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Inami Mahiru(CV:Fujita Saki) - Golden Day

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riffy
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 марта 2016 г. at 16:51:27

Artist: Inami Mahiru(CV:Fujita Saki)
Title: Golden Day
Source: Working!!
Tags: ワーキング!! flask ending ed2 a-1 pictures wagnaria bci black_cherry_ita
BPM: 130
Filesize: 2506kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. BCI's Easy (1,24 stars, 62 notes)
  2. Flask's Normal (1,64 stars, 95 notes)
  3. Hard (2,6 stars, 146 notes)
Download: Inami Mahiru(CV:Fujita Saki) - Golden Day
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osu! needs less TV-Sizes

Mapset
  1. Easy - done by BCI
  2. Normal - done by Flask
  3. Hard - done by me
Special thanks to Sekai and Flask.
Last edited by riffy , edited 29 times in total.
Suimya
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Suimya
baka baka owo
riffy
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riffy
I'm not :V
Ranger
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Ranger
Hello -Bakari-~
From M4M

[General]
just suggesion,how about add soft orange color at combo colors?
because key figures of this map hair color is orange

[Easy]
00:12:985 (2) - Move 1 point up
00:24:985 (3) - Distance snap,i think Easy diff must be have same interval
00:33:985 (1) - How about add finish at the beginning?
00:53:601 (2) - How about this silder change 1/2 silder instead 1/4 silder?

[Normal]
00:29:601 (3) - Move 1 left second spot
00:49:447 (2) - add whistle in the end
00:49:447 (2) - add whistle at beginning?
00:50:370 (3) - if you allow ^, remove whistle this silder

[Hard]
DR-1?
00:03:524 (2) - how about make like this?it looks better to me
00:33:985 (1) - same easy diff.How about add finish at the beginning?
00:56:139 (7) - ^

ok,that`s all to me
good luck~ :)
riffy
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riffy

[Ranger] wrote:

Hello -Bakari-~
From M4M

[General]
just suggesion,how about add soft orange color at combo colors? well.. orange is so bright.. I'd like to keep relaxing colours for this song >3<
because key figures of this map hair color is orange

[Hard]
DR-1?
00:03:524 (2) - how about make like this?it looks better to me but.. it's not supposed to be symmetrical!
00:33:985 (1) - same easy diff.How about add finish at the beginning? ~
00:56:139 (7) - ^ ~

ok,that`s all to me
good luck~ :)
No changes for Flask's diff. He said it.
BCI fixed everything but first suggestion.
Lally
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Lally
OwO what is this?


moeee~
riffy
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riffy
This is a map \:V/ Also this is my first storyboard. Hope you like it. :3
Suimya
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Suimya
here's a nya~ star =w=/

PS: dont give up on this map QAQ it's to moe to grave~
Breeze
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Breeze
[General]

  1. Inconsistency in Tags, [Normal] : clack_cherry_ita should be black_cherry_ita
  2. I feel audio lead-in too short, 1000ms - 1500ms would be better
  3. All difficulties, I feel end the last spinner at 01:09:068 sounds a little odd, maybe you should end it at 01:11:305
[Timing]

BPM/Offset
130/755
142/67216
116/68906
110/70199
105/70744

Change it only if you agree with it

[Hard]

  1. 00:15:062 (1) - Ctrl+g would be better, or it's a bit confused and hard to know it's a 2-reverse slider
  2. 00:27:985 (1) - ^
  3. 00:31:216 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think anti-jump fit the rhythm here
  4. 00:33:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - There are no beat at 00:33:293 and 00:33:408 (3), according to music, here should be a 1/4 beat space stream start at 00:33:524 (4) and end at 00:33:985. to be short, delete 00:33:293 (2,3) and add a note at 00:33:870
riffy
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Applied everything.
lovhin456
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lovhin456
Hi

[General]
- You don't want to use the video? I could get it for you if you want to

[Easy]
- 00:41:370 You can hear a finish in the music here
- 00:50:370 Whistle?
- 01:03:755 Maybe the spinner should start here?
- 01:08:906 I think you should lower the volume here

[Normal]
- 00:29:601 You can hear a finish in the music, but lower the volume for it like half
- 00:57:985 Add a new combo?
- 01:08:906 Same as Easy

[Hard]
- 00:01:908 (4,5) Exchange places in timeline and on the playfield if you want to
- 00:29:601 Same as Normal
- 00:31:908 ^
- 00:41:370 Same as Easy
- 00:45:062 Basically ^
- 00:45:755 ^
- 00:46:678 ^
- 00:47:601 ^
- 00:57:985 ^
- 00:58:908 ^
- 01:00:755 ^
- 01:08:906 Feels empty without a hitsound

You need +12sp then in-game pm for a recheck or if you can't find me send me a forum pm
riffy
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riffy

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi

[General]
- You don't want to use the video? I could get it for you if you want to i have terrible connection, so I can't upload videos :< what's more it disattrct players. let's use BGs instead :3

changed my hitsound pattern with some drum sounds. now feels better :3 (note: finishes - big white ticks/drum-hitnormal others)

You need +12sp then in-game pm for a recheck or if you can't find me send me a forum pm

BCI fixed everything except volume changes
edit: I've applied everything for Flask's diff. changes aren't huge, so i guess it's ok

EDIT: GONNA FIX TITLE
vey_old_1
vey_old_1
very good song~~

hard:
00:02:601 (1) - shorten this slider:
00:17:370 (2) - change this slider into a note maybe better:
00:31:216 (1,2,3) - change into:

normal:
00:03:062 (4) - make this slider vertical maybe beautiful

take these suggestion if you think it is useful.
good luck~
riffy
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riffy
I can't say that your suggestions are bad. But there's nothing wrong with my rhythm, so I'm keeping the patterns the way they are now, sorry.

seems like Flask has changed his pattern. Everything is updated and ready o3o/
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P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
starred
lovhin456
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lovhin456
/Slaps myself

Hello, sorry for being so incompetent. I will recheck this now.

[SB]
- The change from the bg to the first image on 00:15:524 is very abrupt, if you could do a fade it would be better.
- I don't know how to explain this well, but on 00:33:985 I think the image should be all white, but here it's not like that.

[Easy]
- 01:08:906 35% volume seems better here.

[Normal]
- 00:07:678 Add a whistle.
- 00:15:062 Here too, to be consistent.
- 01:03:062 Maybe add a whistle here.

[Hard]
- 00:01:447 I suggest changing the placement of notes to this http://puu.sh/2Jfeq.png
- 00:05:831 (1,2) Exchange them in the timeline.
- 01:00:755 Remove the repeat and add a 1/1 slider on 01:01:447. A jump between them would be nice too.
- 01:08:906 Add a whistle with 35% volume or if you don't want to add it lower the volume of the section to 25%

Call me back.
riffy
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Applied everything. As for SB, I've improved the way how it works and now it looks much better.

Thank you for your star, P o M u T a!
riffy
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riffy
I don't know why.
Suimya
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Suimya
finally you revived this ;w;
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