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Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou

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gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月3日 at 9:25:33

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Nijiiro Chouchou
Source: Kurousa-P
Tags: abalee WyndII
BPM: 99
Filesize: 7495kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. abalee's Normal (4.13 stars, 282 notes)
  2. Hard (4.58 stars, 426 notes)
  3. WyndII's Chou (4.67 stars, 436 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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10th Beatmap.

Thu Nov 05, 2009 abalee's Normal added
Wed Nov 11, 2009 WyndII's Chou added
Last edited by gdeath , edited 8 times in total.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
hi.
i got 757ms offset.
and a (maybe) normal diff. :P

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [abalee's Normal].osu
Last edited by abalee , edited 2 times in total.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
Great Work.abalee ↖(^ω^)↗
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[abalee's Normal]

03:18:063 (10) - New combo.

[Hard]

Cute~

00:55:030 (6) - New combo.
01:04:099 (5) - ^
01:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too loud.
01:14:009 (6) - New combo.
01:15:090 (1,2,3,4,1) - Too loud.
02:04:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
03:12:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
;)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
HARD
02:40:605 & 02:41:363 -I think it would be better to fix these two x0.5 timing section so that they fall exactly on the tick.
02:40:075 (1) - Also I suggest soft clap 1 here
02:42:027 (5,6,7) - ^
02:43:029 & 02:44:393 - same reason

EDIT : For a quick fix, you could highlight all the timing sections in "Timing" there, and adjust all timing sections by the difference of the initial offset that you have and abalee's suggested offset.

ABALEE's NORMAL
01:58:093 (1) - custom soft clap here ? since you do it at 02:01:036 (1) too.
Other than that, feel very smooth when playing !

As expected from both of you, good job !

Star~

And nice BG too...
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
thx.alvisto
some parts were fixed ^^
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Regardless to say, Good job, I enjoyed both diffs and found absolutely no problems.

Get this ranked :)
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
i think some jumps dont fit this song.
anyway . nice work
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [AH'Hard].osu
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
>Teara

star thx and have look my map. =P

>osu_CN_yaya

thank you for taking a look at my map ^.^


>AngelHoney

omg.it's the second time that i meet this situation.
plz dont suddenly make a diff and require me to add yours.
i'm really confused.
if you wanna add your diff for others' map,plz inform host in advance.
however,u r lucky since i'm pretty kindhearted.
so i have checked your diff.but,your skill of mapping is....hmm...not very well.
there are some unrankable patterns and bad hitsounds in your diff.
sorry,i can not add your diff.
and dont do the same thing,plz.
thank you!
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
Yay~
I'm done with my diff.
I hope you'll like it =) .
please dont change the diff's name

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [WyndII's Chou].osu
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
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1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Normal]
03:08:093 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the placing of the notes here seems. rough and wobbly, try to clean up the way it looks because right now its rather ugly how they all dont seem to connect good at all


[Hard]
00:08:033 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern feels ugly, try to make it look a bit better
00:47:072 (1,2) - dont like this jump, it dont seem to match the song at this point, other jumps are nice though :)
02:05:060 (5) - this would look better if it was placed a bit fether away from (3) as it is its a bit wierd
02:20:015 (6) - make it curve the same as the rest of the combo, it will look alot better this way

the jumps make this feel more like a insane than i hard ;)

[Wydll's Chou]
(suggestion) 01:26:081 (4) - i understand why you have put it there but to me it just seems a bit off in looks :/
01:57:012 (1,2,3,4) - is that what you meant to do? because it looks like a square pattern but you have (3) & (4) to high up
03:22:027 (7) - nazi :P line this up with (8) & (9)
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nice maps, will star once the probs have been fixed ;)
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

03:04:999 - add kiai

[Chou]

Nice :)

Starred~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
I fixed some. Thanks~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [WyndII's Chou].osu
Last edited by WyndII , edited 1 time in total.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Krisom
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Joined April 2009
Krisom
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
abalee
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2008
abalee

jericho2442 wrote:

[Normal]
03:08:093 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the placing of the notes here seems. rough and wobbly, try to clean up the way it looks because right now its rather ugly how they all dont seem to connect good at all
hmm..anyway fixed. and IMO if map are mainly fine ,star it directly. Thanks.

Krisom wrote:

abalee's normal.
-Soemthing may be wrong with me, but I don't like these silent notes on, by example, 01:06:036 (or 01:25:045). Even though the volume bar is on 50%, the notes can't be heard. I suppose that, as there are lots of timing sections, the volume should be increasing slowly...
it is slowly increasing,but very slow coz the hitsound are light. and i place notes following vocals, IMO we could not miss that notes. right? BTW, if i don't use the increasing hitsound , why i add timing setions. ;)

at last , thanks for your modding.
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