1. Hope (2.34 stars, 196 notes)
2. Promise (4.93 stars, 504 notes)
3. Wish (4.48 stars, 323 notes)

jonathanlfj wrote:

first \o/
i swear i have seen you editing this for a week or so lol
might give it a mod sometime soon~

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi <3 pretty sb
Wish
01:23:008 (1) - useless nc fixed
01:58:563 - 02:00:230 - breaktime so short removed
02:25:230 (3) - this is a weird slider (sounds a lil weird) this is like the one slider she doesn't want to change lol

sorry for my poor modd cuz ur map is nice <3

Xinely wrote:

LunarSakuya give GD for you so don't forget to put LunarSakuya in tags ~

Konei wrote:

Japanese version much better o/

meiikyuu wrote:

Konei wrote:

Japanese version much better o/

thx for the info >_>.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello! Your Mod you left on my wall mods .. p/2015056#p2015056

[Hope]

00:28:563 (2) Delete :3 no its still part of the rhythm
00:30:508 (5) Delete :3 ^
00:43:563 (2) Delete :3 ^
01:00:508 (5) Delete :3 ok i guess this works
01:10:230 (2) Delete :3 nah
01:58:563 (2) Insert Brak Time fixed
02:00:230 (3) New Combo its already a new combo

[Wish]

00:18:008 (8) Leave it. sounds better: 3 ill consider this.. but im keeping now because it's supposed to follow all the claps in the instrumental
00:26:897 (9,10,11) If you are 3 levels better be named a kind of easy, normal and hard, so do not put on i understand you, but im sure people who play hards can take one or two 108bpm triplets throughout the entire diff.

Big Level DDDD

[Promise]

00:29:397 (5) Add Clap :3 uh..nah xD
00:43:841 Velocity x0,5 :3 i intend to keep same velocity throughout whole map
01:40:786 (1) Delete New Combo ill keep for now until another mentions the same thing
01:41:063 (2) New Combo. :3 ^
01:58:563 (3) Add finish :333 theres no cymbal sound in the instruments here ~
02:32:452 (1) Add finish :3 same reason as above but i will change if someone else mentions

Well, I really liked the song, I hope that works for my mod, goodbye and good luck (I will give star because I love your SB thank you so much ^_^

TMAstraf wrote:

Promise:
00:04:952 Near to circle 6 the little jump was a little intentional so the combos could be distinguished more ~ but i will reconsider changing it if someone else mentions

Thats all =)

Xagrok wrote:

TalesofGracesandohmygoshthestoryboardissogreatIabsoloutelyhavetomodthis *.=.* And as usual, these are mere suggestions. this game rules <3

[General]
And even though I love the storyboard... Isn't it a tiny bit too much? Not that it's bad, but I'd love to have a little bit more time to watch the beautiful background pictures while playing. lol you could think of it as a video or something, i wouldn't see it as too much then ~ ~ Anyway, thanks for the comment, im glad to know you like the sb a lot
The breaks before the final spinner in Hope and wish are... Confusing? I don't know how to say it, please forgive my poor english v.=.v But it's awkward imho to have such a long break only for a spinner :/ i know what you mean , but there are a few maps that do it too (if only i can find examples atm...). who knows, maybe we'll fill the gaps up sometime later

[Hope]
00:28:008 (1) Add clap? missed that one, thanks ^^
01:41:119 (6) Add clap at the end of the slider? i don't know where you are pointing here, but i added a clap at the end of 01:48:563 (6) - if that has to do with anything
01:58:563 (2) Add finish at the end of the slider? finish sound might be loud for this part
02:22:452 (5) Add finish? ^
02:27:452 (3) Replace whistle with finish? similar reason as above, i'm trying to match the sounds with a lot of the instruments in the bg and for these parts i hear no sort of cymbal sounds
02:34:119 (1) Add finish at the end of spinner? added a whistle instead

[Wish]
(speaking for lunarsakuya)
00:54:119 (1) Replace whistle with finish? there's no cymbal sound in the instruments
01:58:563 (1) ^ ^
02:34:119 (1) Add finish? whistle
02:55:786 (4) Add clap? fixed

[Promise]
00:47:730 (2, 3) This overlapping looks not very good :/ Could you maybe fix it? it was intentional :<
00:54:119 (1) I'd replace the whistle with a finish at the end of the spinner, it fits the music better imho. again im trying to follow only the cymbals that appear in the song itself
01:58:583 (3) ^ Of, course at the circle only ^.=.~ ^
02:09:674 (1) Remove whistle at the slider's beginning and just leave the finish there, that sounds better imho. lol ok
02:18:563 (1) ^ fixed
02:34:119 (1) Add finish at the end of the spinner? whistle
02:54:119 (1) Remove whistle at the slider's beginning. mm not here
03:01:341 (7) Add clap? missed that one too xD thanks
03:03:008 (1) I'd replace the whistle at the beginning of the slider with a finish. fixed
03:18:563 (1, 2) That looks somehow really awkward to me :/ Maybe you could let the slider end at 03:18:980 ? i will change if someone else mentions this part

