This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月8日 at 15:30:36

Artist: M2U
Title: Jump to Summer
Source: O2jam U
Tags: Banami
BPM: 140.01
Filesize: 4053kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:

1. HD - 5Key (2.91 stars, 1022 notes)
2. MX - 5Key (4.28 stars, 1514 notes)
3. NM - 5Key (1.88 stars, 675 notes)

Download: M2U - Jump to Summer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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黑歷史
作圖經驗太少 所以圖可能會有點爛
My 1st 5K beatmap and my 1st beatmap for rank.
Enjoy it !

5K NM的建议
LINE:1,2,3,4,5

首先是用1/4
00:01:356 - offset我测的是1356
01:10:137 - 在这里用上面的timing加一个预览播放，就是那个set什么的


然后是谱子的问题
00:05:252 - 后面的两个楼梯太突然，你确定这是NM？
00:07:141 (7141|1) - LINE1的面条在00:07:141 (7141|1) - 结束
00:10:355 - LINE4的面条最好在加一个note，一般面条的结尾都有note的 00:11:007 - 像这个做的就很不错
我改到了这里，总体很棒，你后面再看看

xeona wrote:

5K NM的建议
LINE:1,2,3,4,5

首先是用1/4
00:01:356 - offset我测的是1356
01:10:137 - 在这里用上面的timing加一个预览播放，就是那个set什么的


然后是谱子的问题
00:05:252 - 后面的两个楼梯太突然，你确定这是NM？
00:07:141 (7141|1) - LINE1的面条在00:07:141 (7141|1) - 结束
00:10:355 - LINE4的面条最好在加一个note，一般面条的结尾都有note的 00:11:007 - 像这个做的就很不错
我改到了这里，总体很棒，你后面再看看

THANK YOU 小X

啊拉~5K谱子 支持哟~ 哪天来混个kd

Simple_Star wrote:

啊拉~5K谱子 支持哟~ 哪天来混个kd

謝謝:P
不過第一次做譜子 可能做得不太好
需要修改的地可能很多

支持

victorica_db wrote:

:o 支持

謝謝你:D

Hello, from queue

Columns

12345

[General]
Check AiMod on all diffs for some problems (Crtl+Shift+A to open it)

[5K EZ]

This diff needs hitsounds

00:04:141 (4141|3) - move to 5

00:10:141 (10141|3) - move to 3

00:10:569 (10569|4) - move to 4

00:24:282 - add a note in 4

00:33:282 (33282|1,33710|1) - move one of these notes in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert

00:40:996 (40996|0,41424|0) - ^

01:01:030 (61030|1,61137|4) - this pattern starts in Blue Line, this pattern must be starts in 01:00:923 -

01:28:778 (88778|2) - move to 5 ?

[5K NM]

this diff is pretty fine but there are some issues

00:40:996 (40996|3,41424|3) - move one of these in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert too...

01:36:920 (96920|1) - move this to 3

[5K HD]

look in this diff is fine too

that's all

sorry for lazy mod xD

Good luck !

FGSky wrote:

Hello, from queue

Columns

12345

[General]
Check AiMod on all diffs for some problems (Crtl+Shift+A to open it)

[5K EZ]

This diff needs hitsounds

00:04:141 (4141|3) - move to 5

00:10:141 (10141|3) - move to 3

00:10:569 (10569|4) - move to 4

00:24:282 - add a note in 4

00:33:282 (33282|1,33710|1) - move one of these notes in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert

00:40:996 (40996|0,41424|0) - ^

01:01:030 (61030|1,61137|4) - this pattern starts in Blue Line, this pattern must be starts in 01:00:923 -

01:28:778 (88778|2) - move to 5 ?

[5K NM]

this diff is pretty fine but there are some issues

00:40:996 (40996|3,41424|3) - move one of these in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert too...

01:36:920 (96920|1) - move this to 3

[5K HD]

look in this diff is fine too

that's all

sorry for lazy mod xD

Good luck !

