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Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)

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Sieg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 мая 2013 г. at 20:44:08

Artist: Rammstein
Title: Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)
Tags: My Heart Burns Urban Industrial Made in Germany Till Lindemann Richard Kruspe Paul Landers Oliver Ollie Riedel Christian Flake Lorenz Christoph Doom Schneider -Bakari- Collab Collaboration
BPM: 70
Filesize: 6669kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,5 stars, 85 notes)
  2. Hard (4,36 stars, 228 notes)
  3. Normal (3,11 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)
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Mein Herz Brennt
Deni
Woah nice! You did a great job with the hitsounds in "Haunted".

Looking forward to the finished map ;)
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks Deni. It was a really hard work. :oops:
riffy
Ох, удали дифу. Она слишком секси \:D/
Topic Starter
Sieg

-Bakari- wrote:

Ох, удали дифу. Она слишком секси \:D/
давай лучше дропни пару звездочек для разгона :D
riffy
IRC mod

log
11:44 Sieg: все, идем в пендинг
11:45 Sieg: таги же
11:45 Sieg: надо подумать
11:45 -Bakari-: Тебе тэги надо?
11:45 -Bakari-: Залей мапу в пендинг, получи бесплатный мод + тэги
11:46 Sieg: да
11:46 Sieg: щаща
11:46 Sieg: название
11:46 Sieg: поправлю
11:46 -Bakari-: да
11:46 Sieg: готово :)
11:47 -Bakari-: Скоро доберусь
11:47 Sieg: отлично
11:56 -Bakari-: нпшни мап
11:57 *Sieg is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250553 Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)]
11:57 -Bakari-: whoa, let's start modding
11:58 Sieg: gogog
11:58 -Bakari-: [General]
11:58 -Bakari-: rename my easy to "Easy"
11:58 Sieg: np
11:58 -Bakari-: This mapset is half mine, so no need to credit me here
11:59 -Bakari-: nice easy, btw
11:59 *-Bakari- runs
11:59 Sieg: lol
11:59 Sieg: добавлю в дескр таб
11:59 Sieg: что он твой
11:59 -Bakari-: da
11:59 -Bakari-: bs\surprise you.png
11:59 -Bakari-: no, please :< remove it :V
11:59 Sieg: пасхалка
12:00 -Bakari-: КАУНТДАУН ВЫКЛЮЧАЙ
12:00 -Bakari-: СРОЧНАААА
12:00 Sieg: ох
12:00 -Bakari-: Голову бы отлпилил :<
12:01 -Bakari-: [Normal]
12:01 -Bakari-: AR4
12:01 Sieg: я на твоем до 3х поднял \w/
12:01 -Bakari-: НЕТ
12:01 Sieg: так что спред окей с 4
12:01 Sieg: ;_;
12:02 Sieg: okay
12:02 -Bakari-: двойка там должна быть
12:02 -Bakari-: а тут 4
12:02 Sieg: 2 4
12:02 -Bakari-: и 7
12:02 Sieg: b 7
12:02 Sieg: и 7
12:03 -Bakari-: 2 5 7
12:03 -Bakari-: разницы никакой для баланса
12:03 -Bakari-: а 4 тут вписывается лучше
12:03 Sieg: да поему разницы нет особой :)
12:04 Sieg: ну пусть так
12:04 -Bakari-: 00:05:379 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ваш комбинг является неравномерным. Рассмотрите перераспределение новых комбо с целью придания им равномерности в распределении.
12:04 -Bakari-: 00:05:379 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ваш комбинг является неравномерным. Рассмотрите перераспределение новых комбо с целью придания им равномерности в распределении.
12:04 Sieg: это где
12:04 Sieg: нормал?
12:04 -Bakari-: да
12:05 Sieg: думаеш стоит по дбиту?
12:05 -Bakari-: все про нормал пока что будет
12:05 -Bakari-: 00:07:094 (1,5) - свапни нк
12:05 -Bakari-: 00:12:236 (1) - убери нк
12:05 Sieg: подожди
12:05 Sieg: стоп
12:05 -Bakari-: думаю стоит чуточку ровнее
12:05 Sieg: по даунбиту тогда?
12:05 -Bakari-: да
12:05 Sieg: или так оставить
12:05 Sieg: по другому смысла мало
12:05 -Bakari-: по даунбиту давай
12:06 -Bakari-: чтоб они хоть ровно были
12:06 Sieg: мне этот пробел ненравится тогда
12:06 Sieg: ну да ладно
12:06 -Bakari-: 00:28:952 (3,4,5,6,7) - тут как-тослишком много нот
12:06 -Bakari-: замени парочку слайдером
12:07 -Bakari-: песня спокойная, эти ноты не играются :<
12:07 Sieg: даа ладно
