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[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:01:97 (1) - Normal sound here? Or maybe soft finish like hard.
00:28:55 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing for a normal.
00:42:92 (3) - New combo.
01:21:73 (1,2,3) - No jumps on normal T_T

[Hard]

00:36:28 (5) - New combo.
00:42:56 (2) - ^

Another funny tieff map! Star'd

All fixed, thank you, osuplayer!

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Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine. maybe i would add +2ms to offset but its only 2ms, so you can leave that

[NORMAL]

all fine

[HARD]

personally, i think the jumps like at 00:07:53 (3) and 00:17:95 (4) are unintuitive, but i guess that was the point. just thought i'd give you my opinion on that.

00:53:70 (1) - maybe change this so the start of this slider makes a square with (4), (5), and (6)?

everything else seems fine. nice, clean map.
maybe you should make another difficulty though. with a map this short, making another diff shouldn't take much work.

star'd

Offset -10 or -11 (lol)
try video offset at 576 (if you don't know what that means, ask me on IRC or PM)
Please cut off the rest of the audio your not mapping... 9mb mp3 for tv-size is really big >_<
I'm pretty sure you can get away with that semi-lewd spinner... and maybe bg..

Normal-
hmm I think you tried too hard with timing panels on this map, most don't sound too good to me
00:00:53 (1) - !! go with soft like you did in Hard, and add whistle/finish?
00:02:86 (3,4,7) - ... go with whistles instead of finishes please
00:04:84 (8) - a tick right!
00:07:71 (4) - volume down two ticks (match Normal timing panel before)
00:08:25 (6) - ^ (the end point only)
00:25:86 (2,3,4) - down a tick!
00:27:30 (6) - hmmm maybe remove last finish and add whistle if you like
00:29:09 (4,5) - left a tick!
00:33:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't hear why you need this soft-normal-soft-normal mix, maybe add whistle to soft sections and finish to last beat
00:35:20 (1) - it's almost a shame there isn't finish at end imo..
00:45:26 (4,5,6,7) - you can't hear this during play...
01:03:94 (7,8) - like 01:01:07 (5,6), use claps instead of finish
01:05:56 (4,5) - ^ actually, remove these finishes and add claps to (5,6) instead (remove whistles too)
01:07:53 (4,5) - if you followed those ^, make these claps, too
01:12:56 (5,6) - ^
01:15:44 (6,7) - ^
01:17:59 (6,7) - ^
01:19:03 (x) + 01:19:21 (x) - ^ if you wanna follow hitsound flow, add claps here?
I don't like how loud any of the normal-whistles were...

Hard-
00:00:53 (1) - see Normal
00:02:50 (3,4) - Finishes to whistles please
00:04:12 (1) - ... up a tick?
00:07:71 (4) - see Normal
00:09:51 (3) - I think you were trying for a raising volume affect... didn't appeal to me though
00:17:95 (4) - new combo? (to match music?)
00:21:01 (5) - ^
00:23:70 (1,2,3,4) - add whistle to these? (kinda unaudible as they are)
00:24:96 (1) - hmm, make this a slight bit quieter?
00:33:58 (7) - new combo
00:33:58 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - mmmm... I don't like how this sounds, and using Normal's way doesn't work here.. maybe cuz its missing 00:33:94, which Normal has...
00:39:69 (12) - up a tick (or center 11 without grid snap)
00:42:21 (10) - add a hitsound (finish or clap imo)
00:45:62 (9,10,11) - hmmm add whistle to 9's end... but not sure how to make 10,11 sound better... maybe add whistle/finish to 11?
01:00:35 (4) - add finish or whistle to end imo
01:01:07 (1) - new combo
01:02:15 (4) - add repeat?
01:02:68 (5) - if you did ^, then new combo this
01:03:22 (6,9) - 6 doesn't need that whistle, and if you do remove it, then replace 9's whistle with finish instead
01:04:66 (3) - up a tick xD
01:05:56 (5) - new combo~
Yea, only the normal-whistles felt loud during the second half of the map in this one though
I think starting from 01:01:25 (7) to 01:10:95 (1) and 01:15:62 (10) to 01:19:21 (3), you can add claps that match the bg's faint clap, if you do though, don't mix the clap with any other hitsound on the note you added the claps on (and not sure about the whistle parts if you add claps..)

!!!!!! omg, I made a long list again >_<
I think you tried to play with hitsounds a bit too much on this..
Still quite good though... -ignore the list if you must.. lol-

OH SHI~
Fixed.

It's in pending now.

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Hard~

1. 00:39:69 (12) - Not spaced evenly.
2. 00:43:64 (1) - 1 tick down to align with 00:42:56 (1).
3. 01:05:02 (4) - Take the endpoint of this and move it up a tiny bit so it forms a perfect X shape.

TV Size beatmaps should have TV Size mp3s as well. But I'm sure you already knew. ;P

Why do both I Say Yes maps here have a whore-like picture of her? <_<;

[Normal]:
00:42:02 (1) - Finish at endpoint? Or at least some hitsound...it sounds so empty compared to its other brother...
00:45:07 (3,4,5,6) - I find this quiet volume kind of unfitting...
01:17:58 (6,7) - Whistles?

[Hard]:
00:46:52 (1) - I don't hear a startpoint whistle? That might be because of inherited timing sections, but I don't like it like that. S:

The comboburst.png looks quite small in-game. Perhaps you should try resizing it by a tad bit?

It's very good. There's not really any technical errors. It has the usual tieff hardness though...Why don't people like making Easy maps? >_<

Star.

Sweet finaly the TV Size of this <3
How about using the real TV Size MP3?
http://up.ppy.sh/files/01-firstkiss~tvsize~.mp3
It makes me rage to see a song i like, end right in the middle.

[Normal]
00:11:84 (4) - I'm against nazi modding but this one really annoys me. Please check timing (i can't hit this correctly using jsust my ears)

+star <3

Edit:

oh shi- i didn't realize that i put in the first opening.
I'm really sorry about this.
Here is the real one.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/02-isayyes~tvversion~.mp3

no real issues, mini naziish observations

Hard
00:22:45 (6,1,2,3) - intentional minor jump-space?
00:46:88 (2,3,4,5,6) - two whistles here sound kinda random?

Interesting map

Nice map.

shoot a star here. :3

[Normal]
this is too hard for a Normal. either add an easier diff or make this map easier.


x_x will return to modding when im not being dragged to and fro

Kirby's Easy just uploaded!

I Say Yes to this difficulty. :U

Download: ICHIKO - I Say Yes [TV Size] (tieff) [Kirby's Easy].osu

[Kirby]
01:23:37 (3) - remove whistle
01:27:14 (1) - try a finish on the end


[Normal]
01:17:98 (1) - remove whistle from the start


[Hard]
01:16:72 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whistlespam


starred