This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 24 settembre 2014 at 16:38:32

Artist: Kuba Oms
Title: My Love
Tags: mbc monthly beatmapping contest ADHD
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5841kb
Play Time: 03:43
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,3 stars, 165 notes)
2. Hard (2,38 stars, 366 notes)
3. Normal (1,73 stars, 242 notes)

Download: Kuba Oms - My Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#23 mappu (๑╹ω╹๑)



#who cares

first o3o

Second /o/

I mod it tomorrow >w<

Gero wrote:

I mod it tomorrow >w<

lol

Yo, as requested!

[General]

1. Consider adding some tags? First of all, ADHD is a name of the album, so it should be moved to the tags. Secondly, adding mbc and monthly beatmappng contestto the tags is also a good idea, too!
2. Consider changin an mp3 file, this one is unrankable due to its quality. As we both kno, the maximum allowed bitrate is 192kbps, while here we have 224kbps or so, which is unrankable. Don't worry, I've changed the mp3 for you, so it shouldn't trouble you too much! Here's the link!
   Note: if you take my mp3, please care to check the offset since it may get a bit off.

[Easy]

1. 00:09:201 (4,1) - it feels a bit like jump. Spacing changes are supposed to appear after the NC, so beginners will be able to understand them better.
2. 00:12:951 (4,1) - maybe it's just me, but I really feel like 1/2 sliders make the diff a bit unbalanced. Your rhythm is just way too various. Having changeable rhythm from 1/2 to 2/1 + SV changes and some tricky patterns is just way too hard for the easiest diff. Try o avoid those 1/2 sliders in order to make the diff more playable for the beginners, please!
3. 00:23:732 (4,1) - minor - the transition here doesn't feel so natural, imo. You have a lot of brilliant patterns, but here, your flow feels a bi forced. Something like this would flow smooth and work good with your style, so, please, try it!
4. 00:49:045 (4) - well, this one sunds really confusing. You ignore both vocals and claps and map a beat which is quite minor and weak. It also sounds quite weird and hurts your consistency. Need an idea? Try me!
   Note: 00:58:420 (1) - 01:11:545 (3) - the same here. I see what you're trying to do, but it sounds really confusing to me.
5. 00:54:670 (2) - consider adding a new combo here in order to keep it consistent with the other diffs. I think it is better to make the pattern a bit confusing, but much more epic and good-looking.
6. 01:32:170 (1,2,3) - I also have to admit that it sounds awesome here. Good job!
7. 02:24:670 (1,1) - having two spinners one after another is quite confusing, actually. The second one appears very fast and beginners will have no time to recver after the first spinner. It is a bit too cruel for players' hands and it is also quite hard to read it. So, yeah. Try to avoid that, please!
   Note: relacing them with just one sppinner or making a break longer would be a good idea, I think.
8. 02:42:951 (3) - in order to emphasize the "hearT" in the song, consider adding a repeat to the slider. It will sound quite good, I think.
9. 03:14:123 (1) - though it fits, it feels a bit confusing Maybe there's a way to keep your rhythm more consistent without hurting this awesome slider?
   
   Sometimes it was a bit tricky, sometimes flow could be better, but in general, the diff is quite cool. Good job!

[Normal]

1. 00:24:201 (5) - are you sure about using the 1/4s there? The song itself is meant to be rather relaxing and refreshing, while 1/4 sliders would exhaust poor players. Try to avoid them when it is possible to give us some more enjoyable patterns and better rhythm, please!
   Note: same applies for all the 1/4 sliders in this diff, don't forget to check them!
2. 00:25:607 - this beat is quite important, it's consistent and it sounds really strong. Moreover, there're some vocals and it was mapped even in the Easy diff, so keeping it ignored here feels quite confusing. Try to map it, please!Example
3. 00:36:857 (2) - minor - the wave-shape slider looks a bit messy. You could easily clean it up after reading this thread or simply by asking me for a code via in-game PM. Either way would be fine.
4. 00:43:420 (1,2) - such sliders are a bit out of place. Previously you had an intense 1/1 rhythm and breaking it with the 3/2 sliders so suddenly feels pretty weird and confusing to me. Consider changing them in a way, they would be a bit more playable for the players? Here's an example for you!
   Note: same with 00:58:420 (3) - and some similar sliders. Please, consider changing them!
5. 01:06:857 (1) - Brilliant! ♥ though, I'd map 01:06:857 (1) - to keep the rhythm a bit more fitting and consistent. During the slider players will have some rest, so it's alright to keep using 1/1 right after the slider.
6. 01:37:795 (1) - removing a new combo from here would be a good idea, imo. First of all, this NC does not work good with the vocals, secondly it breaks your consistent comboing and having so many NCs in a row does not look good, too!
7. 02:24:670 (1,1) - just a friendly reminder - if you've changed the spiners on the Easy, you might want to do the same here. You know, to keep consistency!
8. 03:15:763 (1) - this is too hard to read and too fast! There's no way Normal players would be able to read it since the sliderball moves so fast and there's practically no time to read the reverse-arrows! Something like an 1/1 slider with a repeat would fit here, imo.
   