12:07 -Bakari-: + комбо на 8 нот выглядит уныло
12:07 Sieg: ну можно и слайдер
12:09 -Bakari-: ах да, попробуй слайдеры гнуть [http://puu.sh/2R46G.jpg вот так]
12:10 -Bakari-: [http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/uu242/bloodvamp13/alone-lonely-haunted-place.jpg alternative BG] [2]
12:10 Sieg: как-то неочень
12:10 Sieg: ну всмысле
12:10 Sieg: сойдет, но это лучше
12:11 -Bakari-: 01:20:808 (4) - и вот эти слайдеры меня напрягают
12:11 -Bakari-: по логике, они должны обводить что-то. но они ничего не обводят, а это малость портит флоу
12:12 Sieg: больше не будут
12:12 -Bakari-: лол
12:12 -Bakari-: и еще, удали лишние зеленые с изи
12:12 -Bakari-: хотя бы очевидно-лишние
12:13 Sieg: да это пофиг
12:13 Sieg: ну ладно
12:13 -Bakari-: и в нормале нет спиннера
12:13 -Bakari-: карта короткая
12:13 Sieg: смотри
12:13 Sieg: 01:28:951 (4,1) -
12:13 Sieg: я свапнул
12:13 -Bakari-: SS с фуллмодом легко
12:13 Sieg: чтоб было консистенси
12:14 Sieg: в харде тоже нет
12:14 Sieg: релакс мап
12:14 -Bakari-: понимаешь, в ноомале и изе по спиннеру надо
12:14 Sieg: делай фул мод первым бери тоа
12:14 Sieg: топ
12:14 -Bakari-: чтоб скор разноообразить
12:14 -Bakari-: а то реально унылый топ получится
12:14 Sieg: ладно сделаю
12:14 Sieg: тогда уж и на харде
12:15 -Bakari-: я про комбоин говорил, что его надо ровнее сделать
12:15 -Bakari-: у тебя попадаются комбо из одного-двух объектов
12:15 -Bakari-: а иногда из семи
12:16 Sieg: жизнь такая
12:16 Sieg: ты знаеш что я думаю о комбоинге
12:16 -Bakari-: да
12:17 Sieg: 02:14:379 (1) -
12:17 Sieg: спиннер отсюда
12:17 -Bakari-: ноуп
12:17 -Bakari-: 01:05:379 - 01:07:951 (S - 5%)
12:18 Sieg: там рест же, а не место чтоб что-то крутить \w/
12:18 Sieg: музыки нет а ты крутиш как дурак :3
12:18 -Bakari-: упрт мппр
12:18 Sieg: срсли
12:18 -Bakari-: из изи своруй спиннер
12:19 Sieg: в изе он слишком большой для нормала
12:19 Sieg: чем тебе с 02:14:379 (1) -
12:19 -Bakari-: укороти и своруй :D/
12:19 Sieg: ненарвится?
12:19 -Bakari-: 1/1 спиннер?
12:19 -Bakari-: рили?
12:19 Sieg: полтора
12:20 Sieg: 1.2 секунды
12:20 Sieg: авто аж 6к накручивает
12:20 Sieg: алсо
12:20 Sieg: убрал бонус
12:20 -Bakari-: /смирение
12:20 Sieg: шумноват
12:20 -Bakari-: [http://www.desktopwallpaperhd.com/wallpapers/6/2811.jpg криповатый бг] [4]
12:21 Sieg: тоже как-то
12:21 Sieg: а у нас же херц бреннт
12:21 -Bakari-: да
12:22 Sieg: ну дык
12:22 Sieg: а там нет
12:23 Sieg: к харду?
12:23 -Bakari-: da
12:23 Sieg: да
12:26 -Bakari-: Я не уснул, я ищу :D
12:26 Sieg: хуехуехуе
12:26 Sieg: окей
12:26 -Bakari-: 00:00:237 (1,2,3,4) - делитни (1) и поставь слайдеры на БЕЛЫЕ тики
12:27 -Bakari-: получится, что они начинаются с громкого бита и медленно затихают
12:27 -Bakari-: 00:02:808 - и сюда потом нотку
12:27 Sieg: ну нет же
12:27 Sieg: тут разницы нет
12:28 Sieg: потому что
12:28 Sieg: ноты играются с красного
12:28 Sieg: еслиб у меня были ноты на руках я б тебе показал, что так правильнее :3
12:30 -Bakari-: /смирение
12:30 Sieg: o3p
12:30 -Bakari-: 00:19:094 (4,5) - я уже упомянул эти слайдеры в нормале
12:31 -Bakari-: не то чтоб проблема, но можно и аккуратнее :<
12:31 Sieg: это грязный стиль
12:31 Sieg: лал
12:32 -Bakari-: грязные мапки
12:32 -Bakari-: надо наказать! ♥
12:32 *-Bakari- runs
12:32 Sieg: лалала
12:32 Sieg: дада
12:33 -Bakari-: Можно чуть больше джампов
12:33 Sieg: можно, но уже поздновато рвать паттерны
12:34 Sieg: при там
12:34 Sieg: том*
12:34 Sieg: мне нравится как части взаимодействуют
12:34 Sieg: моя поспокойнее начало твоей посложнее
12:34 Sieg: и киаи все добивают
12:35 Sieg: так круто получилось
12:35 -Bakari-: "ебанулись под конец"
12:35 Sieg: сравни с http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83537
12:35 Sieg: этим
12:35 Sieg: бтв хз почему народ там голосут за 2
12:35 Sieg: а не за 1
12:35 Sieg: хотя я тоже 2 поставил \w/
12:36 -Bakari-: А так все
12:36 -Bakari-: тэги будут в посте

