16:10 Sonnyc: Hi Irre~
16:10 Irreversible: sup
16:10 Sonnyc: Have some time to take a look for my newest submitted map?? :3
16:11 Irreversible: k
16:11 Irreversible: but irc
16:12 Sonnyc: Eh? Thought you were in-game ><
16:12 Irreversible: o.o
16:12 Irreversible: irc mod
16:12 Sonnyc: x.x Misunderstood
16:12 *Sonnyc is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317593 Taecyoun, Wooyoung, Suzy, Kim Soo-hyun, JOO - Dream High]
16:12 Sonnyc: 95% Bezier xD
16:13 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317594 Taecyoun, Wooyoung, Suzy, Kim Soo-hyun, JOO - Dream High [Hard]]
16:13 Irreversible: 00:18:856 (4) - i would apply a new combo here, to keep consistency with your triangle pattern b4 and the outstanding vocal
16:14 Irreversible: 00:28:541 (1,2,3) - the distance between those seems a bit messed up, let me show you what i'm talking about:
http://puu.sh/4ZZJz.jpg even if the DS is right, it looks a bit weird.
16:15 Irreversible: 00:32:793 - you've followed the background as well before, so it's a bit sad that you've ignored this outstanding background music here.. add a circle?
16:16 Sonnyc: derp got lagged
16:16 Irreversible: 00:47:202 (5) - i guess this blanket is not as nice as the others. fix it just for lulz
16:16 Irreversible: oh but you could read everything?
16:17 Sonnyc: 00:18:856 (4) - The previous NCs were due to jump, and since the spacing is consistent, want to keep the combo
16:17 Irreversible: 01:03:029 (2) - to be honest, i would move this one to 392 208, to keep the natural flow which is broken 01:03:502 (1,3) - apply a ctrl + g here then, to avoid the DS error, and everything is fine then
16:17 Irreversible: 01:08:226 (1) - apply a finish on the head to get ab it more outstanding?
16:18 Sonnyc: 00:28:541 (1,2) - Uhh not sure want to do with this. Any suggestions?
16:18 Irreversible: 01:19:328 (4,5,6) - the blankets here are very bad, also the flow between 01:19:092 (3,4) - is slightly broken, you should rotate it a bit to fix
16:18 Irreversible: sure wait let's see
16:19 Sonnyc: 00:47:202 (5) - Fixed
16:19 Irreversible: 00:28:541 (1) - just move this to 288 256 (a bit downwards)
16:20 Sonnyc: k
16:20 Irreversible: 01:37:990 (4) - is this on purpose not stacked?
16:21 Irreversible: 01:55:234 (1) - natural flow again, rotate for like -5° to fix that
16:21 Sonnyc: 01:37:990 (4) - Need our opinion on this.
16:21 Sonnyc: If I unstack this, maybe it will be confusing.
16:21 Sonnyc: Shall I NC, or change the pattern?
16:22 Irreversible: i have no problem with the stack
16:22 Irreversible: maybe get more opinions for it
16:22 Sonnyc: Fine
16:22 Irreversible: 01:49:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - is this part copy pasted? xD
16:22 Irreversible: you could at least press ctrl + h + j if you copy paste something, to get a bit variation
16:22 Sonnyc: 01:03:029 (2) - Will keep this, for symmetry, and also since this is a similar pattern with 01:00:431 (1,2) -
16:23 Irreversible: i wouldn't keep it for symmetry
16:23 Irreversible: if it's bad it's bad
16:23 Irreversible: and the natural flow is really broken.
16:23 Irreversible: but up toy ou
16:23 Irreversible: yeah everything else seems to be copy pasted (?) as said, apply ctrl + h + j and then you have more variation ^^
16:24 Sonnyc: 01:49:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - Umm what do you mean about copy paste?
16:24 Irreversible: did you copy this from before
16:25 Sonnyc: I don't think I've used the pattern before
16:25 Sonnyc: (not sure though)
16:25 Irreversible: huh
16:25 Irreversible: ops
16:25 Irreversible: i thought i looked at it twice
16:25 Irreversible: haha
16:25 Sonnyc: loooool
16:25 Irreversible: ahh nvm
16:25 Irreversible: you did ctrl + h + j i guess
16:25 Irreversible: ops xD
16:25 Irreversible: well then it's fine
16:25 Irreversible: really good diff
16:25 Sonnyc: Thanks :3
16:26 Sonnyc: Well actually I've ignored Finishes in the kiai to emphasize Whistle better
16:26 Irreversible: i see
16:26 Sonnyc: Will adding them anyways be better?
16:26 Irreversible: just on the begin of the fountain maybe
16:26 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317595 Taecyoun, Wooyoung, Suzy, Kim Soo-hyun, JOO - Dream High [Normal]]
16:26 Irreversible: 01:03:738 (5) -
16:27 Irreversible: i would stick to the vocals here, since this red tick is quite hard to get
16:27 Irreversible: 01:28:541 (8) - move a bit to the top? to keep flow and get a pentagon
16:28 Sonnyc: Think Normal
16:28 Irreversible: 01:44:604 (2,3,1) - keep the round flow here please, it looks so
weird.http://puu.sh/500eG.jpg 16:28 Sonnyc: 's distance was quite far owo
16:28 Sonnyc: How do you think?
16:28 Irreversible: i think it's quite hard to get since it seems a bit random (i mean it is in the song but it is like so random
16:29 Irreversible: well the normal is good as well, just those round flow things, sometimes it seems so straight.
16:29 Irreversible: placing is k and rhyhtm too
16:30 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317593 Taecyoun, Wooyoung, Suzy, Kim Soo-hyun, JOO - Dream High [Easy]]
16:30 Irreversible: 00:51:218 (1) - do you think this NC is necessary? i mean the combo before is just 2 and yeah..
16:30 Irreversible: also here you've added some finishes
16:30 Sonnyc: orz Fixing can't follow you xD
16:30 Irreversible: but no whistles
16:31 Irreversible: oh sorry lol ^^
16:31 Sonnyc: Added NC since that was.. little long
16:31 Irreversible: m
16:31 Sonnyc: I think I've added NCs for all 2/1 sliders
16:32 Irreversible: yeah
16:32 Irreversible: well then
16:32 Irreversible: easy is good too
16:32 Irreversible: i personally don't think you will have big troubles to get this ranked
16:32 Irreversible: but yeah just my opinion.
16:32 Sonnyc: :3 Thanks!