   The diff was pretty nice but the 1/4 sliders made me a bit nervous and confused.

[Hard]

1. Jumps are the only thing that really bugged me in this map. They are used a little bit confusing, imo. While you have a jump at 00:21:857 (2,3) - when there's nothing really special in the music, you could make a jump between 00:22:326 (3,1) - which would reflect the drums and work great with your style. The most important thing is that you've done a few similar patterns and it was the only thing that really bugged me during the whole diff. Try to ask some more players to make sure. Or simply keep it in mmind for your future maps, what done is done, after all.
2. 00:30:060 - I have nothing against 3/4 sliders if they're used properly. But this one is a bit off since we can clearly hear "way" on 00:30:060 - and it makes me a bit confused. Consider checking such sliders and replacing them with the 1/2 sliders if necessary.
   Note: 00:48:107 (3) - for example, here. On the red tick we can clearly hear some vocals and it makes your slider sound weak and a bit off.
3. 00:53:498 (1) - even for the hardest diff, the slider appears a bit too fast. Personally, i think that players need some time to recover after spinners because the song is quite long and your rhythm is pretty intense.
   Note: 01:51:388 (1,1) - 02:45:998 (1) - 03:00:998 (1) - whoops, the same happens here.
4. 03:16:818 (4,1) - try to keep the DS equal between these beats. You'll probably have to place it manuallly. atm, it looks like there's a 1/6 gap between these beats and as a player I got confused a bit.
   
   Well, as I said, jumps were quite strange. Otherwise, that's a nice diff.

You did a good job, but ou can make it even better now!

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Best of luck!

Ty moeri ♡ will fix all and reply asap :3

I began mod and haven't finished !
Let's continue !

[General]
Put another BG ? This BG is actually ...boring !

[Easy]
00:11:076 (2,3) - Nazi , this blanket can be improved !
00:12:951 (4) - Curv a liiiiitle bit for increasing flow ! Like this : Click!
00:16:701 (5) - Same ! :p
00:50:920 (5) - Blanket
01:41:545 (3) - You can stop your slider here !
02:31:232 - Stop spinner here ? Cause beginner will be random click ! not enough space in the timeline between Spinner and slider !

[Normal]
00:01:935 - I'd like to see a note here !
02:06:857 (1) - This heart owo Make it like this : 01:06:857 (1) -
02:28:420 (1) - Same thing for the spinner in Easy !
03:03:341 (3) - Stack a circle !
03:12:482 (3) - Maybe curv this a bit ?
03:36:388 - inherited points unsnapped ?
03:36:857 - ^

[Hard]
00:00:998 (1,2,3) - Make sth like this ! Click !
01:58:420 (1) - Make a blanket with next slider ?
03:16:466 (3,4) - I don't get rythm here ! Maybe I'm crazy o3o


Wow ! It's such an amazing map as always !
Just wanted to see an Insane but it's okay !
Wishing the best for this map Lally-chan \o3o/

updated =u= fixed some sorry for no reply got no time for it

h! ・ω・
as requested, sry for delay

am i the only one who hear ASSHOLE there 01:48:107 -


general stuff

・im not against your pink combo colour but wouldnt a colour close to ~peach instead(for ex 242, 121, 102) be softer and kinda suit better the bg orz? owo