We've fixed
  1. General stuff. Tags, etc..
  2. Comboing problems
  3. Spinners.
  4. Rhythm and hitsounding.
  5. Diff settings
Tags: My Heart Burns (english translated title)
Urban, Industrial (genres)
Made in Germany (album name)
Till Lindemann Richard Kruspe Paul Landers Oliver Ollie" Riedel Christian Flake Lorenz Christoph Doom Schneider (band memmbers)
-Bakari- Collab and Collaboration (it's quite clear)

Just copy this:
My Heart Burns Urban Industrial Made in Germany Till Lindemann Richard Kruspe Paul Landers Oliver Ollie Riedel Christian Flake Lorenz Christoph Doom Schneider -Bakari- Collab Collaboration
Topic Starter
Sieg
da
P A N
hi Sieg! some suggestion from #modreqs

[Hard]

00:39:665 (4,5) - move down or another place. 4 touch score and 5 a bittttt touch hp bar.

[Normal]

00:05:379 (2,3) - better -.- http://puu.sh/2R76p.jpg
code
404,248,5379,2,0,P|416:200|400:148,1,90
332,112,6236,2,0,P|317:167|333:211,1,90
407,161,7094,5,4,0:0:0:0:
^ line 3 is (1) perfect stack with 2's tail

00:25:951 (2,3,1) - what about http://puu.sh/2R7bZ.jpg
01:02:379 (2,3,4) - what about http://puu.sh/2R7kx.jpg rhymth > http://puu.sh/2R7lt.jpg I think its more beautiful
code
90,178,62379,2,0,P|48:156|28:116,2,90
148,248,63665,2,0,P|156:296|140:344,2,90
184,160,64951,2,0,P|228:152|272:116,1,90
01:56:379 (6,1) - make it more blanket http://puu.sh/2R7tY.jpg
01:58:094 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/2R7vb.jpg

[Easy]

