This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 18, 2009 at 4:44:31 PM

Artist: Aqua Timez
Title: Velonica
Source: bleach
Tags: Aqua Timez Velonica bleach
BPM: 274
Filesize: 13767kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Hollow Mix (5 stars, 321 notes)
2. Normal (3.39 stars, 137 notes)
3. Panda's Bankai (4.97 stars, 229 notes)

Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica
Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7/11 PandaCath Bankai Added
7/12 fixed offset and Finished Hollow mix.
7/12 Added fartownik edits.
7/12 Added Normal
7/14 Shinxyn's edits
7/14 Blissfulyoshi's edits
7/14 whymeman's edits
7/15 Colour Change
7/15 JarJarJacob's edits
7/16 Added More skining edits.
7/16 small bug fix
7/16 animask's edits
7/16 Killed Ki mode D:
7/16 Removed panda's banki due to week of inactivity.
7/18 Re Added panda's bankai STAY ACTIVE or it will be removed
7/18 mrtn and Sushi971 edits
7/18 starrodkirby86 edits

bpm seems correct.... Not sure though.

Offset: 7580

Some level of doubt here, but this is the best I got (and that's coming from an offset nazi like me). Try it.

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Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica (ztrot) [Panda's Bankai].osu

Hi.

• [Panda's bankai]
  It needs much of work with hitsounds.
  00:38:893 (4) - I prefer note instead slider.
  00:40:426 (7) - Expand this slider to 00:40:974.
  00:41:083 (8) - Delete this note.
  01:21:485 - Add a note here.
  00:14:149 (1)- I think this note isn't needed.
  00:14:368 (1)- ^
  00:21:375 (5) - Move this note 1/4 back.
  00:21:485 (6) - ^
  00:24:879 (6) - ^
  00:24:988 (7) - ^
  
  [Hollow Mix]
  00:11:740 (6) - New combo.
  00:37:908 - Add a note here.
  00:38:127 (4) - Delete one repeat of this slider and move it 1/2 forward.
  01:16:22 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it 1/4.

I really like this beatmap and song. Starr'd.

nice song and nice skin great job

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Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica (ztrot) [Panda's Bankai].osu

PandaCath wrote:

Reuploaded with fartownik + some of my own changes :p

PLZ make those hit circles bigger PLZ!

...hmm felt like the notes' started to get off timing near the end... might just be me though
Hitsound mod.. therefore, these are all suggestions >_<

Normal-
00:20:06 (1) - remove clap
00:21:15 (4) - add finish (since the claps stop here)
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - a no-hitsound gap... add some please
00:37:79 (2) - add clap?
00:39:55 (2) - ^
00:40:42 (2,4) - ^
00:42:17 (2,3) - add finish to either one or both... (since claps completely stop after this)

Panda's-
00:08:23 (5) - random whistle? remove or add more, easier just to remove
00:15:90 (9) - I say place the whistle at the start of slider and remove the one at end (keeping the finish by itself)
00:16:99 (3) - add whistle to end of slider? (trying to find a place to add whistle between each other...)
00:19:62 (12) - leave as finish only, remove the whistle
00:20:28 (2) - add whistle to end?
00:21:15 (4,5) - whistle to both?
00:22:47 (5,8) - since you used whistle everywhere around it, I'd prefer you replace the claps for whistles, too
00:25:09 (1) to 00:30:35 (7) - too big of a no-hitsound gap, since you didn't end the whistles completely, add some to this part, OR remove the upcoming whistles, they're not strongly required
00:41:95 (6,8) - again, with all the whistles, the clap's don't seem to belong
00:57:06 (2) - the clap... wasn't followed up with more clap, but whistles instead, so remove this clap, unless you plan to add more in this section
Okay, since there's lots of places whistles come and go... I don't -want- to suggest them all, just tell you to add more in some gaps... like... try adding a whistle every 5-7 beats (5-7 white ticks) or so..

Hollow Mix-
00:18:74 (1) - remove clap please, it makes the section seem rushed
00:36:92 (5,6) - sounded very random... probably cuz the hitsound stopped for a bit
00:38:67 (3) - remove this clap since it wasn't followed up by more hitsounds (finish doesn't count for me x_x)
01:16:22 (1) - you -could- add a clap to this as well, not really needed though
01:21:59 (4) - just add the clap here
I have no problems with the paced clapping~


looking good, and Hollow mix is quite fun~
-didn't do any nazi placement mods-

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Normal:
00:31:66 (6) - make a vertical reflection of 4
00:34:07 (1) - align with 5?
00:54:66 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
01:11:30 (2,3) - I don;t like how these how these 2 notes are different distances from 4 because I like equilateral triangles in the pattern, but this part is fine
01:13:05 (6,7) - same as previous except in relation to 5
01:22:68 (1,1) - I think it sounds better to snap these to the vocals a whole beat earlier because the drums you snapped to are not dominating beats, or change it to look like bankai

