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Yeah yeah, suck at modding, we all know. 
[Normal]:
00:44:06 (1) - This spinner is really random...Its end is too.
01:43:69 (1) - Would this sound better if it ended on 1:44:846?
[Hard]:
00:43:69 (1) - Same complaint.
01:01:69 (3) - This circle here gives me a WTF, though not in a truly bad way. It looks ugly/uneven at a glance. I was checking to see if it had any relation with (4), (5), (6), but I can't find any...Do you mind moving it?
01:17:38 (9) - Why not use the same slider as 01:14:61 (1)?
01:43:69 (1) - Would this sound better if it ended on 1:44:846?
There was a few things I felt that were missing in this map...Like...where are those whistles!? And the endpart on Hard was really easy, easier than what it was on the Ouendan original. :/ I don't know, it just disappointed me a little (That part, not the map). Other than that, those were some nice patterns I saw, and it was pretty fun.
I'm starring this. Let's see what happens...
[Normal]:
00:44:06 (1) - This spinner is really random...Its end is too.
01:43:69 (1) - Would this sound better if it ended on 1:44:846?
[Hard]:
00:43:69 (1) - Same complaint.
01:01:69 (3) - This circle here gives me a WTF, though not in a truly bad way. It looks ugly/uneven at a glance. I was checking to see if it had any relation with (4), (5), (6), but I can't find any...Do you mind moving it?
01:17:38 (9) - Why not use the same slider as 01:14:61 (1)?
01:43:69 (1) - Would this sound better if it ended on 1:44:846?
There was a few things I felt that were missing in this map...Like...where are those whistles!? And the endpart on Hard was really easy, easier than what it was on the Ouendan original. :/ I don't know, it just disappointed me a little (That part, not the map). Other than that, those were some nice patterns I saw, and it was pretty fun.
I'm starring this. Let's see what happens...Hi
Try 4,695 offset.(1st timing)
[Normal]
30:535(8)-> make a extra beat.
1:03:545(2) Sounds strange.
2:00:539(2),(3)-> Sounds strange. (2) doesn't go with the music, I think.
How about this?
2:17:156(1)~2:37:928(2) Same pattern
It's too boring.
2:30:541(2) decrease the number of u-turns on this slider. (-1 turn) And try to make a new pattern after 2:30:541(2) ends.
[Hard]
3:314(5) move left a bit (spacing nazi yay)
24:536(4),(5),(6)-> decrease the spacing(another spacing nazi yay)
2:17:156(1)~2:45:307(6) Oh no! this pattern is longer than normal. Same as normal. It's boring too.
Nicer than elzamxrai's.
I can support you.
Go Metroid!
Try 4,695 offset.(1st timing)
[Normal]
30:535(8)-> make a extra beat.
1:03:545(2) Sounds strange.
2:00:539(2),(3)-> Sounds strange. (2) doesn't go with the music, I think.
How about this?
2:17:156(1)~2:37:928(2) Same pattern
It's too boring.
2:30:541(2) decrease the number of u-turns on this slider. (-1 turn) And try to make a new pattern after 2:30:541(2) ends.
[Hard]
3:314(5) move left a bit (spacing nazi yay)
24:536(4),(5),(6)-> decrease the spacing(another spacing nazi yay)
2:17:156(1)~2:45:307(6) Oh no! this pattern is longer than normal. Same as normal. It's boring too.
Nicer than elzamxrai's.
I can support you.
Go Metroid!
Eh this is definitely more fun than the other one. One thing that irritated me in my playthrough is tickrate. This is set to 3 and sounds baaaaaaaaaaad. There are some spacing things, but i'm sure all will be nitpicked.
[Hard]
02:19:46 (6) - This and consecutive sliders in the same group sound better with one less repeat. Maybe you can think of a better pattern? ;S
You can have an awesome star because I want this to get noticed. (oh and a regular star too)
[Hard]
02:19:46 (6) - This and consecutive sliders in the same group sound better with one less repeat. Maybe you can think of a better pattern? ;S
You can have an awesome star because I want this to get noticed. (oh and a regular star too)
Topic Starter
minyeob wrote:
Hi
Try 4,695 offset.(1st timing) done even if it was a 2 ms difference.
[Normal]
30:535(8)-> make a extra beat. - Nah
1:03:545(2) Sounds strange. - Not to me.
2:00:539(2),(3)-> Sounds strange. (2) doesn't go with the music, I think. I changed it.
How about this?- nah
[attachment=0:7a2ae]screenshot072.jpg[/attachment:7a2ae] Nah
2:17:156(1)~2:37:928(2) Same pattern
It's too boring. - Nope
2:30:541(2) decrease the number of u-turns on this slider. (-1 turn) And try to make a new pattern after 2:30:541(2) ends. Nah.