omg nothing to say

GL Sieg :D
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thank you P A N
All accepted. useful as always :)
ztrot
04:38 Sieg: thanks :3
04:38 ztrot: you gonna be around for a bit
04:38 Sieg: sure
04:39 ztrot: If possible I llike to do this via irc then post the log
04:39 Sieg: yep, it possible but i'm slow on changes so i'll fix all things leater then
04:40 Sieg: not in process i mean :3
04:40 ztrot: Easy is what we will start with, and not a problem just let me know if it was helpful and don't forget to kd me :p
04:40 Sieg: xD ofcourse
04:41 ztrot: so for easy I notice 00:19:094 (4) - is on the limit of the possible play area I would not advise that.
04:42 Sieg: yep, i have plenty of this, but i checked them all in 640x480 but anyway i'll consider to move
04:42 ztrot: 00:37:094 (2) - of course most of this is suggestive but you could center this a bit either way is fine, but I feel better that I point it out than not say anything,
04:42 ztrot: 00:37:094 (2) - of course most of this is suggestive but you could center this a bit either way is fine, but I feel better that I point it out than not say anything,
04:43 Sieg: yep
04:43 Sieg: this kind of stuff is good to polish map
04:43 ztrot: 00:38:808 (3) - while you have checked these I really don't advise that much screen movement for a easy.
04:44 ztrot: Just consider moving them to a more reasonable spot.
04:44 Sieg: okay
04:45 ztrot: 00:48:236 (1) - I feel the curve on this is a bit off it might be due to the point being so close to the start but to be honest with you, I have no idea how the new slider points work XD
04:45 ztrot: 00:48:236 (1) - I feel the curve on this is a bit off it might be due to the point being so close to the start but to be honest with you, I have no idea how the new slider points work XD
04:45 Sieg: haha
04:46 Sieg: yep i think this should be curved more
04:46 ztrot: 01:01:951 (1) - yet again this curve just feels flat to me the rest of the map has a really clean feeling yet these stick out to me.
04:46 Sieg: little*
04:46 Sieg: same ugu
04:46 ztrot: 01:08:808 (1,2) - nice line up on these two, I will also point out things I like
04:47 ztrot: no sense in being only about the bad right?
04:47 ztrot: :P
04:47 Sieg: xD
04:47 ztrot: 01:13:094 (4) - this one seems to be a bit better than the others
04:48 Sieg: btw there is lot of unsed green lines, i'll clean them later too
04:48 ztrot: in curve but almost uses the same style.
04:48 ztrot: I was gonna point those out
04:48 ztrot: but I figured you were already ontop of it.
04:48 Sieg: yep :3
04:48 ztrot: 01:22:522 (1) - sexy slider.
04:49 Sieg: thanks to peppy \w/
04:49 ztrot: 01:46:522 (3) - this is another slightly odd curve one.
04:50 ztrot: and that is all for the Easy :D
04:50 Sieg: alright :D
04:50 ztrot: Normal
04:50 ztrot: I would take this 00:02:379 (3,1) - and tighten it up a bit
04:51 ztrot: like this http://puu.sh/2R87t.jpg
04:51 Sieg: looks good
04:51 Sieg: aj skin <3
04:52 ztrot: I really have to say I'm not a huge fan of border mapping but I know it can work 00:13:094 (3,4,1) - but that just doesn't feel right to me.
04:52 ztrot: It is very subjective and I'm not saying you must change it
04:52 Sieg: yep, i see, i'll move this ones
04:52 Sieg: i know
04:53 Sieg: but if i can move this witout harm to pattern why not to do this
04:53 ztrot: yeah
04:54 Sieg: someday we will have widescreen grid :\
04:54 ztrot: 00:42:665 (3) - any possible way to get rid of that overlap
04:54 Sieg: i hope
04:54 ztrot: because clean map is really clean then that happens
04:54 ztrot: :P
04:54 Sieg: yep agreed, 2 can be rotated
04:55 Sieg: agree*
04:55 ztrot: 00:44:808 (1) - ahh mister slider is sliding on the edge :P
04:55 ztrot: again up to you of course.
04:55 Sieg: :)
04:56 ztrot: 01:07:094 no break time here?
04:56 ztrot: lol
04:56 Sieg: i just don't want to see this big circle
04:56 Sieg: break
04:56 ztrot: not sure how i got that to link
04:56 Sieg: and hp drain is low
04:57 ztrot: it won't do a circle
04:57 ztrot: it is not long enough
04:57 Sieg: arrows
04:57 ztrot: it will just stop the drain
04:57 Sieg: anyway \w/
04:57 Sieg: ehm
04:58 ztrot: 01:27:665 (3) - that is half out of the grid box
04:58 ztrot: I know peppy has made it hard to cut off
04:58 Sieg: so bad slider, yep, idk how i can do this one
04:58 ztrot: but it is better safe than sorry
04:58 ztrot: hmm
04:58 ztrot: let me see
04:59 ztrot: still a bit off for my tastes but seems to fit your style http://puu.sh/2R8hU.jpg
04:59 Sieg: nice, thanks
05:01 ztrot: man if I had more free time I would make you matching piano chords for hitsounds
05:01 ztrot: mind you it would take forever to hitsound but would sound really cool
05:01 ztrot: that is it for normal btw
05:02 Sieg: it would be nice
05:02 Sieg: i tried but i'm not a pianist, so i just did my best
05:03 Sieg: btw hard is collab but i'm allowed to make any changes
05:03 ztrot: 00:00:665 (2,3,4) - try to make these blanket more
05:05 ztrot: 00:14:379 (2,3) - blanket cops called they said make it more sexy :U
05:05 Sieg: lol
05:05 Sieg: okay
05:05 Sieg: i guess all of them 00:14:379 (2,3,4) -
05:06 ztrot: yes
05:06 ztrot: sorry
05:14 ztrot: well not much to say on the hard
05:14 Sieg: :3
05:15 ztrot: good job
05:15 Sieg: thanks
05:15 ztrot: gonna post this on the fourm thread now!
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks ztrot :D
update will come little later
updated
Topic Starter
Sieg
skin updated :o

