1. Hard (4.79 stars, 255 notes)
2. Normal (2.92 stars, 91 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

中文歌摸不动啊.-.

但是无论如何, SSM已经在0L出现. LZ下面还是美丽

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

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yf_bmp wrote:

HI, M4M

• 
  

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

[General]
tags是不是少了点 目前想不到加啥。。。难道我要把华语啊china那种也加进去吗orz，随便加了点
bg感觉有点奇怪啊 你不懂女生！
歌词感觉有点奇怪啊 你不懂女生！

[Hard]
00:03:273 (1) - 这种短间隔拉条完全重叠应该是unrankable的 可以稍微拉在不同一点的位置 其实是rankble的，只不过不适合放在hard diff里，改掉了
00:03:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard, 这样读不好 建议每个物件头尾方向掉下 不要啊，这样倒回去多好玩OVQ
00:13:144 (1,2) - 建议不这样 因为后面的小节同一位置没有相同的梗,或者后面也做成这样 为何要做一样。。。OVQ
00:20:547 (5,6) - ^
00:38:350 (5,1) - too close,要做梗的话这里也不适合 我觉得这个变ds梗在这里还算不错0.0
00:40:993 (4,5,1) - 因为是匀速移动,不等间隔对于hard来说读图会有些难 摸了那么多hard diff的我表示变ds什么的在hard里根本不是个事儿orz
00:52:627 (1,2,3,4) - 现在这种节奏在前后看起来有些不太合,可以试着做成这样: 反正木有循环，想到啥梗就用啥梗呗orz，这个图后面这种梗我也用了所以这里就保持现状好了

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00:54:742 - add note, 这里不加会略显突兀 没啊，感觉还行啊0.0
00:59:853 (6,7) - 同1,但此处是建议 nope
01:02:850 - why Kiai? 射喷泉
01:01:440 (2,3) - slightly close arranged ds
01:14:483 (1,2,3) - hard读图略难啊, 虽然kiai一开始也是这样但倒是不怎么会造成读图问题,这里因为前面01:13:778 (4,5,6) - 已经是1/4了 可以考虑完全重叠 这里我确实稍微有点犹豫，不过感觉打起来的话现在这么摆也没啥，再看看别的modder咋说好了
00:31:475 (7) - NC nope，没必要
01:02:674 (5) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:10:676 (1,2) - Normal还要叠? 空了一整拍，没事的
00:58:972 (2) - NC ok
01:01:087 (5) - ^ ok
01:02:850 - kiai去掉 nope

Hard感觉不错啊 希望能认真考虑一下我的mod 我check mod一向很认真0.0

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/143734 thx~同样中文 ok

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:625 (2) - 有點彎 跟00:02:920 (1) - 有點不配合 改了一下1的位置
00:42:051 (2) - 錨點有點多? 这是吐槽吗orz，稍微调了下blanket

[Hard]
難度上跟nm有點大差距 我觉得还在接受范围内吧0.0
00:47:691 (4,5) - 看到當場無言 咦orz
其餘沒太大問題 好吧噗

happy623 wrote:

