1) - Whoa, cornered. Put this somewhere else.
01:27:87 (4) - Ugh, ugly spacing.

When I nazi-mod like this, it's certain that you're on the right track. Keep it up.

whymeman

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whymeman 2009-02-21T07:27:43+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-02-21T08:00:36+00:00

Look at this.

Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [EXAMPLE].osu

Sushi

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Sushi 2009-02-21T10:25:06+00:00

As i promised, i mapped a Normal Diff.

It may not be perfect, so feel free to mod it.

Your map is becoming great ^^ keep up the good work!

Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Sushi971's Normal].osu

Sleep Powder

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Sleep Powder 2009-02-22T01:55:37+00:00

The timing looks awesome~!

Just a little suggestion though...try making the sliders cool looking instead of sloppy (like use a design of some sort)