...and hitsounds...
...and hitsounds...
P A N
lol when i refresh this forum, then the above post have more sentence appear

btw, gj Sieg your skin is very match with your song and bg

STAR !!

make SB please :D
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks P A N :oops:
yep I changed hs few times, now I hope this is final version
and sb... I'll try maybe
Hard
woah. nice skin and nice custom sounds. Hope i'll find something to mod.. :/ WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM WITH DOING SUCH AN AWESOME MAP AND LETTING SOMEONE LIKE ME MOD IT?!

DO YOU WANT ME TO LOSE MY SELF-CONFIDENCE? ... I lost it. Thanks very much. :( Here, take a star. You win. And here you have a bad mod. Good luck.

Easy

  • I don't think the finish sounds fit very well with the dark music. Think about changing that. Either this or you shouldn't overuse it. It sounds a bit awkward sometimes imo.
    Also does the whistle-sound. Especially in the beginning.
    00:44:808 (3) - consider making that slider just a tiny bit round. it would look better, i think. (example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/752747&#41;
    00:55:094 (1) - the same, i guess.
    01:05:379 - maybe add a breaktime here.

    Nothing else, sorry

Normal

  • 00:03:236 - I would delete that hitsound. Otherwise it would sound a bit awkward, because of that bell at 00:03:665
    00:13:522 - delete whistle. it sounds better imo.
    00:14:379 (2) - make this a bit more curvy, it would look better
    00:28:094 (2) - change the shape of that slider, so it fits better with 00:25:950 (2)
    00:46:522 (2,3) - make those sliders look like yin-yang. koi-fishes or.. dancing people. this pattern is already nice, though.
    01:05:379 - break here?
    01:08:808 (1,2) - this sounds a bit awkward, imo.
    01:39:665 (1,2) - same like 00:46:522
    01:44:808 (3) - give that slider a little shape

    Sometimes it sounds a bit awkward with those hitsounds. You should recheck them. Please?

Hard

  • 00:05:379 (4,5) - let those sliders swap places. it looks sad imo.
    01:05:573 - breaktime, maybe?
    01:51:451 - NC, maybe, because a new chord starts here?

    That's all... damnit. I feel insufficient.


I really love that map. I hope it gets ranked. No kudosu if my mod wasn't helpful. Thanks.


€: Goddamit. I love that map. Here, take another star.
Topic Starter
Sieg

ChivaCookie wrote:

woah. nice skin and nice custom sounds. Hope i'll find something to mod.. :/ WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM WITH DOING SUCH AN AWESOME MAP AND LETTING SOMEONE LIKE ME MOD IT?!

DO YOU WANT ME TO LOSE MY SELF-CONFIDENCE? ... I lost it. Thanks very much. :( Here, take a star. You win. And here you have a bad mod. Good luck.

oh... lol :D anyway I'm interested in any opinions and ideas :oops:

Normal

  • 00:03:236 - I would delete that hitsound. Otherwise it would sound a bit awkward, because of that bell at 00:03:665
    this is chime btw :oops: they follow piano notes in general but I'll consider to make some corrections just need more opinions on this
    00:13:522 - delete whistle. it sounds better imo.
    same^
    00:14:379 (2) - make this a bit more curvy, it would look better
    yep
    00:28:094 (2) - change the shape of that slider, so it fits better with 00:25:950 (2)
    represent another pattern so I think this one is good
    00:46:522 (2,3) - make those sliders look like yin-yang. koi-fishes or.. dancing people. this pattern is already nice, though.
    straight for variety
    01:05:379 - break here?
    yep, I think I'll do break, just need to not forget skin this annoying arrows
    01:08:808 (1,2) - this sounds a bit awkward, imo.
    indeed, I was wondering about this spot, changed
    01:39:665 (1,2) - same like 00:46:522
    yep
    01:44:808 (3) - give that slider a little shape
    that will ruin flow to 4 I think, so left for now

