The map pretty much has 1/4 beats all covered, can't argue about overmapping much :3
I suggest reading 4K hyper's
BOLDED comment since the error appears quite a bit in most maps
Timing CheckOffsetNo Problems
BPMNo Problems
4K HyperNote Count
Everything up to 00:35:059 is okay
00:35:059 to 00:43:786
I don't get the need for 2 notes for the patterns on the red line especially.
How about going with the simple note count pattern of 2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1 for every bar?
00:46:604 to 00:58:331
To be honest, this part is my nightmare, I can't seem to grasp the beats for the notes here
I would strongly suggest using LN Inverse notes or LN notes and map to the background violin.
The triplets doesn't seem to emphasize on anything!
This is a non LN map but I don't think triplets are actually appropriate to use in this section
If you applied this, remap this section for other maps
01:09:968 - Piano Section
This has a major error here, the slow piano goes with 1/3 notes while the fast piano goes with 1/2 notes
You might want to have an easy 1/4 stairs for the fast piano so as to fit in with the difficulty level
Overmapping
01:46:422 (106422|3,106786|3,107150|3) - Not included in piano - I know there are background beats that can fit this however, they are not the strongest sound to map to here
01:49:331 (109331|2,109695|2,110059|3) - Same here
... and all the triplet piano section at the last section
Hit-Sound Check
Ranking criteria :c
Kiai Time Check
No Problems
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Hit-sound is not audible, use 40% since this is quite a loud beatmap
AiMod
You might want to look at it yourself, it's quite a long list
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
No Problems
5K HyperOvermapping
Note Count
00:17:604 (17604|3) - And all the other cymbals - I recommend you to have more note than the "beep" sound effect, since it is louder, either lower the note count for the "beep" or use 3 for the cymbal
00:29:786 - Missing note I presume
00:31:240 - Same
00:32:695 - Same
00:34:150 - Same
00:59:786 (59786|2,61240|1,62695|1,64150|4,65604|4) - No Need for 2 note emphasis, remove all those following this that has 2 notes since there is no special beat that you need to map to for a 2 note emphasis, one will suffice
01:01:331 - Add - and all the subsequent hats - Since you are mapping for hats in this pattern, I suggest you add the hats on these rhythms too
Piano section - Same comment as 4K Hyper
The last section
Huge error here, same difficulty, however, 4K Hyper is mapped with more notes than 5K significantly, consider fixing this
4K version of a difficulty shouldn't be easier than 5K, same goes to 6K,7K and 8K
Hit-Sound Check
Since you used 1st key for the kick note, I suggest you use a kick for this
Kiai Time Check
No Problems
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Same comment as 4K Hyper
AiMod
Same comment as 4K Hyper
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
No Problems, great patterns for 5K
LeiN-'s 4KOvermapping
Note Count
Some unnecessary 2 note count parts
00:05:604 (5604|1,5695|0,5786|1) -
00:05:968 to 00:11:786 - A lot of instances here
There's a TON of unnecessary 2 note counts, even though this is fun to play for a warm-up, it will sound VERY weird when you add hit-sounds and raise the volume!
Fix this first and I'll recheck this difficulty after you fixed most of it
Hit-Sound Check
Yeap.
Kiai Time Check
No Problems!
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Same comment as 4K Hyper
AiMod
Same comment as 4K Hyper
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Amazing patterns, however the ranking criteria will make the hit-sound sound weird and make the mapset weird to hear after it is finalized!
IIDX's 7KFormatting problems, I can't use square brackets for the box, sorry!
