1. Hard (4.93 stars, 454 notes)
2. Normal (2.9 stars, 210 notes)

Lally wrote:

#1st :3
star *D*)/°

edit:
:3
[General]
all ok :3
[Normal]
00:08:044 - start normal like hard with a spinner :3 fixed
(all diff should start / end in the same time)

00:16:453 (2) - x: 308 y: 75
00:16:907 (3) - x: 392 y: 159
00:21:453 (4) - try this: sound better I don't think so

00:28:725 (3,4) - i think a reversearrow slider sounds better:arrow: ^

00:36:225 - add a circle + whistle
00:43:044 (2) - if you follow a little bit vocal slide should start here: 00:43:271 fixed
01:04:180 (4) - x: 88 y: 136 so you do a little blanket for the previous circle
01:10:544 (4) - it's diff for beginner they can may be confused try ::arrow: fixed

01:20:089 (2,1,2,3,4) - try a star here :3 I don't think is good start
01:42:589 (1) - better star this slider here: 01:42:362 I don't think is good start
01:55:771 (1) - better to start this slider here : 01:55:998 because vocal beginn here 01:55:884:arrow: In fact to do so will not be difficult, and I have seen this kind of start allowed

01:57:589 (1) - same with this one start it here : 01:57:816 do a little blanket for 01:56:680 (2) will look better

03:16:453 (5,1,2,3,4) - can be a better star
[Hard]
AR 7 is better

00:26:680 (2) - x: 224 y: 256
00:38:725 (5,6,1,2) ... - try something like this: fixed

01:18:271 (4) - bad place for this try to stalk it with beginn of slider fixed
01:42:362 - try to beginn here like i sain in normal fixed
01:59:634 (3,4) - better blanket here
02:23:271 (2,3,4,5) - at first try i missed it D: try to fixed

02:31:225 (6) - do it simmetric with previous slider
03:00:544 (1) - better blanket here

thank you! my friend

good luck sweety <3 a another star for you :3

Regou wrote:

我知道我很慢但是...
From CLANNED Modding Queue

[General]
目前Offset略早,用Offset 566? fixed
[Hard]
吐槽 Diff setting略奇葩
→CS(Circle Size) 4
HD(HP Drain) 6
OD(Overall Difficulty) 6

HARD 整体太丑了需要remap

00:18:520 (1) - 包圍好00:17:838 (7) - 的尾
00:20:566 (2,3) - 這個Anti-jump有點奇怪...
00:22:384 (3) - NC
00:29:543 - 00:29:656 這兩處建議加note,配合下音樂嘛
00:29:884 (3) - NC,而且這個Slider好像不太合節奏啊..
00:47:611 (6) - 跪求對稱,做漂亮一點
00:51:247 (1) - 爲什麽slow down啊
01:07:384 (5) - 這spacing太坑爹了,換正常spacing/直接重疊
01:08:293 (7) - ^
01:43:293 (1) - Ctrl+G? 比較順手(個人覺得)
01:44:202 (3,4) - Spacing?
02:00:111 (4) - 奇怪的slow down不解釋
02:11:475 (7) - NC?
02:16:929 (3) - 嗯...換正常速度的slider
02:33:293 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這種Jump加在Hard diff會不會太坑爹..
02:58:747 (1) - 形狀不太好看,而且後面的02:59:429 (2,3) - 也就按得不太順手...
03:22:156 (2) - 還是用新版slider吧,,這個不夠圓滑
整體來說還不錯,另外注意下NC Pattern,個人覺得怪怪的,就不多說了

[Normal]
00:22:362 (1) - 沒有包圍好00:21:453 (4,5) - ??? fixed
00:32:817 (1) - NC? fixed
00:34:635 (1) - Remove NC? fixed
00:40:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好歹弄個別的Pattern?...這樣子keep spacing讓這個Pattern不好看 没梗，就这么放吧
00:45:771 (1) - 奇怪的NC fixed
00:55:998 (1) - 這個Spinner有點太短了,個人雖然覺得沒問題,可是還是有機會坑到新手沙包啊.. fixed.
01:43:725 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:54:180 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - 這裡一直連著略坑爹 fixed
02:20:544 (3,4) - 不確定Normal可不可以加Jump..最好還是小心點D: 理论是没问题，因为是普通难度，你可以参考这张 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43739 我给微风做的那一段，各种看起来不适合用在Normal以下的梗，最后还是能rank的
03:22:134 (1) - Remove NC fixed

