This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 25, 2009 at 12:49:58 PM

Artist: Aeon Spoke
Title: Cavalry Of Woe
BPM: 96.52
Filesize: 6467kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.97 stars, 78 notes)
2. Hard (4.39 stars, 378 notes)
3. Normal (2.5 stars, 122 notes)

Download: Aeon Spoke - Cavalry Of Woe
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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did most of the nazi edits and i think (think) im ready to go bubble-hunting


and just fyi matty kiai time does NOT suit this song so dont try to put it in here :<

all edits before my post/update + I'm going to settle this offset arguemnt asap :<

updated with awp timing <3 ty awp

whoopsie forgot to snap

HELLO!

[normal]

02:08:997(1) move forward 1 beat it sounds better

nice map you got! love those patterns :3

STARRED!

Hi SFG

BPM/Offset looks fine~

[Normal]
1:26:424(3)-> Don't stack.

[Hard]
1:35:462(6)-> Move left a bit.
1:41:062(4)-> Move up a bit.
3:20:219(7)-> Don't Stack.

Star'd.

hi SFG

[Normal]
00:47:57 (4) - new combo
01:49:43 (6,7) - spacing isn't the same as 4,5
02:08:70 (1) - start this a white count later
00:53:47 (1) - these timing sections within serve no purpose

[Hard]
01:33:80 (1,2,3) - just awkward
01:35:93 (1,2,3) - ^
03:11:82 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't go with the music very well
03:42:91 (2) - not in the middle of the two sliders (not sure if you were going for that)


a little over mapped in hard but no big issues

star

Hello,
Ill try not to repeat what Skyripper modded~


~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~



[Normal]

01:29:22 (3) - allign with (2)'s end
01:31:09 (2,3) - allign with (1)'s end
01:31:40 (3) - Put on top of fading (3) ?
01:56:89 (1) - allign diagonally with 01:55:95 (3)'s end?



[Hard]

00:55:05 (1) - allign with 00:54:43 (5) - and make slider's end and 00:55:98 (2) - allign with it too.
00:59:09 (5) - spacing
01:29:86 (2) - nice slider :3
01:38:88 (7) - allign with 01:38:26 (6)'s end
01:39:81 (2) - design this slider correctly
01:41:06 (4) - allign? if this was on purpose it looks good anyways, unless you wish to allign.
02:35:14 (1,2,3,4) - hmm allign with 02:34:21 (4)'s end. Id say move them a bit down.
03:12:76 (8) - after this, i personally think (9) should be where (10) is.
03:19:59 (6,7) - move a tiny bit so they dont over lap next slider?

Sir Minelli wrote:

[Normal]
01:31:09 (2,3) - allign with (1)'s end
01:31:40 (3) - Put on top of fading (3) ?

I can't do both, silly im putting them with 1 cus its the most recent

Sir Minelli wrote:

[Hard]

01:41:06 (4) - allign? if this was on purpose it looks good anyways, unless you wish to allign.

well actually it was aligned with 2 but i think i can make it align with both 2 and 3 if i mess with it a tad~


and ty for the mod~ <3<3<3

its late and i'm not super confident, but this seems to work well and its very close to my original timing:

BPM: 96.54
Offset: 19,605

btw this song is kinda good, me likey

[Normal]
- Even though they aren't that fast, I still think slider velocity changes in this difficulty level are a bit rough on players. Also you may want to increase the drain a bit.
01:31:38 (3,4,5,1,2) - stacking completely obliterates this, looks horrible.


[Hard]
- I don't really like the kiai time, i think its pointless and looks gimmicky. Also, increase drain a bit?
1:05:90 (3,4,5,6) - plz don't do this
01:31:38 (5,6,7,1) - this whole thing is awkward

Download: DWB feat. NIRGIRLS - SHINY SHINY (Fuuko) [Normal].osu

Hello,


~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~


[Normal]

00:48:19 (2) - Align it perfectly with (1)
01:00:46 (1) - Move this beat to previous white tick. Will sound better and will match this pattern 00:56:27 (2,3,1) -


[Hard]