    Sometimes it sounds a bit awkward with those hitsounds. You should recheck them. Please?
    I'll do

Hard

  • 00:05:379 (4,5) - let those sliders swap places. it looks sad imo.
    nice as for me :P
    01:05:573 - breaktime, maybe?
    yes
    That's all... damnit. I feel insufficient.


I really love that map. I hope it gets ranked. No kudosu if my mod wasn't helpful. Thanks.


€: Goddamit. I love that map. Here, take another star.
oh Thanks ChivaCookie for stars and mod. :oops:
Thunderstorm
Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D

Some suggestions that can be ignored as well.

[Overall]
Consider to get approachcircle.png 128x128 (you have 126x)

[Easy]
Cant find anything wrong. Just one suggestion to get a break (or some), since it's easy, playing 2.15 w/ 3 sec only break can get newbies tired.

[Normal]
00:02:379 (3,1) - is that overlap really needed?
00:17:379 (1) - a bit out of the screen
00:32:808 (2) - I'd suggest to space it away since that stack don't really looks good IMO
01:56:808 (1) - a bit out of screen

[Hard]
I'd suggest to add a spinner
00:22:094 (3) - a bit out of screen
00:26:808 (5) - ^
00:28:951 (3) - ^
00:37:951 (2) - ^
01:30:879 (3) - and incoming triplet-sliders also - IMO it all totally sound out of the song. Consider to remake it.
01:59:808 (8) - broken spacing
02:01:094 (3) - ^
02:04:522 (3) - ^
02:05:379 (5) - ^
02:07:951 (3,5) - ^
If that was intended jumps, ignore that part (but it still looks weird)

That's all.
Wow, really great work with skin and custom hsounds. Good luck w/ that
Topic Starter
Sieg

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D
Hello :3

Some suggestions that can be ignored as well.

[Overall]
Consider to get approachcircle.png 128x128 (you have 126x)
fixed

[Easy]
Cant find anything wrong. Just one suggestion to get a break (or some), since it's easy, playing 2.15 w/ 3 sec only break can get newbies tired.
1 break is fine, this is slow song

[Normal]
00:02:379 (3,1) - is that overlap really needed?
yep, pretty good looking
00:17:379 (1) - a bit out of the screen
offgrid, but not offsreen, this is acceptable nowadays
00:32:808 (2) - I'd suggest to space it away since that stack don't really looks good IMO

[Hard]
I'd suggest to add a spinner
I don't have a spot in my part and Bakari decided this this is not necessary in his part, so no spinner
01:30:879 (3) - and incoming triplet-sliders also - IMO it all totally sound out of the song. Consider to remake it.
uh... I don't think they out of rhythm
01:59:808 (8) - broken spacing
02:01:094 (3) - ^
02:04:522 (3) - ^
02:05:379 (5) - ^
02:07:951 (3,5) - ^
If that was intended jumps, ignore that part (but it still looks weird)
indented jumps :3

That's all.
Wow, really great work with skin and custom hsounds. Good luck w/ that
Thanks Thunderstorm. :D
riffy

ChivaCookie wrote:

Easy

  • I don't think the finish sounds fit very well with the dark music. Think about changing that. Either this or you shouldn't overuse it. It sounds a bit awkward sometimes imo. it's up to Sieg. he did all the hitsounds
    Also does the whistle-sound. Especially in the beginning. same
    00:44:808 (3) - consider making that slider just a tiny bit round. it would look better, i think. naaah, I don't think that changing its shape will work here. I love the way how it is know, it's my style, after all.
    00:55:094 (1) - the same, i guess. same :<
    01:05:379 - maybe add a breaktime here. uguuuu

