This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 21 de marzo de 2013 at 0:21:55

Artist: David Guetta ft. Usher
Title: Without You
Tags: R&B Nothing but the Beat
BPM: 128
Filesize: 21404kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,58 stars, 348 notes)
2. Normal (2,56 stars, 215 notes)

Download: David Guetta ft. Usher - Without You
Download: David Guetta ft. Usher - Without You (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oh.. I finally finish this map!..
This map is dedicated to my girlfriend

Special Thanks to:
Gonzvlo: For his awesome Skin
ezek: For the Video (Re-Download the Map if you have it before to 3/3)

Mapset:
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%

Girlfriend? Where can I download one? :V

[General]

1. Can't you add some tags? It'll help us to find your map, bro! For example, you can add R&B(genre) and Nothing but the Beat (album name)

[Hard]

1. 00:13:200 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nazi - you can make flow a bit more symmetrical and neat by stacking some circles. example.jpg
2. 01:16:129 - this is the hadest diff! How about triplet or reversed 1/4 slider here to follow music? possibly, you can use slider here, as well. But please, do not ignore this beat it feels really confusing to me! (same thing 01:18:004 - 01:17:887 (3) - here. But you can keep this one as is, sounds kinda cute, imo)
3. 01:33:356 (7,1) - swap new combo here? I know, it will hurt your pattern a bit, but it will fit here and looks better, imo. If you do it, comboing will be more balanced o3o/
4. 01:44:840 (7,8) - I guess, you can replace these two notes with one 1/4 slider, to make it easier to play. So, your flow will be more balanced, I think.
5. 01:46:950 (4) - replace this slider with circle at 01:47:184? I feel kinda bad about this slider, it starts on music and ends on vocals, it makes this slider not enjoyable for me :< see the example o3o/
6. 01:48:590 (1) - ULTRA-NAZI - your blanket slider is not perfect here, just move end point of the slider 1-2 grids up to fix it.
7. 02:16:950 (4) - in my opinion, you should use two circles here instead. 02:17:184 - this beat feels reaaaally strong and I guess it shiuld have a circle!
8. 03:23:043 - how about silinced spinner here to follow that long "yooouuuuuuuu"? You cacn end the spinner at 03:24:684 - nd it will fit with vocals perfectly!

[Normal]

1. Total time: 3:22 / Draining time: 3:17 don't you feel like it's too much for easiest diff? Try to add one more break?
2. try to avoid curved 1/2 sliders.They looks kinda kinda confusing for beginners.This diff is the easiest and rhythm here is quite calm, that's why this kind of sliders is confusing here. :<
3. 00:45:543 (1) - I'd say that object appears too soon after spinner. It's not a big problem, but try to avoid this, it's the easiest diff!Same for other spinners.Check 'em all! o3o/ + Fix the NC bug here, please!
4. 00:52:106 (6,7,1) - probanbly they will be overlapped with (4)'s hitbursts!
5. 01:23:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi - this combo feels muuuuch longer than previous ones. Did you miss NC at (4)?
6. 02:05:231 (3) - ULTRA-NAZI - previous stack had x0.1 Distance spacing, this one has x0.3 DS. It looks kinda weird because they're too close to each other.
7. 03:23:043 - how about silinced spinner here to follow that long "yooouuuuuuuu"? You cacn end the spinner at 03:24:684 - nd it will fit with vocals perfectly!

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Your maps are getting even better. I have nothing else to say! I like the song, I like the BG and, of course, I like the mapset!