All fixed
Thank you for mod and star
Thank you very much!! FGSky

路過

Hello~
Mod by your request,Column:1 2 3 4 5
[General]
如果一张谱子中只有一个K数的话 是不需要加上5K的
OD和HP..其实有潜规则(.)最少要5以上吧
要rank的话 每个Diff都需要Hitsound
[5K EZ]
实际难度大于EZ 无限接近NM
HP6 OD6
00:18:711 (18711|4,19140|3,19568|2,19997|1,20426|0) - Ctrl+J
00:20:854 (20854|4) - Move to 3
00:30:068 - ~ 00:32:853 - 不推荐跟Vocal 跟前面一样的鼓点就行了
00:33:068 (33068|4) - Remove
00:37:567 - ~ 00:43:353 - 这种程度是NM了 建议简化 还有不推荐用超短条 例如 00:41:745 (41745|2) -
00:52:888 (52888|1) - 音略轻 在EZ里就删掉吧
01:02:208 - 我推荐这种情况还是把条子粘起来比较好 比较影响手感
01:03:065 - 同上
01:36:706 - Add a Note at 3
01:41:420 - Add a Note at 5
01:59:633 (119633|4,119740|3,120276|0) - 简化难度 只抓最明显的节奏就好 Remove
02:27:702 - 条子和Note粘起来
02:28:345 - 同上
02:29:202 - 同上
02:29:631 (149631|1) - 变成Note就行
02:46:558 (166558|2) - Move to 5

[5K NM]
HP7 OD7
00:01:891 (1891|0) - Remove
00:01:570 (1570|3) - End at 00:01:998 -
00:07:355 - 有点违和感 我的建议是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290425
00:08:426 - Add 2 Notes at 2 and 5
00:21:283 - 感觉这边用2个Note一排就够了,排列方面 我的想法是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290433
00:22:997 - 不太好 Try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290438
00:48:495 - 这里的长音要抓应该是这样子的--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290442
00:54:173 (54173|4) - Move to 00:54:066 -
00:54:387 - Add a Note at 4
00:57:923 (57923|2) - End at 00:58:137 - 并加一个Note
01:01:458 - 在2或者4加一个Note
01:01:458 (61458|2) - 然后这个条子从 01:01:565 - 开始
01:20:207 - 长音应该这样抓---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290454
01:22:778 - 这里直接变成Note
01:31:778 (91778|1) - Move to 1
01:31:992 (91992|0,92099|1) - 对NM来说太难.Remove
01:32:313 (92313|3) - 移到 01:32:206 - 时间点的第三轨道
01:32:528 - ~ 01:33:706 - 跟鼓点 咚咚咚的音
01:42:920 - 条子粘起来
02:01:026 - Remove one of them
02:06:489 - 条子粘起来
02:07:882 - ~ 02:08:204 - 都变成1个Note
02:08:418 - Add a Note at 5
02:34:987 - 变成Note
02:35:309 - 同上

[5K HD]
HP8 OD7
00:01:570 - Add a Hold,end at 00:01:784 -
00:16:354 - ~ 00:16:783 - 感觉没有那么重的音 全都1个Note吧
00:42:710 - 建议全都变成Note 或者只留1个还是原状
00:42:924 - 这里加1~2个Note
00:50:423 (50423|3) - Move to 1
00:50:852 (50852|1) - Move to 5
01:31:135 - Remove 1个
01:31:778 - 01:31:992 - 各删1个
01:47:419 (107419|0) - 变成Hold,end at 01:47:634 -
HD做的不错哦 Good Luck~

Spy wrote:

路過

你好

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello~
Mod by your request,Column:1 2 3 4 5
[General]
如果一张谱子中只有一个K数的话 是不需要加上5K的
OD和HP..其实有潜规则(.)最少要5以上吧
要rank的话 每个Diff都需要Hitsound
[5K EZ]
实际难度大于EZ 无限接近NM
HP6 OD6
00:18:711 (18711|4,19140|3,19568|2,19997|1,20426|0) - Ctrl+J
00:20:854 (20854|4) - Move to 3
00:30:068 - ~ 00:32:853 - 不推荐跟Vocal 跟前面一样的鼓点就行了
00:33:068 (33068|4) - Remove
00:37:567 - ~ 00:43:353 - 这种程度是NM了 建议简化 还有不推荐用超短条 例如 00:41:745 (41745|2) -
00:52:888 (52888|1) - 音略轻 在EZ里就删掉吧
01:02:208 - 我推荐这种情况还是把条子粘起来比较好 比较影响手感
01:03:065 - 同上
01:36:706 - Add a Note at 3
01:41:420 - Add a Note at 5
01:59:633 (119633|4,119740|3,120276|0) - 简化难度 只抓最明显的节奏就好 Remove
02:27:702 - 条子和Note粘起来
02:28:345 - 同上
02:29:202 - 同上
02:29:631 (149631|1) - 变成Note就行
02:46:558 (166558|2) - Move to 5