Good luck ^.=.^

1. 00:51:897 (1) - put whistle
2. 01:11:341 (4) - whistle at end
3. 02:16:341 (4) - whistle
4. 02:18:008 (3) - add clap pls

1. 00:34:674 (4) - missing a clap at the beginning
2. 00:49:536 - add note?
3. 00:56:341 (1) - NC
4. 01:47:730 (7,8,9) - space these notes with .9x spacing
5. 02:10:230 (2) - missed clap here too
6. 02:42:174 (5,6) - (very nazi) stack them
7. 02:49:674 (2) - add whistle maybe

LunarSakuya wrote:

few things to point out

Hope

1. 00:51:897 (1) - put whistle
2. 01:11:341 (4) - whistle at end
3. 02:16:341 (4) - whistle
4. 02:18:008 (3) - add clap pls

Promise

1. 00:34:674 (4) - missing a clap at the beginning
2. 00:49:536 - add note?
3. 00:56:341 (1) - NC
4. 01:47:730 (7,8,9) - space these notes with .9x spacing
5. 02:10:230 (2) - missed clap here too
6. 02:42:174 (5,6) - (very nazi) stack them
7. 02:49:674 (2) - add whistle maybe

jonathanlfj wrote:

As promised~
BoA gg, White Wishes ggg, English Version ggggggg ggggggggggggggg

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
sb is like a remake of the OP, too awsome <3 thanks!
tag namco and the short form game title "tog"? fixed

[Hope]
00:18:008 (4) - add finish to slider tail and maybe remove clap fixed
00:43:841 (3) - its a bit awkward to play when the slider ends in the middle of the extended vocal sound...how bout swap it for just a note to indicate the start of the vocals? (or alternatively extend it to 00:44:397 to correspond with the drum sound) extended
00:58:563 (3) - add whistle to slider head like you did at 01:07:452 (3) (i can hear that sharp sound here as well) fixed
01:13:563 (3) - put a clap in the middle? nah
01:54:119 (1) - there should be a whistle here according to ur whistle pattern fixed
02:02:452 (2) - whistle on tail ^
02:11:897 (4) - whistle on head (these are trying to keep consistent with ur hitsounding in the first kiai) ^
02:28:008 (4,5) - try this, follows music better imo

SPOILER

guess it works
02:47:452 (3) - that extra repeate is gonna troll alot of newbies lol ehh ill think about it. i thought it would be slow enough to read
03:05:230 (3) - whistle on head fixed
03:22:452 (1) - end this at 03:29:397 and silence the slider end~ (applies to all diffs) fine

[Wish]
00:00:786 (1) - whistle on slider head? fixed
00:32:452 (2) - forgot clap >< ^
00:49:119 (8) - stack this on the tail of 00:47:730 (6) looks better she thinks its fine
01:03:841 (6) - whistle on slider head to correspond with 01:03:841 (6) fixed
01:29:397 (5) - whistle on slider end ^
01:53:563 (7) - its touching the hp bar...might get some complaints so move it down a bit? ok
02:07:174 (5) - whistle on end ^
02:38:563 (4,5) - lets get symmetry here fixed

SPOILER

code for 02:37:730 (3,4,5,6,1) (had to fix up spacing)

212,84,157730,2,0,P|188:40|144:16,2,100
156,156,158563,2,0,P|260:160|300:84,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,84,159397,2,0,P|252:160|356:156,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,108,160230,1,0,0:0:0
432,200,160508,6,0,P|484:188|512:152,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

03:00:508 (6) - whistle on slider end ^

[Promise]
00:16:341 (8) - NC here and take NC off 00:18:008 (1) fixed
00:44:674 (5) - add clap along with the whistle on slid fixed
00:49:536 - add note (all the add notes are based on the precautions from the left channel of the music...feel free to ignore them if you dont like it) i did this before but decided that it wasnt rly necessary in the end
01:07:452 (1) - add whistle to slider head (i see it on 02:11:897 (6)) fixed
01:58:008 (2) - there should be clap on every repeat, like 00:18:008 (1,2,3,4) i don't really like the claps in this particular spot for some reason
02:16:202 - add note ok i want to think about this..
02:28:980 (2) - finish?
02:29:397 (3) - ^ on slider head
02:43:841 (7) - add whistle no
02:45:230 (1) - add finish along with the whistle~
02:49:536 - add note nah..
03:05:230 (1) - whistle fixed

srry i went hitsound spamming, just that this is like a whistle-everywhere song for me lol
great mapset and amazing sb, have a star~ good luck on ranking

tyvm, it was useful