Star! ~

-Bakari- wrote:

Girlfriend? Where can I download one? :V I lol'd that haha xD

[General]

1. Can't you add some tags? It'll help us to find your map, bro! For example, you can add R&B(genre) and Nothing but the Beat (album name) Oh.. Nice. Both things added.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:200 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nazi - you can make flow a bit more symmetrical and neat by stacking some circles.example.jpg Hmm.. Ok.
2. 01:16:129 - this is the hadest diff! How about triplet or reversed 1/4 slider here to follow music? possibly, you can use slider here, as well. But please, do not ignore this beat it feels really confusing to me! (same thing 01:18:004 - 01:17:887 (3) - here. But you can keep this one as is, sounds kinda cute, imo) lol. Well, Added a compressed 3-plet here.
3. 01:33:356 (7,1) - swap new combo here? I know, it will hurt your pattern a bit, but it will fit here and looks better, imo. If you do it, comboing will be more balanced o3o/ I follow the downbeats to place the New Combos (in this map), but in this place your idea looks fine, so swaitched the Combos.
4. 01:44:840 (7,8) - I guess, you can replace these two notes with one 1/4 slider, to make it easier to play. So, your flow will be more balanced, I think. Nope, I prefer the compressed 3-plet here. I think that the Slider and the Notes flow similar here.
5. 01:46:950 (4) - replace this slider with circle at 01:47:184? I feel kinda bad about this slider, it starts on music and ends on vocals, it makes this slider not enjoyable for me :< see the example o3o/ No, sorry. Because I'm following the Instrumental and the Vocal at the same time. If you listen the music properly, you will listen that the Slider start follow the Instrumental.
6. 01:48:590 (1) - ULTRA-NAZI - your blanket slider is not perfect here, just move end point of the slider 1-2 grids up to fix it. LOOOL, fixed anyways xD
7. 02:16:950 (4) - in my opinion, you should use two circles here instead. 02:17:184 - this beat feels reaaaally strong and I guess it shiuld have a circle! Oh.. sure.
8. 03:23:043 - how about silinced spinner here to follow that long "yooouuuuuuuu"? You cacn end the spinner at 03:24:684 - nd it will fit with vocals perfectly! I prefer to leave it as it is, because the Instrumental ends in this part, I think that it is more coherent as it is.

[Normal]

1. Total time: 3:22 / Draining time: 3:17 don't you feel like it's too much for easiest diff? Try to add one more break? I don't think so, I'll leave it as it is. The diff. is full of long Sliders, so in these sections the player can take a respite.
2. try to avoid curved 1/2 sliders.They looks kinda kinda confusing for beginners.This diff is the easiest and rhythm here is quite calm, that's why this kind of sliders is confusing here. :<
3. 00:45:543 (1) - I'd say that object appears too soon after spinner. It's not a big problem, but try to avoid this, it's the easiest diff!Same for other spinners.Check 'em all! o3o/ + Fix the NC bug here, please! Ok, Removed the Slider, and added a Note on the next White tick, I think that it is better now.
4. 00:52:106 (6,7,1) - probanbly they will be overlapped with (4)'s hitbursts! Hmm.. I think that players can follow that properly but fixed anyways.
5. 01:23:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi - this combo feels muuuuch longer than previous ones. Did you miss NC at (4)? Oh.. This is true . Added a NC in (4).
6. 02:05:231 (3) - ULTRA-NAZI - previous stack had x0.1 Distance spacing, this one has x0.3 DS. It looks kinda weird because they're too close to each other. I did that in general in the map, when I have a 1/2 between Sliders I used 0.3x in the spacing when I have a Note + Slider in 1/2 I used 0.1x in the spacing. If the player is attent this can't be a problem.
7. 03:23:043 - how about silinced spinner here to follow that long "yooouuuuuuuu"? You cacn end the spinner at 03:24:684 - nd it will fit with vocals perfectly! Same as Hard.

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Your maps are getting even better. I have nothing else to say! I like the song, I like the BG and, of course, I like the mapset!

Star! ~

Thanks for the mod and Star Baka!. It was helpful
Status: My connection is not the best, so I have to wait a bit to update the map (I'll add the video in the next update, provided by ezek)
EDIT: Updated with the video. Re-download please

Oh , esta cancion . . . .

General ~

1. Siento el volumen muy alto entre estos dos lugares : ( 00:00:075 - 00:14:606 ) . Considera bajarlo
   entre 60-70% , porque el comienzo de la cancion es suave . . .

