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Lia - Light colors

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azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年7月5日 at 14:34:51

Artist: Lia
Title: Light colors
Source: Key Sound Lab
Tags: Tomoyo After
BPM: 131
Filesize: 15875kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. After (4.92 stars, 381 notes)
  2. Alazy (4.98 stars, 444 notes)
  3. Easy (1.77 stars, 135 notes)
  4. Normal (4.37 stars, 218 notes)
Download: Lia - Light colors
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2nd map.
my favorite song.enjoy all XD

EDIT1: 5/22 added Normal
EDIT2: 5/27 changed BG picture
EDIT3: 5/31 added Easy
EDIT4: 6/19 hard remake and added skins thanks avira0922 XD
Added Alazy thanks alace :D
Last edited by azuki , edited 53 times in total.
arimnaes
30 posts
Joined May 2009
arimnaes
I like the way you used rhythm changes to vary the slider speeds with the music.

A few notes on specific things:

0:27:422 - The fact that this slider carries you directly away from the following note is a bit disorienting and breaks the nice counterclockwise flow. Perhaps make it mostly vertical rather than mostly horizontal?
1:21:468 - Same deal. Left middle left right feels kind of awkward. Keeping the same rhythm but switching to middle left middle right would be less confusing.
1:31:773 - Haha! What a sneaky little pattern. It will probably mess people up the first time, but I like that unlike some sneaky patterns, it actually feels natural once you're familiar with it.
1:53:873 - The use of double notes here feels a bit artificial to me, like it doesn't really evolve from the music. But maybe that's just me.
2:10:247 - The placement of notes 2, 3, and 4 in this combo seems rather random, unless there's an intended pattern I'm not intuiting.
2:22:155 - Nice throwback to the earlier section.

A solid job overall, I thought. No timing problems that I can discern. I like the song and I like the map.
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
When I say first,I am not good at English, what you say doesn't correctly understand whether ..can understanding...
In that case, I'm sorry

0:27:422 - The fact that this slider carries you directly away from the following note is a bit disorienting and breaks the nice counterclockwise flow. Perhaps make it mostly vertical rather than mostly horizontal?
changed
1:21:468 - Same deal. Left middle left right feels kind of awkward. Keeping the same rhythm but switching to middle left middle right would be less confusing.
done
1:31:773 - Haha! What a sneaky little pattern. It will probably mess people up the first time, but I like that unlike some sneaky patterns, it actually feels natural once you're familiar with it.
I do so it on purpose :)
1:53:873 - The use of double notes here feels a bit artificial to me, like it doesn't really evolve from the music. But maybe that's just me.
I surely changed it because I was strange.
2:10:247 - The placement of notes 2, 3, and 4 in this combo seems rather random, unless there's an intended pattern I'm not intuiting.
changed.
2:22:155 - Nice throwback to the earlier section.

thank you your modding!

Download: PRASTIK DANCEFLOOR - Session 9 -Chronicles- (Nakagawa-Kanon) [Another].osu
merimeri
69 posts
Joined April 2009
merimeri
Really nice map. nice BGM :)

プレイしていて気持ち良いです！
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Just a little edit in bg. :)

Starred, nice map. :D

qweqqwweerr
39 posts
Joined February 2009
qweqqwweerr
☆~
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
>>GbL
Wow,nice BG picture :)
I change it, thank you!

>>qweqqwweerr
:)
RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
RaisTF
Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid

Normal:
00:24:21 (4,5) - 1 grid down for 5 align with 3
00:29:71 (4) - 1 grid right to align with 3
00:39:56 (2) - sounds strange, add wistle in the begin and the end of slider?
00:46:88 (3) - ^
00:53:07 (4) - 1 grid up to align with 3
01:30:85 (2,3,4) - what is 3 and 4 for?

