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FictionJunction YUUKA - Nowhere

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nullPointLOL
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nullPointLOL
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 22 de julio de 2009 at 18:51:55

Artist: FictionJunction YUUKA
Title: Nowhere
Tags: madlax, nowhere
BPM: 155
Filesize: 7676kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,97 stars, 478 notes)
  2. Normal (4,12 stars, 219 notes)
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Nowhere
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Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Hey isn't this one of the song mixed in Ryuuseigun/Kumikyoku? :D
BPM: 155.03 (BPM 155 has some late note near the end...)
offset: 12,851

Normal- Lovely~~!
01:19:99 (1) - start on 01:20:19 and still end in same place
02:20:59 (2) - I can almost hear/see where you're going with this, but then I get lost around it too.. probably because of the gap between this and (3)
Nazi mod section-
00:17:08 (4) - some people might complain about the repeat being hidden, but it's vision to me (just pointing out)
00:23:66 (1) - could you place under fading (8) please? (then respace next note)
Wow, very nicely done~ hitsounds were understandable and nice too

Hard- very nice
00:41:85 (5) - if that extra 1/4 extension is a part of your design, then ignore this, otherwise, shorten slider by 1/4?
00:55:41 (4) - ^
01:23:86 (x) - the 4 tick volume jump might have been a bit too much.... maybe just increase by 1 or 2 ticks/increase volume gradually instead of at once?
02:56:11 (x) - ^
Nazi section-
00:36:43 (9) - up+right a tick~
01:40:32 (6) - add whistle to slider's end
01:40:71 (7) - ^ if you did that, then add new combo here~?
01:48:45 (2) - place under fading 6 or align with 8's start (same thing actually)
01:50:97 (3) - whistle to end?
02:40:72 (1) - hmm since you can't place the repeat under the single combo, could you not have it overlap?
The slow downs were understandable to me, and hitsounds flowed nicely~ the only thing I want to complain is the ending stream... just doesn't... sound very "ending" like.... (maybe cuz its too loud?)

Remember to redo Breaks~
:) Very Nicely done
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
nullPointLOL

Shinxyn wrote:

Hey isn't this one of the song mixed in Ryuuseigun/Kumikyoku? :D
BPM: 155.03 (BPM 155 has some late note near the end...)
offset: 12,851

Normal- Lovely~~!
01:19:99 (1) - start on 01:20:19 and still end in same place - done
02:20:59 (2) - I can almost hear/see where you're going with this, but then I get lost around it too.. probably because of the gap between this and (3) - Yeap.. I think of deleting it, sounds better I guess..
Nazi mod section-
- Right!
Wow, very nicely done~ hitsounds were understandable and nice too

Hard- very nice
00:41:85 (5) - if that extra 1/4 extension is a part of your design, then ignore this, otherwise, shorten slider by 1/4? - Sure
00:55:41 (4) - ^ - This, I prefer leaving it.. I don't like how it sounds otherwise.
01:23:86 (x) - the 4 tick volume jump might have been a bit too much.... maybe just increase by 1 or 2 ticks/increase volume gradually instead of at once? - Sure! I didn't want to add too many timings sections, but I haven't noticed I do have a Lot of sections.. ^^
02:56:11 (x) - ^ - ^
Nazi section- - All done. ^^
The slow downs were understandable to me, and hitsounds flowed nicely~ the only thing I want to complain is the ending stream... just doesn't... sound very "ending" like.... (maybe cuz its too loud?)
Yeap, I turned down a bit and made it soft. Could that be?.
Remember to redo Breaks~
:) Very Nicely done

Thanks Shinxyn ~~!
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 01:30:83 (4) - New combo
  2. 02:19:79 (2) - Suggestion: New combo, 02:20:18 (1) - Then remove new combo.
Hard~
  1. 03:09:33 (3) - New combo!
  2. 03:15:42 (x) - Suggestion: Add a note here?
Just a suggestion that I thought would be cool for Hard~
Add a soft timing section at 178,399, then add a normal timing section at 179,947!

Cool song and well made beatmap!!
ignorethis
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Joined August 2008
ignorethis
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
nullPointLOL

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
  1. 01:30:83 (4) - New combo - sure
  2. 02:19:79 (2) - Suggestion: New combo, 02:20:18 (1) - Then remove new combo. - Better.
Hard~
  1. 03:09:33 (3) - New combo! - oops
  2. 03:15:42 (x) - Suggestion: Add a note here? - Yes.. I'm not really happy with the ending, though. But that is better.


Just a suggestion that I thought would be cool for Hard~
Add a soft timing section at 178,399, then add a normal timing section at 179,947! - It is cooler, done.