Normal ~

1. 00:30:075 (1) Estoy seguro que olvidaste poner un Finish aqui , por consistencia
2. 02:47:653 (5) En lo personal no me gusta como fluye este slider con el anterior y el posterior . Preferia si haces que el slider este curveado hacia arriba como se muestra en la siguiente imagen :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:50:465 (3) Para tener un ritmo constante yfacil de leer , ya que se supone que es la mas dificultad mas fácil , ademas se nota raro que solo agregues el circle aqui sabiendo que esa misma frase y el 1/2 se repite por muchos lugares como ( 02:52:340 - 02:54:215 ) . Bueno solo es una opinion
4. 03:10:856 (5) Estaria mejor si mueves este slider a x:88 y:144 ya que se ve raro algo extraño para mi xD , ademas hiciste un blanket muy parecido aqui 02:03:825 (1,2,3) , y este si se ve bien
5. 03:18:356 (4) Sé que quisiste hacer una bonita combinacion de whistles al ritmo de la musica , pero fijate el final de este slider 03:16:950 (3) , realmente yo lo siento muy vacio , aparte porque aqui rompiste tu consistencia de whistles . Solo es una sugerencia que pongas el Whistle al final del slider y que lo quites de 03:18:356 (4) , lo siento mejor
6. 03:07:575 (1) El Finish en este slider suena muy fuerte , para ser un lugar donde la musica suena muy suave . Considerala cambiarla por un Whistle o reducirle el volumen

Hard ~

1. 00:12:496 (4) Me gustaria que la curva de este slider sea hacia abajo , realmente fluye mucho mejor , como se muestra en la imagen . Vos que opinas ?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:05:465 (6,7,8) Solo una sugerencia con este blanket , fluye mejor si inviertes (6) y (8) , como se muestra en la siguiente imagen
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:07:575 (1) El Finish en este circle suena muy fuerte , para ser un lugar donde la musica suena muy
   suave . Considerala cambiarla por un Whistle o reducirle el volumen

Nada mas que decir , Grandioso mapset
Suerte mancuso

XinCrin wrote:

Oh , esta cancion . . . .

General ~

1. Siento el volumen muy alto entre estos dos lugares : ( 00:00:075 - 00:14:606 ) . Considera bajarlo
   entre 60-70% , porque el comienzo de la cancion es suave . . . Ok, 65% entonces xD.

Normal ~

1. 00:30:075 (1) Estoy seguro que olvidaste poner un Finish aqui , por consistencia :Truestory: Agregado.
2. 02:47:653 (5) En lo personal no me gusta como fluye este slider con el anterior y el posterior . Preferia si haces que el slider este curveado hacia arriba como se muestra en la siguiente imagen : Hmm.. Para mi fluye correcto, mejor lo dejo asi, ademas que mi forma se ve mas 'estetica' creo.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:50:465 (3) Para tener un ritmo constante yfacil de leer , ya que se supone que es la mas dificultad mas fácil , ademas se nota raro que solo agregues el circle aqui sabiendo que esa misma frase y el 1/2 se repite por muchos lugares como ( 02:52:340 - 02:54:215 ) . Bueno solo es una opinion Creo que esa Nota entra perfecto ahi, ademas no es algo tan dificil de leer en general. Acordate que es la diff. mas facil pero es una Normal, entonces alguna escencia de Normal tiene que tener.
4. 03:10:856 (5) Estaria mejor si mueves este slider a x:88 y:144 ya que se ve raro algo extraño para mi xD , ademas hiciste un blanket muy parecido aqui 02:03:825 (1,2,3) , y este si se ve bien B-b-b-buenooo. xD.
5. 03:18:356 (4) Sé que quisiste hacer una bonita combinacion de whistles al ritmo de la musica , pero fijate el final de este slider 03:16:950 (3) , realmente yo lo siento muy vacio , aparte porque aqui rompiste tu consistencia de whistles . Solo es una sugerencia que pongas el Whistle al final del slider y que lo quites de 03:18:356 (4) , lo siento mejor Ok.
6. 03:07:575 (1) El Finish en este slider suena muy fuerte , para ser un lugar donde la musica suena muy suave . Considerala cambiarla por un Whistle o reducirle el volumen Un Whistle suena bien ahi, lo cambie por un Whistle.