[5K NM]
HP7 OD7
00:01:891 (1891|0) - Remove
00:01:570 (1570|3) - End at 00:01:998 -
00:07:355 - 有点违和感 我的建议是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290425
00:08:426 - Add 2 Notes at 2 and 5
00:21:283 - 感觉这边用2个Note一排就够了,排列方面 我的想法是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290433
00:22:997 - 不太好 Try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290438
00:48:495 - 这里的长音要抓应该是这样子的--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290442
00:54:173 (54173|4) - Move to 00:54:066 -
00:54:387 - Add a Note at 4
00:57:923 (57923|2) - End at 00:58:137 - 并加一个Note
01:01:458 - 在2或者4加一个Note
01:01:458 (61458|2) - 然后这个条子从 01:01:565 - 开始
01:20:207 - 长音应该这样抓---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290454
01:22:778 - 这里直接变成Note
01:31:778 (91778|1) - Move to 1
01:31:992 (91992|0,92099|1) - 对NM来说太难.Remove
01:32:313 (92313|3) - 移到 01:32:206 - 时间点的第三轨道
01:32:528 - ~ 01:33:706 - 跟鼓点 咚咚咚的音
01:42:920 - 条子粘起来
02:01:026 - Remove one of them
02:06:489 - 条子粘起来
02:07:882 - ~ 02:08:204 - 都变成1个Note
02:08:418 - Add a Note at 5
02:34:987 - 变成Note
02:35:309 - 同上

[5K HD]
HP8 OD7
00:01:570 - Add a Hold,end at 00:01:784 -
00:16:354 - ~ 00:16:783 - 感觉没有那么重的音 全都1个Note吧
00:42:710 - 建议全都变成Note 或者只留1个还是原状
00:42:924 - 这里加1~2个Note
00:50:423 (50423|3) - Move to 1
00:50:852 (50852|1) - Move to 5
01:31:135 - Remove 1个
01:31:778 - 01:31:992 - 各删1个
01:47:419 (107419|0) - 变成Hold,end at 01:47:634 -
HD做的不错哦 Good Luck~

All fixed
謝謝你的幫忙 Thank you for mod !!
關於EZ方面 我根據你的意見我再進行了一些簡化 不過可能還需要再簡化一點
至於Hitsound 方面 我還是有點一頭霧水 不知道是不是這樣弄

From Zenx' Mod Queue

Just going for a overall feedback mod

Wrong offset: 1356 - > 1570

I'm just going to give some comments about this mapset, it is going to take a big list of mods to fix some errors

Remove the first Kiai time 00:24:469 -, this section of the music is just an intro not the chorus

Move the start of the 2nd Kiai time to 01:10:136 -, the chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 01:42:491

Move the start of the 3rd Kiai time to 02:16:989 -, the 2nd chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 02:52:772 - ( Since the chorus drags on )

Pretty amazing SV usage on the dubstep portion, however, I don't really see anything else very unique and exciting about this map other than that in my opinion

I suggest to add hitsound before asking me to re-check this, it's better to just mod both the hitsound and chart in one go

Is there a higher quality BG? If not, it's okay to leave it as it is

You don't have to add "5K" in-front of the Difficulty names if every difficulty is 5K

Going to be very honest here, your map is NOT standing out much from the rest of the ranked maps, you need something special in this mapset to make it more worth playing than the other maps. For example, you can create hammers and inverse LNs to emphasize certain parts of the music.

