1. Hard (4,64 stars, 481 notes)
2. Kyo's (5 stars, 409 notes)
3. Normal (2,57 stars, 144 notes)

fufe wrote:

Hard
Consider mini breaks after first and second combo. Though failing from drain rate at this point is no big deal so whatever.
01:38:08 (1) - This section is a Drain rate trap DEATH trap. One '100' note here and your in serious trouble. Doesnt help that theres a deathstream right after but thats a make or break, win or die thing anyway.
I had some players play this map and just one failed on the "trap" in his first time, buit hey, it's a hard, so at least something hard should be there D:
00:59:63 (1,1,2) - compare with 01:01:74 (7,8,9) fixed
-also. new combo choice feels wierd here for me. i would do...
00:59:84 (1) - no new combo
01:01:32 (6) - new combo
01:02:59 (1) - no new combo
01:03:01 (2) - new combo
01:03:86 (4) - no new combo
01:04:70 (1) - new combo
...just as an example
I know, but it's kinda hard to choose a criteria for a new combo in these cases... >.< anyway, all players that i watched playing the maps didn't feel so annoyed by those combo numberings
The main things that trip me up are new combos stacked under old ones and these wierd single clap new combos.
if 01:06:39 (1) - gets its own combo then it kinda sounds like 01:08:08 (4) - should have its own combo also. I see that its combo'd to lyrics but it just doesnt seem to always make sense on the field to me.
I know, but it's the same thing as above >.<
IN THE END: its your call and your style, I dont even consider myself a combo expert. This is just my take on it.
01:56:88 (1,2,3) - finishes?
02:03:65 (1,2,3) - ^ if u so choose
02:10:41 (1,2,3) - ^ added some
03:15:27 (2,3,4) - this is a jump right? i think they have to start as a new combo to be rankable. Not certain.
Just watch James or Al-Azif maps, then tell me xD

mrtn wrote:

offset 1741

[normal]
im not a big fan of speed changes in normals, but it's allowed i guess
you are using many 1/4s which are pretty fast, im not sure if it's not too hard for normal. (ex: 02:37:03 (3,4,5))
remove all the useless timing sections (from the part where there is no mapping)
Ok, i replaced those 3 beats with a slider (but i won't for the double ones) and i made some cleaning for the timing sections

[hard]
no problems here :p

[kyo's]
01:11:15 (1) - this spinner isn't allowed (auto+2000 rule ) Fixed
01:18:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too confusing imo. Nah, I saw more confusing things in osu, anyway i'll keep that in mind
02:27:53 - reinsert break Done

sweet map . starred for priority