Hard ~

1. 00:12:496 (4) Me gustaria que la curva de este slider sea hacia abajo , realmente fluye mucho mejor , como se muestra en la imagen . Vos que opinas ? Nah.. es para cambiar un poco los patrones, en general uso patrones como vos me mostraste y la verdad no me gusta ser muy repetitivo en mis maps.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:05:465 (6,7,8) Solo una sugerencia con este blanket , fluye mejor si inviertes (6) y (8) , como se muestra en la siguiente imagen Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:07:575 (1) El Finish en este circle suena muy fuerte , para ser un lugar donde la musica suena muy
   suave . Considerala cambiarla por un Whistle o reducirle el volumen Y.. listo.

Nada mas que decir , Grandioso mapset
Suerte mancuso

Gracias por el mod Xin! . Updated!!

hi mancu~
wow for girlfriend's map!
well good mapset~
I can't find too many ;w;
sorry for my poor English"

good luck with rank! star~

Hi mancuso (:3 」_)=3

From my queue

[Normal]

00:51:637 (4,1) stack?, You think it should be will help improve maps.

01:51:520 (4) remove note? This beat seems to be more suitable. -> http://puu.sh/2cu9m and
01:52:575 add note the location 1 slider head

02:31:950 (3) if you have changed slider. this -> http://puu.sh/2cugM

02:52:340 add note? behind pattern 02:50:465 (2,3,4) same

03:08:746 (2) remove 1/2 slider and add note? Please check the lyrics.

03:10:856 (5) ^ same and 03:11:325 add note ?


[Hard]

00:00:075 (1,2,3,4) This is pattern seems tedious, this change contributed. -> http://puu.sh/2cuvf

00:09:684 (2) remove slider, The beat and the song is very awkward,
it's the to improve beat -> http://puu.sh/2cuyF

00:10:856 (5) ^ same, Definite beat player will be a good influence on. -> http://puu.sh/2cuzF

01:23:629 add note?

01:54:801 (2,3) um.. I can't understand why this place.. please reduces the interval.

01:58:200 (1,2) hmm..This is beat a very awkward and difficult to read. change please beat -> http://puu.sh/2cuFt


Nice map Good luck ~!

[Normal]

00:33:356 - Add whistle?
02:03:825 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Rhythm doesnt fit well with the song imo, try this instead: http://puu.sh/2cKt5
03:22:106 (6) - Imo sounds better if you end it at 03:22:809 -

[Hard]

01:16:012 (3,4,5) - This is a very lonely triple for this chorus... What I mean is that after playing this triple, I was expecting more of them. My recommendation is to delete the triple, or add more, although they are technically fine... but whatever!
03:22:106 (5) - try this instead: http://puu.sh/2cKGE

pd: ya me harte de ver la cara de sufrido del negro del video

Meh.. My computer crashed when I was completing responsing your mods and I lost the draft sorry and for this reason I'ill not response them.
Anyways feel free to contact me in-game if you want to know what I changed and what I didn't change.
btw, thanks for the mods :3! Updated!!

Hi~
From my queue.
Sr for long delayed, my HDD was just gone 5 days ago

Anw, let's go.

General

Nothing. Everything seem fine.

My Mod

[Hard]
00:15:075 (1) - I prefer a whistle or no hitsound at start of slider than finish hitsound. But up to you, just my idea xD
02:43:903 (2) - Move to x:80, y: 108 for more smooth imo.
02:45:075 (1) - Add finish here to follow your trace.
02:46:481 (5) - Repeat one more?

[Normal]
02:37:106 (7) - Move to x: 308, y: 48
02:45:075 (1) - Stack with 02:43:200 (4) - at start of slider?

Nice map. Good luck~ <3

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue.
Sr for long delayed, my HDD was just gone 5 days ago Don't worry

Anw, let's go.

General

Nothing. Everything seem fine.

