1. vs. Byakuran (4.57 stars, 163 notes)
2. vs. Genkishi (3.67 stars, 129 notes)

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Why the (first) Kiai Time section ends so suddenly? If ye ask me, it should end until 01:17:53 or something. {JInxy edited. I felt the kiai was a tad too long.}

[Soft Flame]
I don't like it, it's too similar to Hard. You could try upping Circle size, flipping horizontally the whole map, and lowering down the Slider velocity. I think. {first 2 done, velocity is ok to me}

[Hard Flame]
01:21:02 (1) - Finish? That's the only thing I can find. {I did, but it was in Normal instead of soft.}

Cool map, though some sliders look ugly. {OMG NO WAI. Changed some sliders.} Starred anyway.

tieff wrote:

Firts: Love Reborn.
Second: Nice BG
Also... Maybe decrease volume?
And too many hitsound in both diff.

[Soft Flame]
01:02:732 (4) - I think this slider should end here 01:02:938 {Edited it differently.}
01:17:527 (1) - I think slider must return here 01:17:938 here 01:18:349 and end here 01:18:760 Nope.

[Hard Flame]
This diff need moar lesbian cosplayers.Wat.
Also you may add here evil jumps and streams. Nope.
00:12:595 (3) - Up 2 grid. (Lvl 3 grid) Why?
00:12:801 (4) - ^ Why?
00:15:266 (1) - I think slider must return here 00:15:472 here 00:15:677 here 00:15:883 here 00:16:088 here and end here 00:16:499. Also you can add note here 00:16:602 Nope.
00:48:143 (7) - Not sure about this, but maybe new combo? Not changed for personal and anime reasons.

Starred.

mrtn wrote:

timing seems fine to me.

[soft flame]
reinsert all breaks
00:08:89 (2,1) - this can be confusing for avarage players

[hard flame]
reinsert all breaks
replace some of the repeating sliders with notes to make it harder {Not done yet}
01:03:86 (?) - add note here
01:03:97 (?) - add note here
01:04:17 (?) - add note here
01:04:38 (?) - add note with finish here {I dont really know why to do this.}
nice map starred.

WyndII wrote:

hehe xD

I can't mod so well coz of mouse getting pwned.

Soft Flame
00:09:71 (1,2) - move 1 grid to the left lol
00:46:70 (2,4) - whistles?
00:48:14 (7) - and this XD
00:51:63 (3) - finish?
00:54:92 (3) - ^
01:07:66 (1,2,3) - move it 2 tiny grid down. make sure 01:07:86 (2) - is aligned with 01:08:48 (4) -
01:09:10 (6) - align with 01:08:69 (5) - check spacing

Hard Flame
00:25:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - maybe move it liek this
00:25:12 (1,4,8) - add whistle sounds? XD
01:17:52 (1,3,5,7) - whistles?

Nice Beatmap!!! GJ GJ XD

animask wrote:

[Soft Flame]
00:43:21 (6) - hitsound
00:55:33 (4) - align with 3?
The skip lag buuurns So true.

[Hard Flame]
00:08:69 (1) - a note before the offset? idk That IS the note before the offset.
00:20:19 (6) - this slider for normal and hard? at least make it two sliders or something...idk...something harder
Dunno if its harder, turned it into 3 sliders.
Now that I think about it...you copied stuff from normal...

tom800510 wrote:

i feel some notes really weird.

Solf flame:
00:15:266(1.2) sounds bad
00:25:129(1) move it start at 00:25:335
00:30:061(1.2) try delete (2) and move (1) start at 00:31:910 {????}
00:48:143(7) little weird
01:14:451(1) start at 00:14:657 is better to me
01:17:534(1) hit the sounds at 01:17:534, 01:17:945, 01:18:356, 01:18:767.


Both D.

Hard flame:
00:15:266(1) i guess its better to hit on 00:15:472, 00:15:883, 00:16:294, 00:16:705
00:30:061(1.2) try delete (2) and move (1) start at 00:31:910
01:02:732(4) try move it to 01:03:143 and add 2 circles.(01:02:732, 01:02:938)

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i am sure it will sound good after those change.
but just suggestions, up to you