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marina - Towa yori Towa ni

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Topic Starter
terametis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月14日 at 19:07:00

Artist: marina
Title: Towa yori Towa ni
Source: 少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
Tags: NewRulerNA wring Lass shoujo shiniki tengoku
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5186kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy N/A (1.26 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Extra (5.52 stars, 545 notes)
  3. Insane (4.75 stars, 456 notes)
  4. Normal (2.09 stars, 195 notes)
  5. wring's Hard (3.44 stars, 348 notes)
Download: marina - Towa yori Towa ni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Fuck yeah, marina!
for DT

Easy by NewRulerNA
Hard by wring
with video. NSFW
Guy
SPOILER
01:20 terametis: timingチェックしてもらえませんか!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
01:20 Guy: ヨッシャ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
01:20 terametis: ウオオオオオオオオオオオオ!!!
01:20 *terametis is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/356968 marina - Towa yori Towa ni]
01:23 terametis: 01:25:639 (1) -
01:23 Guy: 00:41:851 -
01:23 Guy: ここどうしよう・・・
01:23 terametis: ここらへんから盛大にずれてるきがするんだけど
01:23 Guy: 1/1ずつここでタイミング変わってる
01:23 terametis: ?!
01:23 Guy: 問題はここだけっぽいな・・・
01:23 terametis: ここがヤバイやつだったか
01:24 Guy: Offset+12だなぁ
01:24 Guy: 13651
01:24 terametis: ok
01:26 Guy: u-nw
01:26 Guy: 赤線必要そうな気もするけど
01:26 Guy: スライダーで誤魔化せる気もする
01:26 Guy: これだけ短いとちょっとわからんです!!
01:26 terametis: 01:25:651 (1) -らへん?
01:27 Guy: ア
01:27 Guy: ここみてなかった
01:27 Guy: ちょっとまってくださいね
01:28 Guy: これ
01:28 Guy: ボーカルが走り気味なだけだと思う
01:28 terametis: ボーカルウンコマンだったか
01:29 Guy: 01:25:651 - とりあえずここに
01:29 Guy: 3/4リズムの赤線1個
01:29 Guy: 01:31:051 - ここで4/4に戻る感じですね
01:29 terametis: ok
01:30 Guy: これでOKなはず・・・
01:30 terametis: アザッス!!!!!!!!!!
01:30 Guy: 00:41:851 - 00:42:151 - 00:42:451 -
01:30 Guy: ここピアノのリズムが明らかに変わってるけど
01:30 Guy: スルーしても作れそうだからいけるかも

IRC TIMING CHECK :)
Garven
Fuck yeah marina!
Topic Starter
terametis
Fuck yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Satellite
Hai doumo~ Here my mod~

[General]
  1. 曲始まる時間全部 00:13:651 - ここだからAudio Lead-In 1000とかはいってるのは0にして統一したほうがいいかも?
  2. WideScreenとかLetterboxはいらないような?Letterboxはともかく、WideScreenはワイド対応のSBが入ってないと意味ないからuncheck?
[Easy N/A]
  1. OD+1しませんか?0ってdiffバランス的にもどうかなーって
  2. 00:14:701 (2,3) - ここ2つの頭についてるFinishはバシバシなりすぎて逆にうるさいかも、音下げるかremoveしたほうがいいとおもいました。00:19:501 (2,3) - ここは後ろの音も大きくなってるので、フィットしていると思います。
  3. 00:23:101 (1) - 頭にFinish!
  4. 01:16:051 (1) - Finish~~~!!
  5. 01:20:851 (1) - ^ !!
  6. 01:27:451 (1) - Ncつける意味ないような・・・ないほうが次のnoteまでの道?が表示されるアレがあるからremoveしたほうがいい?
  7. 01:32:551 (4) - 上下対称もいいけど、歌詞の音とるなら 01:33:151 - ここまで拾ったほうがいい。
  8. 01:52:651 (1) - Finish!!!
  9. 02:01:351 (3) - 後ろにもFinish ??
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ここだけNc打つ感覚違うけど・・・真ん中あたりにいれていきませんか?
  2. 00:13:651 (1) - 頭Finish?
  3. 00:23:101 (1) - ^
  4. 00:31:351 (3,1,2) - 勢いあったけどここで一気に静まり返ってる感じあるからこうしてみませんか?人生一度きり!!!変更YOLOしく
  5. 01:04:501 (2) - clapあったほうが合ってる?
  6. 01:05:401 (4) - Drum Finish?
  7. 01:51:451 (2,3,4) - blanket使ったこんなのはどうですか?
  8. 02:21:451 (2) - DS変わるしNcいれておきますか?
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:401 (3,4) - 3から4のときの音大きくなってるけどスペーシングそのままですが 00:14:701 (4,5) - 似たようなこういうところじゃスペーシング広くなっているのでこんな感じでこうしてみませんか?そのあとの流れは任せます!!
  2. 00:19:201 (3,4) - 両方ともCTRL+Gしたほうがイケメンなきがする
  3. 00:53:251 (5) - このあたりでNcほしい
  4. 01:04:351 (3) - x152 y212あたりにもってくると1.3と2.1で綺麗に見える?
  5. 01:14:626 - add noteして5連打にしたい
  6. 02:11:251 (3,4) - Kiai中だしどうせならストリームにしたい
hard wa looks fine desu !!!
Topic Starter
terametis

Satellite wrote:

Hai doumo~ Here my mod~

[General]
  1. 曲始まる時間全部 00:13:651 - ここだからAudio Lead-In 1000とかはいってるのは0にして統一したほうがいいかも?
    :arrow:ok
  2. WideScreenとかLetterboxはいらないような?Letterboxはともかく、WideScreenはワイド対応のSBが入ってないと意味ないからuncheck?
    :arrow: よくわからないけど統一してればいいのではないか?
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ここだけNc打つ感覚違うけど・・・真ん中あたりにいれていきませんか?
    :arrow: ok
  2. 00:13:651 (1) - 頭Finish?
    :arrow: no
  3. 00:23:101 (1) - ^
    :arrow: ^
  4. 00:31:351 (3,1,2) - 勢いあったけどここで一気に静まり返ってる感じあるからこうしてみませんか?人生一度きり!!!変更YOLOしく

    :arrow: kangae tyuu
  5. 01:04:501 (2) - clapあったほうが合ってる?
    :arrow: ok
  6. 01:05:401 (4) - Drum Finish?
    :arrow: no
  7. 01:51:451 (2,3,4) - blanket使ったこんなのはどうですか?
    :arrow: ok
  8. 02:21:451 (2) - DS変わるしNcいれておきますか?
    :arrow: no
[Insane]
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:401 (3,4) - 3から4のときの音大きくなってるけどスペーシングそのままですが 00:14:701 (4,5) - 似たようなこういうところじゃスペーシング広くなっているのでこんな感じでこうしてみませんか?そのあとの流れは任せます!!
    :arrow: 3と4の間広げました
  2. 00:19:201 (3,4) - 両方ともCTRL+Gしたほうがイケメンなきがする
    :arrow: ん、んんんんん この部分の流れはイケメンになるんだけどちょっと保留
  3. 00:53:251 (5) - このあたりでNcほしい
    :arrow: ok
  4. 01:04:351 (3) - x152 y212あたりにもってくると1.3と2.1で綺麗に見える?
    :arrow: ok
  5. 01:14:626 - add noteして5連打にしたい
    :arrow: no
  6. 02:11:251 (3,4) - Kiai中だしどうせならストリームにしたい
    :arrow: ひと時の休憩を与えたい(与えたい
thanks for mod :3
NewRulerNA

Satellite wrote:

Hai doumo~ Here my mod~

[Easy N/A]
  1. OD+1しませんか?0ってdiffバランス的にもどうかなーって
    :arrow: no. この譜面は叩くタイミングがそれぞれのパートでバラけているのでそれを挙げることは1つの譜面として見た際の難易度バランスに良い影響をもたらさないように感じました。
  2. 00:14:701 (2,3) - ここ2つの頭についてるFinishはバシバシなりすぎて逆にうるさいかも、音下げるかremoveしたほうがいいとおもいました。00:19:501 (2,3) - ここは後ろの音も大きくなってるので、フィットしていると思います。
    :arrow: 音が少ないので少し過剰でも問題はないように感じます。ギターも小さくはないので。
  3. 00:23:101 (1) - 頭にFinish!
    :arrow: why? finishなしは前のギターの所から区別をさせる意味も含んでいて、理由次第では直すかもしれません
  4. 01:16:051 (1) - Finish~~~!!
    :arrow: no. その箇所は曲に強い音がなく、ただ曲調の変化の節目である以上の意味を持たないポイントです。なのでそのfinishを追加する合理性に欠けているように感じられました。
  5. 01:20:851 (1) - ^ !! :arrow: same
  6. 01:27:451 (1) - Ncつける意味ないような・・・ないほうが次のnoteまでの道?が表示されるアレがあるからremoveしたほうがいい?
    :arrow: これらはスローパートを強調し、区別させるために加えたNCです。さらに言うならfollowpointを初心者は見て予測し、打つことを恐らくせず、このオブジェクトの密度を考えるとそれが特に必要となることもないはずです。
  7. 01:32:551 (4) - 上下対称もいいけど、歌詞の音とるなら 01:33:151 - ここまで拾ったほうがいい。
    :arrow: no. この譜面は歌詞を完全に無視しているはずです。歌詞をフォローすることでオブジェクトの密度、難易度バランスの調節が困難になってしまいます。一貫性を失ってまでそれを部分的に採用したいとは考えません。ごめんなさい
  8. 01:52:651 (1) - Finish!!!
    :arrow: ok
  9. 02:01:351 (3) - 後ろにもFinish ??
    :arrow: 02:02:251 (1) - にfinish
code
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 97351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Towa yori Towa ni
TitleUnicode:永久より永遠に
Artist:marina
ArtistUnicode:marina
Creator:terametis
Version:Easy N/A
Source:Shoujo Shiniki ∽ Shoujo Tengoku -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
Tags:NewRulerNA wring
BeatmapID:363725
BeatmapSetID:143507

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http://puu.sh/7lf8F.zip

ty satelitte
kintyan
Hai doumo~

[Easy N/A]
AR-1? OD0なのでもっと遅くして良いと思います
00:13:651 ~ 00:22:351 全てのFinishが不要だと思いました。特に強調させるような音も無いですし
00:18:451 (1) - (上の指摘をskipした場合)ここだけスライダーの頭にfinishがついてるのはmiss?
00:23:101 ~ 曲調が変わる箇所ですので、少しパターンを変えたいです。ここ以前の音取りと一緒で少し単調だと感じました。
slider endの1/1拍後の白線の上にciecleを置きませんか?
00:31:501 (6) - nc
01:07:051 (1) and 01:11:851 (1) - さすがに繰り返し過ぎだと思います。2/1sliderの折り返しを二つにしませんか?
01:16:051 (1) - Kiai timeの開始地点?なのでFinishがあっても良いと思います
02:21:451 (1) and 02:22:351 (2) - この二つの終点のfinishをremove? 曲自体に合わせるならば不必要だと思います

[Normal]
このdiffだけslider tick rateが1なので2に変更?
AIbotでsnappedのエラーが出てます。チェックしておいて下さい :3
00:52:351 (3,1) - switch nc, drum hitsoundが3から入るのでncが欲しいところ
00:55:651 (3) - nc
01:42:901 - add circle?
02:19:951 (3) - 02:21:451 (2) - nc?

