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Shuki Levy - The Super Mario Bros. Super Show!

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Chewin
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Chewin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 2 aprile 2013 at 19:29:11

Artist: Shuki Levy
Title: The Super Mario Bros. Super Show!
Tags: Andrea Osuplayer111 RLC happy30 Skystar Amamiya Yuko Nemis Lanturn Nold nold_1702 Stefan
BPM: 198,1
Filesize: 5770kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea's style (4,97 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Chewin's style (5 stars, 194 notes)
  3. happy30's style (5 stars, 166 notes)
  4. Lanturn's style (2,26 stars, 54 notes)
  5. Nemis' style (5 stars, 252 notes)
  6. Nold's style (5 stars, 247 notes)
  7. RLC's style (5 stars, 209 notes)
  8. Skystar's style (5 stars, 231 notes)
  9. Stefan's style (3,49 stars, 66 notes)
Download: Shuki Levy - The Super Mario Bros. Super Show!
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REDOWNLOAD THE MAPSET. 03/28/2013 .MP3 CHANGED.
Small project with this fun song owo
I hope you will enjoy it.

Lanturn: Done
Stefan: Done
Andrea: Done
RLC: Done
Chewin: Done
Nold: Done
Happy30: Done
Skystar: Done
Nemis: Done

SPOILER
Hey paisanos! It's the Super Mario Brothers Super Show!
We're the Mario Brothers, and plumbing's our game
We're not like the others who get all the fame
If your sink is in trouble, you can call us on the double
We're faster than the others, you'll be hooked on the Brothers Unh!
H-hooked on the Brothers
Gimme gimme, gimme gimme
Yo, you're in for a treat, so hang on to your seat
Get ready for adventure and remarkable feats
You'll meet Koopas, the Troopas, the Princess, and the others
Hangin' with the plumbers, you'll be hooked on the brothers, to the brink!
Unh! Unh!
I say a h-h-h-h-hooked on the brothers!
The brothers!
The brothers!
Last edited by Chewin , edited 25 times in total.
Lally
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Lally
\o3o/ first <3
Mirage
627 posts
Joined May 2011
Mirage
pls
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Can I take part on the Map?
inb4 no
MillhioreF
Pro Tester
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Joined July 2011
MillhioreF
respect the classics D:
Leader
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Leader
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)/
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
forgot to post D:
Chewin
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Chewin
hi darling ~
happy30
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happy30
http://puu.sh/2gs8M ---

feel free to change the diff name
Chewin
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Chewin
Naaisu, added <3 waiting for amamiya and nold ><
Skystar
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Skystar
http://puu.sh/2htLY
nyaaa~
Andrea
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Andrea
~Lanturn's style~
  1. 00:24:099 (2) - This slider looks ugly compared to the rest of the difficulty, make it like other perhaps for a better looking?
  2. 00:27:430 (1) - Add a finish to this circle and remove the whistle to emphasize more with the music change.
  3. 00:54:051 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza, it will follow your pattern even more.
~happy30's style~
13 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them, check AIMod for more info.
  1. 00:06:836 (6) - New combo due to the slowdown, that would make it easier to read.
  2. 00:07:593 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards since it won't be needed.
  3. 00:14:407 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing doesn't seem so good to me, try make it this way.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:20:768 (3) - Stack it under the previous note perhaps? Would look nice I think.
  5. 00:24:553 (2) - Stack it under the previous slider end perhaps? Same as I said above, for a better look.
  6. 00:26:673 (4,1,2) - This anti-jump feels too random compared to the rest of the map. Move these two circles somewhere else perhaps?
  7. 00:40:756 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
  8. 00:41:059 (2) - And add it here so players can read the change of spacing easily.
~Chewin's style~
2 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them, check AIMod for more info.
  1. 00:11:076 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you try to keep the spacing consistent here, it doesn't look so good right now to me, try this way.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:253 (4,1) - New combo should go on (4) and not on (1), since the spacing changes from that note actually.
  3. 00:21:222 (3) - The whistle on the slider body doesn't really fit imo, remove it perhaps?
  4. 00:26:826 (1,2) - I don't like this overlap and how you spaced this pattern, I'd prefer if you make it like this.
    SPOILER
~Nemis' style~
3 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them, check AIMod for more info.
  1. 00:15:165 (7,1) - You should add the new combo on (7) actually and not on (1), since the spacing begins to change from that circle actually.
  2. 00:31:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern it's way too confusing to read, please make the spacing consistent.
  3. 00:37:728 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a fix to avoid this problem.
~RLC's style~
22 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them, check AIMod for more info.
  1. 00:35:002 (3,1) - This anti-jump confused me a lot even though there's a new combo here, could you try to move it somewhere? It would help a lot imo.
  2. 00:35:153 - It also feels you're missing a note here, lyrics suggests to add one.
~Skystar's style~
  1. 00:15:013 (5) - This slider sounds pretty bad here and doesn't seem to follow much the lyrics or the song. Try to make it this way.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:739 (1,2,3,4) - Never overlap streams under a slider, that's just wrong and unreadable, move them somewhere else.
  3. 00:39:545 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, make them this way to fix it a bit at least.
    SPOILER
Hope this can help all of you, great map over there.
Lanturn
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Lanturn