My Mod

[Hard]
00:15:075 (1) - I prefer a whistle or no hitsound at start of slider than finish hitsound. But up to you, just my idea xD Whistle sounds well here, and I did that in Normal too.
02:43:903 (2) - Move to x:80, y: 108 for more smooth imo. Oh.. looks better. Fixed :3
02:45:075 (1) - Add finish here to follow your trace. Sure.
02:46:481 (5) - Repeat one more? But there is no sounds in 02:46:715, so the repeat is useless, and would be there just to overmap.

[Normal]
02:37:106 (7) - Move to x: 308, y: 48 I think that the triangle is better and smoother here, as it is the Note.
02:45:075 (1) - Stack with 02:43:200 (4) - at start of slider? No, No. Manual Stack is better, As I used in all the map.

Nice map. Good luck~ <3

Thanks Yuki! Updated!!

Hola Che :3! Intentare modear esto D: creo que si hablo en español no hay problema verdad XD!

[General]

Nada nada TWT AQUI TODO PERFECTO

[Normal]

(*) NAZI* 00:52:106 (6,1) - Esto se ve un poco feo man, porque no mueves este slider 00:52:106 (6) - A X:136 Y: 188 y por lo consiguiente mover este slider 00:52:575 (1) - a X: 256 Y: 236 asi no rompes el spacing :3 recuerda que si realizas eso debes recolocar las demas notas :3
si quieres el code aqui esta:

[HitObjects]
136,188,52106,2,0,L|196:220,1,65,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,52575,6,0,L|256:100,2,130,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:

(*) 01:01:950 (3) - no estoy seguro pero puedes ignorar esto: Realmente esto a mi parecer suena un poco mal no crees? 01:02:418 - creo que aqui estas ignorando un DRUM 01:02:418 Lo cual hace incosistentes tus patrones de DRUM creo que podrias hacer eso :3

(*) 01:05:231 (2) - no estoy muy seguro pero creo que deberia de haber un NC aqui no lo crees?
(*) 01:05:934 (3,4) - siento que esto puede ser muy dificiles para los jugadores nuevos >< porque no sustituyes esto por un slider ya que es la diff mas facil, eso de mapear en ticks rojos los podria confundir, puedes ignorar esto si no deseas aplicarlo
(*) 01:23:043 (1) - esta nota solo por un poco no esta espaciada revisa esto man
(*) NAZI* 01:26:325 (1,2) - Creo que no estas haciendo un buen blanket aqui, creo que lo podrias hacer un poco mas bonito
(*) NAZI* 01:53:746 (2,3) - Trata de alinear el circle con el slider para que se vea un poco mejor, asi:
(*) Man siento que estos sliders se ven un poco forzados 01:57:496 (3,1) la verdad te aconsejo crear otro patron con este slider 01:58:200 (1) - esto es una sugerencia vale
(*) 02:00:075 (3) - NAZI* porque no intentas mover este slider a X: 395 Y: 95 Para que sea un bonito blanket con este 01:58:200 (1) nwn
algo como esto:
(*) 02:09:684 (2) - no es por ser paranoico pero aqui si se ve mucho la diferencia de espacio de esta nota y esta 02:07:340 (1) - se podria decir que haz roto el spacing >< podrias revisar eso porfavor man
(*) 02:45:075 (1,2) - ^
(*) 02:23:043 (2) - Slider Art !
(*) 02:31:012 (2) - NAZI* creo que fluye mejor si haces esto con el slider:
(*) 02:45:075 (1) - NAZI NAZI EVERYWHERE SOY HITTLER XD! Mueve esta nota a X: 132 Y: 192 Para que quede bien apilado con esta 02:43:200 (4)
(*) 03:22:575 - cuando lo juge tuve la sensacion de que aqui vendria un spinner lo cual no ocurrio XD! talvez deberias tomar encuenta esto, pero eres libre de ignorarlo.

[Hard]

(*) Nazi* 00:01:481 (4,1) - creo que no haces un buen blanket aqui, mueve 00:01:950 (1) - X:76 Y:104 siento que queda mejor
(*) Nazi* 00:12:496 (4) - alinea bien esta nota con esta 00:12:028 (3) - algo asi:
(*) 00:14:840 - se siente vacia esta parte, creo que no habria problema en agregar un circle aqui
(*) 00:40:153 (1) - siento que aqui deberia de ir un NC

Bueno Man espero te sirva mi pequeño mod >< mucha suerte con tu mapa ! esto va pa rank \:3/!

