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Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line

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HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 14 agosto 2009 at 5.51.29

Artist: Takahashi Hitomi
Title: Candy Line
Source: Gintama 4th Ending
Tags: Hitomi Takahashi Candy Line Jpop Gintama Anime
BPM: 128
Filesize: 16557kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Armin's Normal~ (2,88 stars, 199 notes)
  2. Hard (4,36 stars, 351 notes)
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line (no video)
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Neeew Map! This time it's one of Gintama endings, Candy Line. I'm actually mapping this as a Hitomi Takahashi fan, not a Gintama fan, infact this is the full version of the song with the official PV. If you can, play it with the video, it's lovely.
Thanks Armin for your diff :3

Now, some rambling for the modders:
I have to say this wasn't easy to map for me. It's quite "different" so I decided to use a different mapping style for this one. I used only linear sliders, a lot of kiai time, a lot of hitsounds, and a LOT of x2 bpm timing sections. Also, the spacing is doubled in these timing sections, so these parts will be all jumpy, but I know it and it was intended.
After a first version of [Hard] that no one liked, I decided to remap it a bit, and this is what came out.
Now go and MOD!! :3

Changelog:
27/06/09
-Added Armin's Normal~
-Changed video offset to -9100
-Changed song offset to 8356
-Moved in pending
28/06/09
-Yumiko's fixes on Hard
15/07/09
-Luxary's fixes on Hard
17/07/09
-tieff's fixes on Hard
-Updated Armin's Normal~ with all fixes
-WyndII's fixes on Hard
-James2250's fixes on Hard
20/07/09
-Updated Armin's Normal~
-mrtn's fixes on Hard
-Lizbeth's fixes on Hard
30/07/09
-animask's fixes
-Other minor fixes on both diffs
14/08/09
-Breeze, Mafiamaster, fartownik and Symbolic's fixes on both diffs.
Last edited by HarryOrunitia , edited 20 times in total.
Armin
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Armin
A me piace la Hard: bravissimo! *_*
Anche se è nel graveyard (nel caso decidessi di riprendere a mapparla) ti metto una stella
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

Armin wrote:

A me piace la Hard: bravissimo! *_*
Anche se è nel graveyard (nel caso decidessi di riprendere a mapparla) ti metto una stella
Aaw grazie mille :3
Comunque ci sto ancora lavorando, appena la finisco la faccio sgraveyardare e la sposto in pending!
Armin
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Armin
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Armin
Neeeew difficulty :D

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line (HarryOrunitia) [Armin's Normal~].osu
Yumiko
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Yumiko
Armin's Normal

00:36:24 (3) - anche se il ds non mi da errore, avvicinalo di due quadretti al (2)
01:44:21 (6,1) - fuori dallo schermo, cerca di aggiustarli
01:59:68 (1) - avvicinalo al 3 con il ds
02:39:29 (1) - fuori dallo schermo
02:45:62 (1) - troppo lontano dall'(1)
02:51:48 (3) - (nazi) avvicinalo leggermente al (2) con il ds


Hard

00:36:24 (3) - (nazi) spostalo un quadretto in basso (e uno a sinistra)
00:45:62 (2) - (nazi) lo sposterei due quadretti a destra...
00:46:55 (4) -... e questo due a sinistra, in modo che ci sia la stessa distanza tra 1, 2, 3 e 4. Nel caso li hai messi apposta così ignora questi due "consigli" xD
01:07:18 (4) - lo allontanerei un pò di più dal (3)
01:26:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi) un quadretto a sinistra
01:38:82 (4) - (nazi) avvicinalo leggermente al (3) usando il ds e sposta i cerchi successivi di conseguenza
01:50:07 (1) - lo allontanerei un pò dal due
01:53:82 (7) - se non fosse per il fatto che il suo suono è piuttosto basso, credo che suonerebbe un pò male. Prova a togliere la ripetizione e magari ad allungare semplicemente lo slider
02:26:40 (1) - toglierei il new combo qui
02:26:87 (1) - lo toglierei anche qui, ma è solo un consiglio
02:30:38 (1) - idem qui (sono solo suggerimenti D:)
02:39:29 (1) - andrebbe allontanato un pò dal 4, però poi non sarebbe più al centro dei 4 circles, vedi un pò tu come modificarlo (e se farlo)
02:44:21 (1) - andrebbe allontanato anche questo dall'(1), puoi provare a distanziare maggiormente entrambi l'uno dall'altro
03:17:96 (1) - idem qui