00:49:43 (1) - Maybe allign it diagonally with (6) ?
01:25:48 (3) - The bottom design of this slider could look better, unless you want it that way
01:32:01 (6) - ^
01:32:63 (7) - ^
01:35:42 (5) - Move this, one square to the right
01:39:77 (2) - Slider design
01:41:02 (4) - ^ (even though this one looks better)
01:41:64 (5) - new combo
01:41:95 (1) - This spinner should finish at the yellow tick, but if you do so, the upcoming beats would appear to fast,
and if you try to start the beats combo at the yellow tick also, the last beat wont match the voice, so;
I suggest finishing the spinner at the yellow tick and after that, just put a single beat here 01:44:12
01:55:62 (2) - Allign perfectly with slider's end. A bit up~
03:07:72 (4) - new combo
03:11:29 (1) - undo new combo
03:11:91 (3) - new combo
03:27:60 (2) - allign perfectly with slider's end
03:29:31 (3) - spacing
03:38:17 (2) - ^
03:50:45 (3) - This should totally be on the next white tick


Nice map, i liked most of it.

Statements in bold are very strong statements for consideration. Underlined statements indicate original modding from me. * at the start indicates a superflous modding, one that you may choose to consider or otherwise.

00:48:19 (2) - Align it perfectly with (1) -> As this is a stand-alone beat, I am not sure this is necessary at all.
01:00:46 (1) - Move this beat to previous white tick. Will sound better and will match this pattern 00:56:27 (2,3,1)
-> My suggestion? Replace your current spinner with a slider starting and ending where your spinner starts/ends.
01:04:97 (1) - Uhh... since this is supposed to be Normal, my opinion is that you should not have a jump here. Please rotate your slider 180 degrees around and adjust the patterns (including the next combo) accordingly.
*01:42:88 (5) - Align with previous slider, unless intentional.

[Hard]

00:49:43 (1) - Maybe allign it diagonally with (6) ? Pretty superficial, it's really unnecessary unless you're very hyper on alignment issues.
01:25:48 (3) - The bottom design of this slider could look better, unless you want it that way
01:32:01 (6) - ^
01:32:63 (7) - ^ All the siders are just fine the way they are, really.
01:35:42 (5) - Move this, one square to the right Echo has possessed you, I swear. Though, a little spacing adjustment wouldn't hurt imo.
01:39:77 (2) - Slider design
01:41:02 (4) - ^ (even though this one looks better)
01:41:64 (5) - new combo -> whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
01:41:95 (1) - This spinner should finish at the yellow tick, but if you do so, the upcoming beats would appear to fast,
and if you try to start the beats combo at the yellow tick also, the last beat wont match the voice, so;
I suggest finishing the spinner at the yellow tick and after that, just put a single beat here 01:44:12
-> YELLOW TICK? Err, you don't need 1/8ths for this, this pattern is fine the way it is.

01:55:62 (2) - Allign perfectly with slider's end. A bit up~
03:07:72 (4) - new combo
03:11:29 (1) - undo new combo
03:11:91 (3) - new combo
03:27:60 (2) - allign perfectly with slider's end
03:29:31 (3) - spacing
03:38:17 (2) - ^
03:50:45 (3) - This should totally be on the next white tick

Notice - above post is incomplete. Will be back in a bit, hopefully!

[Hard]

01:33:87(-) - Extra Note (?)
03:21:70 (3,4,5) - Wrong spacing -> Atleast the (3) is too close to the slider.
03:29:31 (3) - Wrong spacing, -> (3) is too far away from (2).
03:42:29(Inherit point) - When this starts, the whistle on the slider goes on, it doesn't hear very ''nice''.
03:50:45 (3) - Increase with 1/2 lenght.


[Normal]

Decrease Overall Dificulty by one (?)
01:49:72 (7) - Move one grid level to the left.
02:58:01 (Inherit Point) - Delete it, since it does nothing.
^ Same for the next 3 points.

Gladi Stawr For Yoouuw!

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General
Woot. Pretty good job. Star. =]

Normal
00:51:61 (3) - Make perpendicular to 00:50:36 (2).
01:21:75 (1) - I dislike this spinner. Replace with a single hit circle at the end.
01:50:34 (1) - Ew. Replace with slider?
02:01:84 (4,5) - Maybe have these repeat? Dunno.
02:06:50 (1,2,3) - Unstack.
02:18:00 (1) - Add some hit circles at 02:18:62 (1) and 02:18:93 (2) perhaps?