[wring' Hard]
diff nameにも入ってるので問題はないと思うのですが、このdiffだけtagに''wring''が入ってないので追加しておいて下さい
00:28:051 (1) - ctrl+G
00:27:751 (7,1) - 配置の提案
SPOILER

もしくは 00:28:051 (1) - をCtrl+G
00:34:351 (2) - over jumpだと思います。特に目立った音もないので縮めてもいいかと
00:34:951 (4) - ^
00:59:251 (1) - ctrl+G
01:06:451 (3) - nc?
01:10:351 (4) - ctrlG
01:28:351 (1,2) - switch nc
01:36:001 (4) - nc
01:51:601 (1,2) - switch nc

[Insane]
00:17:851 (7) - nc?
00:22:651 (6) - ^
00:23:101 (1) - slider headにfinishが合ったほうが締まる?かも
00:24:301 (5,6) - 完全に僕の好みですが、配置の提案です
SPOILER

00:24:151 (4) - をもう少し上に持って行くと尚いいかもしれません
これとかも
02:13:051 (1) - ctrlG?

good luck!!!
もしかしたら生意気な文章になってるかもしれませんが気にしないでください :3
何も考えないで打ってたらこうなった\(^o^)/
NewRulerNA

Sheryl wrote:

Hai doumo~

[Easy N/A]
AR-1? OD0なのでもっと遅くして良いと思います
:arrow: no. まずODが低い理由が以下の通り

NewRulerNA wrote:

この譜面は叩くタイミングがそれぞれのパートでバラけている
次にARがこの数値である理由はアプローチサークルを見て叩くことができ、かつ最も妥協できるラインなのでこういった設定になっています。これ以上下げればそれは簡単になるのではなく、単に見難くなるだけでプレイに影響がでると思います。
00:13:651 ~ 00:22:351 全てのFinishが不要だと思いました。特に強調させるような音も無いですし
:arrow: no. それぞれのギターの音は大きく、拾っている音が少ないEZではそれをする十分な理由を備えています。
00:18:451 (1) - (上の指摘をskipした場合)ここだけスライダーの頭にfinishがついてるのはmiss?
:arrow: ミスでした
00:23:101 ~ 曲調が変わる箇所ですので、少しパターンを変えたいです。ここ以前の音取りと一緒で少し単調だと感じました。
slider endの1/1拍後の白線の上にciecleを置きませんか?
:arrow: no. 私はこれを単調だとしても、アレンジを加える余裕がこの難易度、BPMにおいては存在せず、それをするべきではないように感じました。
さらに理由を加えるなら、EZとしての一つの譜面の難易度のバランスを考慮すると、サビよりも密度が実質的にあがり、バランス上の理由から良い結果とはなり得ないと思います。

00:31:501 (6) - nc
:arrow: NCのパターンはこれで問題ありません。4つの長い白線に合わせられているので、それを変更する理由を書いてくれれば再考します
01:07:051 (1) and 01:11:851 (1) - さすがに繰り返し過ぎだと思います。2/1sliderの折り返しを二つにしませんか?
:arrow: no. 01:10:651 (2) - のギターを強調する事もできなくなり、アレンジの要素を排除する提案で、良いとは思いません。
難易度上の理由としてもこれは十分な長さ、リバースまでのタイムがありプレイヤーはそれを認識することが可能です。

01:16:051 (1) - Kiai timeの開始地点?なのでFinishがあっても良いと思います
:arrow:

NewRulerNA wrote:

no. その箇所は曲に強い音がなく、ただ曲調の変化の節目である以上の意味を持たないポイントです。なのでそのfinishを追加する合理性に欠けているように感じられました。
02:21:451 (1) and 02:22:351 (2) - この二つの終点のfinishをremove? 曲自体に合わせるならば不必要だと思います
:arrow: no. それぞれのポイントで強いギター音が存在し、また始点と近い音質を持っています。よってその理由はこの箇所では成り立ちません。

good luck!!!
もしかしたら生意気な文章になってるかもしれませんが気にしないでください :3
何も考えないで打ってたらこうなった\(^o^)/
thanks Sheryl

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wring

Sheryl wrote:

[wring' Hard]
diff nameにも入ってるので問題はないと思うのですが、このdiffだけtagに''wring''が入ってないので追加しておいて下さい otto
00:28:051 (1) - ctrl+G
00:27:751 (7,1) - 配置の提案 no, わざとです
SPOILER

もしくは 00:28:051 (1) - をCtrl+G
00:34:351 (2) - over jumpだと思います。特に目立った音もないので縮めてもいいかと
00:34:951 (4) - ^ x2を意識してます
00:59:251 (1) - ctrl+G 流れには沿いますが窮屈です
01:06:451 (3) - nc? 保留で
01:10:351 (4) - ctrlG no
01:28:351 (1,2) - switch nc ok
01:36:001 (4) - nc 保留で
01:51:601 (1,2) - switch nc no
thanks mod

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Topic Starter
terametis

Sheryl wrote:

Hai doumo~

[Normal]
このdiffだけslider tick rateが1なので2に変更?
:arrow: no,やたらカチカチなるのでこのままで
AIbotでsnappedのエラーが出てます。チェックしておいて下さい :3
:arrow: ok
00:52:351 (3,1) - switch nc, drum hitsoundが3から入るのでncが欲しいところ
:arrow: ok
00:55:651 (3) - nc
:arrow: ok
01:42:901 - add circle?
:arrow: 簡単にしたいのでこのままで
02:19:951 (3) - 02:21:451 (2) - nc?
:arrow: んー、このままで


[Insane]
00:17:851 (7) - nc?
:arrow: no
00:22:651 (6) - ^
:arrow: ^
00:23:101 (1) - slider headにfinishが合ったほうが締まる?かも
:arrow: ok
00:24:301 (5,6) - 完全に僕の好みですが、配置の提案です
SPOILER

00:24:151 (4) - をもう少し上に持って行くと尚いいかもしれません
これとかも
:arrow: んんん、00:23:551 (2) - 、00:24:751 (6) - 、00:25:951 (2) - とちょっと同じぐらいで飛ばしたい気持ちがあるのでこのままで
02:13:051 (1) - ctrlG?
:arrow: このままで
modありがとうございました :333
RandF
hai hai, doumo~

[General]
  1. tags suggetion:
    Lass
    ending
  2. 最近は日本語のsourceにする方が多いのでいかがですか? : "少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-"
[Normal]
  1. 01:03:901 (1,2) - 音取りの提案です。伸ばす音をsliderにした方が良いかと
  2. 01:12:451 (3,1) - avoid overlap
  3. 02:10:651 (4) - ちょっと不自然な気がします。素直にcurved sliderでいいんじゃないかと
[Insane]
  1. 01:22:951 (3,4) - 難しすぎかな・・・。DSを小さくしてほしいです
  2. 01:46:651 (1,2) - ^
  3. 02:13:051 (1,2) - これも02:11:851 (1,2) - のように点対称にした方が統一感あって良いと思います
[Easy N/A]
  1. 00:25:501 (3,4) - overlapぎみなので、無理してblanketしなくても良いと思います
  2. 00:27:751 (1,2,3,4) - beginner playerにこのstackは難しいと思います。1/2rhythmが混ざっていて難易度の高い場所ですので。
    特に00:28:801 (3) - はかなり厳しいかと・・・
  3. 00:57:301~01:03:301 (2) - 赤線スタートで統一されてますが、easyとしてはrhythmをとるのが難しく感じました。
[wring's Hard]
  1. 00:34:651 (3) - stackするなら00:33:751 (4) - の方が統一感が出るような気がします
  2. 01:20:251 (3) - ちょっとstackがずれすぎなような・・・
  3. 01:35:551 (3,4,5,6) - こちらの方が流れが良いかと
  4. 02:08:851 (5,6,1) - blanketしてはどうでしょう?
request ありがとうございました :)
機会あればまたぜひ~
~Good Luck~
NewRulerNA

RandomEffect wrote:

hai hai, doumo~

[Easy N/A]
  1. 00:25:501 (3,4) - overlapぎみなので、無理してblanketしなくても良いと思います
    :arrow: overlapを起こさないようにmappingされているので、それを変更する必要性があるようには感じられませんでした。
    加えて流れを重視した場合に、下から上に上げる円運動を維持させる意味もあり、これは現状維持とさせてもらいます。
  2. 00:27:751 (1,2,3,4) - beginner playerにこのstackは難しいと思います。1/2rhythmが混ざっていて難易度の高い場所ですので。
    特に00:28:801 (3) - はかなり厳しいかと・・・
    :arrow: スタックに関してというよりオブジェクトの密度に関してこのポイントは簡略することが可能で、難易度バランスの調節をする必要が確かにありますね。密度に関して修正しました。
  3. 00:57:301~01:03:301 (2) - 赤線スタートで統一されてますが、easyとしてはrhythmをとるのが難しく感じました。
    :arrow: 前のパートからギターで拾ってきているので音取りに一貫性を損ねる事はosuの最低難易度として優れているとは思いません。
    それぞれの音を聞くことで十分可能で、また多くのスライダーと低いODから1/2程度の多少のズレならばコンボブレイクを起こすこと無くプレイも可能です。

request ありがとうございました :)
機会あればまたぜひ~
~Good Luck~
ty RE

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: towa yori towa ni.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 97351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 53851
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Towa yori Towa ni
TitleUnicode:永久より永遠に
Artist:marina
ArtistUnicode:marina
Creator:terametis
Version:Easy N/A
Source:Shoujo Shiniki ∽ Shoujo Tengoku -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
Tags:NewRulerNA wring
BeatmapID:363725
BeatmapSetID:143507