easy

・00:09:201 (4) - i saw that bakari mentioned this one and u didnt change there anything i suppose? owo but what about to make the spacing change less noticeable and ..neater by making the (4) spacing be like ~ prev 1.08 and next 0.93 (if u revert a slider velocity to 0.80 as you had before - 0.93 will become 1.17. so technically its just numbers but spacing is still the same) ? :c though im not into the idea of changing spacing in ez diffs
・00:16:701 (5) - nazi move this one a bit right to make a triangle neater o:
・00:35:920 (3) - i for that u remove a reverse and finish a slider on lyrics part on the red 00:37:560 - tick or on the white before this one, where is the actual last beat in music. there is no beat where u've finished the slider and though there is also a drum hs - at least decrease the volume by ~20%, it sounds oddly loud cuz of silent part there.. o, or just remove the drum hs like you have nothing there 01:37:795 (1) -
・00:42:951 (4) - , 00:50:996 - , 01:50:650 - these claps sound out of place because ОЧЕНЬ ОДИНОКО И ГРОМКО. at least decrease the volume on such parts at least on 20% if u wanna keep it, realy loud
・00:58:420 (1,3) - also i lost a sense of rhythm on these sliders because you've combined a half of a lyrics phrase (end of it) and one whole phrase in one slider. this is really damn confusing. i cant give any suggestions but change sliders in something else there is what i'd recommend to do
・01:02:638 (1,2) - i feel like the harder beat is on 01:03:107 - so better to start a slider there. i'd reccomend to do circle-slider there instead of slider-circle or smth. another reason is that lyrics 'im gonna' start like on that red 01:02:873 - tick where is a middle of your slider now. also the accent in lyrics is on word 'gonna' so.. yeah
・i cant get why did you place 02:06:857 (1) - and 02:06:857 (1) - on a white tick, and 03:14:123 (1) - on a red. even though the length of these sliders is not same you've followed the same lyrics part and this is very confusing to click twice on the slider in one time and click on last slider in another time, heh
・01:17:170 (1,2,3,4) - mmm how to explain.. if you tap the rhythm with your finger in a rhythm like you placed your drum clap sounds 01:10:607 (2,3) - there (is it called 2/1..? ) till the 01:17:170 (1) - you would see that you have to swap the hs xD i mean drum clap instead of normal one and vise versa. at least i hear this

owo~


normal

・00:08:732 (4) - since you were following the vocals - this is odd to have this slider on a white tick but not on a red one, damn
・00:36:857 (2) - same as i mention in ez :c
・00:15:295 (1) - whistle on the end instead of normal sampleset like you did there folollowing the same sounds 00:30:295 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:15:295 (3,4,5) -
・00:42:482 (5) - , 00:49:982 (2) - , 01:42:951 (3) - , 01:50:451 (3) - and if im not mistaken a bit more parts like this, like i mentioned in ez diff, at least make the volume a bit quiter, хлопки правда режут уши х.х
・00:56:545 (1) - the same reason why im gonna suggest to change something there is again that combining of ending of the last phrase and beginning of new one. maybe this this rhythm instead, idk.. at least remove the nc and a reverse :о
・00:58:420 (3) -
03:05:920 (1) -

and i think nothing more.. o.o


hard

actually a really good diff, found almost nothing but like i mention before about that clap sound and one slider end D:

・00:16:701 (3,4,1) - imho (1) flows ~badly after those straight (3) and (4) :c i believe you could rotate 00:17:170 (1,2,3) - pattern by ~17゜ to make it flow smoother or kinda like this..
・01:44:826 (4,2) - , 03:07:326 (4) - i hear like soft finish on a head would suit perfectly, nope? o:

and thats all i guess.. o.o spent all day lel
good luck, moelly >∀<)////////////// ;ω;

updated >3<

hello nyally~

General
your need a 192 kbps mp3 file =.= instead of a 224 one

Hard
00:33:576 (4) - I think soft sample is preferred at its end for consistency
00:37:326 (4) - the beat at 00:37:560 - and 00:37:795 - sound too loud to be here, it actually became quiet in the music since 00:37:326 - , so I recommend soft sample for both the reversing point and the end
00:41:545 (5,6,1) - maybe have a little cureve here? seems more appealing to me
00:42:951 (3) - the clap on head is redundant imo, it sounds pretty abrupt as there's no other claps around
00:45:295 (1,3) - move them together to (64,42)? so that 00:46:232 (3,1) - wouldn't be sooooo close to each other
01:51:388 (1) - this is inconsistent with the spinner at the first kiai, I think it's better to sart it from 01:51:857 - like 00:51:857 (1) - in order to follow the vocal better. of course you'll need to add additional notes till 01:51:388 -
02:02:638 (2) - the whistle at end sounds weird to me, doesn't seem to fit in the music well. I'll prefer to remove it
02:09:670 - useless green line, also in other diffs
02:45:998 (1,2) - ↓ in order to be consistent with the former kiais and also move 02:45:998 (1) - upleft a bit so that 02:45:998 (1,1) - will look not cluttered?
02:59:123 (1) - start it from 02:59:357 - to follow vocal and to be consistent?
03:13:888 - I'd suggest that you add something here and start the heart slider from 03:14:357 - instead to correspond better to the music