Hard:
00:34:06 (1) - 1 grid down to align with 2
00:54:67 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 grids down to align with 6?
01:26:27 (8) - 1 grid left to make it the same as 01:25:13 (2,3,4)
01:26:27 (8,9) - 1 grid left
01:55:36 (7) - 1 grid up

Star~
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Time for some mod-action!

Normal
[00:54:304] a finish here
[01:52:641] clap here (not in the end of this slider)
[00:32:208] (1, 1, 1, 1) whistle for the first couple of beats, clap for the 2nd!
[00:37:731] Instead of a normal clap, use a soft one
[00:52:750] (3, 5) other claps here!
[01:35:970] this slider's start looks very crypthic, isn't it? Try to set it later!
[01:52:605] like the other mode, clap here instead of the slider's end!
[02:30:196] another whistle here

NOW I understand why you are on the 100's positions an I only on the 900's... Star'd!
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Err... I forgot something...
Only my 1st and 2nd tip are for Normal mode; the others are for the Hard one...
... Sorry ... :?
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki

RaisTF wrote:

Some suggestions ^^' ALL with lvl3 grid

Normal:
00:24:21 (4,5) - 1 grid down for 5 align with 3
00:29:71 (4) - 1 grid right to align with 3
00:39:56 (2) - sounds strange, add wistle in the begin and the end of slider?
00:46:88 (3) - ^
00:53:07 (4) - 1 grid up to align with 3
01:30:85 (2,3,4) - what is 3 and 4 for?

Hard:
00:34:06 (1) - 1 grid down to align with 2
00:54:67 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 grids down to align with 6?
01:26:27 (8) - 1 grid left to make it the same as 01:25:13 (2,3,4)
01:26:27 (8,9) - 1 grid left
01:55:36 (7) - 1 grid up

Star~
all fixed
thanks :)

Lokamp wrote:

Time for some mod-action!

Normal
[00:54:304] a finish here
[01:52:641] clap here (not in the end of this slider) done
[00:32:208] (1, 1, 1, 1) whistle for the first couple of beats, clap for the 2nd! sorry,I was not able to get intention.However, I felt that oneself was natural
[00:37:731] Instead of a normal clap, use a soft one done
[00:52:750] (3, 5) other claps here! done
[01:35:970] this slider's start looks very crypthic, isn't it? Try to set it later! What kind of meaning is crypthic?I was not able to understand with my poor-looking English.sorry
[01:52:605] like the other mode, clap here instead of the slider's end! done
[02:30:196] another whistle here done

NOW I understand why you are on the 100's positions an I only on the 900's... Star'd!
thanks your mod!
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922
マスターあずき ;)

　(((ノ≧∇≦)ノ :・'.::・>☆

nice map!
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
thanks avira0922 :)
taNa
312 posts
Joined January 2009
taNa
good!!
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki
thanks!
Last edited by azuki , edited 1 time in total.
merimeri
69 posts
Joined April 2009
merimeri
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by merimeri , edited 5 times in total.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Easy:
00:28:56 (1) - align with 3
00:39:56 (2) - extend all the way to the whole note
are 00:35:43 (3,1) and 00:51:92 (1,2,3,4,5) supposed to have different spacing?
00:54:67 (1) - align with 3?
00:58:33 (1) - " "
01:13:45 (4) - align with 1
01:24:67 (1) - the placement of this is disorienting to the player, I would rather have the correct spacing
01:25:13 (2) - increase in spacing?
01:55:59 (4) - have this end on the start of 2
02:02:68 (2) - same as 01:24:67 (1)

Normal:
00:44:82 (4) - align with 3?
01:41:62 (8,9) - I don't like how the 8 and 9 are sort of covered by 6
02:14:14 (1) - have the ending of this be directly under the ending of 3
02:25:81 (3) - move down 1 grid (3) to better align with 2
02:27:65 (1) - move up 1 grid (3) to better align with 6