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:0
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76,56,65851,2,0,P|40:32|-20:16,2,79.999990463257
144,164,67051,6,0,P|224:148|308:92,5,159.999980926514
412,152,70651,2,0,B|440:208|440:208|440:336,1,159.999980926514,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,344,71851,6,0,P|224:332|168:276,5,159.999980926514
228,72,76051,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,72,76351,2,0,B|300:64|320:120|320:120|368:132,1,159.999980926514
365,252,77551,2,0,B|320:264|320:264|300:320|228:312,1,159.999980926514
172,280,78451,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,78751,2,0,L|196:92,1,159.999980926514
319,121,79951,2,0,L|340:280,1,159.999980926514
284,312,80851,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,81151,2,0,B|208:256|208:256|132:256,1,159.999980926514
142,128,82351,2,0,B|208:128|208:128|284:72,1,159.999980926514
336,36,83251,6,4,P|392:56|464:108,2,119.999985694885
284,72,84451,2,4,P|228:52|156:0,2,119.999985694885
316,128,85651,6,0,B|384:164|384:164|336:240|359:323,1,239.999971389771,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,320,87451,6,0,B|176:240|128:164|128:164|196:128,1,239.999971389771,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,320,89251,6,0,B|296:320|256:372|256:372|216:320|152:320,1,239.999971389771,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,91051,5,4,0:0:0:0:
8,192,91351,2,0,P|72:192|128:168,1,119.999985694885
180,96,92251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,92551,2,0,P|244:96|300:120,1,119.999985694885
295,267,93451,5,0,0:0:0:0:
295,267,93751,2,0,P|239:288|180:288,1,119.999985694885
160,192,94651,1,4,0:2:0:0:
180,95,95101,2,0,P|239:95|295:116,1,119.999985694885,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,95851,6,4,L|300:296,1,119.999985694885
210,289,96751,2,4,L|184:172,1,119.999985694885
448,137,98251,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,137,98551,2,0,B|384:129|368:77|368:77|292:57,1,159.999980926514
196,64,99751,2,0,B|144:77|144:77|128:129|64:137,1,159.999980926514
32,192,100651,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,246,100951,2,0,B|128:254|144:306|144:306|196:320,1,159.999980926514
316,320,102151,2,0,B|367:306|367:306|383:254|447:246,1,159.999980926514
480,192,103051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,137,103351,6,0,P|400:84|316:64,1,159.999980926514
320,192,104551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,137,105751,2,0,P|118:79|195:63,1,159.999980926514
256,76,106651,6,4,L|256:208,2,119.999985694885
300,32,107851,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,108151,2,0,B|351:47|351:47|392:80|416:130,1,159.999980926514
416,253,109351,2,0,B|392:304|351:336|351:336|300:352,1,159.999980926514
256,304,110251,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,110551,2,0,L|40:260,1,159.999980926514
48,124,111751,2,0,L|208:124,1,159.999980926514
256,80,112651,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,124,112951,2,0,B|344:192|344:192|320:216|320:267,1,159.999980926514
191,267,114151,2,0,B|192:216|168:192|168:192|208:124,1,159.999980926514
272,108,115051,6,0,L|376:108,2,79.999990463257
192,8,116251,2,0,L|4:8,1,159.999980926514
64,132,117451,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,132,117751,2,0,P|116:196|208:212,1,159.999980926514
323,214,118951,2,0,P|399:193|448:132,1,159.999980926514
448,68,119851,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,68,120151,2,0,B|408:28|408:28|300:84,1,159.999980926514
195,75,121351,2,0,B|104:28|104:28|64:68,1,159.999980926514
84,128,122251,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,122551,2,0,P|152:160|196:252,1,159.999980926514
318,231,123751,2,0,P|357:162|428:128,1,159.999980926514
464,180,124651,6,4,L|480:312,2,119.999985694885
428,128,125851,2,4,L|412:-4,2,119.999985694885
380,172,127051,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,172,127351,2,0,P|340:232|320:320,1,159.999980926514
191,316,128551,2,0,P|175:238|132:172,1,159.999980926514
180,128,129451,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,128,129751,2,0,B|256:104|256:104|332:128,1,159.999980926514
332,256,130951,2,0,B|256:280|256:280|180:256,1,159.999980926514
120,232,131851,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,140,132301,2,4,B|196:96|196:96|244:144|244:144|336:144,1,199.999976158142
313,240,133501,2,4,B|244:240|244:240|196:288|196:288|152:244,1,199.999976158142
152,140,134701,6,4,B|196:92|196:92|232:156|316:144,1,199.999976158142
310,239,135901,2,2,B|232:228|196:292|196:292|152:244,1,199.999976158142,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,196,136951,6,0,P|180:148|208:60,1,159.999980926514
256,40,137851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,82,138151,2,0,P|337:154|404:196,1,159.999980926514
456,236,139051,6,4,L|392:348,1,119.999985694885
332,268,139951,2,4,B|236:354,1,119.999985694885
48,236,141451,6,4,L|84:96,1,119.999985694885
156,176,142351,2,4,L|192:36,1,119.999985694885
264,116,143251,2,4,L|292:4,2,79.999990463257
-Teina-
From Teller's team modding queues ( ・´ω・`)


Insane
  1. 00:55:951 (2,4) - I think that this two circle should have same distance for Next. 00:55:951 (2,3) - and 00:56:401 (4,5) - is same at rhythm. Also this part is not good for jump, the rhythm is not outstanding player is difficulty to click it.
  2. 01:05:251 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - In this stream, 01:05:851 (10) - is change some voice. And 01:06:151 - have a main point in voice (more loudly). I think stream is too long and you can change some pattern.
  3. 01:06:451 (1) - small ebb point here. And different with 01:06:751 (2,3,4) - . try it↓.
  4. 01:46:201 (4) - may be to far to jump to 01:46:351 (5) - (It is special)
  5. 01:55:726 (2,4,6,8) - overmap?
  6. 02:05:551 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - some circle overmap. e.g.02:05:626 (7,8) -
  7. 02:11:551 (4) - prev and next distance not balance or close.
  8. 02:14:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - some circle overmap.
  9. 02:14:701 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - some circle overmap.
  10. 02:15:451 (1,2) - 02:15:526 - and 02:15:826 - no voice here?

    hitsound:
  11. 00:13:651 (1) - add finish
  12. 00:14:701 (4) - ^
  13. 00:15:901 (1) - ^
  14. 00:17:101 (5) - ^
  15. 00:19:501 (4) - ^
  16. 00:20:701 (1) - ^
  17. 00:21:901 (4) - ^
  18. 00:45:751 (3) - remove Whistle (same at 00:40:051 (1,2,3) - )
  19. 00:50:551 (3) - ^
  20. 01:43:051 (1) - add finish
  21. 01:47:851 (1) - ^
  22. 02:13:051 (1,2) - ^

    Timing:
  23. Some slider vol. only 5% (I hear that the slider should be not lower that 20%)

wring's Hard
  1. song setup > Design > remove Widescreen support.
  2. AIMOD problem.

