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ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi

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Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 14 luglio 2009 at 0.01.56

Artist: ON/OFF
Title: Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi
Source: Vampire Knight
BPM: 132
Filesize: 8553kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Armin's Normal (4,51 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Hard (4,81 stars, 245 notes)
  3. Normal (3,99 stars, 135 notes)
Download: ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi
Download: ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st serious beatmap going for rank.

Requests of mod and comments, please ^^
Now just needs mods/BATs
Last edited by Zodiark1020 , edited 94 times in total.
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Yumiko
Come hai scritto anche nel post, il problema principale di questa mappa è lo spacing, ma il timing sembra davvero buono, soprattutto perchè è la tua prima mappa D:

Usa il distance snap! E' fondamentale per un buono spacing. Attivalo dalle opzioni a destra del pannello compose e cliccando su alcuni cerchi vedrai che la loro posizione verrà cambiata. Quella posizione è esatta.
Il mio consiglio è di usarlo a 0.9x (ne modifichi il valore tenendo premuto alt), per non sconvolgere troppo la posizione di tutti i cerchi. Con il DS attivato, controlla la posizione di TUTTI i cerchi e gli slider.
00:16:48 (1) - qui toglierei il new combo, il alternativa puoi metterlo al circle precedente
00:19:43 (6) - new combo
00:20:11 (1) - togli il new combo
00:57:16 (4) - <- esempio di spacing sbagliato
01:01:93 (5) - accorcialo alla linea bianca
01:03:29 (6) - spostalo sulla linea rossa prima
01:18:98 (1) - accorcialo alla linea bianca
01:21:70 (3) - sposterei questo sulla linea bianca dopo e fare iniziare lo spinner su quella rossa dopo (alla fine accorcerei lo spinner alla linea bianca prima)
01:30:57 (1) - dopo aver accorciato lo spinner lo sposterei sulla linea rossa prima
01:31:02 (2) - lo sposterei sulla linea bianca prima


Hai potenziale come mapper, come ti ho già detto :D Continua così :D
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Great... Another Italian map!
Let's turn on my mod-mode... (another TERRIBLE joke, Lokamp...)

Normal
[00:11:713] (4, 4) end these two sliders with a finish
[00:20:543] (4, 5) claps over there!
[00:23:751] (4) finish here
[00:37:830] (3) whistle here
[00:42:957] (1) add a "micro beat" in the slider here (I don't know the exact name yet...)
[00:47:587] (4, 4) set whistles (or finish) on all these sliders
[00:54:543] from now until the last spinners, try to set normal sounds instead of soft ones!
[00:55:114] (2, 1, 3) clap on the start of the blue slider and on 1st red beat; plus, split the red slider into a beat (previous slider's start) and a little slider (starting from 00:57:456 and ending to previous slider's end) (simple, isn't it? :? )
[00:58:771] (2, 4) start these sliders with claps!
[01:01:543] (4) finish here
[01:06:071] pretty STRANGE this slider, isn't it? try to change it in something else!
[01:09:611] (2, 4, 6) claps for 2nd slider's start and for the 4th beat; finish on 6th
[01:11:975] (1) another "micro beat" inside this slider around here
[01:13:273] (3, 5, 6) claps on the sliders's start; finish for the beat
[01:18:965] pretty STRANGE this slider, too (lack of ideas? I understand you...)
[01:31:025] I'll say this in Italian: che senso ha questo slider in fondo?

Star'd!
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Lokamp wrote:

Great... Another Italian map!
Let's turn on my mod-mode... (another TERRIBLE joke, Lokamp...)

Normal
[00:11:713] (4, 4) end these two sliders with a finish
[00:20:543] (4, 5) claps over there!
[00:23:751] (4) finish here Personally, I dnt like it with finish
[00:37:830] (3) whistle here Here too, i prefer with normal hitsound
[00:42:957] (1) add a "micro beat" in the slider here (I don't know the exact name yet...) I don't know what do you mean
[00:47:587] (4, 4) set whistles (or finish) on all these sliders
[00:54:543] from now until the last spinners, try to set normal sounds instead of soft ones! Prefer soft...
[00:55:114] (2, 1, 3) clap on the start of the blue slider and on 1st red beat; plus, split the red slider into a beat (previous slider's start) and a little slider (starting from 00:57:456 and ending to previous slider's end) (simple, isn't it? :? ) I understood only something and I modified just that
[00:58:771] (2, 4) start these sliders with claps!
[01:01:543] (4) finish here
[01:06:071] pretty STRANGE this slider, isn't it? try to change it in something else! It's ok to me :P
[01:09:611] (2, 4, 6) claps for 2nd slider's start and for the 4th beat; finish on 6th
[01:11:975] (1) another "micro beat" inside this slider around here Don't understand what are micro beats.
[01:13:273] (3, 5, 6) claps on the sliders's start; finish for the beat
[01:18:965] pretty STRANGE this slider, too (lack of ideas? I understand you...) I think it's ok this too...
[01:31:025] I'll say this in Italian: che senso ha questo slider in fondo? XD, it seems it's useless...right