Starred ^^
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

Yumiko wrote:

Hard

00:36:24 (3) - (nazi) spostalo un quadretto in basso (e uno a sinistra) Fixed by turning off Grid Snap
00:45:62 (2) - (nazi) lo sposterei due quadretti a destra... Fixed
00:46:55 (4) -... e questo due a sinistra, in modo che ci sia la stessa distanza tra 1, 2, 3 e 4. Nel caso li hai messi apposta così ignora questi due "consigli" xD Fixed
01:07:18 (4) - lo allontanerei un pò di più dal (3) Fixed
01:26:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi) un quadretto a sinistra Fixed
01:38:82 (4) - (nazi) avvicinalo leggermente al (3) usando il ds e sposta i cerchi successivi di conseguenza Fixed
01:50:07 (1) - lo allontanerei un pò dal due Not fixed
01:53:82 (7) - se non fosse per il fatto che il suo suono è piuttosto basso, credo che suonerebbe un pò male. Prova a togliere la ripetizione e magari ad allungare semplicemente lo slider Fixed
02:26:40 (1) - toglierei il new combo qui Not fixed
02:26:87 (1) - lo toglierei anche qui, ma è solo un consiglio Fixed
02:30:38 (1) - idem qui (sono solo suggerimenti D:) Not fixed
02:39:29 (1) - andrebbe allontanato un pò dal 4, però poi non sarebbe più al centro dei 4 circles, vedi un pò tu come modificarlo (e se farlo) Fixed
02:44:21 (1) - andrebbe allontanato anche questo dall'(1), puoi provare a distanziare maggiormente entrambi l'uno dall'altro Fixed
03:17:96 (1) - idem qui Not Fixed
Thanks a lot for modding!! :3
Luxary
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Luxary
Mod in Italian D:

Offset: 1559

[Armin's Normal~]

00:08:35 (1) - Suona un po male, sostituiscilo con un beat unico se puoi :|
00:14:44 (6) - Come sopra, sostituiscilo con uno slider che parte a 00:14:44 e finisce a 00:14:91
00:36:24 (3) - Un "Rimbalzo" a 00:36:598, lo spinner inizia a 00:37:18 e finisce a 00:40:46
01:08:35 (1) - Qui va un beat, lo spinner fallo iniziare 1/8 dopo (ovvero a 01:08:41) e fallo finire a 01:10:46
01:10:93 (1) - Beat qui
03:20:54 (3) - Il senso della forma di questo slider? o.o Ovviamente è una cosa totalmente inutile, ma potresti correggerlo? XD
03:21:01 (1) - Fallo finire a 03:23:12

[Hard]

00:14:44 (8) - Sostituiscilo con uno slider che parte a 00:14:44 e finisce a 00:15:15
01:17:73 (1) - Clap qui, o almeno modifica gli hitsound in modo che le note si sentano, o sarebbero da levare
01:37:18 (8) - Rimuovilo
01:37:41 (1) - Quindi, sposta questo a 01:37:18
01:37:88 (2) - Spostalo a 01:37:65
01:38:35 (3) - Spostalo a 01:37:12
01:38:82 (4) - Rimuovilo e metti un nuovo slider a 01:38:59 (che finirà a 01:38:82)
01:47:73 (9) - Rimuovilo
02:00:27 (3,4,5,6) - Confondono, aggiustali in modo che il giocatore abbia la visione chiara
02:01:79 (1) - Fallo iniziare a 02:01:55
02:19:595 - Questa sezione serve per il suono dello spinner ma ha tarato 2x di BPM, correggi

Ovviamente sei libero di lasciare alcune cose come sono, i miei sono solo consigli :D

Starred!
HarryOrunitia
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Armin
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line (HarryOrunitia) [Armin's Normal~].osu
tieff
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tieff
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Armin
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Armin

tieff wrote:

Try 8 348 ms offset.