Normal
00:18:576 (2) - this slider looks too twisted comparing to other 1/2 sliders around, better make it look like 00:16:701 (3) - and 00:20:451 (4) - ?
00:36:857 (2) - same in Hard, soft sample at end is preferred
01:51:388 (1) - spinner inconsistent issue as mentioned in Hard
02:58:888 (1) - ^

Easy
lol hardwork on sliderticks
00:35:920 (3) - same as other diffs
01:46:232 (5) - move to (256,288) to be symmetrical?
02:28:185 - and 02:28:420 - you don't need these green lines here, they make the spinner sound werid

that's all for me, good luck~

Zero__wind wrote:

hello nyally~ hallowww o3o///

General
your need a 192 kbps mp3 file =.= instead of a 224 one


this is the reason of why i'm going not to change my mp3 since is the original one from the mbc and because the winner get it ranked with this kpbs

W h i t e's map:

Hard
00:33:576 (4) - I think soft sample is preferred at its end for consistency i prefer to let is how it is for the hitsounds pattern
00:37:326 (4) - the beat at 00:37:560 - and 00:37:795 - sound too loud to be here, it actually became quiet in the music since 00:37:326 - , so I recommend soft sample for both the reversing point and the end yap a bit to loud,added some volume lines
00:41:545 (5,6,1) - maybe have a little cureve here? seems more appealing to me 00:40:373 (2,3,4,5,6) - i dunno if you saw this it was a triangle pattern sso i don't think is necessary to do that o3o http://puu.sh/a9fbL/593aa34ace.jpg

SPOILER

00:42:951 (3) - the clap on head is redundant imo, it sounds pretty abrupt as there's no other claps around 00:42:951 - listen careffully here do 0 % volume for the hitsound so you'll clearly hear in the music the clap sound this is why i have some claps in the kiai
00:45:295 (1,3) - move them together to (64,42)? so that 00:46:232 (3,1) - wouldn't be sooooo close to each other i don't think are close to each other but if i do so i'll ruin my blankets and a moe pattern http://puu.sh/a9fk3/49fa8ae56b.jpg
01:51:388 (1) - this is inconsistent with the spinner at the first kiai, I think it's better to sart it from 01:51:857 - like 00:51:857 (1) - in order to follow the vocal better. of course you'll need to add additional notes till 01:51:388 - done o3o
02:02:638 (2) - the whistle at end sounds weird to me, doesn't seem to fit in the music well. I'll prefer to remove it i agree
02:09:670 - useless green line, also in other diffs y
02:45:998 (1,2) - ↓ in order to be consistent with the former kiais and also move 02:45:998 (1) - upleft a bit so that 02:45:998 (1,1) - will look not cluttered? fixed

SPOILER

02:59:123 (1) - start it from 02:59:357 - to follow vocal and to be consistent? done
03:13:888 - I'd suggest that you add something here and start the heart slider from 03:14:357 - instead to correspond better to the music did something similar

such random example lol

Normal
00:18:576 (2) - this slider looks too twisted comparing to other 1/2 sliders around, better make it look like 00:16:701 (3) - and 00:20:451 (4) - ? fixed
00:36:857 (2) - same in Hard, soft sample at end is preferred i prefer to let is how it is for the hitsounds pattern
01:51:388 (1) - spinner inconsistent issue as mentioned in Hard fixed
02:58:888 (1) - ^-^

Easy
lol hardwork on sliderticks ;____; ikr
00:35:920 (3) - same as other diffs i prefer to let is how it is for the hitsounds pattern
01:46:232 (5) - move to (256,288) to be symmetrical? ok o3o
02:28:185 - and 02:28:420 - you don't need these green lines here, they make the spinner sound werid y done

that's all for me, good luck~

updated o3o *lazy to do a box*

Easy:
claps here:
01:46:232 (5)
02:00:295 (3)
02:01:232 (4)
02:04:045 (3) -
and here
02:32:638 - 02:33:576 - 02:34:513 - 02:34:982 - 02:35:451 - 02:35:920 - 02:36:857 - 02:40:138 - 02:41:076 - 02:45:763 -
(kind of like an audience claping along) if you do decide to add the clapping. Try and add more after what I pointed out so as to keep with the feel.