Normal
  1. 01:16:051 (1) - distance not balance or close.
  2. 01:24:451 (1) - blanket it.
  3. song setup > Design > remove Widescreen support.

Easy NA
  1. 00:37:951 - the break time is too long.
  2. 01:22:051 - push 01:22:351 (3) - here and 01:22:951 - circle here. I think this rhythm as well.
  3. (KIAI time) P.S. 01:38:251- start here. This is a fast part but there have many space here.You can add/change something to make this part look fast.
  4. song setup > Design > remove Widescreen support.

Nice map.(╯°□°)╯彡
Let go for rank~
Topic Starter
terametis

RandomEffect wrote:

hai hai, doumo~

[General]
  1. tags suggetion:
    Lass
    ending
    :arrow: Lassだけ追加
  2. 最近は日本語のsourceにする方が多いのでいかがですか? : "少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-"
:arrow: 了解しました
[Normal]
  1. 01:03:901 (1,2) - 音取りの提案です。伸ばす音をsliderにした方が良いかと

    :arrow: できればBPM200の1/2を回避したいのでこのままで
  2. 01:12:451 (3,1) - avoid overlap
    :arrow: ok
  3. 02:10:651 (4) - ちょっと不自然な気がします。素直にcurved sliderでいいんじゃないかと
    :arrow: ok
[Insane]
  1. 01:22:951 (3,4) - 難しすぎかな・・・。DSを小さくしてほしいです
    :arrow: んー、このままで
  2. 01:46:651 (1,2) - ^
    :arrow: ^
  3. 02:13:051 (1,2) - これも02:11:851 (1,2) - のように点対称にした方が統一感あって良いと思います
    :arrow: 点対称でスペースをうまく使える配置を思いつかなかったのでこのままで
sorry for late reply, thanks for mod :)
Cezira
Hey there! Here are my suggestions:

Normal

Delete the circle at 00:32:851 (2) - and put one at 00:32:551 - Also start the spinner at 00:32:851 - (I know you wanna follow the beat, but let the spinner start right on the beat and between the circle and the spinner there is a too long break to let the space free.)

The spinner is in my opinion much too long for a normal diff. Maybe you let it end at 00:35:251 - and fill the free space with four sliders?

Distance between the two sliders at 00:40:051 (2,3) - is too short. Never deactivate the distance-snap on normal diffs pls.

The slider at 00:43:051 (2) - is too round. I suggest an angle at the end to fit the singing.

Instead of a slider at 00:47:251 (1) - I suggest a circle at 00:47:551 - , which you can put on the beginning of the next slider. It fits the little break in the singing.

00:49:651 (1,2) - Distance is too short.

I would delete the slider at 00:56:101 (3) - and take another reverse slider like 00:55:651 (2) -, so it gets a little bit easier for the player.

I suggest to make the slider at 00:58:351 (4) - longer (ending at 00:58:951 - ) and end with a single circle (at 00:59:251 - ), so the slider number 5 doesn't have to end right on the beat (many player's don't like this, it's confusing). You can blanket these two in a nice way.

01:00:751 (4,5) - same

01:03:901 (1,2,3,4) - Offbeats (even if it fits the singing) in a normal is not good - and single offbeat-circles is a no-go. But the offbeat is nice (and necessary) here in my opinion, so I suggest sliders, which make it easier not to fail at this part. For example a slider at 01:03:901 - 01:04:501 - (with an angle to fit the singing) and one at 01:04:951 - 01:05:401 - .

01:13:651 (1) - Why such a strange shape? You never use such a shape, I would change it.

01:19:651 (3) - NC

Make the shape of the slider at 01:24:451 (1) - like the shape of the slider before. It looks strange this way (especially it is just as long as the other slider).

Make the slider at 01:31:051 (1) - straight, so it's a hint for the player that the rhythm changes again.

01:35:101 (2,3) - Make a slider insted of these two offbeat-circles or change the whole pattern with the reverse slider from before.

I would start the slider at 01:40:576 (1) - at the white tick to make it symmetric to the pattern before, even though the singing starts a bit earlier. Don't make it too difficult for a normal diff.

01:47:101 (4) - is offbeat. I would change the two sliders 3 and 4 and make one (double-)reverse-slider.

Delete the circle at 01:52:651 (4) - and start the spinner there.

02:07:051 (1) - Strange shape. You didn't use that before. I would make it straight OR round ^^

I would suggest to make the slider at 02:20:851 (1) - longer (so it ends at the white tick) so it doesn't look the same like the sliders before. The rhythm changes (or better: You now don't follow the beat, but the singing ) and so should the sliders. You can blanket it with the last circle.



That's it! A wonderful song and a good map! It's not easy to map with all these offbeats, but great job :D
Topic Starter
terametis
:x

Cezira wrote:

Hey there! Here are my suggestions:

Normal

Delete the circle at 00:32:851 (2) - and put one at 00:32:551 - Also start the spinner at 00:32:851 - (I know you wanna follow the beat, but let the spinner start right on the beat and between the circle and the spinner there is a too long break to let the space free.)
The spinner is in my opinion much too long for a normal diff. Maybe you let it end at 00:35:251 - and fill the free space with four sliders?
:arrow: I don't here sound at 00:32:551. Beginner players need time to pick up the mouse after spin I think.
In addition, sound of the end and the sound of the start is different. It is strange for me.