    Nothing else, sorry
Topic Starter
Sieg
longest mod ever :)
SPOILER
11:43 HeatKai: ~
11:43 Sieg: ~
11:43 Sieg: xd
11:45 HeatKai: lets start the fixing
11:45 *HeatKai is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250553 Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental) [Easy]]
11:45 Sieg: great :3 lets start
11:45 HeatKai: I dont like to break promise :3 so as I said yesterday, I'm going to mod it today~
11:46 Sieg: thanks :)
11:46 HeatKai: this song gives me goosebump hahaha
11:46 HeatKai: but it's okay w=
11:46 Sieg: hahaha
11:47 Sieg: it was so hard to find this trumpets
11:50 HeatKai: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand boom
11:50 HeatKai: i don't like how the slidertick go tick tick tick so loud lol
11:50 HeatKai: it's annoying
11:50 HeatKai: hah
11:50 Sieg: i'll think i make it -3db
11:52 HeatKai: what db? xD
11:52 Sieg: i mean quieter
11:53 Sieg: :3
11:53 HeatKai: oh haha ok :P
11:53 Sieg: db = decibels :3 nvm
11:55 HeatKai: wtf ;_; I saw the video at youtube
11:55 HeatKai: his voice is so scary
11:56 Sieg: lol, yes, definitely
11:56 HeatKai: I shouldn't watch it ;_;
11:56 Sieg: xD
11:57 Sieg: you so funny :)
11:57 HeatKai: wait am I? lol
11:57 Sieg: lol
11:59 HeatKai: 00:06:236 (5) - this should not have a whistle here
11:59 HeatKai: if you want the hitsound to be fit,you must find a lower pitch bell hitsound
12:00 HeatKai: 00:05:379 (4) - this part the piano pitch is higher then 00:06:236 (5) - this so if both whistle it doesn't fit :c
12:00 Sieg: hm, maybe just lower volume
12:00 HeatKai: well okay to do every circle that you do like that ^
12:01 HeatKai: 00:13:094 (5) -
12:01 Sieg: becuse most of this whistles follows low pitch piano
12:02 Sieg: fixed both
12:02 HeatKai: 00:19:094 (4,5) - i dont really think the hitsound here fits the music xD
12:03 Sieg: yes this one is not :3
12:03 HeatKai: lol
12:03 HeatKai: then fix it
12:03 Sieg: 00:19:094 (4) - replced with a clap
12:03 HeatKai: much better
12:05 Sieg: i hope i'm not failed with that idea of making unsolid volume
12:05 HeatKai: you mean the changes of volume?
12:05 Sieg: yep
12:06 HeatKai: well the only thing that annoys me is the tick
12:06 HeatKai: others fine for me
12:06 Sieg: :)
12:06 HeatKai: 01:27:665 (4) - lower the volume
12:07 Sieg: 20% would be nice there
12:09 HeatKai: 01:32:808 (3) - change this to finish for consistent hitsound pattern
12:09 Sieg: changed yes
12:10 HeatKai: ok change all of that at the other diffs too ^
12:10 Sieg: sure
12:13 HeatKai: after you're done call me again here
12:13 Sieg: okay
12:19 Sieg: done, also tick sound lowered
12:25 HeatKai: oh you resubmit?
12:25 HeatKai: wait me redl
12:26 Sieg: yep
12:35 HeatKai: tururuurru
12:35 Sieg: tratatata
12:35 Sieg: :3
12:35 HeatKai: later you savelog please, I restart osu just now :c
12:35 HeatKai: lost everything
12:35 Sieg: okay
12:37 HeatKai: 01:01:951 (1,2,3) - do it like this so it get the end before break at the middle looks better ;3
12:37 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762285
12:37 Sieg: yep, nice
12:39 HeatKai: 01:22:522 (1) - at the end of the slider would sound better if clap
12:40 Sieg: but it would be unconsistant, i think whistle is not so horrible there
12:41 HeatKai: Well yes but the clap fits more with the piano there :o
12:42 Sieg: so 01:27:665 (4) - this one same?
12:42 HeatKai: yes
12:42 Sieg: ok then, done
12:42 HeatKai: :3
12:42 Sieg: :3
12:45 HeatKai: You try first then you tell me do you like it or not
12:45 HeatKai: 01:52:522 (3) - change the starting to clap
12:45 HeatKai: ^ the end also
12:46 HeatKai: so it will get consistent clap hitsound
12:47 Sieg: not good imo, all whisltes in kiai follows low pitch piano notes, i used piano sheet to do this, i guess consistant it only easy issue becuse diff skips many notes
