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BACK-ON - Flyaway

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, September 16, 2009 at 10:28:35 AM

Artist: BACK-ON
Title: Flyaway
Source: Tales of the World Radiant of Mythology 2
Tags: tales of the world BACK-ON fly away
BPM: 93.02
Filesize: 13340kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 74 notes)
  2. Fly Away!!! (5 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Hard (4.72 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Normal (2.79 stars, 91 notes)
Download: BACK-ON - Flyaway
Download: BACK-ON - Flyaway (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This can be modded and ranked now
The scores are reset.
Skin by Daru
FlyAway!!! by Starrodkirby86 (with minor tweaks)

MAJOR Update
mp3 replaced
offset has been found as well
Plus SB thanks to shinde
Last edited by ztrot , edited 53 times in total.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
All fine.
Starrodkirby86
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
:!: :!: :!:

[Easy]:
00:51:94 (1) - Soft sampleset? You know where to end it.

[Normal]:
00:51:94 (1) - Soft sampleset? You know where to end.

[Hard]:
As great as Tear's melons.

[Fly Away!!!]:
00:12:11 (8) - Make horizontally straight to (7). [minor, haha]
00:20:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You know the problem, I know you're correcting it.
00:22:75 (4) - Suggestion: Put this below the red (1).
00:25:97 (7) - Start slider at 26:139, make it repeat at 26:785 so it'll end at 27:430. (In other words, the start point gets a white tick ahead and the endpoint needs 1/2 back). I don't see where this follows originally except for the endpoint which follows a drum.
00:29:36 (3,4) - Follow the pattern of (1) and (2)?
00:31:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:31:62 (2) - New combo.
00:37:66 (4) - Move 1/4 ahead and readjust spacing if needed.
00:42:58 (3) - Make even with (2) horizontally? D:
00:43:55 (1) - Make even with (2) and (5) veritcally? D:
00:57:10 (3) - Straight line with (2)?
01:07:42 (3,4,5,6) - This part always sprung out at me whenever playing the map...I don't know what you should do though...
01:17:74 (2) - Long long long long repeat...

Sorry for long list. :<

*~
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
I don't know if you want to use it but here ya go~

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly~].osu
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!! v2].osu

I helped ztrot. A lot.

(To the point of...yeah...)
Last edited by Starrodkirby86 , edited 1 time in total.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Fly Away:
00:21:14 (3) - might want a new combo here because it is hard to read the stack in the center
00:22:26 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - fix spacing
00:25:17 (1) - this is disorienting on placement
00:59:68 (6) - new combo
01:07:42 (5,6,7) - stack the ends and starts properly
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
About BPM... You sure about it? 186,04?

[Easy]
00:20:97 (3) - Finish on start.
00:41:62 (2) - New combo?
00:54:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:94 (1) - Hitsound on second return.
00:54:52 (3) - Hitsound on end of slider.
00:56:13 (1) - Whistle on return.
00:57:42 (1) - ^
00:58:71 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:11 (3) - Whistle/finish.
00:51:94 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - See normal.

[Hard]
Cool.
00:51:94 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - See normal.
01:02:26 (3) - Finish, new combo.

[Fly Away!!!]
Decrease circle size a tick?
All cool.

Star.
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
The Music overpowers the hitsounds, so keeping the hitsounds simple in this is good~
BPM seems fine to me

Easy-
00:38:25 (2,3) - this was awkward in this difficulty only... since the map was at a slower pace, maybe just make these a slider?

Normal-
00:42:58 (2) - this clap and this <00:45:16 (5)> clap almost begins a clapping flow... but it doesn't, so either remove these two claps or add some more at the same pace (actually, this was in Easy, too)
Redo break~

Hard-
Same "issue" as Normal~ but otherwise... <3 good Job~

Fly Away!!! - run away...!
@_@ after listening to the first three's hitsounds... this one was disturbing >_<
Hitsounds were kinda overused, but like I said, compared to the other three... Once I got used to the massive amount, it sounds fairly nice
Please include more Newcombos on jumps such as 00:32:26 (4) ... and much more you should be able to figure out..
Very confusing and fast for such a song... could you please lower the overall diff by a tick?