Bankai:
grrr small notes T_T
00:07:79 (3,4,5,6) - make a straight line?
00:50:49 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 2
00:56:30 (10,11) - align with 8,7 respectively?
01:16:12 (6) - make the same distance from 5 that 4 is

Hollow:
00:25:53 (3) - align with 1?
00:42:83 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - lower stack leniency to make this look better
00:47:87 (6) - align with 5?
00:52:03 (8,9,10,11,12) - I would like if the pattern kept on going counterclockwise and not reverse here
00:56:30 (6,7,8,9) - make a horizontal reflection of 4,3,2,1 respectively
01:07:79 (5,6,7,8,9) - I for some reason took a long time to be able to read this, add a new combo to make it more readable?
01:10:31 (6,7,8,9) - make a horizontal reflection of 4,3,2,1 respectively
01:20:71 (10) - align with 9?

Nice map. Star.

The heck is wrong with small notes? I love those T_T -changes-

Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica (ztrot) [Panda's Bankai].osu

nothing but as you can see loathe small notes

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed modding go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

Video: Yes
Custom SKin: Yes
Size: 11.7MB / 20.00MB*
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

*Limit with video.

[Normal] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 137.000 / 7,580ms
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8
[Current] Objects: 139 (120 Circles / 18 Sliders / 1 Spinner)
[Current] Max Combo: 186
[Current] Max Score: 647,682
[Current] Star Rating: 3.42

No minor/major errors here.

Notes: Simple and clean. But one thing I noticed is that 01:11:30 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks like an uneven triangle set, but I don't think that is something to worry about too much. Just something to leave a note on. Still, a cleanly made map.

[Panda's Bankai] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 274.000* / 7,580ms (*BPM Doubled)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 0.5 / 0.90
Distance Snap Average: x0.8
[Current] Objects: 230 (161 Circles / 67 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 332
[Current] Max Score: 1,832,050
[Current] Star Rating: 4.98

00:09:76 (2,3) - Looks a bit too close together.
01:05:60 (8,9) - Interesting jump...

Notes: Cleanly made and quite fast @_@. Just one minor error to deal with.

[Hollow Mix] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 274.000* / 7,580ms (*BPM Doubled)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8
[Current] Objects: 321 (288 Circles / 31 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 410
[Current] Max Score: 4,007,540
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00

00:11:08 (3,4,5) - After (3), the next two notes are lower. Maybe you can line these up with (3)?
00:18:91 (2) - When I listen to this note really carefully, it sounds slightly late. Try adjusted it to start at 00:18:85 and see if it sounds better to you.
00:24:11 (2) - Sllightly uneven with the end point of the slider.
00:35:39 (6) - ^
00:40:09 ~ 00:40:59 - I got confused here. I'm trying to keep track of the flow but it sound like it "abrupty" got disturbed between the two sliders. I try adjusting (5) to end at 00:40:20 and then try adjusting (6) to about 00:40:37 to 00:40:59. See if that sounds better.
00:42:83 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - The shape looks uneven...

Notes: Even faster than the last difficulty @_@. The map is also cleanly made, but just has a few hollow bugs to get rid of (I know, cheesy pun). But the pace seems solid besides that small "hiccup" mentioned above.

Overall: Great vid and beatmap skin.Also, Insane is.... Insane . Overall, not that many errors to fix. I'm sure this map will be ranked in a short amount of time. Star for effort.

Normal:

00:25:09 (1,2) - Remove, extend break.

Hollow Mix
00:38:12 (2) - Spacing~

Mabye 7573 offset (?)
Starred~

Mmmm. I don't know whether you want to use 274 BPM for all difficulties, or revert them to 137. In either case, if you decide to revert to 137, just double the slider velocity on mine to 1.80 :3

+ JJJ's changes

Download: Aqua Timez - Velonica (ztrot) [Panda's Bankai].osu

[Normal]
Claps seem a bit boring in the beginning most of the beatmap...use whistles instead
Examples
00:08:01 (2) - Here
00:15:24 (4) - End of this one
00:17:65 (2) - Here
00:28:60 (1) - especially this one

00:53:34 (1,2) - Practically screaming add a finish...
00:55:09 (4,5,6) - Not screaming to add a finish...lolz

[Hollow Mix]
Add moar hitsounds
00:43:05 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Less finishes around here

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good

[NORMAL]

looks fine

[HOLLOW MIX]

no problems (i don't like the kind of patterns at 00:08:23 & 00:57:28 though but they're perfectly rankable so ill let those slide)

yeah, nice map. hopefully i'll be able to fc it b the time its ranked

star'd

Map was fun, so star for you.

EDIT: Please make the custom skin cursor a color other than red or green (or make it brighter). I can't see it at all.