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Starving Trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)

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aesopl19193
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年1月7日 at 18:23:14

Artist: Starving Trancer feat. Maki
Title: Give a Reason (Trance Remix)
Source: EXIT TRANCE
Tags: Slayers Megumi Hayashibara
BPM: 144
Filesize: 8198kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Al2e' Dif (4.89 stars, 399 notes)
  2. Easy (1.64 stars, 88 notes)
  3. Hard (4.51 stars, 220 notes)
  4. Insane (4.92 stars, 600 notes)
Download: Starving Trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)
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This is my second beatmap , i need some advise to improve it..

Can you help me to mod it?

Insane level is done, hard level is done , let's try! =]

all half-ver is deleted

--UPDATE RECORD--

v1 first uploading , Easy was done ,Insane level is still in-working 20% (2009-10-6)

v2 Insane level is still in-working 40% (2009-10-18)

v3 small problems are fixed , haft-ver insane level is added 100% , insane level is working 50% (2009-10-23)
v3.1 offset 0 -> +12ms (2009-10-24)
v3.2 distance x1.5 -> x1.2 (2009-10-24)

v4 some problems of notes is fixed , insane level is completed , half-ver.-hard level is added , half-ver.insane is ready to be delete (2009-10-24)
v4.1 some problems of notes is fixed , all half-ver is deleted , Hard level is completed
v4.2 new insane ( insane2 ) is added , it will replace insane if it is ok
v4.3 fixed problems found by AImod

v5 Moded by osuplayer111 ! Thanks!
v6 Moded by al2e10 ! Thanks! insane2 replaced insane , therefore 3 diffs in total now
v7 Moded by SOGASOGAMO !Thanks!
v8 Moded by DJPop <-a lot of things is moded , Thanks a lot =] !
v9 Moded by Kytoxid ! Thanks!
v10 Moded by Lokamp ! Thanks!
v11 Moded by al2e10 ! Thanks! [Al2e' Dif] is added !
v12 Moded by Zekira ! Thanks !
v13 Moded by Lissette ! Thanks!
v14 Moded by Kino77 ! Thanks!
v14.1 BGP is changed by Kino77 !
v15 Moded by Armin and osu_CN_yaya ! Thanks ! Armin <- a lot of hitsound is moded ! Thank ~!
v16 Moded by WyndII ! Thanks!
v17 Moded by jericho2442 ! Thanks!
v18 Moded by Takuma ! Thankss!
v19 Moded by Essien ! Thanks!
v20 Moded by Samurai_X ! Thanks!
v21 Moded by Tanmak ! Thanks!
v22 Moded by Hikato ! Thanks!
v23 Insane level is removed .
v24 Moded by ykcarrot ! Thanks ! , Insane re-added (i can be removed if it can not be ranked)
v25 Name of the song is changed to Starving trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)
v25.1 Name of the song is changed to Starving Trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)
v26 Hard -> Notes reduced => easier , Insane -> Notes reduced => max. score < 12m
v27 Tag problem and 2 osu file problems are fixed
v28 A spacing error is fixed
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
It is completed (I hope =])

Please mod , Thank
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:42:51 (3) - End 1/2 before.
01:11:67 (1) - Spinner too short for an easy map.
02:05:01 (1) - ^

02:20:11 (1) - Start this on red line, never blue!

[Insane]

00:05:428 - Delete this break.
00:45:42 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing. Adjust it.
01:03:76 (1,1,1) - Why one these all new combos? Seems weird.
01:10:01 (1,1,1) - ^


[Insane2]

Why 2 insane diff's?

Is the same of Insane, look suggestions of that. Anyway i suggest to remove this difficulty.
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:42:51 (3) - End 1/2 before.
01:11:67 (1) - Spinner too short for an easy map.
02:05:01 (1) - ^

02:20:11 (1) - Start this on red line, never blue!

[Insane]

00:05:428 - Delete this break.
00:45:42 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing. Adjust it.
01:03:76 (1,1,1) - Why one these all new combos? Seems weird.
01:10:01 (1,1,1) - ^


[Insane2]

Why 2 insane diff's?

Is the same of Insane, look suggestions of that. Anyway i suggest to remove this difficulty.
Thanks!

For insane2 , since i waited to make the insane more difficilt , i added some note in the interval of each session.

Is it better for me to delete it?
anonymous_old
Set the distance snap to .5x (Hold alt and drag the slider on the top-right)
Resnap all the notes on every difficulty, except for easy, then PM me, and i'll mod this.
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Loogiesquared wrote:

Set the distance snap to .5x (Hold alt and drag the slider on the top-right)
Resnap all the notes on every difficulty, except for easy, then PM me, and i'll mod this.
Is that set the distance snap to 1.5x ? or 0.5 ...(!?)
al2e10
By AL2e10's mod queue

[Insane2]
00:10:845 (5) remove clap
00:17:512 (3) ^
00:24:178 (3) ^
00:49:282 (9)new combo
00:55:012 (5) ^
01:18:137 (10) ^
01:21:470 (8) ^
01:58:345 (8) ^
02:01:678 (6) ^
02:51:678 (8) ^
02:55:012 (10) ^
02:58:137 (8) ^
00:55:428 (1) remove new combo
01:19:595 (1) ^

[Insane]
00:10:845 (5) remove clap
00:17:512 (3) ^
00:24:178 (3) ^
WHIT !!!
This dif. is the same of [Insane2] ??
Can you just delete one Insane or just make it not at the same ??

