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See above... woopsJarJarJacob wrote:
Alex is already mapping this. You'll want to contact him.
Raise HP Drain. The way you use combos in this map desires it. Done
00:53:09 (1) - You shouldn't really use circles when the artist is drawing breath.Not based on the breath, it was just a coincidence. Anyway, added a note for no confusion
01:01:59 (1) - This spinner isn't auto 2000'd. Whether this is unrankable or not isn't up to me. Fixed
01:12:69 (1) - See above. See above
01:19:62 (1) - This would play better either 1/2 or 1/1 forward. Done
02:26:21 (1) - See above above. See above above
02:37:31 (1) - See above. See above
02:40:09 (2) - You could make this double speed if you wanted to. Because it waves like that, it isn't unorthodox at double.
02:43:38 - Put something here, maybe? Done
02:51:18 (1) - See above above ABOVE. See above above above
03:02:28 (1) - See above.See above
03:05:06 (2) - See above above above ABOVE. If you don't want to use it at both points, or either, it works better closer to the conclusion.
03:08:35 - See above above above above. See above above above above
03:16:50 (1) - Sort of out of place. It's an unfitting ending. Fixed
I should start colour-coding my modding.
I understood the slider was really weird, but didn't understand your way to fix it.JarJarJacob wrote:
You could make this double speed if you wanted to. Because it waves like that, it isn't unorthodox at double.
It isn't a fix, but a suggestion. Either way is fine, normal or double speed. I thought double would emphasize the sliders more.Sushi971 wrote:
I understood the slider was really weird, but didn't understand your way to fix it.
I'll take care of that.DawnII wrote:
I couldn't find anything else wrong, but you'll need an easier difficulty for this to be ranked.
You may want to cut it down to around 1:30 for the Easy difficulty.Sushi971 wrote:
Okay,
JarJarJacob, if you intend to map a normal diff, i'm going to start an easy diff
Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Easy]
00:03:48 (1) - spacing is too close here I spaced it a little more, but can't really space it or it will mess the map
third timing section should have a louder hitvolume imo I am at maximum volume....
[Jar's Normal]
00:35:22 (2,3) - even though this follows the lyrics these two notes sound weird Ah?
01:06:95 (3,4,5,6,7) - should be 1/2 earlier I'll see with JarJar if it was intentional
01:11:29 (1) - i should at least be able to see the edges of the sliderpath as it unwinds. this is not unreadable but it is a bit of a mindfuck see above... however this can be my fault as i did the circles bigger
[Hard]
02:34:00 (1) - the lyric youre trying to map occurs 1/2 beat earlier not mapping the lyric, but the rythm, I know it looks weird, but it's a choice
02:58:97 (1) - again, the lyric is 1/2 earlier ^
[Mikuru Beam]
timing section 3 could be slightly louderMax Volume....
01:07:12 (4,5,6,7) - i cant even read this Seriously? i'll have someone else opinion to be sure that it is unreadable
01:15:45 (1) - either this or 4 should go cus theyre in the same spot If we're not in the editor, it's not really that bad
01:18:05 (4,5,6,7) - back to unreadable See above above....
01:19:61 (1) - delete and replace break I really DON'T agree with that, why would I delete this spinner? it was in other difficulties too! and I don't see the problem with it
needs more hitsounds, EXPECIALLY in the soft section
map is very repetitive as well, although the hitsounds will help with that I use various hitsounds in the soft sections, except if you want me to whistle on every notes. the thing is that we don't hear them