1. onislaughterer (4.15 stars, 2724 notes)

1. Add "code zts label" in the tags?

1. lol diff name
   
2. 01:03:609 (1) - this note feels very singular here+there isn't any sound here, so delete 01:04:044 (1) - (second spinner) and move it here (where the second spinner was)?
3. 01:10:566 (1,1) - delete? don't know why there are notes here
4. 01:10:566 (1,1) - end the spinner at 01:11:001 - if you applied the suggestion above
5. 01:17:522 (1) - move to 01:17:740 - ? (1/2 later)
6. 01:24:479 (1) - ^
7. 01:31:653 - add a note here?
8. 01:38:609 - ^
9. 02:07:522 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - remove finishers here, I think it's a bit hard with finishers
10. 02:06:653 - seriously, a 1-measure kiai. it's useless imo, remove it.
11. 02:08:392 (10) - add finisher here
12. 02:08:392 (10) - change to d? feels better for me
13. 02:25:892 (135) - move to 02:25:783 - ?
14. 02:29:370 (159) - move to 02:29:261 - ?
15. 02:32:848 (183) - move to 02:32:740 - ?
16. 02:36:218 (207) - add finisher here?
17. 03:17:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - man, try to change these drumrolls, i don't think they're really necessary
18. 04:06:653 (1,2) - I hope this is a thoughtlessnes mistake. Move 04:06:761 (2) - to 04:06:870 - or remove the finisher
19. 04:20:457 (90) - delete
20. 04:31:761 (161) - delete
21. 04:32:631 (168) - delete
22. 04:33:609 (173) - delete
23. 04:41:870 (1) - I think you can split this spinner at 04:45:348 -
24. 05:49:696 (41,42,43,44,45,46) - try to change these drumrolls?
25. 06:10:566 (1) - remove finisher
26. 06:24:479 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - REMOVE.THESE.FINISHERS.IN.THE.KATS.
27. 06:34:913 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - remove finishers, quite hard to play them
28. 07:35:674 (14) - remove to keep the finisher after
29. 07:35:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - snap them to 1/3
30. 07:36:653 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - remove finisher, quite hard to play them imo
31. 09:04:479 (166) - remove finisher
32. 09:07:957 (190) - ^
33. 09:11:435 (214) - ^
34. 09:14:913 (238) - ^
35. 09:18:392 (262) - ^
36. 09:21:870 (286) - ^
37. 09:25:348 (310) - ^
38. 09:28:827 (334) - ^
39. 09:46:218 (427) - ^
40. 09:49:696 (448) - ^
41. 09:53:174 (469) - ^

lZenxl wrote:

Whew mod from Queuhuehue

Kudosu if helped ( I can't find much problems in this )

01:02:305 (1) - I think it is more suitable to have 2 inheriting points on each side of the spinner, making the spinner sound around 15%. This is because there's no instrument in the background and it sounds very quiet at where the spinner is at, having the volume at 50% when playing the spinner sounds weird in my opinion. - Same goes for the other spinners at the intro section okay

01:57:305 (2) - Putting a kat here seems pretty inappropriate, it feels like the rhythm stops at 01:57:522 (5) - since there's a break after it and there is a (rather) high kat density here. ( This is with reference on how some taiko maps end their rhythms, with high kat density at the back and having a break after it ) okay, changed to d

02:08:392 - That is some sick kat rhythms, amazing thank you~

03:17:957 (445) - I think this don should be a big don since the music heavily emphasizes it okay

04:22:740 (104) - According to your kat density at this section here, there seems to be a lack of kats somewhere around this note, so i suggest to change this note to a kat this note is the same pitch as the previous note though, so no change

06:54:479 - This is a very awkward transition to a lower kat density, I suggest to change the kat rhythm here abit to smoothen out the transition changed it a bit

08:22:305 (8,9) - Swap | I think you miscounted the rhythm here, the kat should be on the 9th note since 2 whole bars is 8 1/1 notes, change if it is unintentional changed

This map's kat rhythm is undeniably smooth and very suitable to the music. The patterns you used are very creative, I really like it.
I'm not really sure about 1/2s only in the chorus, since it feels a bit too rigid that you are restricting it to mostly 1/2s.

Good Luck!

