1. Easy (1,75 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (4,74 stars, 142 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 192 notes)
4. Normal (3,05 stars, 87 notes)

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280,348,53079,2,0,P|176:335|175:172|258:196|328:217|327:43|223:31,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,116,55261,6,0,P|400:56,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

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156,132,2897,2,0,P|94:24,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,88,3443,2,0,P|130:94|177:22,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Gero wrote:

EDIT: Second, Yeah! XD!
Hi Hi Blue Dragon!, I will try this mod x.x

[General]

(*) Add Kia time u.u really is a bit boring without kia time why is it boring?
(*) Add preview time please c: k

[Easy]

(*) 00:09:079 (2,1) - are not well stacked, I think you could do this: done
(*) 00:28:352 (5) - This note does not have the correct distance, you break the snap distance here so I recommend accommodate this note symmetry
(*) 00:27:988 - I think you add a note here would be great. there's no place to put the note..
(*) 00:43:988 (3,4) - Here you could make a nice blanket, this: nah, I like the current placement
(*) 01:03:988 (4) - move this note to X: 140 Y: 260 to form a perfect triangle did something else
(*) 00:05:806 (1) - Here you could add a finish sounds good, uhm... no?
(*) 00:36:352 (1,3) - one thing you added claps here, but not in the other diffs, this which is inconsistent recommend removing these claps sound very bad done

[Normal]

(*) 00:16:716 (6) - You break the distance snap here D: :< please check this. symmetry
(*) 00:53:079 (5,1) - Nazi (*) why not try this, it looks better that way I like it the way it is now
(*) 01:04:534 (3) - add finish here, is best heard :3 done

[Hard]

AR +1 done

(*) 00:02:897 (1,2) - you're not doing a perfect blanket, try this that wasn't supposed to be a blanket...
(*) 00:09:988 (2,4) - are not perfectly stacked, 00:10:897 (4) - move this slider a x: 421 Y: 278 fixed
(*) 00:22:534 (1) - I think this should be the end spinner here: 00:23:988 , For where now not need a whistle, is uncomfortable. I like it the way it is
(*) 01:04:534 (5) - consider removing whistle by finish done

[Insane]

(*) 01:04:352 (4) - Add finish, in the end of the slider done

Nice Diff *_*!

Good Map And Nice Song :3

Good Lucky Blue Dragon nwn!

1. why there no kiai time D:
2. use soft-sliderslide without voice？

1. 00:44:352(4)remove finish or reduce volume

1. 00:12:352(1)x:270 y:124 then fix the position of 00:13:443(2)
2. 00:20:352(5)off-screen?

1. 00:13:352(1)make the second point at x:38 y:73
   
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Melt wrote:

Hi :3
request from queue

[General]

1. why there no kiai time D:
2. use soft-sliderslide without voice？

[Easy]

1. 00:44:352(4)remove finish or reduce volume

reduced

[Normal]

1. 00:12:352(1)x:270 y:124 then fix the position of 00:13:443(2) uhm.. no o.o
2. 00:20:352(5)off-screen?

fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:13:352(1)make the second point at x:38 y:73 fixed

Your map seems perfect to me
sorry for not come up with some useful suggestions
good luck :3

Natteke wrote:

[Hard]

00:46:534 (5) - try shortening this slider and adding another one to keep the flow FLOWING, I'm jussayin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619408 although my example kind of breaks the "no jump" rule that you've set in this diff, but that's just an example. done something here, hope that's what you meant


[Easy]

00:25:806 (2) - spacing here is broken by a notch, it's closer to (1) but farther away from (3) sadfghjdsakf grid inconsistencies, fixed
00:44:352 (4) - new combo pls dolan well it's just one note but sure
00:46:534 (1) - and remove it from here oh I see
00:47:625 (1) - and add here, you know what I mean wow gg


That's about it. I was looking hard to pick on something but there's nothing much to mod.

