1. Hard (4,73 stars, 551 notes)
2. Normal (2,8 stars, 316 notes)
3. SilverJetter's Easy (1,09 stars, 231 notes)

phaZ wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:212 (1) - delete old slider -> new slider (304;64 - 360;48 - 424;64) to improve the curve
00:45:802 (2) - slider-waypoint at 136;200 to improve the curve
01:01:785 (2) - move to440;80, add slider-waypoint at 408;64, end at 376;40
01:02:277 (3) - move to 328;48
->http://puu.sh/1C1HC
01:14:326 (3) - move slider-waypoint to 296;232
01:28:097 (2) - remove clap
01:59:571 (4) - why this hitsound P:?
02:11:376 (1) - move slider-waypoint to 160;144? better flow imo
02:48:753 (2) - reomve finish on last repeat
04:21:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - well that looks like a bad-made pentagon fuck grid-snap xD

Changed everything

[Hard]
00:21:212 (1) - Oo .please, dont do that... I do, and? o.o
00:38:917 (1,3) - meh, i really dont like them. they looks ugly imo I like it
01:24:162 (5) - ^ ^
01:24:900 (6,7,8,9) - if u did ^ move them 1grid left done
01:26:130 (9) - end at 304;48 to mirror it with 01:23:671 (3) done
02:22:195 (1) - slider-waypoint at 104;232, end at 192;240 to improve the curve done
02:22:933 (2) - if u did ^ move to 256;304 done
02:23:179 (3) - if u did ^ mirror (1) done
03:16:785 (6) - end at 104;264 (looks better and improves flow) done

nice map

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

hello

[General]

SPOILER

diff spread:
diff jump between normal and hard, normal is more mapped a bit like an easy diff and hard is like an insane. You can also see the inconsistency from the star rating.
kiai time section is too long, so i would suggest you to remove the first kiai time section.
though you said easy is finished, i would highly recommend you to map the whole song in easy, since new players are also deserved to play the whole song
for the break section:
pull the break to 00:50:720
pull the break to 02:34:982
that will give you a better effect imo

Changed. I don't if I did all but change something ^^

[Hard]

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both AR and OD -1. If its insane i would say yes to the settings, but its hard. Okay
00:18:261 (3) - i would do it this way Okay
00:21:212 (1) - hmm too weird for me...so change if you can No thanks. I like this slider
00:28:097 (5,6) - imo the stack breaks the flow, so i recommend you to do this Okay. I tried that
00:44:572 (6) - change this into a circle would be better Okay
00:46:294 (3) - place it here Okay
00:48:630 (1) - starts at 00:48:753 Okay
01:17:769 (6) - stack properly Okay. I've tried
01:50:720 (3) - ctrl+g gives a better flow Okay
01:58:589 (3) - too weird for me for me not and I also like that too ^^
02:19:244 (4) - adjust the slider to round the previous circle properly Okay

[Normal]

SPOILER

tick rate 1 is absolutely fine Okay
03:14:326 pull the break here Okay
04:24:653 (7) - not looking good Changed

[Easy]

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setting is too high, this is the setting for Normal diff. this is what i suggest
tick rate 1, 2 works, but not necessary. Okay
01:33:999 (4,6) - the blocking looks bad, if you wanna keep the shape of 01:35:966 (6) - , i would recommend you do this and adjust the following parts due to the spacing. Or you can remap the section before the break, its really short. Okay
02:22:195 (5,6,7,8) - im not saying this is bad, but it lacks of fun. Changed
imo this diff needs to be mapped till the end of the song.

Good luck and Merry Christmas

Frostmourne wrote:

hi hi Fang hi hi Jeep >w<

General
fine ! Thank you

Easy
AR-1 , this AR is still pretty too fast for the easiest diff with this kind of bpm though Already change
00:48:753 (3) - don't end this slider with whistle please, it sounds quite loudly here Okay
01:33:999 (4,6) - this overlapping is not looking good as it is , try to avoid please and also I don't understand about your NC much so I won't focus on it Okay
02:11:376 (2) - remove NC , don't understand why you left the previous one as that Okay
some sliders, you can copy past them to make it look consistently. some sliders' shape look pretty good , some of them look bad compared to the next or previous sliders that they exist : ) !! What? o.O

Normal
00:56:621 (1) - start this slider with finish here plzz.. really empty here
01:04:490 (2) - ^
for consistency with 01:12:359 (1) -
01:39:899 (5) - NC ? quite too long imo
02:50:720 (4) - it's supposed to be finish for consistency with 02:48:753 (2)
Changed everything ^^

Hard
AR&OD -1 , they are too fast as they are now compared with Normal diff , I actually wanted you to decrease 2 AR but Slider velocity doesn't support it much
02:56:376 (2) - add note here
03:05:720 (4) - ^ because it hits on the bass sound
Changed everything ^^

other than that I think they are fine

Good luck for Christmas ~~~

1. I recommend increasing the Audio-Lead in to 1500ms since there is only 1571 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Make sure to change it for every difficulty.
2. For this map, I recommend adding the soft-whistles to emphasize all the melodies and the piano chords.

