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Yves Larock - Rise Up (Extended Mix)

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Andrea
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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 2 marzo 2009 at 23.34.02

Artist: Yves Larock
Title: Rise Up (Extended Mix)
Source: Yves Larock
BPM: 128
Filesize: 3716kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (3,6 stars, 252 notes)
  2. Yaya's INSANE!!! (4,99 stars, 528 notes)
Download: Yves Larock - Rise Up (Extended Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second map! I hope you enjoy it.

Map maked with osu_CN_yaya (again <3)
Last edited by Andrea , edited 17 times in total.
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
ok. its your new map , and for your ask

but i just see one difficulty now on :?

nevermind it.

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normal.

01:00:015 (1.2) too close then other you set

01:13:375 (1~4) not bad, but, set (4) 1/4 fore(at 01:14:312) and set a note at 01:14:781
you can listen it better

01:25:562 (orange part) set as the picture
http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot046-2.jpg
(i guess you wont know about my poor english, so uploaded a pic)

01:17:828 (3.4) too close then other you set

01:36:578 (6.7) too close then other you set

01:46:304 (2.3) too close then other you set

01:46:656 (4.5) too close then other you set

01:57:789 (4.5) too close then other you set

02:40:093 (2.3.4) too close then other you set

02:42:554 (X) dont you wanna it look as other part? set here a note

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ok
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there are too many distance wrong, check all of it out.

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for one thing im not sure

the parts like 00:54:625 the end of slider

its set on nothing,but sound better than 00:54:742

unfortunally, 00:54:742 is more correct :o :o :o :o

but dont fix this part , unless Bats say about this


Last

alot improve them first map

but not good enough to get my star :P :P
Diasios
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Diasios
starred
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Fixed =)

EDIT: thanks xxheroxx
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
although you said its fix

i still saw many distance problem there. :o :o

i marked the part with BooKMark(blue line in pic)

you can see, there is too many problem to post :| :|




fix it!! :? :? :?
Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fuffolo
139 posts
Joined January 2009
fuffolo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yaya
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yaya
oya

my job done

Download: yaya.rar


i just wanna say . this map is FCable


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Andrea
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Andrea
Added and moved to pending beatmaps.
Yumiko
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Yumiko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Various Artists - #korean Compilation (woodrockman) [Aing's Marathon].osu
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
Questa canzone mi mette allgria XD Bel mapping, complienti ad entrambi! Starred <3
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Very FUN and well made beatmap.
*StarZ*
Dangaard
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Dangaard
Normal:

timing:
03:23:92 (3) - 1/4 earlier
03:31:42 (3) - 1/4 earlier
All in all too repetitive beat timing with large breaks every few seconds. Especially from 01:52:75 onwards some filling beats would probably fit.

placement:
In genereal not wrong, but if its supposed to have straight lines, enable grid snapping and rework on the placement.

general:
Considering the breaks I suggest using a lower HP drain.


Yaya's Insane:

timing:
03:50:87 (1) - ask a bat about speedups, don't know if it needs an indicator

placement:
02:38:21 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - for making a square pattern, i recommend using grid snap and following the grid lines for replacing.
02:49:46 (8,9) - try to make this look a bit more clean
03:39:39 (6) - really intense jump (~3.5 distance scale), try the previous jump distance
03:46:18 (5,6,7,8) - place them on the previous 4 beat pattern and flip it then ( 5 on 2 obviously)

Insane fills the boring rythm with fresh patterns and beat timings very well. Nice work!
Have a star so far.
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yaya
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yaya
oya
fix done
thanks dangaardDownload: Yves Larock - Rise Up (Extended Mix) (osuplayer111) [Yaya's INSANE!!!].osu
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
there are a problem in this map :( :(

"too many gap"

try do something diffirent in it

it just follow the lyrics, and isnt good to me


and i not check new distance yet.
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks Dangaard, all fixed.
AlexanderPD
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Here since the beginning
AlexanderPD
Great map :D I liked both song and map ^_^
Dangaard
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Dangaard
[Normal]
Using grid snap in combination with distance snap sometimes leads to some small spacing issues, depending on the direction you place the next beat. So use distance snap, but check manually afterwards (with distance snap disabled) for the spacing of the beats within a combo ( best seen on the overlap of beats or approach circles):




You see, placing beats upwards or downwards with grid snap and distance snap enabled leads to different results.
For fixing the following beats, I tried to use the spacing on the second picture.

placement:
00:55:79 (1,2,3,4) - fix overlap
01:03:29 (1) - 1 up
01:08:45 (3,4) - 1 down
01:17:35 (1,2,3) - 1 left
01:42:78 (3,4) - 1 down
01:43:14 (5) - 2 down
02:25:79 (1,2) - 1 left
03:16:18 (5) - 1 down
03:33:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix overlap
03:45:01 (1) - 1 left
03:48:06 (3) - 1 right

following combos should be snapped to grid ( every beat individually), then watch out the irregularities caused by grid snap + distance snap:
01:09:85 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:14:07 (3,4) -
01:23:68 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:25:56 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:27:43 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:29:07 (6,7,8) -
01:31:18 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:33:06 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:34:93 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:36:57 (6,7,8) -
01:38:68 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:40:56 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:52:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:55:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:56:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:33:29 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:37:51 (1,2,3,4) -
02:39:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:42:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:45:25 (1,2,3) -
02:47:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
03:06:81 (1,2,3) -
03:08:45 (1,2) -
03:09:39 (1,2,3,4,5) -
03:14:31 (1,2,3) -
03:18:06 (1,2,3) -
03:22:51 (1,2) -
03:25:79 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

yaya
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yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: yaya-newest.rar
Andrea
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