Oh also, since this song is so quiet, the soft-sliderslide becomes really annoying halfway through the map. or it's just me. try using a blank sample instead and see if it's better. I think this isn't rankable or something like that, I asked and people said silencing sliderslide is boohoounrank

ThoomyyxD wrote:

hii!
Black: Need Change
Blue: Idea
Red: Unrankeable
[Easy]
00:02:897 (3) Prefer this to the other side, something like http://puu.sh/25ONE done
00:10:170 (4) Add Whistle And Delete 00:10:897 (5) done
00:21:079 (5) Finish in the top of the slider to set the new pace doesn't sound good D:

[Normal]
00:11:261 (4) x:144 y:144 done
00:43:625 (1) Delete NC done
00:44:352 (3) NC ^
01:01:806 (3) NC added to 01:01:079 (1) instead
01:03:261 (3) NC why? o.o

[Hard]
00:41:443 (1) Would be good around the slider until you start the slider, so you add a small degree of difficulty nah D: i like it this way
00:46:352 (4) x:172 y:220 nah
01:03:988 (2) Idea http://puu.sh/25P9k did something else

[Insane]
Gooood

good Luck!!

1. AudioLeadIn 1000 is enough here, but if you want, you can use 1500. (2000 is too long here :/)
2. disable letterbox during breaks? (No breaks = no letterbox)
3. Disable countdown? It doesn't works properly, anyway.
4. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 here. Sounds better, imo.

1. Try Approach Rate +1 it will help players to read your patterns. Ar2 will fit with your slider velocity.
2. 00:02:897 (3) - nazi - NC here for music? (same for 00:20:352 (4) and 00:58:170 (4) - ) because big combos will stress beginners and because it fits here
3. 00:14:534 (4,1) - nazi - swap new combos here? If I understand your pattern properly, you should do it. also it will fit with music MUCH better, imo
4. 00:26:170 (3,4) - how about using one 2/1 reversed slider here? It will fit with music and also helps you to keep consistent and relaxing flow.

1. 00:02:897 (4,1,2,3) - I quite don't like rhythm here (mostly 00:03:988 (1,2,3) - these beats). It sounds kinda weird to me, try to use something like this you have similar pattern at 00:08:716 (1,2,3) - and it sounds the way better.
2. 00:23:170 - try ONE long slider with reverse instead? I feel like it fits with rhythm here much better. example (you have similar pattern at 00:39:988 (3) )
3. 00:34:170 (2,3,4) - ultr-nazi - (4) is too close to (2) and it kinda breaks your flow. How about softer angle? o3o triangle /soft-flow
   
   nazi-guide: what's wrong with current pattern

   Some players will not understand your flow, and click (4) first.
   
   just a nazi-suggestion, anyway

1. 00:04:170 (3) - nazi - overlapped with default-skin hp-bar. It's kinda bad and I recommend you to avoid this kind of overlaps.
2. 00:53:443 (5,8) - ultra-nazi - why don't you use straight sliders here? It'll make your pattern even better + easier to read see?

1. 00:40:534 (6) - use reversed 1/4 slider here. stream starts at 00:40:716, actually. example

-Bakari- wrote:

HAI HAI (probably m4m)

[General]

1. AudioLeadIn 1000 is enough here, but if you want, you can use 1500. (2000 is too long here :/) imo 2000 is fine, but if anyone else complains, I'll change it
2. disable letterbox during breaks? (No breaks = no letterbox) uhh dunno why change this, but ok
3. Disable countdown? It doesn't works properly, anyway. same as ^
4. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 here. Sounds better, imo. it may sound a bit spammish but I liked it. changed

[Easy]