12:47 Sieg: not good imo, all whisltes in kiai follows low pitch piano notes, i used piano sheet to do this, i guess consistant it only easy issue becuse diff skips many notes
12:47 Sieg: but eh...
12:47 Sieg: consistant through diffs
12:48 Sieg: idk, i don't feel this is cry for fix
12:49 Sieg: at least hs in unconsistant piano songs is hard to make consistant :3
12:49 Sieg: lol
12:50 HeatKai: 01:52:522 (3) - because the ending of this slider doesn't sounds really good :/
12:51 Sieg: let me test 1 min :3
12:53 Sieg: uhm.. so just on end 01:52:522 (3) - clap seems more resonable
12:53 HeatKai: yes ==
12:53 HeatKai: lol
12:53 Sieg: yes
12:53 Sieg: lol
12:53 Sieg: xd
12:53 Sieg: changed
12:54 Sieg: sorry if i'm slow but i really need to hear few times and look around before change anything
12:56 HeatKai: 02:06:236 (2,3,4) - just make the pattern like this more neater
12:56 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762318
12:57 Sieg: laying straight sliders, i don't like them :3
12:58 HeatKai: =w= then make it curve like this
12:58 HeatKai: wait..
12:58 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762319
13:00 Sieg: maybe http://puu.sh/2VNNN.jpg to interact
13:00 Sieg: with 02:03:665 (1) -
13:00 HeatKai: oh ok that's good
13:00 Sieg: :)
13:01 HeatKai: That's all for easy
13:01 Sieg: this was longer than i expected :)
13:02 Sieg: but good that we fixed some important staff
13:05 HeatKai: stuff* haha
13:05 Sieg: yep
13:05 Sieg: lol
13:07 HeatKai: 00:37:951 (1) - make this a better blanket
13:07 HeatKai: it doesn't looks smooth :x
13:07 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762332 maybe like this
13:08 Sieg: done http://puu.sh/2VNXJ.jpg
13:10 Sieg: even better http://puu.sh/2VO0d.jpg
13:11 HeatKai: yes good
13:11 Sieg: i love to make blankets \w/
13:11 HeatKai: \w/ blankets are awesome
13:11 Sieg: yes!
13:11 Sieg: :3
13:12 HeatKai: 00:40:522 (3) - omg this slider hahha
13:12 HeatKai: looks ugly =w= fix it
13:12 HeatKai: lol
13:12 Sieg: oh lol
13:12 Sieg: yep
13:14 Sieg: much better http://puu.sh/2VO4R.jpg
13:15 HeatKai: okay! :#
13:15 HeatKai: :3
13:16 HeatKai: 00:43:522 (4) - the ending is better if it's clap
13:16 Sieg: okay
13:18 HeatKai: 00:55:522 (2,3,4) - try to make another pattern,why is this copy pasta slider haha
13:18 HeatKai: it doesn't look smooth lol
13:18 Sieg: corresponding to music ;_; eh... i'll try something
13:20 HeatKai: ok
13:22 HeatKai: 02:13:951 (1) - the spinner should start from here
13:22 HeatKai: if you're following the piano
13:22 Sieg: but
13:22 HeatKai: and starting a spinner from red tick is really awkward
13:23 Sieg: main idea of this is to let player play hard sounds
13:23 Sieg: i mean big white
13:23 Sieg: maybe just move spinner to 1\4 closer
13:24 HeatKai: that's okay too and that's all for normal
13:24 Sieg: good
13:32 HeatKai: Make your name fade same as the title
13:33 Sieg: nice idea
13:38 HeatKai: 01:37:951 (4) - this doesn't sound good
13:39 HeatKai: and there's not much beat here :x
13:39 HeatKai: why even need a repeat
13:39 HeatKai: 01:37:951 (4) - just a single circle would be fine
13:39 Sieg: i guess so
13:40 HeatKai: 01:55:094 (6) - make this as a normal spacing,doesn't need to make a lil jump here
13:41 Sieg: but fits to music, and kiai
13:41 HeatKai: just the slider can emphasize the music,the spacing isn't :o
13:42 Sieg: why not, after so many 1\4 this 1\1 feels kinda ok for 1.7x
13:42 HeatKai: well okay =w= whatever you want then
13:42 Sieg: :)
13:43 HeatKai: 02:14:594 (2) - move it to here x:484 y:208 so it doesn't touch the circle (4)
13:43 Sieg: sure
13:46 HeatKai: that's all :3
13:46 HeatKai: post the chat in the forum please :D
13:46 Sieg: uh, thank you so much
13:46 Sieg: yes such a long ride :)
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