Pm in game request o3o


Hard:

00:01:481 x:155 y:220 para que quede perfectamente alineado con 00:00:543 asi como lo hiciste en 00:00:075 (1,3) -
00:03:825 (1,2,3) - aqui el blanket no te quedo muy bien aqui esta el code por si lo queres mejorar:

396,216,3825,6,0,P|464:180|466:92,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,133,4528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,170,4762,2,0,P|321:87|392:48,2,170,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:06:637 (6,7,8) - en esta parte creo que se deberian de conectar mejor porque el slider sigue para otra direccion y el 7 cambia siento raro creo que se viera mejor si pusieras estos dos paralelos y arreglaras el espacio de los siguientes aqui te dejo el codigo por sim lo haces:

192,172,6168,2,0,P|184:132|152:96,1,85
76,129,6637,2,0,P|84:169|111:202,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,268,7106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,337,7340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,338,7575,5,2,0:0:0:0:
343,265,7809,2,0,P|363:225|403:205,1,85
422,287,8278,2,0,P|462:299|506:291,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,213,8746,2,0,P|464:169|437:140,1,85
390,68,9215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,43,9450,5,2,0:0:0:0:

00:11:559 x:5 y:331 (nazi)
00:12:028 (3,4) - No estan paralelos move 00:12:485 a x:309 y:306 para que quede perfecto
00:25:387 siguiendo tus patrones de hitsound te falto un whistle aqui
00:27:028 remove el whistle de aqui y agregalo aca 00:27:262 para seguir el patron de antes en mi opinion...
00:27:965 (10,1) - ^
00:28:903 00:29:137 ^
00:32:887 x:293 y:188 para que este ubicados exactamente igual
00:38:981 este whistle no le encuentro razon en mi opinion seria mejor removerlo
00:40:856 ^
00:41:325 un finish quedaria bien en esta parte creo
00:41:910 si estas siguiendo las vocales el spinner deberia de comenzar aca eso pienso yo o.o
00:48:825 no me gusta este antijump pero bueno es solo mi opinion
00:49:059 (2,3,4) - la distancia no es la misma entre ellos y creo que si deberia ser la misma
00:52:106 (6,1) - alinealos perfectos?
01:11:090 agrega un circulo aqui y empeza el spinner mejor aca 01:11:325 creo q se escucha mejor
01:48:356 (1,1) - aqui no se mira muy bien el blanket lo arregle un poco aqui esta el code:

154,152,108356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
68,156,108590,6,0,P|96:78|181:67,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:37:575 agrega un circulo aca y empeza el spinner aqui 02:37:692 en mi opinion~
03:22:106 x:206 y:338 para que quede perfectamente en linea con el sider anterior

Normal:

00:33:825 se te olvido un whistle aqui
00:51:168 y 00:52:575 no seria mejor ponerlos uno sobre otro?
01:04:762 (3,4,5) - no seria mejor ponerlos uno sobre otros ya que se mira muy confuso y esta es la dificultad facil de tu mapa
01:44:606 (4,5,1) - ^
01:47:184 deberias de quitar este circle en mi opinion
02:07:106 (5,1) - error de distancia o es aproposito? porque en la parte anterior usaste 1.0
02:09:684 (2,3) - ^ veo que en muchas partes has usado la distancia asi nvm

Espero ayudarte en algo nazi mod~

~General~

The 3rd combo colour feels too dark, what about lighting it up a bit? It would look much better to me.