YEA

irc modded

2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 妹纸
2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 我有张2diff 一分半的曲子
2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 想求个速mod行不
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: 恩
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359480 Yuki Hsu - Wo Shi Nv Sheng]
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: 多谢！
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: wawawa
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: 中文
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: 对
2014-01-25 00:15 happy623: irc 還是
2014-01-25 00:16 Hollow Wings: 噗，你说吧
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: ;w;
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: 00:13:849 (2,4) -
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: NM
2014-01-25 00:16 Hollow Wings: 嗯0.0
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: 雖然說不是不行 但覺得會視覺上有混淆
2014-01-25 00:17 Hollow Wings: 好，我考虑一下
2014-01-25 00:17 happy623: 00:15:259 (4) - 可能會早點了
2014-01-25 00:17 Hollow Wings: 应该可以变一下
2014-01-25 00:17 happy623: 恩恩
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 00:25:129 (2,3) - 這個都是
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 第一個diff來說多數都是新手玩
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 可能會被尾巴誤導了
2014-01-25 00:18 Hollow Wings: 这个会太难吗
2014-01-25 00:19 Hollow Wings: 好，那我换个吧0.0
2014-01-25 00:19 happy623: 00:48:396 (3,1) -
2014-01-25 00:20 happy623: unstack?
2014-01-25 00:20 Hollow Wings: 是让我stack perfec吗？
2014-01-25 00:20 happy623: 不要stack
2014-01-25 00:20 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 00:21 happy623: 嘛 不是不行, 但感覺會太難了
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 嗯。。。normal有个1分拍遮挡应该不是难梗
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 不过还是改了吧OVO
2014-01-25 00:22 happy623: 我最怕就是藍線會不會太難而已233
2014-01-25 00:22 happy623: 不過BPM低應該不會的
2014-01-25 00:23 Hollow Wings: bpm才80+噗。。。
2014-01-25 00:24 happy623: 話說Source是什麼;w;
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 徐怀钰
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 同名专辑
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 徐怀钰的第一张专辑就叫《徐怀钰》
2014-01-25 00:25 happy623: 沒記錯Source不要寫專輯名字
2014-01-25 00:25 happy623: 我BiBi那張就是這樣沒泡起了;w;
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 你那是同人曲
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 要写原作
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 这首是商业曲
2014-01-25 00:26 happy623: 那張也是商業吧qwq
2014-01-25 00:26 Hollow Wings: 哎？
2014-01-25 00:26 Hollow Wings: 我去问问
2014-01-25 00:26 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Song_Setup#Song ... _Meta_Data
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: "This is not to be used for things like album titles."
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: 好我懂了
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: 多谢！
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: qwq
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: 放去Tags吧
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 不用了
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 吗
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 哦对
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 网站搜的话title
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: 恩
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: unicode搜不了
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359480 Yuki Hsu - Wo Shi Nv Sheng [Hard]]
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: 00:37:468 (2,3) - 我的話會放遠點
2014-01-25 00:29 happy623: 不然跟前面ds差不多會點早
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 我思考一下
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 恩恩
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 我把00:40:288 (3) - 反向了一下
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 这样似乎也不错
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 01:19:066 (4) - 這個拆反會不會太快了
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 我怕會掉
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 拆反？
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: reverse
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 折
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 反
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: (orz 打錯了
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 折返!
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 这里没有折返啊
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 你是指反向的移动吗
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 我指滑條啊
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: 01:19:066 (4) -
2014-01-25 00:32 Hollow Wings: 这个没有折返啊orz
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: reverse sign
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: qwq
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: reverse 2 times
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: so fast
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: to react
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 我
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: 明嗎
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 我的图
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: !?
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 1:19:066没有obj。。
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: . . .
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: Hard啊
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: http://puu.sh/6wsgy.jpg
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: 我看错diff了噗。。。
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: qwwwwwwwqqqqqqqqq
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: 我的错！！！
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 00:35 happy623: 不要緊qwq
2014-01-25 00:35 happy623: 應該大致沒了
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: 00:37:115 (1,2) - 这里我感觉还好，因为变奏比较不明显所以就这样好了
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 好的
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: 01:19:066 (4) - 这个折返不难的，嗯OVO
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 看來您不喜歡太多NC啊
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 我的話會掉233
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: hard嘛nc不需要太多
2014-01-25 00:37 Hollow Wings: 是吗，那你觉得怎么改比较好
2014-01-25 00:37 happy623: 不知道
2014-01-25 00:37 happy623: www
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 嗯。。。这里的话其实就是一个读图的梗啦
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 应该没那么难，所以就这样吧OVO
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 多谢看图！OVQ
2014-01-25 00:38 happy623: 好;w;/

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
clear

Hard:
00:00:981 (1) - seems too short for song beginning, just remove? anyway should this be placed on 00:01:158 (1) - ? u r right, i just removed the spinner
00:29:361 (7,8) - i'm sure rhythm here should be same as on 00:26:540 (7,8) - same rhythm as well, just change objs 0.0
00:37:468 (2) - maybe end this one on white, this will help to keep rhythm easy i see, fixed
00:38:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - idk but timing here feels a bit off hmm, maybe i'll try to ask bats to check timing before ranking
01:08:314 (5) - maybe remove this note nope, this is just good

Normal:
00:34:295 (3) - maybe http://puu.sh/6xkWJ.jpg ok~
nothing wrong tho

Good Luck!

SuperContact wrote:

Mod via in-game Chat

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2014-01-25 17:55 SuperContact: 哦这次节奏和流畅性很不错嘛Xd
2014-01-25 17:56 Hollow Wings: 因为是善良图嘛
2014-01-25 17:56 Hollow Wings: 所以
2014-01-25 17:57 SuperContact: 移动还是杯具了，暂时
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: 我想快点rank这张图啊
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: 这样多个坑位
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 18:02 SuperContact: 善良点的话00:38:702 (1) - 不要放在相邻的位置orz
2014-01-25 18:03 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 00:25:129 (3) -
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 00:25:835 (5) -
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 感觉可以小跳一下
2014-01-25 18:05 SuperContact: 等等
2014-01-25 18:05 SuperContact: 好像也有点怪orz
2014-01-25 18:05 Hollow Wings: 因为是先打note
2014-01-25 18:06 Hollow Wings: 最多就23调一下
2014-01-25 18:06 Hollow Wings: 跳
2014-01-25 18:08 Hollow Wings: 00:47:691 (4) - ...
2014-01-25 18:09 SuperContact: timing 早了。。
2014-01-25 18:09 SuperContact: offset要+
2014-01-25 18:10 Hollow Wings: 多少
2014-01-25 18:12 SuperContact: 加10到15ms之间吧
2014-01-25 18:12 SuperContact: 我也不是专业测timing的orz
2014-01-25 18:12 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 18:13 SuperContact: 我建议+15
2014-01-25 18:14 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2014-01-25 18:15 Hollow Wings: 额
2014-01-25 18:15 Hollow Wings: +15太多了
2014-01-25 18:16 Hollow Wings: 我改成+12
2014-01-25 18:16 Hollow Wings: -945现在
2014-01-25 18:16 SuperContact: 好
2014-01-25 18:16 SuperContact: 00:44:181 (1) -
2014-01-25 18:17 SuperContact: 我建议两排滑条。。
2014-01-25 18:17 SuperContact: 拍
2014-01-25 18:17 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 咦
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 哎
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 不对啊
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 其实我很想保留00:44:530的重音
2014-01-25 18:19 Hollow Wings: 改成3/4slider+note好了0.0
2014-01-25 18:19 SuperContact: 这是我备选方案orz
2014-01-25 18:20 Hollow Wings: orz
2014-01-25 18:22 SuperContact: 总00:52:286 (8) - 这个换成一拍滑条？
2014-01-25 18:23 Hollow Wings: 这边是跟着之前的梗啦orz
2014-01-25 18:23 SuperContact: 之前是哪里？
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 00:49:818 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 一路复制粘贴-.-
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 8就在那个位置
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 你懂的
2014-01-25 18:25 SuperContact: 00:52:286 (8) - 滑条头在同一个位置就行了orz、反正节拍位置也不一样
2014-01-25 18:25 Hollow Wings: 嗯好吧orz
2014-01-25 18:25 Hollow Wings: 不过这边果然还是只能接3/4
2014-01-25 18:26 SuperContact: 也行
2014-01-25 18:27 SuperContact: 一拍的话是和7形成一组两个滑条的感觉
2014-01-25 18:28 Hollow Wings: 噗
2014-01-25 18:28 Hollow Wings: 7的话主要是跟4一个位置
2014-01-25 18:29 SuperContact: 一组是指节拍上一组的感觉，不是说位置上orz
2014-01-25 18:29 Hollow Wings: orz
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: 01:19:783 (6,7,8) -
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1279132
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: 换个曲线透一下气orz
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: 好的0.0
2014-01-25 18:39 SuperContact: 算啦就这样啦
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: 多谢看图!

1. Remove first period of kiai? It doesn't make much sense to me :<

1. 00:39:771 (2) - 0,04x Distance snap error.
2. 00:52:639 (1) - ^
3. 00:54:049 (3) - 0,05x DS error.
4. 01:05:682 (3,4) - Something like this would flow better:
   
   example

   
   You would have to redo the stuff afterwards though.
5. 01:12:381 (4) - 0,04x DS error.
6. 01:14:495 (6) - This doesn't look so good, because 6 doesn't continue the curve of 5 correctly. It would be hard to fix though. Maybe do something like this:
   
   example

   
7. 01:16:258 (2) - 0,15 DS error.
8. That's it already. Nice :3

1. 00:28:668 (5,6) - They don't continue curve and that makes it look not good. I'd prefer something like that again:
   
   example

   
2. 01:03:919 (1,2,3) - I think these overlaps look bad. I'd consider to change it
3. Great!

Zweib wrote:

request from in-game pm

[Normal]
OA5有点可怕呀 噗忘记调了，变成了od3 hp3
00:01:170 (1) - spinner会不会太短了。。。换成slider好像也不维和？ 我也不太清楚，只是想塞个转盘罢了，如果实在是不好那我再换0.0
00:29:373 (4) - 这个不弯下的话跟下个(1)组合起来总觉不太好看呀 4和前面的2是组合啦，1和后面的2是组合噗，而且我也挺喜欢弯的+直的（咦）这种组合的呀orz
00:52:639 (1) - 这个也可以弯下跟00:51:229 (2) - 做blanket的 这里就想直接直过去所以不想做blanket呢

