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Hirano Aya - Tomare!

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Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Gabi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 12 juni 2009 at 18:31:20

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: Tomare!
BPM: 183
Filesize: 11213kb
Play Time: 01:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. DanDan's Tag (4,75 stars, 134 notes)
  2. DJPop's Difficulty (5 stars, 233 notes)
  3. Easy (1,92 stars, 68 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare!
Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (no video)
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uh,, yea, THE MELANCHOLY OF HARUHI SUZUMIYA SEASON 2 ED

<3
Last edited by Gabi , edited 28 times in total.
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
here we go!

Edit: changed colors and name.

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [DanDan's Tag].osu
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Dangaard and I got BPM : 183 / Offset : 646

nice map.

star it :)
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard

kioukiou wrote:

Dangaard and I got BPM : 183 / Offset : 646

nice map.

star it :)
Ok, fixed.

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [DanDan's Tag].osu
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Dem I was just up to map that too. Lemme make a diff plz :p
DJPop
osu! Alumni
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DJPop
Silence the spinnerspin plz.

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu

My map is not harder than Gabi's XD
You should find Haruhi picture for the comboburst.


+Star
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
DanDan's Tag is not a thing that u can't play alone, what should be normal on Tag dificults. It's just a normal song with a lot of New combos =/
But it's still great ^^
I made my own dificulty, see if u like it ^^
Up =O
*star* =]

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [RoxKyuubi's Normal].osu
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

DanDan's Tag is not a thing that u can't play alone, what should be normal on Tag dificults.
I disagree. It's just the case that most Tag tagged difficulties are not well playable solo.
I made a Normal/Hard diff and put many new combos on interesting parts in order to create a nice Tag gameplay, since I play Tag pretty often. The solo-unreachable spacings in some other Tag tagged maps are rather confusing even in Tag mode sometimes, so I made this simple instead.
And in order to let people know it's kinda well playable in Tag mode, I changed the name.

Anyway I don't bother if the name is going to be changed.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Spacings are all good

<insane>
i think clap+whistle at the same note is noisy
DJPop`s sounds better
maybe Gabi can remove some claps

Another thing
DanDan`s tag is good(single play is more fun XD)
but it`s too hard for new players anyway
think about don`t say lazy XD
i suggest make a easier diff

a star~
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
fixed a small thing nobody noticed ;P

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [DanDan's Tag].osu
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easy]
00:40:64 (1) - Maybe remove new combo?
01:00:64 (2) - New combo?

No ther problems for me.
Star.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Easy
Spinners are inappropriate IMO in these "random" places. Newer players may be confused by notes appearing on a spinner. If you kill those spinners you NEED a spinner at the end. Else I won't be happy.
Basically most of your sliders vary at where they start which confuses even me. =S

00:11:46 (2) - Feels too early after playing 00:09:00 (2). (Example.)
00:18:35 (7) - Finish?
00:21:30 (1) - I'm tempted to ask for another repeat.
00:22:94 (3,4,5) - I'm so tempted to ask for notes here (1/3 snap, yanno). If you do add it for some reason replace the slider following.
00:32:77 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Hitsounds somewhere here.

DJPop's Difficulty
00:35:89 (1,2,3,4) - Blocked by kiai streams.
00:37:03 (2) - Replace under (1).
00:41:62 (3) - IMO move to the left (flip around (4)).
00:49:41 (2) - Note here?
00:55:56 (4,1,3) - Finish at the start of these?
00:58:84 (4) - New combo?

Insane
00:19:99 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing?
00:28:84 (8) - New combo? Iono.
00:29:49 (1) - If adding the new combo at (8) remove this new combo.
00:38:84 (5,6,7) - IMO too far from (4), but moving it closer ruins the fun with (8). Hmm.
00:43:26 (8) - New combo?
00:53:76 (7) - New combo?
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Gabi

strager wrote:

Easy
Spinners are inappropriate IMO in these "random" places. Newer players may be confused by notes appearing on a spinner. If you kill those spinners you NEED a spinner at the end. Else I won't be happy.
Basically most of your sliders vary at where they start which confuses even me. =S

00:11:46 (2) - Feels too early after playing 00:09:00 (2). (Example.) i know what you mean, however since its an easy diff, i try to snap as much as possible to 1/1
00:18:35 (7) - Finish? done
00:21:30 (1) - I'm tempted to ask for another repeat. again, Easy mode :P
00:22:94 (3,4,5) - I'm so tempted to ask for notes here (1/3 snap, yanno). If you do add it for some reason replace the slider following. *sigh* easy xD
00:32:77 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Hitsounds somewhere here. added a little

DJPop's Difficulty
00:35:89 (1,2,3,4) - Blocked by kiai streams.
00:37:03 (2) - Replace under (1).
00:41:62 (3) - IMO move to the left (flip around (4)).
00:49:41 (2) - Note here?
00:55:56 (4,1,3) - Finish at the start of these?
00:58:84 (4) - New combo?