[Hard,Easy]
Just fine ( I will mod it latter Because there was a big problem)

[All]
Good map ~
Just change the thing you have to change ~
And find me again ~

But STAR !!
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's mod queue

[Insane2]
00:10:845 (5) remove clap
00:17:512 (3) ^
00:24:178 (3) ^
00:49:282 (9)new combo
00:55:012 (5) ^
01:18:137 (10) ^
01:21:470 (8) ^
01:58:345 (8) ^
02:01:678 (6) ^
02:51:678 (8) ^
02:55:012 (10) ^
02:58:137 (8) ^
00:55:428 (1) remove new combo
01:19:595 (1) ^

[Insane]
00:10:845 (5) remove clap
00:17:512 (3) ^
00:24:178 (3) ^
WHIT !!!
This dif. is the same of [Insane2] ??
Can you just delete one Insane or just make it not at the same ??

[Hard,Easy]
Just fine ( I will mod it latter Because there was a big problem)

[All]
Good map ~
Just change the thing you have to change ~
And find me again ~

But STAR !!
done,

Thanks ! =]
Furawa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Topic Starter
aesopl19193

SOGASOGAMO wrote:

hard
00:13:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
这里以及后面所有跟这里节奏相同的组合,我觉得节奏如下图那样排列比较好?如果改了的话note也要按照比列重新排下间距O-O当然每个人的节奏感不太一样.-.楼主觉得怎么合适就怎么下把
[attachment=0:d6cac]1.jpg[/attachment:d6cac]
O.O> star
這樣排的節奏感的確強一點=]
謝謝你的MOD啊XD
DJPop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
[Easy]

00:12:51 (1) - This spinner might be a bit tough for Easy.
00:23:34 (5,10) - New combo?
00:51:67 (5) - ^
00:57:51 (2,1) - Very difficult jump for Easy.
01:33:34 (1,2,3) - Move this around to make a nice triangle?
01:36:67 (5) - New combo?
02:38:34 (1,2,3) - Might be a slightly difficult pattern for Easy.

[Hard]

00:43:97 (3) - Move this to finish on the same spot as 2?
00:58:34 (1,2,3) - Spacing's a bit weird.
01:53:76 (2) - Move it one grid right?
01:54:80 (5,1,2,3) - This could be arranged into a cool diamond.
02:08:13 (5,1) - Spacing.
02:22:51 (3) - Down 1 grid?

[Insane]

00:18:97 (1) - Unrankable spinner; too short. Extend it by at least 1/4, preferably 1/2.
00:25:01 (5) - 1 less repeat?
00:52:09 (6,7) - Stack endpoints?
00:53:76 (1,3) - Make it symmetrical?
02:05:84 (6,7,8,1,2) - Make 6-7-8 into a triangle, and then avoid covering up the 1-2 that's upcoming.

Cool song though. Starred. :)
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

DJPop wrote:

You used me really worth ;___;

Red text = must fix.

~Easy~
00:08:34 (1) - remove new combo
00:10:01 (1) - move down 1 grid
00:11:67 (3) - move left 1 grid
............

+Star
Sorry for using you worth ._." (?)

Thanks! =]
loading127
gooood
Lokamp
Easy
00:11:67 (spinner) - end it with finish
00:23:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - finish the 6th beat, clap the 4th and 5th, whistle the others
01:13:34 (1,2) - whistle these sliders (and leave clap on the 2nd slider's end)
01:16:67 (1,2) - whistle here
01:23:34 (1,2,3,4) - finish 1st and 2nd beats, clap the 3rd and the slider's start and end
01:26:67 (1,2,3) - end these sliders with a whistle
02:10:42 (1,3) - whistle here

Hard
01:23:55 (2,4) - end these sliders with a clap
02:46:88 (2,4) - ^

Insane
Nothin'wrong!

A star for this good map ^^
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
done =]
Zekira
Offset: 15

That's it for now.
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lissette
Hi!

Easy
02:34:59 (4) - move one beat later, end point at 02:35:84, and......
02:34:59 - add note

Hard
Place a spinner somewhere to variety score ^^

Insane
This are just suggestions, that I think would sound better ^^
00:42:51 (6) - new combo? maybe in jump >=)
00:55:84 (7) - same
01:40:22 - add note
01:40:64 - ^
01:41:16 - ^
01:41:78 - ^
01:42:09 - ^
01:42:20 - ^
01:42:72 - ^
Same to the others parts like this, you don't have to change it, but this is the way i would put it ^^
03:02:82 - add note?

Al2e' Dif
Nice Diff.
Suggestion
00:56:89 (3) - remove, and start the next slider here, end point of the slider at 00:57:09 and repeat slider, then......
00:57:51 - add note, then......
00:57:61 - add note, and.......
00:57:72 (6) - end point at 00:57:93 and repeat slider

Nice map, nice song....
Have a Star!
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Easy
02:34:59 (4) - move one beat later, end point at 02:35:84, and......
02:34:59 - add note

Hard
Place a spinner somewhere to variety score ^^

Insane
This are just suggestions, that I think would sound better ^^
00:42:51 (6) - new combo? maybe in jump >=)
00:55:84 (7) - same
01:40:22 - add note
01:40:64 - ^
01:41:16 - ^
01:41:78 - ^
01:42:09 - ^
01:42:20 - ^
01:42:72 - ^
Same to the others parts like this, you don't have to change it, but this is the way i would put it ^^
03:02:82 - add note?

Al2e' Dif
Nice Diff.
Suggestion
00:56:89 (3) - remove, and start the next slider here, end point of the slider at 00:57:09 and repeat slider, then......
00:57:51 - add note, then......
00:57:61 - add note, and.......
00:57:72 (6) - end point at 00:57:93 and repeat slider

Nice map, nice song....
Have a Star!
Thanks! but for ale's dif, i have to ask him =]
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