[Hard]
00:22:321 (3,4) - 往左移点？和(5)的位置太直了 可以，fixed
00:35:277 (7) - 好像不是很必要 好，删了
01:13:790 (4,5,6) - 这个跟01:14:495 (1,2,3) - 放在一起感觉很容易让人误读啊。。感觉后面的放大间距也可以0 0 果然这个梗很失败啊，全都改掉了，顺便还改了一些相关的梗

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. Remove first period of kiai? It doesn't make much sense to me :< after 2 modders mentioned this, ok :3

[Normal]

1. 00:39:771 (2) - 0,04x Distance snap error. fixed
2. 00:52:639 (1) - ^ fixed
3. 00:54:049 (3) - 0,05x DS error. fixed
4. 01:05:682 (3,4) - Something like this would flow better: haha i prefer the one i've set
   
   example

   
   You would have to redo the stuff afterwards though.
5. 01:12:381 (4) - 0,04x DS error. fixed
6. 01:14:495 (6) - This doesn't look so good, because 6 doesn't continue the curve of 5 correctly. It would be hard to fix though. Maybe do something like this: well, thou ur idea is still good to me, the composing now is working pretty well in my mind, so i choose to keep this :3
   
   example

   
7. 01:16:258 (2) - 0,15 DS error. fixed
8. That's it already. Nice :3

[Hard]

1. 00:28:668 (5,6) - They don't continue curve and that makes it look not good. I'd prefer something like that again: alright this is exactly what i want
   
   example

   
2. 01:03:919 (1,2,3) - I think these overlaps look bad. I'd consider to change it no i won't 0.0
3. Great!

I love special, unique mapsets, and this definitely belongs to this category! This is truly a piece of art and I didn't expect this. Hitsounding is also really great. The style fits the song very much, amazing job! Good luck for rank ^-^ i'm glad u like it (thou some composing style didn't fit ur taste q:

EDIT: Have my star thx a lot :3

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Hard]
No kds plz :]
00:05:400 (4) - NC?

Well...! This mapset is pretty good. maybe I cannot help for this mapset.
so, I just shoot the star for this map!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hi!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Hard]
No kds plz :]
00:05:400 (4) - NC? nope for uhm... maybe this is just in one section so no nc here is just ok for most players, and for stack here i think it'll be fine. still thx for recheck the feedback :3

Well...! This mapset is pretty good. maybe I cannot help for this mapset.
so, I just shoot the star for this map! thx for the star, i'm really appreciate. i've mod ur map and i just forgot to shoot one, coz ur map is good as well lol.

kanon_sayuri wrote:

哦嘞♂哦嘞233 233

[Hard]

0.0一开始觉得滑条慢吞吞的不舒服，玩了两遍发现这滑条配合音乐挺可爱2333 才85的bpm把sv调高了感觉也不是很好，况且就现在来看这个滑条速度还是可以接受的嗯

Kiai Time部分的类似三连的，比如01:05:946 (6) - 01:11:586 (6) - 01:17:227 (7) - 建议去掉。01:14:054 (5) - 这个可以保留。 这些没关系的啦orz

00:22:498 (4) - delete 不要啊，前面都有的

00:29:548 (8) - 拆一下比较好，note+slider 为何啊，这里节奏柑橘没有任何问题啊

00:37:480 (2) - 往后再拉一下，到00:37:921 - 好

00:42:063 (3) - 稍微放远一丁点 微调了一下

00:44:178 (1,2) - 合并一下？ 不要，比较想强调一下2

00:46:998 (1) - 大白线直接一个note就好了，不要滑条。稍微停顿一下比较好一些 没有改掉滑条，不过这块节奏全都改掉了，只强调了长白线的音嗯

00:54:401 (6) - 拉到00:54:754 - ？毕竟有一个音0.0 这里节奏是故意这么下的

00:59:337 (5,7) - 完全重叠有点。。稍微错一下位？ 好的

[Normal]

00:09:278 (3,2) - 完全重叠 差了两拍应该没事

00:17:386 (3,4) - 3 在00:17:915 - 处结束，4在白线00:18:091 - 起手，红线00:18:443 - 结尾 不，这里节奏就想这么下

00:20:911 (4) - 折返一下 不需要

00:36:951 (2) - 后移，白线00:37:127 - 起手，红线00:37:480 - 结尾 不用，这里只是跟鼓而已

00:38:537 (1,2,3) - 换成这种？ 因为跟鼓所以不改

00:59:513 (2) - 和前面一样 nope

01:08:150 (5) - 和01:04:977 (2) - 照应一下，前移至01:07:797 - 起手。 01:08:502 - 处可以补一个note，压在01:08:855 (6) - 上 节奏不会换