加油啊>w<

Steph De Chine wrote:

From my modding queue~ Sorry for late...
Normal:
事实上这种节奏感强烈的歌根本不适合把物件放在红线上…… 不放红线全放白线2分1拍很无聊的····
00:19:635 (2) - 这里是不是该去掉折返，然后在00:20:544那里放圈圈呢？ 就这样放吧，不改了
00:29:862 (1) - 总觉得在红线上开始有些坑……这首歌的节奏感那么强的话在红线上放东西就会有些奇怪 人声这里开始的，不奇怪啊
00:32:817 (4) - New Combo? fix
00:35:089 (2) - 把它往下移一点，让1在2的起点处的切线上？ ？
00:37:135 (1) - 或许移到白线上也行……就跟鼓点吧。虽然Vocal Rhythm是在红线上的 跟随人声
00:43:271 (2,3) - 这里的摆法我不是很喜欢……或许和后面那节一样摆成00:45:089 (4,5,1) - 这样的？ 改了后面没改前面
03:21:907 (4,1) - 把这种东西放在前面03:20:544 (3) - 末端的切线上？ 这样弄太难了

Hard:
01:23:953 (2,3,4) - 这个怎么好像滑条和圈圈错开了？
02:36:680 (2,3,4) - 这个也是……怎么了？
03:00:544 (1) - 这个的话……血条君有意见的哦~~往下挪点吧……

看到最后发现全是Suggestions... 最后一条除外。果然还是高质量啊……祝早日Rank

Evil_Twilight wrote:

（<ゝω·）☆ M4M

[Hard]
01:10:544 (3) - 這前面的東西都偏了，條一下o.o fixed

00:14:196 (1,2,3,4) - 音效改成drum的clap fixed
00:14:764 (4) - 移到 x:216 y:216
00:20:105 (1) - 把NC設在 00:20:560 (3)？:arrow: fixed
01:04:196 (3) - 節奏改成這樣如何，順便幫你排了一下，slider一樣是慢速 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521164
01:11:014 (4) - 同上 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521158
01:26:696 (1) - 這後面的break time條一下吧，讓他沒有延遲 fixed
02:12:150 (4) - NC，跟前一段一樣 fixed
02:16:923 (5) - 01:04:196 (3) 跟這邊一樣，看你想不想改
02:24:196 (3) - 同上 -> 01:11:014 (4)
02:53:741 (1) - 前面的break time調整一下
03:00:559 (5) - 同 01:04:196 (3)
03:07:832 (3) - 同上 -> 01:11:014 (4)
03:21:696 (2) - 加個note？:arrow: fixed

[Normal]
00:34:650 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:45:105 (1) - ^ fixed
00:51:241 和 00:51:923 這兩條綠線是o.o? fixed
01:18:514 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:43:741 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:55:787 (1,2,1) - 把NC設在 01:56:696 (2)？
02:38:969 (1) - 後面的break time條一下 fixed
02:53:741 (1,2,3) - 加finsh？ 跟hard一樣 fixed
03:22:150 (1) - remove NC

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:56:014 (1) - this spinner is too short to play imo, especially there're objects after it very soon fix
02:00:787 (1,1) - the slider is too far from the spinner, also the slider is just only 1/1 after the spinner, this's hard to play as Normal diff
02:05:787 (4,1) - wrong spacing no wrong
02:14:196 (5) - it's not a good idea to use any big jumps in Normal diff, kinda hard to read pattern for newbies fix naxt time
02:15:105 (1,3) - they can blanket better
02:24:196 (5) - ctrl+2, and then move the red nod 1 gird right, spinner will looks much better
02:38:514 - try to change the slider to 3/2 slider and end at here? then spinner start at 02:38:741 - , will fit the song better