Distance between the two sliders at 00:40:051 (2,3) - is too short. Never deactivate the distance-snap on normal diffs pls.
:arrow: Spacing of beat is enough. DS is not valid I think.

The slider at 00:43:051 (2) - is too round. I suggest an angle at the end to fit the singing.
:arrow: hmm, current state of angle is correct answer for me.

Instead of a slider at 00:47:251 (1) - I suggest a circle at 00:47:551 - , which you can put on the beginning of the next slider. It fits the little break in the singing.
:arrow: You are right. Change this part.

00:49:651 (1,2) - Distance is too short.
:arrow: same as reason of 00:40:051.

I would delete the slider at 00:56:101 (3) - and take another reverse slider like 00:55:651 (2) -, so it gets a little bit easier for the player.
:arrow: ahh, please give me time to think.

I suggest to make the slider at 00:58:351 (4) - longer (ending at 00:58:951 - ) and end with a single circle (at 00:59:251 - ), so the slider number 5 doesn't have to end right on the beat (many player's don't like this, it's confusing). You can blanket these two in a nice way.
01:00:751 (4,5) - same
:arrow: hum. This mapping based on singing. It is my favorite.

01:03:901 (1,2,3,4) - Offbeats (even if it fits the singing) in a normal is not good - and single offbeat-circles is a no-go. But the offbeat is nice (and necessary) here in my opinion, so I suggest sliders, which make it easier not to fail at this part. For example a slider at 01:03:901 - 01:04:501 - (with an angle to fit the singing) and one at 01:04:951 - 01:05:401 - .
:arrow: Same as above. I want to emphasize here, don't plan to replace the slider.

01:13:651 (1) - Why such a strange shape? You never use such a shape, I would change it.
:arrow: I hate this overlap. 
01:19:651 (3) - NC
:arrow: no. There is no change of tune.

Make the shape of the slider at 01:24:451 (1) - like the shape of the slider before. It looks strange this way (especially it is just as long as the other slider).
:arrow: Shape of the slider at 01:23:251. Perhaps improvement.

Make the slider at 01:31:051 (1) - straight, so it's a hint for the player that the rhythm changes again.
:arrow: no

01:35:101 (2,3) - Make a slider insted of these two offbeat-circles or change the whole pattern with the reverse slider from before.
:arrow: I want to emphasize here. It really important for me.

I would start the slider at 01:40:576 (1) - at the white tick to make it symmetric to the pattern before, even though the singing starts a bit earlier. Don't make it too difficult for a normal diff.
:arrow: Here part is thinking already for me. As an absolute condition of in me, start is 01:40:501. As a result, I chose here interval is 1/1. so no change.

01:47:101 (4) - is offbeat. I would change the two sliders 3 and 4 and make one (double-)reverse-slider.
:arrow: no.

Delete the circle at 01:52:651 (4) - and start the spinner there.
:arrow: no.

02:07:051 (1) - Strange shape. You didn't use that before. I would make it straight OR round ^^
:arrow: ok, change another one.

I would suggest to make the slider at 02:20:851 (1) - longer (so it ends at the white tick) so it doesn't look the same like the sliders before. The rhythm changes (or better: You now don't follow the beat, but the singing ) and so should the sliders. You can blanket it with the last circle.
:arrow: no, current state is good for me.

That's it! A wonderful song and a good map! It's not easy to map with all these offbeats, but great job :D
Thank you for mod :)
Laurier
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General
wring選手の難易度だけtagとソース違うからなおしておこう

Extera
ExteraだしARコンマ単位でもう少しあげてもよさそう。
00:16:651 (3) - 1個だけ直線sliderってのがなんか浮いてるし左に見える00:15:901 (1) - のラインに沿うような形にしてあげるといいかも。 http://puu.sh/ey767/47363ea02b.jpg
00:23:551 (2) - 微妙だけどぶらんけっとが甘いので少し上へ
00:32:926 (1) - ホイッスルが合いそう
00:57:451 (3) - Ctrl+Gして00:56:851 (1) - これと同じ向きにしたほうが流れ良さそう。
01:39:451 (2,3,1,2,3) - このへんの配置の提案。http://puu.sh/ey7Vf/0e6038a6a4.jpg 現状だと01:39:751 (7,1) - のつなぎが勢い殺しかけてるから、盛り上がりのはじめだしもっと飛ばしていっていいと思った。
01:41:251 (3,4) - こことかもそれぞれの向き逆(Ctrl+G)にして、勢いついたままAIMさせたほうが楽しそうhttp://puu.sh/ey8ar/19a872d89e.jpg
01:55:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - コンボ24とかなんかきたねえ!って感じするし半分ぐらいで色かえてみたらどう?
02:05:551 (6,7,8,9) - 色変わるところとのメリハリ付ける感じでこの部分はspacing小さめで作ってもいいと思う。 http://puu.sh/ey8yf/14f9a62cd3.jpg
02:09:301 (1) - なんかここの音がすごく軽く感じて違和感がある。finishとかつけてあげてみない?