[Hard]
3:314(5) move left a bit (spacing nazi yay) - Done
24:536(4),(5),(6)-> decrease the spacing(another spacing nazi yay) - Fixed
2:17:156(1)~2:45:307(6) Oh no! this pattern is longer than normal. Same as normal. It's boring too.
Nah, I like it.
Please add the extra 00:00's in the timestamps you send me to next time, I dislike having to get tehe invalid format message cause you removed extra 0's
Nicer than elzamxrai's.
I can support you.
Go Metroid!
Done.
Also I like that pattern foul, Sorry but it's a preference...
You get kudos anyways for playing my map and being of help
Normal:
-00:30:541 - There needs to be a beat here. It feels incomplete without it.
-01:03:54 (2) - This IS awkward. It may sound right to you but it absolutely sounds like it doesn't fit imo.
-02:00:54 (2) - Add another repeat to this.
-2:17:15 (1) - 2:37:92 (2) - The pattern repeated here is neither boring nor good. It's not entertaining and sounds wrong. Change it.
-02:53:15 (6) - Clap goes here.
I'd nazimod this more but I'll save that for later after you fix things.
Hard:
-Slider tick 3 sounds HORRENDOUS, change it. If you don't get why: it's a 4/4 song that doesn't use stuff in the 1/3 or 1/6 divisor. It's not a good idea to use a tick made for 1/3 tick-based maps on this type of map.
-00:03:76 (6,7,8) - Even if it's setting up the other patterns, this in particular looks awkward (just because of where it's placed).
-00:21:54 (1) - This is placed weirdly IMO, since it's partially overlapped by a slider on the grid.
-00:43:81 (5) - Get rid of this.
-00:43:92 (6) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:44:041 - Beat goes here.
-00:45:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat and respace.
-00:46:00 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:46:46 (7) - First, New Combo mark. Second, nudge to the right 1/4 a beat.
-00:46:46 - Clicked beat goes here, stacked on the starting point of the slider.
-00:47:15 (8) - Nudge to the right and stack on 9; respace the stuff after it.
-01:01:46 (2,3) - I'd say that they should swap places. It looks awkward as sin otherwise.
-Stuff like 02:19:46 (6) - I'm going with foul on this one. Seriously, I'd consider changing it or making the sliders repeat one less time.
I'm definitely not done nazi-ing this map, but I'll let you work before I continue.
-00:30:541 - There needs to be a beat here. It feels incomplete without it.
-01:03:54 (2) - This IS awkward. It may sound right to you but it absolutely sounds like it doesn't fit imo.
-02:00:54 (2) - Add another repeat to this.
-2:17:15 (1) - 2:37:92 (2) - The pattern repeated here is neither boring nor good. It's not entertaining and sounds wrong. Change it.
-02:53:15 (6) - Clap goes here.
I'd nazimod this more but I'll save that for later after you fix things.
Hard:
-Slider tick 3 sounds HORRENDOUS, change it. If you don't get why: it's a 4/4 song that doesn't use stuff in the 1/3 or 1/6 divisor. It's not a good idea to use a tick made for 1/3 tick-based maps on this type of map.
-00:03:76 (6,7,8) - Even if it's setting up the other patterns, this in particular looks awkward (just because of where it's placed).
-00:21:54 (1) - This is placed weirdly IMO, since it's partially overlapped by a slider on the grid.
-00:43:81 (5) - Get rid of this.
-00:43:92 (6) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:44:041 - Beat goes here.
-00:45:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat and respace.
-00:46:00 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:46:46 (7) - First, New Combo mark. Second, nudge to the right 1/4 a beat.
-00:46:46 - Clicked beat goes here, stacked on the starting point of the slider.
-00:47:15 (8) - Nudge to the right and stack on 9; respace the stuff after it.
-01:01:46 (2,3) - I'd say that they should swap places. It looks awkward as sin otherwise.
-Stuff like 02:19:46 (6) - I'm going with foul on this one. Seriously, I'd consider changing it or making the sliders repeat one less time.
I'm definitely not done nazi-ing this map, but I'll let you work before I continue.
Normal
02:17:15 (1) - This WHOLE section bothers me. After thinking for a while, I've come up with a few reasons.
1: The beats should go on RED Ticks instead of White Ticks.
2: It dosen't go with the music.
Hard
01:20:73 (7) - Try to space this further from 6.
01:30:54 (1) - This bothers me. It dosen't end with a beat on the song.
02:17:15 (1) - This WHOLE section bothers me. Read the reasons why in the Easy Difficulty Section.
If I wanted, Could've gone more nazi, but i didn't.
Overall, I reckon this could have been mapped MUUUCH better then it is right now. Some patterns just look ugly. Don't take it personally, this is just my opinion.
p.s. I like Elzamxrai's more than this one
02:17:15 (1) - This WHOLE section bothers me. After thinking for a while, I've come up with a few reasons.