~Normal~

00:30:075 (1,2) - If I were you, I'd try to avoid stacks on the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.
00:31:950 (3,4,5) - ^ Same goes with this one, I find it pretty confusing for new players.
00:40:387 (4,1) - I think the new combo would be better on (4) and not on the next note.
00:52:106 (6,1) - Same here about the new combo.
00:52:575 (1) - I suggest you to stack this slider under (4), it would look much better to me. Obviously, fix the spacing afterwards!
01:04:762 (3,4,5) - Don't stack them like that, please. As I said before, beginners might get confused with patterns like this one.
01:06:403 (7,8) - Try to avoid stacking these as well, for the same reason I've stated above.
01:15:075 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty, place it to the center or just do something else instead.
01:24:450 (3) - This slider is partially touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit perhaps? See what can you do.
01:44:606 (4,5,1) - Again, try to avoid this kind of stacks.
01:46:012 (2,3,4) - Other stacks are probably fine but better to avoid them, but this one is a totally no from me. Consider changing it.
01:51:168 (3,4,5) - ^ Same for this, it's too hard to read for beginners.
01:56:325 (1,2) - Again, you could try to avoid stacking these.
01:57:496 (3,1) - ^ Though I think this is fine enough.
02:36:168 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza.
02:41:325 (1) - Like 01:15:075, do something to fix this issue please.
02:51:637 (5,6,1) - Again, these stacks can be confusing imo.
03:07:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Space them normally, please.
03:20:700 (4) - New combo, perhaps? I think it would fit here.

~Hard~

00:26:793 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'm sure you can improve the formation of this "star". It doesn't look so nice right now.
00:27:965 (10,1) - Switch the new combo, perhaps? It would look better and fit more to me.
00:40:856 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza, please.
01:21:637 (2) - I think adding a finish on this slider end would emphasize this part and make it sound nicer.
01:31:012 (4,6) - I'd try to avoid this small overlap between these two sliders. Also, they're touching the HP Bar a bit.
02:13:903 (3) - This slider is partially touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit perhaps? For a better looking.
02:17:418 (6,7) - These sliders are not perfectly aligned to each other, I suggest you to fix this.

Great map as always, mancuso. Keep it up! :3

Gracias Gero!! Fue de ayuda

Oh.. Gracias por el mod .


Unexpected mod! . Thanks a lot Andrea, sorry for deny a lot of stuff in Normal, your point of view is coherent but I think that mine fits better here, in this low level Normal, hope you can understand me

Updated!!

Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue. Only suggestions.

Normal

Sinthetically in this modding I suggest you to unstack all stacked notes and add some claps on sliderticks. And also to change some pattern that may be confusing for newbie players.

00:30:075 (1,2) - I'd avoid to stack objects in the easiest diff in the mapset because they are hard to read for a newbie player
00:31:950 (3,4) - ^
00:41:325 (1,2) - ^ (I suggest you something like this)
00:51:168 (4,6) - Ok, I know that this is for spacing but the overlap is a bit strange
01:04:762 (3,4,5) - I strongly suggest you to change this, it's unreadable for newbies!
01:06:403 (7,8) - You know
01:24:918 - You should add a soft-slidertick and add a clap here 01:24:918 because it misses a clap. Or in alternative you can change the slider and use another rhythm
01:26:793 - The same ^
01:28:668 - ^
01:28:200 (2) - Move the end of the slider 1 grid up for a better blanket
01:35:700 (1) - I don't know... Instead of a finish I'd silence the end of the spinner
01:44:606 (4,5,1) - Unreadable for newbies...
01:56:325 (1,2) - What? This is odd and cunfusing for a newbie
02:06:637 (4) - I'm not sure about this note, I'd remove it
02:20:700 (3,4,5) - You know
02:47:418 (4,5) - ^
02:51:637 (5,6,1) - ^
03:09:450 (3,4) - ^

Hard

00:03:356 (5) - Try a ctrl+g here?
00:12:028 (3,4) - Actually this is ugly, make something like this!
00:16:715 (3) - Try ctrl+g. I'm not sure about this
01:00:778 (2) - Put the final sliderpoint in 176|116 in order to make a perfect simmetry
01:02:653 (5) - 256|280? It's better imo
01:20:700 (1,2) - I'm sure you can blanket them better
01:28:668 - Add a clap on this slidertick and also in 01:29:606
01:31:715 (5) - Isn't this supposed to be in 256|112 under the previous note?
01:35:817 (1) - The same of normal with this spinner
01:42:731 (3) - Ctrl+g?
01:58:200 (1) - This sounds really odd...
02:08:043 (3) - Move final sliderpoint in 432|292 to make a perfect blanket
02:30:778 (2) - 267|296. Move here the slider, it's better imo
02:36:168 (2) - Ctrl+g. If you do this, then do it on the following slider too
02:54:918 - You know. Add a clap here, and here 02:55:856
02:58:668 (1) - Not symmetrical
03:00:075 (5) - ^
03:02:418 - Clap. And here 03:03:356