Note Count/Overmap
00:16:695 - I assume you are missing a note here since you used 2 note streams
00:11:786 - Cymbal has only 3 notes - Add one
00:17:604 has 5 notes for the cymbal while the rest of the cymbals have only 4 notes in the intro section, consider reducing the 5 note chord
00:23:422 - Consider reducing one note here since you are using 2 note streams
00:35:059 - Consider reducing this by one note since you used 4 notes for cymbal
00:35:513 - Add - Missing note in 2 note stream
00:36:968 - ^
00:42:786 - ^
00:43:786 to 00:46:695 - Consider fixing the note count here to either 3 or 2
Read 4K hyper's BOLDED comment
00:59:059 (59059|1,59150|1,59786|1) - Why do you use hammer for one double hat only? Hammer twice if you want to map to the hat, I suggest adding the hammer under the 6th column note to balance it out for the right handed
01:09:968 1st piano section, I suggest you fill in the center key
01:33:331 (93331|4) - Not included in the piano, overmap
A ton of inconsistent note counts for the last part ( kiai time )
Like why is there 2 note counts for the piano here 01:33:695 (93695|6,93695|4) -
While having 1 note count for the piano here 01:33:513 (93513|4) -
They should be of the same note count since they are as loud as each other
There are a ton of occurrences here, I suggest you map piano to one note, hat to one note, kick to two notes and snare to two notes, that will keep the note count consistent, after all, you will have to add custom hitsounds or hitsounds to rank this
A lot of overmap for the last section, some notes do not have piano on them - Optional to remove them, rankable anyways
Hit-Sound Check
Yeap. ( need it for rank )
Kiai Time Check
No Problems
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Read 4K Hyper's comment
AiMod
Read 4K Hyper's comment
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Nice pattern but some pattern inconsistency, this is more biased to the left handed which press the center key with their left hand, the patterns are still good for rank though.
YoCheck's 5KNote Count / Overmap
I suggest you use one note for this quiet sound here 00:12:513 (12513|2,12513|0) -
and use two notes for the "beep" sound here 00:12:150
00:21:968 (21968|2,21968|0,21968|4,22331|0,22331|2,22331|4) - Change to 2 notes per lane each, since they are all cymbals, none should be more emphasized than the other
00:29:240 - Missing note in the pattern add one note here
00:34:331 (34331|3,34331|4,34422|2,34422|1,34513|0,34604|3,34604|4,34695|1,34786|2,34877|4,34877|3,34968|1,35059|4,35059|3) - I don't see a significance of some of these 2 note chords, go for a 2,1,1,1,3,1,1,1,2 note count pattern
Read 4K hyper's BOLDED comment
00:58:331 to 01:09:968 - Great pattern but I don't see the significance of the 2 note chords
01:33:240 - Consider adding a note since there is a cymbal here
01:34:422 (94422|1) - Overmap
Considering you are using the 1st key for the kick and snares for the kiai time section
01:37:604 - Missing Piano note here
01:40:422 - Same
01:40:513 - ^
.. and more, consider listening to the song on 25%
Not much of a problem except that some piano notes are overmapped or not mapped for the last section
Hit-Sound Check
Yeap. ( Need it for rank )
Kiai Time Check
No Problems
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Read 4K hyper's comments
AiMod
Read 4K hyper's comments
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
No Problems
miruyanc's 8KNote Count
00:16:150 to 00:17:604 - Using 2 note streams when you used one note streams previously with the same volume magnitude is awkward
00:21:877 (21877|5,21877|2) - Why use 2 notes ? - Use one since you are making a one note stream
00:21:968 (21968|0,21968|1,21968|6,21968|4,21968|3) - You used 4 notes for the cymbal previously, reduce by one
00:36:150 (36150|1,36150|3,36150|7) - Reduce by one, you are breaking the note count pattern
00:36:331 (36331|4,36331|2,36695|2,36695|4) - Same here
00:36:513 (36513|3) - Same here, instead add by one
.. and more
00:45:786 to 00:46:695 - You don't need 2 note streams, you are dealing with the same magnitude of volume
00:47:059 to 00:58:331 - ... really? This is not rankable for sure.
Read 4K hyper's BOLDED comment
Why does 00:59:059 (59059|1,59059|7,59059|5) - have 3 notes for a hat while 00:59:422 (59422|7,59422|1) - has two ? Fix it
01:18:695 to 01:21:604 - ... hammers are used to emphasize reverb noises, remap this whole section
Why is there less notes for the 2nd part of the piano compared to the 1st part? The 1st part should be easier since it is less intense
01:34:422 (94422|5) - Overmap
01:34:695 - Missing piano here
01:37:331 (97331|4) - Overmap
01:37:604 - Missing piano here
and many more...
01:43:422 to 01:44:877 - Unnecessary 2 note streams
01:55:059 to 01:55:604 - Use 2 note streams since you are using 2 note streams for the ending
A lot of note inconsistency
Hit-Sound Check
Yeap ( Needed for rank )
Kiai Time Check
Where is the kiai time?
General
Ranking Criteria Check
Read 4K hyper's comment
AiMod
Read 4K hyper's comment
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
There are a lot of unnecessary patterns.
Special key is appropriately used for 7K+1
This map isn't easy to map, just make sure that your note count is consistent or else the when you apply hit-sounds, it is just going to sound horrible
Good luck!