[Hard]
HD-1, it's kinda high to this diff fix and remap
there're lots of sliders in this diff can blanket much better, I won't point them out, please find and fix them as best as you can
01:04:196 (1) - the slow down looks really unreasonable, and hard to read. if you want to keep the slow down slider, use 0.75x speed instead please. there're same suggestions later, remeber to fix them
01:15:787 (4) - why not move it to x:240 y:248 and move 01:16:469 (2) - to x:328 y:220? flow much better and won't be confusing to play
01:27:264 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - close gird snap and replace them plz, now the stream looks odd
01:28:514 - why drug the break to here? it doesn't fit the song at all
02:25:332 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - please move them down and right a bit, to make the spacing is right when playing(or testing) the diff. pay attention to the spacing on later objects
02:39:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as before
03:08:969 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - same as before
03:21:469 (3) - how about cancel repeat on this slider, add a slider from 03:22:150 - to 03:22:605 - , and start slider (5) at 03:23:060 - . will fit the song much better. also play attention to the streams after it

not sure about the spread
and also, need some much more works now o.o thank you

1. 00:28:741 (1) - 2折返我觉得很容易让新人miss，一般刚开始都很习惯只有一个折返。所以这里建议用两个slider或者1个note加1个折返slider代替

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:28:741 (1) - 2折返我觉得很容易让新人miss，一般刚开始都很习惯只有一个折返。所以这里建议用两个slider或者1个note加1个折返slider代替

其他没什么 fixed

EDIT: Bubbled

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1. offset+10

1. 00:49:650 (1) - spinner后中间接note很可能会被吐槽，这个note会被hitburst挡住
2. 00:58:741 (1) - 加finish？
3. 01:02:378 (1) - 这里为什么加finish？
4. 01:04:196 (4) - slider尾，^
5. 01:06:014 (1) - 这里可以加个finish，slider头
6. 01:09:650 (3) - slider头，finish听起来有点奇怪
7. 01:13:287 (1) - 可以加个finish
8. 01:20:559 (1) - ^
9. 02:11:479 (2) - ^
10. 02:15:115 (1) - 去掉finish
11. 02:18:297 (4) - ^
12. 02:18:751 (1) - 头加finish
13. 02:22:388 (1) - 去finish
14. 02:26:024 (1) - 加finish
15. 02:33:297 (1) - ^，头
16. 02:52:388 - Break拉到这儿感觉没啥太大意义
17. 02:53:751 (1,2,3) - 去finish，我觉得这里反而小音量更合适，然后02:55:115 (1) 开头加finish才是高潮开始时候的爆发音，该加finish
18. 02:59:660 (2) - 去finish
19. 03:01:933 (1) - ^
20. 03:02:388 (2) - 加finish
21. 03:06:024 (3) - 去finish
22. 03:09:660 (1) - 加finish
23. 03:13:297 (1) - 去finish
24. 03:14:888 (4) - (nazi)这个弧度跟03:14:206 (3)的弧度没对上
    
25. 03:16:933 (1) - 加finish
26. 03:20:569 (3) - 去finish

1. finish的建议我就不多说了，照着normal那样
2. 很多地方的遮挡感觉做的不是特别好，个人感觉遮挡还是有一定规律可循，要么放在之前的note，要么放在之前的slider头尾之下，要么就放在之前slider的路径中间，这些遮挡都不会看起来太奇怪。而你的有些遮挡看起来不是特别的干净，比如00:17:378 (6) 尾巴被前面slider挡住，这个完全可以避免；00:24:196 (1) 这个也是，如果这个尾巴和前面00:23:287 (3) 会更好看，要么就干脆把他放在外面不要任何重叠部分；00:26:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 这一串不太工整，135和246之间间距相同才好看。其他还有些我就不一一说了，自己再检查一下吧
3. 00:56:014 (3) - 这个clap一定是放错了
4. 01:12:378 (1) - 这个clap听起来也有点奇怪，为什么偏偏这里要用三个1拍间隔的clap
5. 02:05:105 (7,8,9) - 这个anti-jump问题有点大，音乐本身没有这种停顿感，突然spacing变小是在太坑
6. 02:10:105
   02:10:560 - 这两拍空出来感觉不合适，就算不加note，至少用一个slider放这儿，可以考虑用减速slider，50%或者75%BPM都可以
7. 02:11:241 (1,2) - 提前1/4拍，这里和02:10:787 (1,2)是两个1/4拍的组合
8. 02:11:923 (5) - 这种jump从对应歌词来说还不错，不过突然的jump建议用NC标注，同理02:12:832 (9)
9. 02:13:060 (10,1) - 这里感觉combo有点看不太懂，而且spacing持续保持这么大打起来不是特别顺
10. 02:25:105 (5) - 去clap
11. 02:47:264 - break拖到这儿意味不明
12. 02:59:423 (3) - 这个jump看起来有点牵强，还不如放到02:58:741 (2) 的右边曲线空隙处
    
