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AContrari - SEKS I KEKS Eleny Malishevoi (Hard Dubstep Edit)

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AlexaBM
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1 сентября 2014 г. at 19:23:29

Artist: AContrari
Title: SEKS I KEKS Eleny Malishevoi (Hard Dubstep Edit)
Tags: russian sex and cupcake acontrariproject remix жить здорово -bakari-
BPM: 122
Filesize: 11103kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Normal (1,55 stars, 129 notes)
  2. Easy (1,24 stars, 98 notes)
  3. Hard (2,92 stars, 224 notes)
Download: AContrari - SEKS I KEKS Eleny Malishevoi (Hard Dubstep Edit)
Download: AContrari - SEKS I KEKS Eleny Malishevoi (Hard Dubstep Edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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16+ Some lyrics are not safe!
Okay..
Easy - by me
Normal - by -Bakari-
Hard - collab with -Bakari-

Thanks ezek and Sieg for helping with video <3
riffy
THIS SONG
Aka
*tancuyet*
Krfawy
Generally
Offset would be 1426 because now it's not as good as it could be IMO. D:

Easy
Maybe reduce HP to 2?

00:28:462 (4) - Maybe move to X=184 Y=28?

Painis Cupcake
Maybe set AR to 7? Now it's reaaally slow and it's a bit confusing with so many objects IMO. ;( BTW my friend Wagabunda has just seen your mapset and she advices AR8 (But IMO it's a bit too hard with it xD).

00:09:787 (2) - Maybe move to X=128 Y=300? I guess it won't look so not consistent as it is now *talking about the spacing D:*
00:39:295 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but it doesn't make me satisfacted. XD Maybe (2) would be between the sliders? Or maybe a mini stream or slider stream?
01:10:771 (4) - Maybe rotate for 3 degrees and move to X=245 Y=55 to make a better flow?
01:22:068 (1) - Maybe move to X=108 Y=172? The spacing. xD
01:29:951 (1) - The last point would be at Y=268 to make it look more blanket?

Such a 'helpful' has just been completed. ;w; GOOD LUCK WITH THIS AWESOME MAPSET! I WANT IT RANKED NOOOOOOOOOOOOW! >:-/

Я люблю этой карте ;w;
Topic Starter
AlexaBM
Спасибо, Кровавый о3о All fixed!

Aka wrote:

*tancuyet*
Я не вижу ваших поднятых рук о3о
Secretpipe
As requested ! :p

And because I liek cupcakes

[Easy]
00:43:721 (5) - You can improve this sliderwave !
00:52:573 (1) - A bit weird ! Make a simple slider!
01:27:491 (4) - Move it up by some grids
01:34:868 (4) - I don't like this pattern ! Remove and add a circle here 01:34:868 - and here :01:35:360 -

[Bakari's Normal]
Some objects unsnapped !
00:12:245 (4) - Don't curv that ! Make it straight ! :p
00:14:212 (2,3) - Make sth symmetrical ? :D
00:36:835 (1,2) - Make a blanket :p
00:39:048 (4,5) - Maybe stack'em ?
00:39:786 (6) - Curv this for increase flow ! :D
00:46:180 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - The shape can be improved !
01:17:409 (2,3) - Stack'em :D

[Cupcake]
Haven't found anything except that these patterns like this : 00:42:491 (5,2,3,4) - makes me akward


Good luck guys
And go buy me some cupcakes ! :333
riffy

Secretpipe wrote:

[Bakari's Normal]
Some objects unsnapped ! My bad, fixed that!
00:12:245 (4) - Don't curv that ! Make it straight ! :p Why should I? I feel like having this slider curved gives me smoother transitions and keeps my flow a bit more enjoyabe.
00:14:212 (2,3) - Make sth symmetrical ? :D They are already symmetrical, aren't they?
00:36:835 (1,2) - Make a blanket :p Why? This shapes reflects the way how the bass appears in this track, so I'd prefer to keep it this way unless you give me a good reason to change it's shape
00:39:048 (4,5) - Maybe stack'em ? This would be very tricky since I have no any other stacks in the whole diff
00:39:786 (6) - Curv this for increase flow ! :D Music breaks here, so I try to break my flow, as well. Sorry, keeping it for now.
00:46:180 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - The shape can be improved ! Whoops, sorrry about that
01:17:409 (2,3) - Stack'em :D Uh, sorry, no. I've elready explained why. Moreover, I'm not a fan of such stacks.

Good luck guys
And go buy me some cupcakes ! :333
/me leaves a few cupcakes

thaks a lof for cheecking!

Bakari's NM

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: AContrari.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32720
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:SEKS I KEKS Eleny Malishevoi
TitleUnicode:СЕКС И КЕКС Елены Малышевой
Artist:AContrari
ArtistUnicode:AContrari
Creator:AlexaBM
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:russian sex and cupcake dubstep acontrariproject remix жить здорово -bakari-
BeatmapID:437327
BeatmapSetID:182331

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
AlexaBM

Secretpipe wrote:

As requested ! :p

And because I liek cupcakes

[Easy]
00:43:721 (5) - You can improve this sliderwave ! I tried my best
00:52:573 (1) - A bit weird ! Make a simple slider! I changed it a bit, but I don't it to be a simple sider
01:27:491 (4) - Move it up by some grids no changes
01:34:868 (4) - I don't like this pattern ! Remove and add a circle here 01:34:868 - and here :01:35:360 - sry, no. I want to end the slider in the end of a song, not on a beat

[Cupcake]
Haven't found anything except that these patterns like this : 00:42:491 (5,2,3,4) - makes me akward no changes now. If someone else will say about that, we'' change