Star'd!
Thanks for hitsounds matter, see ya^^
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
The beatmap is using 0.8x spacing as well as 1.0x spacing, you could better just choose 1 and respace the map.
Also, the circles are kinda small for a normal.

00:33:98 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Use finishes more rarely please :<
00:50:34 (1) - End this 1/2 earlier or later? dunno
00:52:61 (5) - Remove finish
01:15:11 (1) - Should start 1/4 later ~
01:22:38 (1) - Should end on the blue tick
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
omg, mv is too big D=

- vdo offset is -400.
- go to 00:54:662 and set as preview time. (Timing > last option)

~Normal~
00:16:48 (2) - move ending point over (3)
00:19:43 (1,2,3,4,5) and more - I suggest to use spacings like previous pattern
00:22:38 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
00:24:88 (1,2,3,4) - from now, you can use these spacings
00:38:75 (1,2,3) - spacings are too close
00:52:38 (4) - move 1/4 backward
01:00:79 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:11:48 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:12:84 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:21:70 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note

Download: Vampire Knight MV.part1.rar
Download: Vampire Knight MV.part2.rar

Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Cool map, and nice song

Star ;)

actually i'm mapping the same song too.
but the full version.
i was thinking if u want to add it as a new diff?
tell me what u think.

check it out, to see if u like it.

here's the .mp3
ON-OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi

Download: ONOFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (Lizbeth) [Lizbeth's Version].osu
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Uhm, I think it's not possible, .mp3 is different and i cant fix my map to your mp3, sorry.

If we work on separate ways, it's better, cya and sorry again :(
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
ok no problem... ;)

cya!
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

DJPop wrote:

omg, mv is too big D=

- vdo offset is -400.
- go to 00:54:662 and set as preview time. (Timing > last option)

~Normal~
00:16:48 (2) - move ending point over (3)
00:19:43 (1,2,3,4,5) and more - I suggest to use spacings like previous pattern
00:22:38 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
00:24:88 (1,2,3,4) - from now, you can use these spacings
00:38:75 (1,2,3) - spacings are too close
00:52:38 (4) - move 1/4 backward
01:00:79 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:11:48 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:12:84 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:21:70 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note

[attachment=1:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part1.rar[/attachment:572c8]
[attachment=0:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part2.rar[/attachment:572c8]
Fixed ^^
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ?
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal.
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better.

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) -

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ? I think it's good how it is, I dunno why
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal. What do you think to end it on 00:53:980?
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better. Isn't there too much time without anything before spinner? I don't know, I fixed it anyway o.O

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4 Did it! :)
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) - Fixed ;)

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Fixed, thanks :D :)
MetaSlash
721 posts
Joined October 2008
MetaSlash
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Thanks for star :O ^^ ;)
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

EEeee wrote:

Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left Didn't see any error or spacing problem, but i've fixed anyway :?
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^

Fixed :P
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Bpm and Offset fine.

[Normal]

00:24:88 (1) - Too close from 00:24:43 (5)
00:38:75 (1) - Too close from 00:38:07 (4)
00:54:66 (1) - Maybe from here you can use normal sounds. I prefer soft hitsounds.
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from 01:11:02 (6)

[Hard]

00:17:616 (x) - Add a note here?
00:29:88 (7) - Whistle here.
00:53:980 (x) - Add a note here?
01:00:11 (x) - Add a note here? I prefer without anything, but i put a note over here...
01:08:07 (11) - After this circle, maybe add a spinner?
01:30:34 (4) - Too close from 01:29:88 (3)
Thanks, fixed :O
Armin
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Armin
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