Normal:
00:01:466 (2) - make this a switchback and extend it once.
00:08:498 - put a circle here
00:27:248 - and here
00:33:341 - put a slider here that end at 00:33:576 ( and delete the circle there)

Hard
01:25:959 - timing seems off
01:33:459 - same
01:06:857 - instead of a heart made out of one slider, why not make a whole heart out of two sliders? each slider makes one half of the heart? idk

I hope that helps!

Ty very much but didn't fix anything the reply is here ^

ò.Í

good luck :3

ty and updated >3<

Hey Lally.
[General]

1. As you already know, ADHD should be moved from source to the tags.
2. You've got a misspelled tag. It should be beatmapping.
3. The spinners end where there is no audio and making beginners spin for that long is mean! End your spinners at 03:43:420 please.

[Easy]

1. 00:15:295 (3) - Uneven spacing between objects.
2. 00:15:295 (3,4,5) - Actually the spacing is crunched for these notes too. Stick consistent with your 1.0 distance snap of this section.
3. 00:37:795 - Remove the hitsound here please, the background music is silent.
4. 01:20:920 (1) - Finish on the head instead? The background music here sounds identical to 01:13:420. (Applies to other difficulties if used here)
5. 03:14:123 (1) - This needs to start on 03:14:357. Players are almost guaranteed to miss or hit early here after having played the previous heart sliders not to mention this is the only polarity conflict in the entire difficulty.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:795 - Same about the hitsound here as mentioned for Easy.
2. 00:39:201 (2) - Try removing the whistle on the tail. In my opinion it sounds nicer to keep whistles just only the pronounced vocals at this part. Having three consecutive whistle feels a little spammy in my opinion.
3. 01:39:201 (2) - Same idea for this one.

[Hard]

1. 00:37:326 (4) - Remove normal sample on the repeat and drum-clap on the tail as the background music is silent.
2. 00:39:201 (2) - Same here as mentioned for Normal.
3. 01:38:966 (1,2) - Same whistle idea, try adding a whistle on the tail of (1) and removing the one on (2).
4. 01:39:435 (2) - I would suggest against a circle as there's no beat here that warrants a clickable action. Try either swapping 01:38:966 (1,2) on the timeline or simply deleting this note to create a pause that puts nice emphasis on the held vocal.
5. 02:02:638 (2) - This should be a 1/2 slider like the other two kiais. The extension makes the tail land to nothing in the music as you can hear the prominent vocal is on 02:02:873 - .
   
6. 03:34:045 (1) - Maybe try a finish instead of a normal sample here? It sounds really nice with the cymbal present in the background music. You could also try a soft-finish addition.

That's all for now. Hope some of it helps.

upload o3o

Hi Lally , just a quick mod

General

1. I didn't like the BG , You could use a better BG with real guys maybe ? :

Easy

1. 00:00:998 (1) Start in a red tick could be hard to read for beginner players in my opinion.
2. 00:15:295 (3) Replace the normal addition instead a Whistle at the slider end for consistency
3. 00:42:951 (4) The flow could improve if you move this circle to x:96 y:172 |If yoy apply this, don't forget to fix the spacing with next object|
   
   Example

   
4. 00:51:388 (1) This spinner doesn't fit with the music here, maybe you could remove it and map this part
5. 01:35:920 (3,1) Swap NCs for consistency with your combo pattern
6. 00:54:670 (1) Remove the NC from this object since is totally unnecessary and for consistency with 01:54:201 (1)
7. 02:32:170 (1) Maybe you could move this circle closer to the spinner center , it will make more easy to react for beginner players

Hard

1. 00:37:326 (4) Rhythm ends in 00:37:560. So, this slider should end on there too
2. 01:38:966 (1,2) These whistles sounds a bit hard for this part in my opinion. Maybe you could remove it or decrease the volumen here
3. 02:31:701 (1) Sounds better if you remove the Whistle from the slider end
4. 03:09:201 (4) Honestly I didn't like how this slider is flowing since it breaks the awesome flow of 03:07:795 (1,2,3). I don't have good ideas but I'm sure that you can do something great!
5. 03:32:052 (3) It feels a bit weird in my opinion , what about to remove it and extend 03:31:701 (2) so far?
6. 02:51:857 (3) Maybe you could remake this slider trying something like this , to improve the flow.
   
   Example

   

Good map , Good luck Lally :D

sorry about long time but i fixed some things *coff coff* mostly in easy and normal but not gonna change the bg since i like mine <.<