1: The beats should go on RED Ticks instead of White Ticks.
2: It dosen't go with the music.
Hard
01:20:73 (7) - Try to space this further from 6.
01:30:54 (1) - This bothers me. It dosen't end with a beat on the song.
02:17:15 (1) - This WHOLE section bothers me. Read the reasons why in the Easy Difficulty Section.
If I wanted, Could've gone more nazi, but i didn't.
Overall, I reckon this could have been mapped MUUUCH better then it is right now. Some patterns just look ugly. Don't take it personally, this is just my opinion.
p.s. I like Elzamxrai's more than this one
Offset felt a little early for me, but wasn't a big deal.
Normal:
00:16:92 (3) - Found picking up this slider felt really awkward. I would personally suggest taking out the beat before, moving it there in placement and timing and lengthen it to where it ends now.
02:19:46 (4) - I find that the third repeat makes this feel awkward as well. Maybe consider cutting one repeat and adjusting?
02:23:15 (4) - Same as above.
02:26:84 (4) - Same.
02:30:54 (4) - Etc.
02:34:23 (4) - Seeing a pattern?
02:37:92 (4) - Yeah, they just feel really awkward imho.
02:41:61 (8) - Do dee dum~
02:45:31 (8) - This one didn't bother me.
Hard:
Please put in a lead-in time, as this starts way too fast.
Some of your triplets feel a little odd and that they're in odd places, but I haven't had too much trouble with them.
01:45:07 (1) - Felt kinda awkward, though that's all.
If I pick out anything else it would be a huge list. My only real issue with hard is that there's no lead-in time (take a trip to song settings please) and that parts feel awkward, despite being completely right.
Overall, quite nice and would be nice if it made it to ranking. Starred.
Normal:
00:16:92 (3) - Found picking up this slider felt really awkward. I would personally suggest taking out the beat before, moving it there in placement and timing and lengthen it to where it ends now.
02:19:46 (4) - I find that the third repeat makes this feel awkward as well. Maybe consider cutting one repeat and adjusting?
02:23:15 (4) - Same as above.
02:26:84 (4) - Same.
02:30:54 (4) - Etc.
02:34:23 (4) - Seeing a pattern?
02:37:92 (4) - Yeah, they just feel really awkward imho.
02:41:61 (8) - Do dee dum~
02:45:31 (8) - This one didn't bother me.
Hard:
Please put in a lead-in time, as this starts way too fast.
Some of your triplets feel a little odd and that they're in odd places, but I haven't had too much trouble with them.
01:45:07 (1) - Felt kinda awkward, though that's all.
If I pick out anything else it would be a huge list. My only real issue with hard is that there's no lead-in time (take a trip to song settings please) and that parts feel awkward, despite being completely right.
Overall, quite nice and would be nice if it made it to ranking. Starred.
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Hmmm, I am not gonna go nazi-mode or anything... and I am not seeing any problems. So, here, a kudosu star and a bubble. :3
Hard:
I'd half the tick rate, sounds a bit gay at 4 and takes away from the song itself.
01:10:23 (1) - what the hell is the purpose of this clap? it sounds totally random and not thought through properly.
01:28:23 (9,10,11,12,13) - same with these claps.
I suggest you play some james maps and study the sound additions a bit if you want to improve. I really think you could do a lot better with this respect than you've done. It feels plain boring at the moment, while the patterns themselves aren't that bad.
Normal:
Hate this. You haven't dont anything but move notes and replace a few notes with sliders. You didn't even reduce the slider velocity, which is what I find to be the hardest aspect of hard. I'm pretty sure the distance spacing is even the same. ??
I'd half the tick rate, sounds a bit gay at 4 and takes away from the song itself.
01:10:23 (1) - what the hell is the purpose of this clap? it sounds totally random and not thought through properly.
01:28:23 (9,10,11,12,13) - same with these claps.
I suggest you play some james maps and study the sound additions a bit if you want to improve. I really think you could do a lot better with this respect than you've done. It feels plain boring at the moment, while the patterns themselves aren't that bad.
Normal:
Hate this. You haven't dont anything but move notes and replace a few notes with sliders. You didn't even reduce the slider velocity, which is what I find to be the hardest aspect of hard. I'm pretty sure the distance spacing is even the same. ??
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Normal:
00:40:69 (1) - A bit sudden after the spinner. Bad for a normal difficulty.
00:43:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like this combo
No real errors in hard. Just clean up some of the randomly shaped sliders, they suck.
00:40:69 (1) - A bit sudden after the spinner. Bad for a normal difficulty.
00:43:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like this combo
No real errors in hard. Just clean up some of the randomly shaped sliders, they suck.