1. Try Approach Rate +1 it will help players to read your patterns. Ar2 will fit with your slider velocity. done
2. 00:02:897 (3) - nazi - NC here for music? (same for 00:20:352 (4) (not here) and 00:58:170 (4) - ) because big combos will stress beginners and because it fits here hmmm, ok
3. 00:14:534 (4,1) - nazi - swap new combos here? If I understand your pattern properly, you should do it. also it will fit with music MUCH better, imo well, here I did a new combo pattern-wise, so not changing
4. 00:26:170 (3,4) - how about using one 2/1 reversed slider here? It will fit with music and also helps you to keep consistent and relaxing flow. nah, I wanted to emphasize the beat at 00:28:352 (4)'s big white tick.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:897 (4,1,2,3) - I quite don't like rhythm here (mostly 00:03:988 (1,2,3) - these beats). It sounds kinda weird to me, try to use something like this you have similar pattern at 00:08:716 (1,2,3) - and it sounds the way better. nah >: I like it, also, it gives some variation to the map
2. 00:23:170 - try ONE long slider with reverse instead? I feel like it fits with rhythm here much better. example (you have similar pattern at 00:39:988 (3) ) nice idea, but I like the flow it currently has
3. 00:34:170 (2,3,4) - ultr-nazi - (4) is too close to (2) and it kinda breaks your flow. How about softer angle? o3o triangle /soft-flow tried to do something in here to fix it

[Hard]

1. 00:04:170 (3) - nazi - overlapped with default-skin hp-bar. It's kinda bad and I recommend you to avoid this kind of overlaps. hp bar overlaps can go die, I have stopped minding them a while ago since players NEVER notice them. This is imo a really useless guideline.
2. 00:53:443 (5,8) - ultra-nazi - why don't you use straight sliders here? It'll make your pattern even better + easier to read see? I'll change it if anyone else complains, but I really like the sliders there D:

[Insane]

1. 00:40:534 (6) - use reversed 1/4 slider here. stream starts at 00:40:716, actually. example

done
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mostly nazi suggestions, nothing really wrong here.

I guess, I have to shoot Star! ~

in case if this mod is helpful, feel free to take a look at this map

• - 00:21:079 (5) - Add a new combo here, it's seems like you did it here 00:44:352 is just for consistency

• - 00:35:625 (4) - Add a new combo here to keep your combo pattern
  - 01:04:170 (x) - In my opinion, you should add a note or add a mini-slider starting here in 01:03:988, you decide

• - 00:48:352 (3) - nazi stuff* Maybe move this slider to not make a overlap with (6)

• - 00:40:534 (6) - This note, you should move in another place because is making a overlap with the next stream

MoodyRPG wrote:

Piano and Renard

Easy

• - 00:21:079 (5) - Add a new combo here, it's seems like you did it here 00:44:352 is just for consistency done

Normal

• - 00:35:625 (4) - Add a new combo here to keep your combo pattern done
  - 01:04:170 (x) - In my opinion, you should add a note or add a mini-slider starting here in 01:03:988, you decide nah, I decide to not use 1/2s in this diff, ending was just a special case, better to not abuse it

Hard

• - 00:48:352 (3) - nazi stuff* Maybe move this slider to not make a overlap with (6) not much that I can do about it D: besides, no problem here

Insane

• - 00:40:534 (6) - This note, you should move in another place because is making a overlap with the next stream there's not much i can do here >: this was the only good-flowing place I found for the note

Good luck :>

1. try offset 711 ( -5 )
2. 00:44:352 - add finish here all of the diffs ( like Easy )

• 
  - 00:35:625 (4) - add NC 00:36:352 (1) - delete NC
  - 00:57:079 (2) - whistle
  - 00:58:170 (1) - delete NC and 00:59:261 (2) - add here
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• 
  - 00:13:443 (2) - try whistle
  - 00:43:988 (5) - ^
  - 01:04:352 (2,3) - change to 1/2 slider?

• 
  - 00:03:443 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/26id9 you can improve this blanket -nazi
  - 00:06:351 (3) - i think move this note to 00:06:171 (3) - here is better ( and 00:06:534 (4) - stack with it )
  - 00:17:806 (2) - whistle
  - 00:30:352 (3) - change to 1/1 slider and add 00:30:897 (4) - note here , current rhythm is kinda odd for me orz
  - 00:44:352 (1) - add whistle on start
  - 01:01:625 (4) - same issue with 00:06:351 (3) - here ( or 00:17:806 (2) - move this note to 00:17:987 (2) - here )
  - 01:03:988 (2,3,4,5) - stack feels not good try this http://puu.sh/26ion or something else

