From the modding queue:
[General]
01:31:481 ~ 01:53:183 - The break here is too long, try to map it also
-Checked by AiMod- ~ MP3 Bitrate is over 192kbit, please lower it
[Easy]
i will skip this
[Normal]
00:00:204 (1,2) - Suggest to change like PIC1
00:02:757 (1) - Move too x188 y88 , then straighten the slider abit
00:30:683 (4,5) - Avoid rhythm like this
00:57:013 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:960 (1) - Start the slider on 00:31:800
01:08:502 (5) - NC
01:12:970 (4) - ^
01:19:353 (3) - ^
02:00:204 (3) - ^
02:30:843 (3) - ^
~number of combo in a normal diff is recommended between 4~6
[Hard]
AR8 - HP6/7 - OD6-7
00:09:779 (1) - I don't see any necessary for 1/8, change it to 1/4 and seperated it into 2 like PIC2
00:22:225 (3,5) - too much overlap, will make player confuse, suggest to change the pattern
00:26:374 (5) - Move away from the head of slider 00:26:055 (4), dun overlap
01:09:779 (3,4,5,6,7) - The is seriously, very confuse/messy, suggest to reposition the note
01:30:204 (6) - NC
01:54:460 (4) - Don't stack on 01:53:183 (1)
02:03:077 (4) - ^ on 02:02:119 (1)
02:26:055 (2) - Dun overlap 02:25:098 (4), this may make player easily confuse
02:26:694 (4,5,1,2) - Dun stack, change position
02:56:102 (5) - NC
02:48:195 (4) - Slightly move a little , don't make it perfectly stack
03:00:288 (6) - ^
~The last kiai time part is great