Good luck! Your mapset is pretty great for starters, just try to add some unique patterns

支持!
will mod if I have time \:D/

閒著沒事隨便看了一下你的圖。。

[General]
單純一個Key的圖不用在難度名標示幾K

[5K EZ]
既然是EZ難度嘛，顧名思義是要給新手玩的
所以我建議你用1/2去做圖就行了，你的圖有用到1/4，感覺比較沒這麼簡單
00:01:356 (1356|0,1356|4) - 像這2個，跟你後面抓的音不太一樣，我個人建議你把這2個改成在00:01:570加上Note
還有Note記得對準音高，音也不要混著抓，適時加上LN
00:09:712 (9712|1) - 其實可以刪除
我只點了一個地方，不過實際上很多地方都該處理
還有就是重音方面，重音最好以2個Note以上表示
都是1個Note有一種沒特別強調的感覺
可以追人聲，也可以追背景音
不過要分段，不能一次同一段就抓這又抓那的，會有點混亂
這難度偏難了，事實上應該叫做NM

[5K NM]
同上難度方面，這個應該叫做HD
我在上一個難度忘記點出一個很重要的問題就是，不要原創節奏
00:02:963 (2963|1) - 這個地方沒音，理所當然這個Note應該移除
大概沒什麼大問題

[5K HD]
問題大概都是犯前2個難度所犯的錯，所以我就不多說了

加油~比我當初第一個圖好很多~

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Queue

Just going for a overall feedback mod

Wrong offset: 1356 - > 1570

I'm just going to give some comments about this mapset, it is going to take a big list of mods to fix some errors

Remove the first Kiai time 00:24:469 -, this section of the music is just an intro not the chorus

Move the start of the 2nd Kiai time to 01:10:136 -, the chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 01:42:491

Move the start of the 3rd Kiai time to 02:16:989 -, the 2nd chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 02:52:772 - ( Since the chorus drags on )

Pretty amazing SV usage on the dubstep portion, however, I don't really see anything else very unique and exciting about this map other than that in my opinion

I suggest to add hitsound before asking me to re-check this, it's better to just mod both the hitsound and chart in one go

Is there a higher quality BG? If not, it's okay to leave it as it is

You don't have to add "5K" in-front of the Difficulty names if every difficulty is 5K

Going to be very honest here, your map is NOT standing out much from the rest of the ranked maps, you need something special in this mapset to make it more worth playing than the other maps. For example, you can create hammers and inverse LNs to emphasize certain parts of the music.

Good luck! Your mapset is pretty great for starters, just try to add some unique patterns

haha
This is my 1ST beatmap.
so that some parts maybe not doing well.
I will learn more about mapping.
I'm busy recently, so I will make the hisounds later.
Anyway
thank you for mod.

Spy wrote:

閒著沒事隨便看了一下你的圖。。

[General]
單純一個Key的圖不用在難度名標示幾K

[5K EZ]
既然是EZ難度嘛，顧名思義是要給新手玩的
所以我建議你用1/2去做圖就行了，你的圖有用到1/4，感覺比較沒這麼簡單
00:01:356 (1356|0,1356|4) - 像這2個，跟你後面抓的音不太一樣，我個人建議你把這2個改成在00:01:570加上Note
還有Note記得對準音高，音也不要混著抓，適時加上LN
00:09:712 (9712|1) - 其實可以刪除
我只點了一個地方，不過實際上很多地方都該處理
還有就是重音方面，重音最好以2個Note以上表示
都是1個Note有一種沒特別強調的感覺
可以追人聲，也可以追背景音
不過要分段，不能一次同一段就抓這又抓那的，會有點混亂
這難度偏難了，事實上應該叫做NM

[5K NM]
同上難度方面，這個應該叫做HD
我在上一個難度忘記點出一個很重要的問題就是，不要原創節奏
00:02:963 (2963|1) - 這個地方沒音，理所當然這個Note應該移除
大概沒什麼大問題

[5K HD]
問題大概都是犯前2個難度所犯的錯，所以我就不多說了

加油~比我當初第一個圖好很多~

你所點出的問題
之後我有好好地檢查及修改了一下
不過我不排除我會漏看了
所以我會再之後有空的日子再RE-CHECK一次
而且可能某地方依然會做得不太好

而難度方面的問題 老早就有人向我指明了
但一直沒修改w
這次我修改了
原EZ→NM
原NM→HD
原HD→MX

謝謝你的意見
THANK YOU FOR MOD

richardfeder wrote:

支持!
will mod if I have time \:D/

謝謝你

i see previous modder already show issue that i no need to show you again

[General]

i see you stolen image from google image search. "maxresdefault" usually from youtube

- delete "5K" since all difficult have same key setting
- highly recommend you to change image to better quality
- if you want this map to be ranked you need hitsound first

[Easy]

From Beginning to 00:37:567 - pattern too monotone, streaming left to right is making player boring to do it

- 00:14:105 (14105|3) - move to 4th

- 00:40:031 (40031|3,40138|0) - if you following guitar i suggest you to add note 00:40:246 - but i not recommend you to use 1/4 in Easy

- 02:46:558 (166558|4,166665|3) - change this pattern, doesn't fit

[Normal]

- 00:10:891 (10891|3) - change this to note, well doesn't fit through the beat

- 00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

- 00:25:782 (25782|4,26211|3) - bit hard to press, change the pattern position

- 00:29:211 (29211|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:30:925 (30925|3,31353|3) - move to 4th

- 00:38:317 (38317|4,38531|0) - this kind hold note position doesn't good after all, so if you want to make 1/4 pattern make sure that's "normal note" not "hold note" because weird, or move those LN to 1/2 or 1/1 beat

- 00:39:710 (39710|4,40031|3,40246|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

- 00:42:710 (42710|3,42710|1,43138|2,43138|4) - overmapped, change to note

- 01:01:030 (61030|1,61030|0,61137|2,61137|3) - what are you doing with this kind double note ? remove one each other

- 01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|1,95634|0,95634|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

[Hard]

- just start with comment since i believe this still doesn't good after all, first this double 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3605|2,3605|4) - you can't use for streaming because this is hard and have less sound which doesn't needed double note. then 00:10:891 (10891|0) - which unnecessary pattern, use normal note instead. and hold note 1/4 streaming like this 02:46:344 (166344|4,166451|3,166558|2,166665|1,166772|0) - is not good for this kind song. hold note is not reason for make it harder , hold note supposed to place if there's reverb sound such like trance - drumstep - electro and other that have this kind sound too.

Reikosaka wrote:

i see previous modder already show issue that i no need to show you again

[General]

i see you stolen image from google image search. "maxresdefault" usually from youtube

- delete "5K" since all difficult have same key setting
- highly recommend you to change image to better quality
- if you want this map to be ranked you need hitsound first

[Easy]

From Beginning to 00:37:567 - pattern too monotone, streaming left to right is making player boring to do it

- 00:14:105 (14105|3) - move to 4th

- 00:40:031 (40031|3,40138|0) - if you following guitar i suggest you to add note 00:40:246 - but i not recommend you to use 1/4 in Easy

- 02:46:558 (166558|4,166665|3) - change this pattern, doesn't fit

[Normal]

- 00:10:891 (10891|3) - change this to note, well doesn't fit through the beat

- 00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

- 00:25:782 (25782|4,26211|3) - bit hard to press, change the pattern position

- 00:29:211 (29211|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:30:925 (30925|3,31353|3) - move to 4th

- 00:38:317 (38317|4,38531|0) - this kind hold note position doesn't good after all, so if you want to make 1/4 pattern make sure that's "normal note" not "hold note" because weird, or move those LN to 1/2 or 1/1 beat

- 00:39:710 (39710|4,40031|3,40246|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

- 00:42:710 (42710|3,42710|1,43138|2,43138|4) - overmapped, change to note

- 01:01:030 (61030|1,61030|0,61137|2,61137|3) - what are you doing with this kind double note ? remove one each other

- 01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|1,95634|0,95634|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

[Hard]

- just start with comment since i believe this still doesn't good after all, first this double 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3605|2,3605|4) - you can't use for streaming because this is hard and have less sound which doesn't needed double note. then 00:10:891 (10891|0) - which unnecessary pattern, use normal note instead. and hold note 1/4 streaming like this 02:46:344 (166344|4,166451|3,166558|2,166665|1,166772|0) - is not good for this kind song. hold note is not reason for make it harder , hold note supposed to place if there's reverb sound such like trance - drumstep - electro and other that have this kind sound too.

all fix
Thank you for mod.
and i changed the diff's name yesterday and i need a time to find high quality image.
EZ→NM
NM→ HD
HD→MX