Hard:
00:24:67 (5) - restack under 4
00:26:50 (1) - " "
00:29:25 (4) - 4 has a different distance from 3 than 3 has from 2
00:30:17 (1) - restack under 5
00:33:14 (1,2,3) - align with the stream 2 combos before
spacing 00:38:41 (1,2) and 00:40:93 (8,9) are different. Figure out which you like more and apply the spacing to the whole song
01:07:72 (1) - move left 1 grid (3) to fit with the rest of the pattern
01:09:33 (8) - might want to align with 7
01:15:97 (5,6) - the spacing here is different from the rest of the pattern
01:45:74 (2) - too far
02:21:92 (14) - restack under 13

Nice beatmap. Star.
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
azuki

merimeri wrote:

Easy
00:58:338 finishだけのほうが個人的には好きですっ 直しました
00:59:833 veat snap divicerを右端までひっぱったときにsliderの終点の時間がが微妙に早めに終わっているように見えるので２つ隣のバーの白い線まで時間をのばすといいかも　終点00:40:476
01:25:132 ここをsliderじゃなくcircleにして,01:25:361からスライダー開始＞01:26:277で折り返し＞01:27:193で終点にしたほうがスライダーのリズムは自然なのかなーと思うのですがどうでしょう><スライダーの長さじたいはその前につくっているスライダーの長さと同じだとは思うのですが、配置的に厳しいのかな・・？ ここリズムわからなかったので指摘ありがたいです！
01:57:422 sliderの終点時間を時間バーの青線じゃなく２つ手前の白か２つ後ろの赤線のどちらかで終了したほうがスライダーのリズム的にいいのかなー？白線01:57:880or赤線01:58:109 こっちほうがリズムよかったので直しました
easy難しい、ありがと！
thanks merimeri :)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:28:56 (1) - align with 3 done
00:39:56 (2) - extend all the way to the whole note changed it
are 00:35:43 (3,1) and 00:51:92 (1,2,3,4,5) supposed to have different spacing? yea,If it is that it is bad on purpose, I get over
00:54:67 (1) - align with 3?
00:58:33 (1) - " "
01:13:45 (4) - align with 1 done
01:24:67 (1) - the placement of this is disorienting to the player, I would rather have the correct spacing
01:25:13 (2) - increase in spacing? revise it in other ways
01:55:59 (4) - have this end on the start of 2 done
02:02:68 (2) - same as 01:24:67 (1) done

Normal:
00:44:82 (4) - align with 3? done
01:41:62 (8,9) - I don't like how the 8 and 9 are sort of covered by 6 hmm,I am at a loss how I should put it.
02:14:14 (1) - have the ending of this be directly under the ending of 3
02:25:81 (3) - move down 1 grid (3) to better align with 2 done
02:27:65 (1) - move up 1 grid (3) to better align with 6 done

Hard:
00:24:67 (5) - restack under 4
00:26:50 (1) - " "
00:29:25 (4) - 4 has a different distance from 3 than 3 has from 2
00:30:17 (1) - restack under 5
00:33:14 (1,2,3) - align with the stream 2 combos before lall fixed
spacing 00:38:41 (1,2) and 00:40:93 (8,9) are different. Figure out which you like more and apply the spacing to the whole song Though I used distance snap, I was not able to keep same spacing.why?
01:07:72 (1) - move left 1 grid (3) to fit with the rest of the pattern fixed
01:09:33 (8) - might want to align with 7 you're right.
01:15:97 (5,6) - the spacing here is different from the rest of the pattern done
01:45:74 (2) - too far fixed
02:21:92 (14) - restack under 13 done
thank you blissfulyoshi :)
merimeri
69 posts
Joined April 2009
merimeri
あぁぁ・・２つめ時間書き間違ってました >:( 　00:59:833×
:arrow: 00:38:414 　スライダーの終点を白線00:40:476 もしくは 赤線40:247にするとスライダーのリズム的にいいのかなー？
でした。
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