Cool song and well made beatmap!!

- Thanks Mafiamaster :) And Ignorethis for star~!
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Normal:
01:36:44 (1) - sounds closer to lyrics if you stop a half note or maybe a whole note earlier, currently the music you are synced to do not really sound like a good end to the spinner
02:26:37 (1) - I would probably end this 2 whole notes sooner\

Hard:
00:56:97 (4) - make a horizontal reflection of the end of 2
02:11:27 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
02:25:98 (1) - same as normal

Great map. Star.
nullPointLOL
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Topic Starter
nullPointLOL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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356842179
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356842179


Meh, bliss's right about spinner, anything else I think it's cool.
Add whistles at 178,399 in the soft timing section. You should check the hitsounds for the low parts, I'll see later.

Argh... I should be working~
onlando119
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onlando119
:P
xohyeterea
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xohyeterea
Tano.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
cool map
is really fun


star :)
FurukawaPan
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Joined August 2008
FurukawaPan
I hate to go against previous comments, but the BPM for this really IS 155.00, as I am listening to it. The beginning is timed perfectly, but at the end it is getting ahead of the song. 155.03 BPM is too fast. Do not be fooled by the 03:15:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - part, as it is not even syncing to the beat.

This was very well mapped. I find it a bit long, but it's within the 4-minute limit, so that is probably fine.

It gets the james039-star ミ☆
nullPointLOL
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Topic Starter
nullPointLOL

james039 wrote:

I hate to go against previous comments, but the BPM for this really IS 155.00, as I am listening to it. The beginning is timed perfectly, but at the end it is getting ahead of the song. 155.03 BPM is too fast. Do not be fooled by the 03:15:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - part, as it is not even syncing to the beat.

This was very well mapped. I find it a bit long, but it's within the 4-minute limit, so that is probably fine.

It gets the james039-star ミ☆

So...
Well 1st thanks,
But I still don't like the ending. I ended up using 1/8 since the final beat does really finish at 1/8. But I dunno. If you think it's ok, I'll leave it at that.

Thanks James.

All updated~~
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
gdeath
It's just a so good map.I'll give you a star~
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
Wow. Wanna watch anime.

[Normal]
00:37:62 (1,2,1,2) - Jumps on normal?

[Hard]
00:37:62 (1) - Whistle on end.

Wow... Perfect.

Star+ kudosu star.
nullPointLOL
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nullPointLOL

tieff wrote:

Wow. Wanna watch anime.

[Normal]
00:37:62 (1,2,1,2) - Jumps on normal? -

Yeaahh..... But that diff it's all the same on and on. And it isn't too hard, tough. (But I haven't noticed the spacing, tx)

[Hard]
00:37:62 (1) - Whistle on end. - :o

Wow... Perfect. :oops:

Star+ kudosu star. Ty :)
Edit.: Added whistle.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!

first things first, I believe the offset may be off, I see it's Shinxyn's, and he may be better at timing than I am.
best thing you can do is find somebody who is good at timing, I got OFFSET: 12,835. Don't use it now, just ask for some timing help in #mod or something, I mean, Shinx's may be right. eeeh nevermind.

[Normal]
I'd like the kiai on 120,657 ms to begin on 121,238 ms, ur choice.
01:33:17 (4) - sounds better ending 1/4 back for me? my slider broke twice, even when I knew it was there D:

[Hard]
the same kiai suggestion in [Normal] could apply here also, only if you'd like to
how come [Normal] doesn't have these samplesets in the middle of [Hard]?

very good ;D this wasn't much of a mod at all
starred
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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
1. if you MUST use kiai start it on a white tick 2. id really rather you didnt cus it doesnt fit
otherwise...this is barely normal but i guess its ok and no technical errors


[Hard]
yeah remove the kiai
03:15:22 (1) - id suggest removing entirely, but since you probably wont can you at least snap it to a tick? thnx
Starrodkirby86
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Pretty~ And a catchy chorus too ^.^~

[Normal]:
00:48:85 (3,1) - Somehow I feel this spinner as out of place. Maybe putting it where (3) works better...?
01:36:65 (1) - Finish?
Hitsounds at the beginning seemed very blank and boring. ;<

[Hard]:
00:48:85 (5,1) - Same thing.
00:55:43 (4) - Suggestion: Move 1 right on Grid Level 2? (not needed though)
02:01:23 (2) - Have Kiai here?
03:00:07 (1) - Have Kiai here?

-10 to all offsets? :S I did a quick offset check there, so I can't assure for perfect accuracy.

Star~!
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