Good map! Take my star and good luck for ranking :]

Hello, whole my mod is just suggestions, some of them maybe nazi so skip them freely
General:

Normal:
00:20:231 (3,4) - make this nicer? http://puu.sh/2gzRM http://puu.sh/2gzSU
00:30:075 (1,2) - this stacks on easiest diff, eh...
00:31:950 (3) - I don't hear any sound from this note, add whistle?
00:36:403 (5) - this can look better with some interact with 00:37:575 (1) - http://puu.sh/2gAag
00:42:028 (1) - remove bonus sound? http://puu.sh/2gAhF
01:04:762 (3,4,5) - this compressed spot for easiest diff in mapset looks not so fitting
01:44:606 (4,5,1) - ^
01:57:496 (3,1) - ^ I mean this is easiest diff not just normal
02:07:106 (5,1) - and so on, if you decide to change this, you can find such spots by yourself
01:06:403 (7,8) - I wrote about this but I guess I'll skip such stacks
01:11:325 (1,1) - +1 beat to recovery?
02:37:575 (1,1) - ^
01:20:700 (3) - some nazi here http://puu.sh/2gAwo
01:32:418 (2,3) - blankets? http://puu.sh/2gAKw http://puu.sh/2gAKW

Hard:
OD+1 or+2 @Garven style@
00:13:668 (3,5,1) - make this blanket? http://puu.sh/2gB5N
00:52:106 (6) - this look so oh offscreen\offgrid I mean
02:18:590 (1,2) - try blanket here? http://puu.sh/2gBfy
so good diff

Sorry, can't propound anything with hitsounds, my headphones is kinda in bad shape now
That's all, Good Luck!

Yo

[Normal]
* AR +1?

01:01:950 (3) - Using whistle at repeating slider makes sounds worse in my ear. Try use drum-additions with finish
01:31:481 (4,1) - For more beginner-friendly, remove (1) and add 1 repeating slider for (4)
01:47:418 (1) - Move to X:460 and Y:236 for better flows (nazi). Also, remove new combo, since you add new combo every 2 bars
01:58:200 (1) - ^
02:00:075 (3) - New combo, since you add new combo every 2 bars
02:28:669 (5) - Use drum-additions with whistle at end slider. You probably forgot
02:45:075 (1) - Stack with (4) for better looking? (nazi)


[Hard]
01:00:075 (1,2) - Make a pattern like this one? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/652166
01:52:106 (6,1) - Fix this spacing. This spacing are too close compared with others
02:30:075 (1) - Use drum-additions at head slider
02:57:965 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for better flow?


Good luck~

[General]
you should add a silent-sliderslide for the quiet parts of the song (like the beginning). download link
offset 65 is much more accurate than your current offset. make sure to resnap all notes and the kiai times.

[Normal]
00:20:231 (3) - it would sound nice to add a whistle to the end of this slider due to the vocals being high pitched.
01:47:418 (1) - Remove the random NC here.
02:01:950 (4) - add one more node to this slider at x:424 y:284. It curves it a bit more drastically and makes it look better in my opinion.
02:28:200 (4,5) - there should be a whistle on (4) and on the start and end of the slider.
02:58:200 (3) - Whistle at the end of this slider

[Hard]
01:11:197 (1) - according to the vocals, this spinner should start 1/4 later on the white tick.
01:24:440 (1) - Make the middle node a red one. it makes this slider look neater and sexier~
01:54:450 (2) - remove the NC from this slider. it looks weird to have a random one note combo in the map.
02:28:200 (1) - There should be a drum whistle at the end of this slider.

that's it for now. nice job!