13. 03:09:650 (1) - (nazi)这个slider的曲线更之前那串stream的曲线完全不是同一曲线上，打起来稍微有点别扭

Breeze wrote:

[timing]

1. offset+10

[Normal]

1. 00:49:650 (1) - spinner后中间接note很可能会被吐槽，这个note会被hitburst挡住 fix
2. 00:58:741 (1) - 加finish？ fix
3. 01:02:378 (1) - 这里为什么加finish？ fix
4. 01:04:196 (4) - slider尾，^ fix
5. 01:06:014 (1) - 这里可以加个finish，slider头 fix
6. 01:09:650 (3) - slider头，finish听起来有点奇怪 fix
7. 01:13:287 (1) - 可以加个finish fix
8. 01:20:559 (1) - ^
9. 02:11:479 (2) - ^
10. 02:15:115 (1) - 去掉finish fix
11. 02:18:297 (4) - ^
12. 02:18:751 (1) - 头加finish fix
13. 02:22:388 (1) - 去finish:arrow: fix
14. 02:26:024 (1) - 加finish:arrow: fix
15. 02:33:297 (1) - ^，头
16. 02:52:388 - Break拉到这儿感觉没啥太大意义
17. 02:53:751 (1,2,3) - 去finish，我觉得这里反而小音量更合适，然后02:55:115 (1) 开头加finish才是高潮开始时候的爆发音，该加finish:arrow: fix
18. 02:59:660 (2) - 去finish
19. 03:01:933 (1) - ^
20. 03:02:388 (2) - 加finish
21. 03:06:024 (3) - 去finish
22. 03:09:660 (1) - 加finish
23. 03:13:297 (1) - 去finish:arrow: all fix
24. 03:14:888 (4) - (nazi)这个弧度跟03:14:206 (3)的弧度没对上:arrow: fix
    
25. 03:16:933 (1) - 加finish
26. 03:20:569 (3) - 去finish

[Hard]

1. finish的建议我就不多说了，照着normal那样
2. 很多地方的遮挡感觉做的不是特别好，个人感觉遮挡还是有一定规律可循，要么放在之前的note，要么放在之前的slider头尾之下，要么就放在之前slider的路径中间，这些遮挡都不会看起来太奇怪。而你的有些遮挡看起来不是特别的干净，比如00:17:378 (6) 尾巴被前面slider挡住，这个完全可以避免；00:24:196 (1) 这个也是，如果这个尾巴和前面00:23:287 (3) 会更好看，要么就干脆把他放在外面不要任何重叠部分；00:26:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 这一串不太工整，135和246之间间距相同才好看。其他还有些我就不一一说了，自己再检查一下吧
3. 00:56:014 (3) - 这个clap一定是放错了
4. 01:12:378 (1) - 这个clap听起来也有点奇怪，为什么偏偏这里要用三个1拍间隔的clap
5. 02:05:105 (7,8,9) - 这个anti-jump问题有点大，音乐本身没有这种停顿感，突然spacing变小是在太坑
6. 02:10:105
   02:10:560 - 这两拍空出来感觉不合适，就算不加note，至少用一个slider放这儿，可以考虑用减速slider，50%或者75%BPM都可以
7. 02:11:241 (1,2) - 提前1/4拍，这里和02:10:787 (1,2)是两个1/4拍的组合
8. 02:11:923 (5) - 这种jump从对应歌词来说还不错，不过突然的jump建议用NC标注，同理02:12:832 (9)
9. 02:13:060 (10,1) - 这里感觉combo有点看不太懂，而且spacing持续保持这么大打起来不是特别顺
10. 02:25:105 (5) - 去clap
11. 02:47:264 - break拖到这儿意味不明
12. 02:59:423 (3) - 这个jump看起来有点牵强，还不如放到02:58:741 (2) 的右边曲线空隙处
    
13. 03:09:650 (1) - (nazi)这个slider的曲线更之前那串stream的曲线完全不是同一曲线上，打起来稍微有点别扭

all fix
感觉有些地方看到我的梗的感觉orz