Hard
01:35:89 (1) - Unstack.
01:45:37 (2) - Replace under (1).
02:01:84 (8,9) - Replace over the centre notes.
02:26:54 (2) - This is oddly placed in-game. Dunno what's up. Looks fine in the editor. (Eh, I think I know what it is: automatic stacking. Increase the probability?)
03:02:12 (2) - Replace under (1).
03:08:34 (2) - I would place this lower, to match the pitch change by the vocalist. It's fine as-is though.
03:20:61 (1,3,4,5,6) - Why not place these in the middle of (2) (as in, in the little gap above, not in the centre of the almost-circle)?
03:30:87 (7,8) - Position this the same as 03:35:37 (1). Then, position 03:32:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) to reference it.
03:39:72 (1,1) - These are supposed to be wings, right? Look good. Maybe storyboard a faint image for added effect.

Easy Tested, it's seems ok IMO. just try to make it more interesting with slider pattern or less sliders

anyway that's up to you


btw i SS'd normal too and i liked the song / mapping

so Star

Easy
This is really short, I think you should make it longer.
01:14:504 - Why is there a break here?

Normal
No problems

Hard
No problems

Easy:
[14:07] <RemmyX25> SFG: first recommendation i can give you is to up the circle size in easy
[14:07] <RemmyX25> so no bubble for you

Hard:
Just my personal two cents, I'm not a bit fan of the 2x sliders at every chorus. maybe for the last one, but not for every chorus.

03:56:52 (3) - Why the heck do you use both soft and normal slider ticks?

Timing:
I like the offset better at 19,619

Since I feel like in a naziing mood,

Easy:
00:51:31 (2) - make this an exact clone of 1
00:57:53 (1) - make this an exact clone of the blue 1 before i
01:47:25 (1) - make this an exact clone of the red 1 before it
01:59:37 (6) - wondering why this is not stacked on the 5 like 01:09:65 (6), nothing wrong
02:10:24 (1,2,3) - did you want to increase the spacing here?

Normal:
00:38:88 (3,4) - make them a horizontal reflection of 1 and 2
01:00:01 (6) - shift 2 to the right (3) to form a right angle with 2
01:07:47 (1) - this should be aligned with the red 2 or make the yellow 2 be in a pattern that could justify its postion
01:29:84 (1) - align with 3?
01:36:06 (1,2,3,4) - shift down 1 notch (3) to make this centered around the x-axis
01:41:65 (3) - up 2 notches (3) to make a line with the end of 1 and 2
01:50:35 (1) - 3k auto spinner on normal...
01:57:50 (3) - change this slider so 4 can be on the y-axis

Hard:
00:20:24 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you should have the 2's of both combos on the y-axis.
00:27:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - " "
00:37:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - " "
00:40:43 (2,3,4,5) - the end of 2, 3, 4, and the start of 5 should form a line
00:49:14 (6) - make this the same distance from 3 and 5
00:53:80 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should place this at the origin or directly over 8
01:03:12 (7,8,9,10,11) - make these be a reflection of 1-6
01:04:98 (1) - have this centered on the x-axis
01:04:98 (1,2,3,4) - make the end of 1 and the rest of these form a line
01:08:71 (3) - feels better if you horizontally align with 5
01:12:44 (1,1) - make these vertical reflections of each other
01:27:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - put 2 on the y-axis (if you can put it on the origin that would be better)
01:29:69 (1,2) - align under 3
01:37:61 (4) - make a right angle with 3
01:38:86 (6) - shift one notch to the right (3)
02:00:92 (4,5,6) - move these so they are exact vertical reflections of 8, not a grid snapped reflection
02:19:56 (2) - looks more centered between the beginning and end of 1 if you move one notch up(3)
03:39:74 (1,1) - make these horizontal reflections of each other
03:45:64 (2) - make this a horizontal reflection of 1
03:47:82 (2) - make this a vertical reflection of 1
03:49:99 (2,3) - make 2 so that it a reflection over y=x on the grid and make 3 run directly in between 1 and 2, hopefully the origin
03:53:72 (1,2) - make it so that this is a reflection of 03:55:90 (1,2) over y=-x

Sorry, if most of these most seem like excessive changes. Overall nice map though. Star.

k I made all the changes but the y-axis/origin ones, and not those b/c i believe you should be able to center the map wherever you want so im creating my own "axis" and "origin"

Kiai Time
00:54:42 - 01:14:31
01:44:14 - 02:04:03
02:09:00 - 02:38:83
03:26:07 ~

Hard
02:26:56 (2) - Start 1/2 earlier, Extend 1/2

Starry~~

Edit: I suggested Kiai time not "just because", I suggested Kiai time because I thought it fit. >.>

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