Nwolf wrote:

sry I'm late

woof

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02:10:240 (22) - Don't really like this note here, the previous rhythm suited the song more imo. Maybe move this to 02:10:022 - (because it is in the music too) and add a don on 02:10:457 - ? moved and added
02:20:131 (96) - Change to a kat to keep having one on the 4th white tick okay
03:04:044 - Move green section to 03:04:153 - because the last note of the 1/6 burst is pretty much not readable okay
05:41:870 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Add green sections here to slow down from 1.25 --> 1.00 so it's not as abrupt as it is right now? okay
05:42:740 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - Think these notes don't really fit to the song here, maybe delete all except the first one of each measure? okay
05:55:783 (49,50,51,52,53,54) - Add green sections here to increase from 1.00 --> 1.25 so it's not as abrupt as it is right now= okay
06:23:609 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - ^ okay
06:34:913 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - Could be big kats actually, ranking criteria doesn't disallow this, it's playable and it perfectly fits. And you use big kats on the same sound just before :> (aaaaand it could make DT scores more interesting) dialgadu pls lol okay restored
08:47:087 - 09:01:000 - Not a big fan of the 1/4 triplets in this part but I think that's just a personal preference of me


Nice map!

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DakeDekaane wrote:

Fast™

Delete the .osb file if you're not planning to add an SB.
Move the BG a bit down so her head doesn't get chopped.

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Remove the breaks? It looks a bit weird having the background fading in and out regardless of dimming level (unless 0% dim). ok

02:06:653 - 07:35:783 - The speeds up here are killers, I could catch them on a second play though.
02:50:240 (309) - Maybe remove this note so 02:50:131 (308) feels a bit more emphasized due being a strong beat. ok
02:57:196 (358) - ^ ok
03:43:392 - You could try something like this, the long kdkdkdkdk stream feels beter beginning in a white tick, also it feels a bit empty in the 1/2 kats, as the music doesn't vary too much. ok

03:50:348 - Something similar. ok
03:57:305 - ^ ok
04:04:261 - ^ ok
04:12:196 - Maybe add a don here for a similar reason :p ok
04:19:587 (83) - Move this to 04:19:805 - , it'd follow better the instrument you're following here. ok
04:20:240 (88) - Remove this one for the same reason as above. ok
04:32:522 (165) - Try a kat here, music changes a considerably in comparison with the previous pattern so a change would fit nicely. ok
04:32:522 (165) - dis finisher ;_;
06:41:145 (8) - don? ok

I really liked how this is mapped, have a star (//･ω･)//

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

Hi From my queue sorry for very late ;w;

04:17:087 (67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - This pattern not fit to the song imo so ..

1. 04:17:087 (67,68) - Ctrl+G okay~
2. 04:17:957 (72,73) - Ctrl+G okay~

08:01:870 (72) - k please more fit imo okay~
[*]04:17:957 (72,73) - Ctrl+G[/list]

08:03:066 (80) - remove ~ decrese some difficulty okay~
08:04:479 (89) - ... consider from 08:03:174 (80,81,82,83,84) - okay~

08:18:827 (23,24) - remove why you add there ? wanted to ease into next section, so keeping

sorry for short mod
Good Luck ~

Stefan wrote:

That song ww

02:08:392 - 03:04:153 - the idea to increase the SV is good but 1,25x looks too unnatural and not really good. Decrease it to 1,10x or 1,15x. okay, set to 1.15
02:16:435 (69) - I would remove this circle, you already have the exact pattern at 02:17:740 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) and repeating this is kinda boring so better make a rhythmical difference between these parts. okay~
02:35:493 (203,204,205,206,207) - That... doesn't plays good. That's not even mapped to the song. it's mapped to the synthesizers...I think it's fine though
04:33:609 (170) - D on the begin of a Stream? I don't think this is intended. yeah, it wasn't. fixed.
05:41:870 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - The idea is good but it's quite hard to read, use these lines. They make it much better to read: http://puu.sh/beSfh/d0b7579c6e.png
05:56:218 (43,44,45,46,1) - ^
06:23:609 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - ^ fixed all~
06:42:740 (8) - I honestly find it boring to play several times kkddk in a row.. The sound is nice no question! But you could create some more variety. Remove this circle so you got kk dk which plays with the following kkddk cool.
06:46:218 (8) - ^
06:51:000 (18) - ^^ fixed all~
06:55:348 (22,23) - Either switch their position because 06:55:348 (22) actually has the highe sound or remove k from (23) because it sounds quite misplaced. swapped
09:01:000 - Same issue like 02:08:392 - 03:04:153. fixed~

1. 07:11:653 (16,17,18,19,20) - how about change to kkddk , the music's pitch is changed variety
2. 07:25:566 (16,17,18,19,20) - ^
3. 07:42:087 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - try to reduce this stream , it is a bit long to me
4. 07:56:000 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^