Andrea wrote:

~Lanturn's style~
  1. 00:24:099 (2) - This slider looks ugly compared to the rest of the difficulty, make it like other perhaps for a better looking? Alright. I agree it does stick out a bit.
  2. 00:27:430 (1) - Add a finish to this circle and remove the whistle to emphasize more with the music change. Changed but lowered the volume of the finish. Its a bit loud left as is.
  3. 00:54:051 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza, it will follow your pattern even more. Sounds good, thanks
Also lowered the volume on some of the normal hits.

Thanks Andrea

Code
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Source:
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Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
http://puu.sh/2i7MZ

Huge apologize for my big big delayyy :(
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Nice how I got ignored. A 'no' would do it too but yeah. :P
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin

nold_1702 wrote:

http://puu.sh/2i7MZ

Huge apologize for my big big delayyy :(
awesome added, thanks ♥

Stefan wrote:

Nice how I got ignored. A 'no' would do it too but yeah. :P
I just wonder why the hell you want to make a guest for me since you hate me too much lol.
I'd be glad if you made for me a Normal diff, anyways. Well, it's a yes.
If I like it, I will add it.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
starrr
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
SPOILER
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Tags:Andrea Osuplayer111 RLC happy30 Skystar Amamiya Yuko Nemis Lanturn Nold nold_1702 Stefan
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104,264,34093,2,0,L|196:304,1,90,0|2,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
272,324,34699,6,0,P|336:336|416:260,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,35911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,36213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,96,36516,2,0,B|128:132|148:180|148:180|168:228|140:268,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,37728,5,0,1:0:0:0:
340,268,38031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,38333,2,0,P|464:260|404:200,1,180,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,39545,6,0,P|188:64|119:119,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,200,40453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,284,40756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,176,41362,1,2,0:3:0:0:
324,344,41968,6,0,B|356:288|428:296|428:296|436:232,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,42876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,164,43179,2,0,B|275:106|275:106|347:114|379:58,1,180,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
460,220,44391,6,0,P|444:304|360:328,2,180,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
332,92,46208,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,172,46814,5,4,1:0:0:0:
84,272,47268,2,0,P|124:308|204:316,1,135,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,48025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,316,48328,2,0,P|391:308|431:276,1,90,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,49236,6,0,P|356:64|272:84,1,180,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,50448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,292,51045,2,0,P|224:320|260:316,1,90,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,51643,6,0,P|297:216|346:307,2,180,8|0|2,0:3|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,328,53446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,172,54051,22,0,B|200:80|200:80|256:144|256:144|312:80|312:80|336:172,1,360,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,220,55563,2,0,P|372:248|328:256,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56470,12,0,58288,0:0:0:0:
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin
Finally, mapset finished! Thank you stefan and all guesters!
Moved to pending and ready for mod ><
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~Stefan's style~
  1. 00:33:791 (2) - This clap sounds out of place, use the drum hitsounds like you did before instead? Sounds much better.
  2. 00:38:333 (3) - For this one, too.
  3. 00:40:756 (3) - And so on, I suggest you drum hitsounds.
  4. 00:46:814 (1) - This finish sounds too loud compared to the rest, I think switching it to soft would be better.
  5. 00:56:470 (1) - Add a whistle to emphasize the end of the song.
~Nold's style~
4 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them correctly, check AIBat for for info.
  1. 00:14:105 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't understand the sense of this new combo spam, I suggest you making them this way.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:345 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down to fix this issue, please.
  3. 00:20:314 (2) - This slider is almost off-screen, move it up to fix this issue, please.
  4. 00:23:645 (2,1) - Spacings feels a bit too high here, make it this way instead? Much better to play.
    SPOILER
  5. 00:26:522 (1) - Remove this new combo here, it's not needed.
  6. 00:26:976 (1) - Same for this one, it's useless.
  7. 00:40:756 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down to fix this issue, please.
  8. 00:45:905 (1) - This slowdown doesn't really make much sense to me, I prefer if you change it.
  9. 00:49:236 (1) - I'm sure this slider is a mistake, change it to a circle, it's much better.
  10. 00:55:714 (1,1,1,1,1) - Again, unneeded new combo spam.
Good luck :3
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