[Armin's Normal]
00:14:44 (6) - Htsounds? Fixed!
00:35:30 (1,2,3) - Spacing? Fixed!
01:07:17 (2,3) - ^ I don't see spacing problems o.o
01:23:11 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing. Fixed!
02:18:19 (1) - Finish instead whistle. Fixed!
02:22:87 (4) - Whistle. Fixed!
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line (HarryOrunitia) [Armin's Normal~].osu
HarryOrunitia
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tieff wrote:

Try 8 348 ms offset. Done, sounds good!

[Hard]
02:10:81 (1) - This note should be here 02:10:87. (1/8, yellow tick) Done
02:15:50 (4) - New combo. Done
02:26:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice whistles. :D
02:47:61 (7) - Delete note. Done

Nice map, starred. Thanks :3
Thanks for modding!
WyndII
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WyndII
[Armin's Normal]
02:14:03 (2,3) - nudge forward
nothing else

[Hard]
02:12:03 (2,3,4) - nudge forward[press k] (check spacing)
02:26:98 (4) - not snapped well [grid]
02:39:28 (1) - please make this slider look like its diagonally straight with 02:38:34 (2,4)
03:07:87 (6) - spacing
03:48:19 (4) - "unrankable slider overlap"
04:02:254 - remove break please
01:30:61 (3) - check alignment and spacing
01:31:08 (4) - ^
01:31:55 (5) - ^ ( just following your pattern in 01:29:67 (1,2) :D )
very HARD map :o

stars
James2250
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super nazi modding ftw!

armin's normal:
00:33:19 (1) - move forward 1/2 then shorten 1/2
lots of spinners but not a bad thing :P

hard:
00:10:69 (4) - take a repeat off?
00:14:44 (8) - ^
00:21:94 (8) -line endpoint up with 4
00:51:00 (4) -align end of slider with start?
01:12:33 (5) -align with 1?
02:16:43 (3) - extend 1/4?
03:04:12 (3) - take a repeat off?
3:23:348 this break is slightly too long for me but ok
03:48:19 (4) - remove from under previous notes?
why is there a break at the end of the song? no need for it :P

very nicely made map :) pretty much everything I said is just my own suggestions of things u could do
have a star :P
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia
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James2250 wrote:

hard:
00:10:69 (4) - take a repeat off?
00:14:44 (8) - ^ These two are following the music, not the voice, it sounds a bit weird without repeats D:
00:21:94 (8) -line endpoint up with 4 Fixed
00:51:00 (4) -align end of slider with start? Done
01:12:33 (5) -align with 1? Done
02:16:43 (3) - extend 1/4? Done
03:04:12 (3) - take a repeat off? Done
3:23:348 this break is slightly too long for me but ok I know, but I really didn't know how to map that part :'(
03:48:19 (4) - remove from under previous notes? Already fixed :3
why is there a break at the end of the song? no need for it :P Again, it's for the video :3

very nicely made map :) pretty much everything I said is just my own suggestions of things u could do
have a star :P Thanks! :D
Thanks for modding :D
Armin
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WyndII

02:14:03 (2,3) - nudge forward "Fixed"

James2250

00:33:19 (1) - move forward 1/2 then shorten 1/2 Fixed!

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Candy Line (HarryOrunitia) [Armin's Normal~].osu
mrtn
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mrtn
try offset 7164

[armin's normal]
01:08:46 (1) - end it 1/4 earlier (01:10:46)
01:24:05 (1,1) - not enough recovery time for normal. make use there's at least a full beat distance not 1/2 beat.

[hard]
00:39:29 - insert break here or map until the next combo
01:00:61 - reinsert break
01:08:58 - ^
01:12:57 - ^
02:03:66 - ^
02:26:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - the snapping here is really weird. snap it to lvl3 grid.
02:39:99 - reinsert break
02:51:94 - insert break here or map until the next combo
03:13:74 - reinsert break
03:23:23 - reinsert break, also this break is kinda long... perhaps try mapping a part of it?
03:58:26 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combos
04:02:25 - remove this break

starred
Lizbeth
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