01:19:431 (5) - ^ ^

完了。。出不去了，摸完了发现好好听，当年怎么就没觉得呢。。QAQ 当年你不懂女生！

1. You can remove "china" "taiwan" from tags, map will have "chinese" as gentre after rank anyway
2. Normal diff have different combo-colours, any reasons for that?
3. Even with automatic audio lead-in map starts kinda really too fast... can you please adjust audio lead-in to 1000 via notepad?
4. Nice bg

1. 00:01:170 (1) - Don't see any reason for silence here, it ends on audible beat. Actually, i find rhythm at this part kinda strange, beat on 00:01:698 - needs to be played while it covered by sliderbody. Try something like this to follow music better:
   
   
   
2. 00:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really well-done patterns, i like them a lot! Thought i have one idea to make this part a bit more interesting and challenging, especially for HD players. How about to try something like this?
   
   
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   Just replace 00:02:932 (5,1) - with code:
   
   

   455,248,2932,2,0,L|499:255,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   438,267,3285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   477,273,3461,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:06:458 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, what about adjusting sliders here to follow vocals better? Something like this:
   
   
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4. 00:12:098 (1,2) - If you going to keep an extended sliders here i guess you need to make slidertails audible - i actually tried and it was sounds not too bad! There is no reason to keep them silent anyway.
5. 00:13:156 (1) - Same as above
6. 00:17:738 (6) - New combo follow new part of music
7. 00:20:559 (5) - Same as above about extended sliders with silent slidertails.
8. 00:23:026 (6,7) - While i can agree with (6) being silent i can't agree with (7). A simple reason - (6) follows sound what music provides while (7) is just extended. Make tail of (7) audible please. Also, spacing at this part feels kinda clamped. I'd raise it a bit to avoid excessive overlapping between 00:23:026 (6,7,8) -
9. 00:25:847 (5,6,7) - Same as above, all of these needs to be audible.
10. 00:28:668 (5,6) - Same
11. 00:34:307 (4,5) - Same
12. 00:35:012 (6,7) - Raise spacing at this part. Main problem of this pattern: it looks totally same as 00:34:307 (4,5). Such spacing tricks can works good on Insane diffs, but since your is a Hard i'd prefer to see this part more friendly.
13. 00:37:127 (1,2) - Same about unnesessary silence. As all usual extendeds they should have audible tails. By the way, you can extend 00:37:480 (2) - to 00:38:009 - it will improve playability and will madel made 00:38:186 (4,5) - easier to catch. Also try to made this overlap more prettier:
    
    
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14. 00:40:476 (2) - It can be mapped as singe note at 00:40:476 - or shortened to 00:40:653. Silence is unacceptable.
15. 00:42:768 (5,6) - Same problem with silent slidertails.
16. 00:49:113 (9,10) - Same problem with silence
18. 00:44:178 (1) - Also this can be just extended to 00:44:530 -
19. 00:45:588 (5,6) - Again problem with unneeded silence.
20. 00:46:293 (7,8) - Same problem. Also, this overlap doesnt looks/plays well. How about try something like this to avoid it?
    
    
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21. 00:46:998 (1) - This can be mapped just as single note, this extended actually even plays bad. Try to just replace with single note at 00:46:998
22. 00:47:703 (4,5,6) - This part technically plays well, but estetically looks bad. How about use bigger spacing here & rotate (6) a bit? Try this. Also, again problem with silence.
    
    
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23. 00:52:286 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A very problematic part. Inconsistent spacing between these sliders might confuse players a lot, actually these extendeds... I don't really think that they fit at all, in my opinion simple 1/2 sliders would work much better since it is still a Hard diff, but if you really want to keep them please made tails audible.
24. 00:56:164 (3,4) - This works much better as 1/2 slider (00:56:164 - 00:56:516 - ). Not sure why you mapped it with extended, it imo doesn't mach music well
25. 00:57:574 (7,8) - Should be audible
26. 00:58:279 (1,2) - ^
27. 00:59:865 (6) - New combo follow pattern
28. 01:01:099 (1,2) - Shouldn't be silent
29. 01:02:686 (5) - NC?
30. 01:22:427 (1) - Spinnertail snapped to beat here and therefore should be audible.

1. 00:13:156 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:27:962 (2) - Looks bad, try this:
   
   
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3. 00:55:459 (1) - Ah, 3 repeats are annoying to play for anyone. Can you please replace it with 3 1/1 sliders?
4. 01:18:021 (4) - This slider feels kinda out of place. Maybe try something like this to make it flows more smoother?
   
   
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