1. Flowers (4.43 stars, 1102 notes)

Okoratu wrote:

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1. Late Mod is late, potato
2. Overall your SV seems to be pretty slow, dunno if you would like to increase it by .2 / .3 lol ehh xD I want this slow, because this BPM is slow.
3. Late mod is late because i had stuff to do, also this song is a lot slower than i usually accept so the mod is a bit shorter... potato ahh

Marathon

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1. long map is long. HP+1, OD+1, idk this seems pretty easy I think HP was enough imo, but I will increase OD 0.5 (8.5).
2. 00:05:125 (5,1) - might try to have the borders align more neatly? Fixed a bit, I guess.
   
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3. 00:08:125 (1) - 3.98x jump is a bit unpleasant to play since there's not really a reason for a jump this big Okay, fixed
4. 00:27:073 (1) - doing something like this would be a bit more intuitive flow wise (basically i'm telling you to CRTL+G it and rotating it a bit): Umm... I think the original was flow better than imo.
   
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5. 00:56:125 (1) - I don't really understand why this one isn't following a 1/2 rhythm It seems this melody should use 1/1 slider would be better than.
   
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6. 01:09:704 (4,5) - flow is a bit odd here, expected more of a movement towards the top right instead to the bottom I prefer moving this to the bottom more than.
7. 02:14:915 (2,3) - this jump seems to be a bit too forced, would place it in a line with (2) instead I'll consider, because it may no problem to read.
8. 02:37:810 (3) - rotating by 2 deg for a better blanket (huehue) Fixed
9. 02:49:178 (7) - ... ? the rhythm is sth like this judging by the vocals: I want this is 3/4 slider, to reduce the awkward to read, and using this slider still follow the melody.
   
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10. 02:50:757 (3,5) - could NC on these to empathize the sounds maybe Umm... nope. It look weirdto add NCs in these.
11. 03:04:810 (8,1) - would move it at least so that the 2 shapes line up more neatly Moved
    
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12. 03:06:547 (5) - rotating this one a bit would make for better flow imo I want this slider to blanket with slider end of 03:07:494 (7). However, I fixed, but different with your suggestion.
    
    Sth like that or similar

    
13. 04:07:336 (6,7) - this antijump seems to be a bit unfitting for this section here, would reconsider ahh, so I will add a circle at 04:07:652 - too.
14. 04:54:547 (3,4,5) - if you already have an antijump it'd be much more enjoyable if the jump afterwards was more even .-. But the flow was weird for me xD
15. 05:38:125 (7,8) - blanket could be better lol Moved (8) a bit
16. 06:01:968 (2) - consider mapping 06:02:125 - I made this to follow the melody. For the rhythm in that, I had added clap on sliderslide.
    Some sections still have a weird flow for my tastes but it's nothing too major in my opinion.

Gl with your map! Ty :3