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Mami Kawada - Joint

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Andrea
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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 27 febbraio 2009 at 19.33.09

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Joint
Source: Shakugan No Shana II
Tags: Mami Kawada
BPM: 180
Filesize: 8732kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,04 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Mafiamaster's Hard (4,77 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Normal (4,56 stars, 190 notes)
  4. xxheroxx's Hard (4,99 stars, 344 notes)
  5. Yaya's Insane (4,98 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Mami Kawada - Joint
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My first beatmap, i need help to do my first good beatmap for ranking :)

Shakugan No Shana II Opening

Special Thanks To Card_N'FoRcE,MafiaMaster,osu_CN_yaya,xxheroxx and Tom800510 for help ^_^
Last edited by Andrea , edited 59 times in total.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Yes but i do slow XD Thanks for help anyway :)

When i do another difficulty i contact you :P If you want anyone or you mafiamaster, can help me to do another difficulty? :P

Or help me to edit good xD
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Lot's of your beats were out of sync.
Here's [Hard] with them synced. Nothing else done to them, just synced.
Still needs moar sliders lol!

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (osuplayer111) [Hard].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks mafiamaster, now im waiting for a mod for other problems <.<
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
i love thias song and wanna map it

only reason i havent do is i am lazy :lol:

ok. nevermind. i want this song be better then now so i modded this

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easy.

00:38:229 (8~10) here sounds strange

put it on each white line between 00:38:229~00:39:563

00:57:813 (7) back 1/4 to white line

01:04:229 (1) end at 01:05:396 sound better

01:07:479 (2) back 1/4 to white line

01:16:063 (12) fore 1/2

01:19:896 (4) back 1/2 and end at same way

01:25:313 (9) fore or back 1/4 up to you

01:55:563 (5) suggest you end at 01:57:063

01:19:896 (4) back 1/2 , start at 01:20:063 end at 01:21:896

my suggest

sorry,i have to say it isnt good enough :o (or you just not complete yet

1.turn the sounds smaller (sounds too powerful , even though it must be powerful.

2.choose other color(i think you can choose it better ;) ;) )

3.add sounds effect

4.my complain about easy, just boring. but its ok because its easy

5.sorry,forgot one. reset the note those in awful distanse.

or just set it beautier.

6.one more here. try map the slider curved. it will look better
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normal.

00:37:896 (9~11) this part is really strange to me, fix it

00:42:063 (1) take Color change off

00:58:396 (1) end at 00:59:229

01:02:229 (1) take Color change off

reset the break

01:38:896 (4) turn start at 01:38:729 end at 01:39:229

01:49:896 same as 01:38:896

02:02:396 (1) end at 02:03:229

02:09:813 (1) stard at 02:09:729 end at 02:10:729

02:10:896 (1) delete

02:12:063 (1) take color change off and fore 1/2 this slider

02:15:563 (5~1) this part is strange to me, fix it

02:25:229 (2~10) this part is too boing in normal

00:34:896 (4) fore 1/2

recheck all distance

suggest.

as easy.

and you need reset the note by ugly distance

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Hard..
Mafiamaster's Hard

it is full of Jump notes

but it ok in Hard

i dont really like the part like
00:34:376~00:37:376
00:45:043~00:48:043
.
.
.

and i dont like the map just copy and paste :( :( :( :| :|

and maybe turn the color in all difficulty same
.
.

thats all
Last edited by tom800510 , edited 4 times in total.
Andrea
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Andrea
[Easy] All things Fixed.
[Normal] All things Fixed.
Al-Azif
436 posts
Joined August 2008
Al-Azif
Good song, i like this so much. and i always hoping someone will map this.
and here is it :D

but, seems like too few notes for following the voice, even the hard one still not enough though.
Andrea
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Andrea
Is my first map, so if anyone can be good for help me to adjust all, i do all! :)
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (osuplayer111) [Mafiamaster's Hard].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Okkay, all added and fixed.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
I won't be harsh and tell you to be more creative since this is your first beatmap and all.
So...
Normal~
02:15:56 (6) - Shorten it to 02:16:06

Good job!
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Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yaya
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yaya
normal

overall +1
00:35:896 - add new combo color
00:38:566 - ^
00:48:896 - ^
01:09:563 - ^
01:20:229 - ^
02:13:563 - ^
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02:11:229 - add a note here
02:11:896 - ^
02:13:563 (3,4,5) - move these early 1/2 beat .
02:15:229 - add a note
there's no problem. but i feel it's a little strange.
a little empty. you can make a short verson .and add more notes in this

Easy

00:56:896 - new combo color
01:06:729 - 01:16:563 .
01:20:063 - new combo color
01:44:229 - add a note
02:00:896 - new combo color

feel strange.
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
i still thought its ugly :lol:


about my suggest 6.

try map the slider curved. it will look better

and reset all distance except Jump notes

above all, work harder to map it beautier :P :P :P
yaya
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yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (osuplayer111) [Yaya difficulty].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Updated.
Diasios
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Diasios
Ciao :)

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (osuplayer111) [xxheroxx's Hard].osu

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Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mtmcl
mtmcl
Contatta Card_N'FoRcE se hai bisogno di traduzione.

I hope that came out right.

There are a few ways people tend to make easy or normal maps. In mapping to only certain vocals in [Normal], you've chosen a technique used quite commonly by new mappers. The mistake in this technique is that the lack of structure in picking and choosing which syllables a note lands on makes the map even harder. One more effective technique is to map to the rhythm and allow the rhythm to loosely follow the vocals. It seems like you used this technique in [Easy] which turned out decently in my opinion. Another technique is to follow the vocals directly but make sure spacing isn't too wide and difficulty settings are low. You'll get better at finding your own technique as you map.

I don't REALLY think this is unrankable, but I'd like to see what other BATs have to say, so I'm not going to bubble it yet. I'm going to give it a BAT star to increase priority in the map list. This might also give you time to reconsider your technique for [Normal]. I'll keep an eye out on this map.

The other difficulties are great and each unique from one another. Good job everyone.

I know my mod posts are full of annoying, verbose English and not enough timing points with specific fixes, but I tend to mod more... philosophically. I'm not strict and I'd rather tell you the core of what might be going wrong in your map so you can better understand mapping both to osu standards and to your own personal style.
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