Insane
Aiさんがなんかメモリにあってねーぞ!!!って言ってるから確認してあげて。
00:22:651 (1) - NCつけるなら次のnoteじゃない?そして願わくば次のnoteみにくいからちょっとずらして配置して欲しい。
00:32:401 -  ドラムの音に合わせて3連打なりなんかnoteはやさない?
00:40:051 (1,2,3) - 同じようなアンチジャンプのパターンがこのあとも2箇所でてくるけど、ここだけ極端に狭いから狭くするならあとのも同じぐらい狭くして、広いほうがいいならこっちもそんな感じでやったほうがパターン的によさげ
01:01:051 (1) - clapつけるならもう1個あとの単発のほうがよくないか!
01:07:351 (5) - 2角sliderを向かい合わせる配置続いてるし、ここも同じようにしてあげよ!http://puu.sh/eyaS1/72aa9af5df.jpg このへんにおいておけばそれっぽいでしょ
01:16:351 (2) - 流れに逆らわせないでAIMできるようにCtrl+Gしてあげるのはどうだろう
01:27:451 (1) - 少し曲げてあげて01:28:351 (3) - みたいな感じにしよう
01:32:701 (2) - もう少し上にもってってちゃんとブランケットできる位置に移動しよ
02:06:751 (1) - NCつけるなら次のsliderのほうが合いそう

全部見るとかいったけど疲れたので切ります
Topic Starter
terametis

Laurier wrote:

from Skype

General
wring選手の難易度だけtagとソース違うからなおしておこう

Extera
ExteraだしARコンマ単位でもう少しあげてもよさそう。
:arrow: NO!!!!
00:16:651 (3) - 1個だけ直線sliderってのがなんか浮いてるし左に見える00:15:901 (1) - のラインに沿うような形にしてあげるといいかも。
http://puu.sh/ey767/47363ea02b.jpg
:arrow: 直しました!!!
00:23:551 (2) - 微妙だけどぶらんけっとが甘いので少し上へ
:arrow: 直しました!!!
00:32:926 (1) - ホイッスルが合いそう
:arrow: 直しました!!!
00:57:451 (3) - Ctrl+Gして00:56:851 (1) - これと同じ向きにしたほうが流れ良さそう。
:arrow: NO!!!!
01:39:451 (2,3,1,2,3) - このへんの配置の提案。http://puu.sh/ey7Vf/0e6038a6a4.jpg 現状だと01:39:751 (7,1) - のつなぎが勢い殺しかけてるから、盛り上がりのはじめだしもっと飛ばしていっていいと思った。
:arrow: (7)を2倍ぐらい距離伸ばして、7-1-2を同じ距離にしたから勢い止まらなくなったはず!!
01:41:251 (3,4) - こことかもそれぞれの向き逆(Ctrl+G)にして、勢いついたままAIMさせたほうが楽しそうhttp://puu.sh/ey8ar/19a872d89e.jpg
:arrow:
01:55:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - コンボ24とかなんかきたねえ!って感じするし半分ぐらいで色かえてみたらどう?
:arrow: 直しました!!!
02:05:551 (6,7,8,9) - 色変わるところとのメリハリ付ける感じでこの部分はspacing小さめで作ってもいいと思う。 http://puu.sh/ey8yf/14f9a62cd3.jpg
:arrow: NO!!!! かっこよくはなるけど02:04:801 (2,3,4) - と同じぐらいのスペーシングのほうが勢いが好き!
02:09:301 (1) - なんかここの音がすごく軽く感じて違和感がある。finishとかつけてあげてみない?
:arrow: NO!!!!


Insane
Aiさんがなんかメモリにあってねーぞ!!!って言ってるから確認してあげて。
:arrow: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
00:22:651 (1) - NCつけるなら次のnoteじゃない?そして願わくば次のnoteみにくいからちょっとずらして配置して欲しい。
:arrow: NC削除!!
00:32:401 -  ドラムの音に合わせて3連打なりなんかnoteはやさない?
:arrow: 3連打が2ニョッキした
00:40:051 (1,2,3) - 同じようなアンチジャンプのパターンがこのあとも2箇所でてくるけど、ここだけ極端に狭いから狭くするならあとのも同じぐらい狭くして、広いほうがいいならこっちもそんな感じでやったほうがパターン的によさげ
:arrow: 直しました!!!
01:01:051 (1) - clapつけるならもう1個あとの単発のほうがよくないか!
:arrow: 直しました!!!
01:07:351 (5) - 2角sliderを向かい合わせる配置続いてるし、ここも同じようにしてあげよ!http://puu.sh/eyaS1/72aa9af5df.jpg このへんにおいておけばそれっぽいでしょ
:arrow: たぶんここらへんパートごとかえる!!!!
01:16:351 (2) - 流れに逆らわせないでAIMできるようにCtrl+Gしてあげるのはどうだろう
:arrow: 直しました!!!
01:27:451 (1) - 少し曲げてあげて01:28:351 (3) - みたいな感じにしよう
:arrow: 直しました!!!
01:32:701 (2) - もう少し上にもってってちゃんとブランケットできる位置に移動しよ
:arrow: 1をさげた!!
02:06:751 (1) - NCつけるなら次のsliderのほうが合いそう
:arrow: 直しました!!!


全部見るとかいったけど疲れたので切ります
ありがとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wring

RandomEffect wrote:

[wring's Hard]
  1. 00:34:651 (3) - stackするなら00:33:751 (4) - の方が統一感が出るような気がします 保留
  2. 01:20:251 (3) - ちょっとstackがずれすぎなような・・・ ok
  3. 01:35:551 (3,4,5,6) - こちらの方が流れが良いかと ok
  4. 02:08:851 (5,6,1) - blanketしてはどうでしょう? 保留
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232,88,126301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,348,131401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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