The first three's hitsounds were kept nice and simple, then Fly Away blew me away :o
It does sound good though, once gotten used to.
0_o
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Joined December 2008
0_o
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Armin
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Armin
It is a good map. Star. :)
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
[Easy]
00:28:07 (2) - may be do this symmetric by horizontal relate to (1)?
[Normal]
-
[Hard]
00:11:62 (6,7) - move by 1 left.
00:17:27 (6) - move by 1 right.
00:39:04 (1) - looks ugly.
00:47:10 (4) - make it more symmetric.
00:50:00 (5) - ^
01:12:58 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it symmetric relate to vertical middle's line.
[Fly Away!!!]
01:13:54 (7,8) - move by 1 up.
Starrrr! :)
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
[Fly Away!!!]
Decrease circle size a tick?ztrot's original version had circles of this size, if I recall correctly. If not, screw it, I like it anyway~
All cool.
Fly Away!!! - run away...!Hi Shin :)
@_@ after listening to the first three's hitsounds... this one was disturbing >_< D: I HATE YOU NOW
Hitsounds were kinda overused, but like I said, compared to the other three... Once I got used to the massive amount, it sounds fairly niceOh...okay...:3
Please include more Newcombos on jumps such as 00:32:26 (4) ... and much more you should be able to figure out.. :(
Very confusing and fast for such a song... could you please lower the overall diff by a tick? Lowering the Overall Difficulty makes this look more relaxing and less action-filled. That wasn't my objective for Fly Away!!!
Fly Away
I'm guessing Fly Away is referring to what your mouse does when playing this map :P :3
01:00:68 (1) - BLARG ok, yes it makes the 2000 limit, but it's still realllllly cheap..
01:08:55 (7) - noooo hidden slider, it's very hard to tell this is a slider with the fading 5 Changed.
01:12:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - lol
[Fly Away!!!]
01:13:54 (7,8) - move by 1 up.Dumb Copypasta. :T Changed. <3
I'm Barack Obama, and I'm here to change~
v v v

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!!].osu
Starrodkirby86
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[Hard]:
If I were to be picky and say that you used too much Kiai...I would recommend taking away all the flashy glows from the slowdown part. You can keep the fountain though.

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!!].osu
anonymous_old
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Doomsday
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Doomsday
*Was only requested to take a look at the skin*

i'm no expert, but visual wise, this is probably one of the best looking osu skins to me, if not the best. i like the Technologic-esque color splash :P

the only gripe i would have with it is that all the color spashes and that can make it somewhat confusing, since i sometimes confuse the color splashes with hitcircles when i see them in the corner of my eye when theres hitcircles everywhere (see "Fly Away!!!")

so yeah, i really like the skin. i'd use it for my default skin if it didn't confuse me sometimes (if you do edit it, please please please don't remove the color splashes D:)

btw, if you want me to mod this, let me know (i don't like giving stars without modding *Nudge* *Nudge*)
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
BPM: 93.0 flat.
Offset: 10640

Re-snap. The reason why I advanced the offset a lot further is because it sounds better with the 1-2-3-4 beat sequence.
ztrot
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Topic Starter
ztrot

Zekira wrote:

BPM: 93.0 flat.
Offset: 10640

Re-snap. The reason why I advanced the offset a lot further is because it sounds better with the 1-2-3-4 beat sequence.
hmm i think the bmp i have is right i tryed yours
but it felt odd
Shinde
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Shinde
Easy
Nothing~

Normal
01:08:55 (4) - NINJA. GTFO. =( The purple like blends in and I'm looking at the next note thinking the slider is going to double back once more. Maybe it's because he's killing a purple thing in the video right where that note is, I dunno, and I get confused lol. General lack of stacking also made me unwary of a stack here. </whine>

Hard
00:24:52 (1,2,3) - I think making these a triangular pattern would be neat. Same like 1 second later for 4,5,6.
00:32:75 (6,7) - Up one, realign following notes accordingly.
00:48:55 (5,6) - Start new combo on one of these instead of the (1) after it maybe?
01:01:61 - I love when this part of the song kicks in, lol. <3 Video kickass too.
01:06:77 (1) - Left one

Insane
00:46:61 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I won't say what this looks like.
00:48:07 (10) - Move in middle, looks wierd on the left.

That is all. Hohoho. Star'd.
lukewarmholiday
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