Insane
00:19:99 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing? i see what you mean, but cant be fixed with grid. well i fixed it a little
00:28:84 (8) - New combo? Iono. its fine
00:29:49 (1) - If adding the new combo at (8) remove this new combo. ^
00:38:84 (5,6,7) - IMO too far from (4), but moving it closer ruins the fun with (8). Hmm. it's distans snapped x1.7 :P
00:43:26 (8) - New combo? done
00:53:76 (7) - New combo? done


thanks for modding
DJPop
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DJPop

strager wrote:

DJPop's Difficulty
00:35:89 (1,2,3,4) - Blocked by kiai streams.
Can change star2.png instead? -_-
00:37:03 (2) - Replace under (1).
Fixed.
00:41:62 (3) - IMO move to the left (flip around (4)).
Fixed.
00:49:41 (2) - Note here?
Not sync.
00:55:56 (4,1,3) - Finish at the start of these?
I don't hear any cymbal sounds at those points.
00:58:84 (4) - New combo?
Fixed.

Download: Hirano Aya - Tomare! (Gabi) [DJPop's Difficulty].osu
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Good maps, didn't found any probs
Star~
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
No real problems on my end. My only issue is that I usually expect "Tag" difficulty to be the hardest difficulty, but that's not how it is here.. Ah well.
Bubbled!
Mogsy
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Mogsy
Easy:
-00:13:43 (1) - This Clap doesn't feel right, remove it.
-00:19:00 (1) - ^
-00:23:26 (3) - I'd add a Whistle, pattern-wise, but this still feels weird rhythmically IMO.
-00:25:89 (3) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
-00:27:20 (5) - Replace the Clap on the endpoint with a Finish.
-00:30:80 (3) - Add a Clap.
-00:33:43 (1) - ^
-00:34:58 (2) - Add a Whistle.
-00:35:56 (4) - ^
-00:38:02 (1) - Replace the Clap on the endpoint with a Finish.
-00:40:64 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:41:95 (2) - Add a New Combo mark.
-00:42:94 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:45:56 (2) - Remove the Clap from the starting point.
-00:55:72 (2) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:56:38 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:57:03 (4) - Add a Clap to the second point.

DJPop:
*-01:02:69 (1) - This is my only problem with the difficulty. I feel like the ending spinner is awkward, even though what your mapping it to is logical. I also know that this has only 2 spinners, which is why I have this only as optional.

Insane:
-00:01:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These hitsounds sound like garbage. Please do something better.
-00:15:72 (12) - New Combo mark goes here.
*-00:44:08 (4) - This is only optional because this is definitely my own personal opinion, but I think this slider is a bit ugly in comparison with the rest of the map. It could be made to look more like it belongs there, but you don't necessarily have to change it.

Those are the only things keeping me from hitting the 'Rank' button.
Spierek
4 posts
Joined June 2008
Spierek
With some little modifications, it can become a fine beatmap (Haruhi gives it extra awesomeness).

I can't wait to see it accepted. Star~
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Gabi

Mogsworth wrote:

Easy:
-00:13:43 (1) - This Clap doesn't feel right, remove it.
-00:19:00 (1) - ^
-00:23:26 (3) - I'd add a Whistle, pattern-wise, but this still feels weird rhythmically IMO.
-00:25:89 (3) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
-00:27:20 (5) - Replace the Clap on the endpoint with a Finish.
-00:30:80 (3) - Add a Clap.
-00:33:43 (1) - ^
-00:34:58 (2) - Add a Whistle.
-00:35:56 (4) - ^
-00:38:02 (1) - Replace the Clap on the endpoint with a Finish.
-00:40:64 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:41:95 (2) - Add a New Combo mark.
-00:42:94 (1) - Add a Finish.
-00:45:56 (2) - Remove the Clap from the starting point.
-00:55:72 (2) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:56:38 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:57:03 (4) - Add a Clap to the second point.

DJPop:
*-01:02:69 (1) - This is my only problem with the difficulty. I feel like the ending spinner is awkward, even though what your mapping it to is logical. I also know that this has only 2 spinners, which is why I have this only as optional.

Insane:
-00:01:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These hitsounds sound like garbage. Please do something better. Removed hitsounds, only put volume stamps
-00:15:72 (12) - New Combo mark goes here.
*-00:44:08 (4) - This is only optional because this is definitely my own personal opinion, but I think this slider is a bit ugly in comparison with the rest of the map. It could be made to look more like it belongs there, but you don't necessarily have to change it.

Those are the only things keeping me from hitting the 'Rank' button.
thanks, i fixed everything.

Insane fixed, please take a quick look at it.
Mogsy
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