1. 00:19:244 (3) - Hmmm.. I would remove this finish at this sliderhead since there is nothing to emphasize the finish.
2. 00:33:015 (1) - To be consistent with 00:17:276 (1), I think you should add a finish here as well.
3. 00:48:753 (3) - (suggestion) A whistle sounds like at the head of this slider. o.o
4. 00:56:621 (1) - I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3
5. 01:04:490 (2) - Same as above: "I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3"
6. 01:35:966 (1) - At thhe slider end, replace this soft-finish with a soft-whistle to be consistient with 01:37:933 (3).
7. 01:53:671 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked! ><

1. Why use AR8 on a 122 BPM Hard Difficulty? I recommmend AR7 for this map.
2. 00:48:630 (1) - This Spinner is offbeat. it should start at the next white tick!
3. 02:15:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove every finish you see on this combo. Neither of them emphasizes anything!
4. 03:28:220 (1,1) - Remove finish at the endof spinnr and the next slider.

• • Add a silenced "soft-sliderslide2.wav"

• • Rename this diff "SilverJetter's Easy"
  • Spacing isn't always consistent: keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it.
  • You should map the entire song.
  • 00:11:376 (5) - Add a repetition.
  • 02:21:212 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:25:146 (8) - ^
  • 02:26:130 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

• • Why the difficulty settings are the same as Easy? Increase them a bit.
  • 01:01:540 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:09:408 (x) - ^
  • 01:13:343 (x) - ^
  • 01:53:671 (1,2) - Stack the end of these two sliders. (move 2 at x:235 y:158)
  • 03:15:303 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Remove it and map this part.
  • 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.

• • 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.

1. I can see the kiai time is inconsistency for all diff's pleasse fix that should be same all diff's
2. The audio lead-in increassing to 1500 for all diff's like BeatofIke did write because i agree with him is better lot than 1015 IMO

1. 00:11:376 (5) - add whistle in start and end slider because here piano that fit lot
2. 00:31:048 (5) - better remove finish in end slider because is don't sense but clap stay and add finish at 00:33:015 (1) and remove whistle is better lot
3. 00:44:818 - in start and end slider remove clap and whistle stay is better lot
4. 01:59:572 (3) - remove whistle in body slider
5. 02:25:146 (1) - IMO is weird when i listen better lot if remove whistle and clap IMO
6. 02:26:130 (2) - Missing add whistle in start slider if you keep it consistency
7. 03:37:933 (1) - remove whistle and add finish better lot IMO
8. 03:41:867 (1) - missing add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency

1. 00:29:080 (4) - New combo because the lyrics is change is sense lot
2. 00:58:589 (3) - i wanna clean little overlaps in end slider with 00:56:621 (1) i mean this http://puu.sh/1CPGK you just move at 00:58:097 (2,3)
3. 01:33:999 (4,5,6) - Again i don't like this overlaps try move down more like this http://puu.sh/1CPJ8
4. 01:49:736 (3) - New combo i feel this lyrics is change
5. 01:57:113 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:57:605 (2) - put new combo is better lot
6. 02:04:982 (1,2) - ^ same
7. 02:11:376 (1) - remove new combo and at 02:13:343 (2) - put new combo is better lot
8. 02:52:687 (6) - new combo as lyrics is change imo
9. 03:53:671 (3) - ^ same

1. 00:29:080 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider if you keep it consistency
2. 00:33:999 (3) - missing add whsitle in start slider if you keep it consistency
3. 00:56:621 (1) - missing add clap in repeat slider if you keep it consistency
4. 01:01:785 (3) - missing add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency
5. 01:04:490 (2) - missing add clap in repeat slider if you keep it consistency
6. 01:16:294 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
7. 01:18:261 (3) - ^ same
8. 01:28:097 (2) - add whistle in start slider
9. 01:30:064 (4) - add whistle in end slider
10. 01:49:736 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
11. 02:42:851 (2) - missing add whsitle in start slide
12. 03:04:490 (1) - why finish end slider ? don't sense remove and add whistle in end slider is fit IMO

1. 00:11:376 (3) - grid 1 left to align with 00:09:408 (1) or is intentional?
2. 02:48:753 (2) - this slider is ugly try more symentric
3. 02:50:720 (4) - ^ same

1. 00:18:261 (3) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
2. 00:39:900 (3) - ^ same
3. 00:44:818 (1) - don't sense clap remove and add whistle in start slider is better IMO
4. 01:26:130 (9) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
5. 01:35:474 (1) - add clap because you missing add here
6. 01:51:703 (5) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
7. 01:57:605 (1) - ^ same
8. 02:18:261 (2) - missing add clap in end slider
9. 02:43:835 (8) - missing add whistle in start slider
10. 02:47:277 (6) - missing add whistle in end slider
11. 03:26:130 (3) - ^ same
12. 03:53:671 (2) - missing add whistle in start slider
13. 03:55:638 (1) - ^ same