• 
  - 00:04:534 (4) - whistle on repeat and 00:05:079 (5) - delete Whistle 00:05:261 (6) - add here ( for consistency )
  - 00:19:261 (1) - delete NC and 00:20:352 (4) - add NC
  - 00:25:261 (6) - hmm how about using 1.1x DS? ( 00:25:625 (7) - and also move litte bit up this slider too ) since you tried beautiful mapset, i think it's better ( and playing too )
  - 00:36:897 (5) - delete whistle on start
  - 00:43:988 (8) - whistle? because piano sound is suddenly big

HelloSCV wrote:

Yo

[General]

1. try offset 711 ( -5 ) done
2. 00:44:352 - add finish here all of the diffs ( like Easy ) done

[Easy]

• 
  - 00:35:625 (4) - add NC 00:36:352 (1) - delete NC done
  - 00:57:079 (2) - whistle done
  - 00:58:170 (1) - delete NC and 00:59:261 (2) - add here nah D: pattern-based combo
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[Normal]

• 
  - 00:13:443 (2) - try whistle nah, already has before + on repeat
  - 00:43:988 (5) - ^ done
  - 01:04:352 (2,3) - change to 1/2 slider? nah, I wanted this 'impact' at the end

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:03:443 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/26id9 you can improve this blanket -nazi wasn't supposed to be a blanket o.o
  - 00:06:351 (3) - i think move this note to 00:06:171 (3) - here is better ( and 00:06:534 (4) - stack with it ) nah, I like it the way it is
  - 00:17:806 (2) - whistle sounds bad D:
  - 00:30:352 (3) - change to 1/1 slider and add 00:30:897 (4) - note here , current rhythm is kinda odd for me orz nah, flow is perfect here >:
  - 00:44:352 (1) - add whistle on start ok, done
  - 01:01:625 (4) - same issue with 00:06:351 (3) - here ( or 00:17:806 (2) - move this note to 00:17:987 (2) - here ) nah >: I really like the rhythm
  - 01:03:988 (2,3,4,5) - stack feels not good try this http://puu.sh/26ion or something else meh, done

[insane]

• 
  - 00:04:534 (4) - whistle on repeat and 00:05:079 (5) - delete Whistle 00:05:261 (6) - add here ( for consistency ) did something else
  - 00:19:261 (1) - delete NC and 00:20:352 (4) - add NC didn't remove NC from 19:261, however added to 20:352
  - 00:25:261 (6) - hmm how about using 1.1x DS? ( 00:25:625 (7) - and also move litte bit up this slider too ) since you tried beautiful mapset, i think it's better ( and playing too ) no, I wanted the slider to be aligned. If anyone else suggests it, I will move (5) so it has better spacing
  - 00:36:897 (5) - delete whistle on start why? sounds empty
  - 00:43:988 (8) - whistle? because piano sound is suddenly big done

Beautiful LOL well made diffs, good luck for rank!

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I'm here /o/

[General]

How about adding a blank soft-sliderslide, the song is very peaceful and the actual sliderslide breaks a bit that. okaaay after many requests, done
1500ms of lead in would be better, I think same as above, okay

Well, all here are merely suggestions, feel free to take it or not :3 well-made map <3

[Easy]
00:17:437 (1) - Remove all the whistles here and put one only in the reverse, the piano emphasizes here :v done
01:01:073 (1) - Switch the placement of the whistle, the piano emphasizes more in the end, if you do, remove the whistle from 01:02:528 (2). done

[Normal]
01:04:346 (2,3) - Maybe joint into a slider, you use 1/1 for all the song and this is suddenly in 1/2, that or unstack, stacked feels a bit weird imo nah, I really like it as it is >: think of it as a grand finale

[Hard]
Aren't the values for HP Drain and OD a bit low, increase it by 1. increased OD by 1
01:01:437 - I felt empty here, maybe begin 01:01:619 (4) here and remove the whistle from the beginning if you do. nah, I like it the way it is

[Insane]
Increase HP Drain at least by 1, too forgiving with HP Drain 6 :C (I could say increase both HP Drain and OD to 8, but that's up to you) HP 7 now
That jumps <3 Nice diff

Sorry for being short :c, but this map is very well-made :3