Good luck guys
And go buy me some cupcakes ! :333
Thank you o3o
Aka

AlexaBM wrote:

Aka wrote:

*tancuyet*
Я не вижу ваших поднятых рук о3о

*\(TANCUET)/*
Squichu
hi there!
here's the you requested. :3
sorry I'm slow.. orz

General
looks fine. :3

Easy
looks fine, too. O_O' I didn't find anything wrong with it while playing..
I can start nipicking and complain about some visuals, but that's it for this diff, I fear. D:
  1. 00:06:344 (2) - I think this belongs a few grids to the left, 16|152?
  2. 00:13:229 (1) - doesn't look as good as it could with 00:15:196 (3) - , either blanket it or rotate and match with 00:11:262 (3) - ?
    screens
    blanket:

    rotation:
  3. 00:17:163 (1,2) - could refine blankets a bit
    also, you can improve the flow slightly if you move 1 further down
  4. 00:34:868 (3) - I'd prefer if you split this up, cause of the beat at 00:35:360, which you can emphasize muuuch better, example:

    I'm sure you can think of something different, in case you don't want to map red ticks in E diff!
  5. 01:02:409 (3) - move to 60|252 and rotate it, so it matches better with 01:04:376 (1) -
  6. 01:34:868 (4) - sounds slightly off to me, I'd prefer if you split this up like this:
Bakari's Normal
hi there! I don't think I can help with this diff, but I'll try. Dx
  1. 00:02:901 (3) - consider splitting this up into two sliders to emphasize the beat on the reverse better? -
    |
  2. 00:16:180 (5,1,2) - movement from 5-1 is okaaay, but from 1-2 it's kinda.. chopped off. maybe you can try to round out the curve of 00:17:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?
  3. 00:35:114 - missing an object here. :c add a circle?
  4. 01:03:147 - ^ similar here. I like the variety, tho.. hmh. might as well keep it. up to you!
  5. 01:35:360 (6) - rotate by -9° to match better with 01:33:885 (4) -
Cupcake
there is absolutely nothing wrong with this mapset! Q_Q
  1. 00:13:721 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this might work slightly better if you increase the 'overall movement', cause it feels more dynamic
    (I can't explain so here's a screen -)
  2. 00:22:081 (5,6,7) - felt a bit off while playing, cause only 6+7 are stacked. consider stacking or unstacking all of them?
    there are similar parts, like 00:24:048 (5,6,7) - 01:03:393 (5,6,7) -
  3. 00:45:688 (3) - this feels a bit off, I think you can emphasize this better if you split it up, example:

    that way you also pick up the streams you used in the beginning. (I kind of expected to be faaaar more streams after the first stream, but there were none. :c)
that's basically all.. xD sadly. well, maybe you can match sliders better with the music at some parts, for example: 00:44:212 (5) - it's this Idk-what to call it sound, but if you shape the slider differentlyyou add a great deal of variety and it still works fine.


Really, it's hard to mod this. It's pretty much flawless (or looks so at least to me..)!
Good luck with this! >w< hope I was of some help.. u_u'
Squi~
Topic Starter
AlexaBM
Thank you!! I'm sure it's helpful o3o But I can't check it right now. I'll check it in some days.
Aka
привет, кину пару САДЖЭЩЬОНСОВ

seksy

・вот у тебя тут много 2/1 слайдеров и голые тики довольно выделяются, было бы неплохо добавить хитсаунд на них, такой же звук как normal-hitclap

ВСЁ

baka

・01:02:409 (3) - тут в общем назинази, оно по-идее он касается стандартного хп бара, вот. я крутой и больше ничего не нашел. люблю твои нармалы

кексик

・00:40:278 (5,6) - вообще тут 1/6 но я тебя понимаю. и все же этот момент по ритмичным ощущениям играется не очень.. там бит на конце слайдера второй, на который хочется прям нажать и второй слайдер, который стоит на пустоте :| ябсделал тут вот так, смотри сам uwu
・00:44:212 (5,1) - тут што со спейсингом? зажовано выглядит для 1/2
・01:29:950 (1) - НАЗИБЛАНКЕТ ФИКС

davaj rankaj
uwu/
Topic Starter
AlexaBM
Thank you both for your mods! fixed almost eveerything~ Now waiting for the Bakari's diff c:
riffy

Squirrel wrote:

hi there! hey!

Bakari's Normal
hi there! I don't think I can help with this diff, but I'll try. Dx any help is help, ansd I appreciate it!
  1. 00:02:901 (3) - consider splitting this up into two sliders to emphasize the beat on the reverse better? - yup, nice idea
  2. 00:16:180 (5,1,2) - movement from 5-1 is okaaay, but from 1-2 it's kinda.. chopped off. maybe you can try to round out the curve of 00:17:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? I am totally okay with my current flow and both variants are equal to me, so I'd keep mine for now, sorry
  3. 00:35:114 - missing an object here. :c add a circle? it'd make the 1/2 pattern way too long, also I ignore the beat here on purpose to emphasize the beat after. should be fine, hopefully
  4. 01:03:147 - ^ similar here. I like the variety, tho.. hmh. might as well keep it. up to you! same, I guess :(
  5. 01:35:360 (6) - rotate by -9° to match better with 01:33:885 (4) - okay, done
Squi~

Aka wrote:

привет, кину пару САДЖЭЩЬОНСОВ

baka

・01:02:409 (3) - тут в общем назинази, оно по-идее он касается стандартного хп бара, вот. я крутой и больше ничего не нашел. люблю твои нармалы оно не оверлапится, я проверя и спасибо, хоть кому-тонравятся мои нормалы о3о

uwu/
Thanks a lot for your mods!

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neonat
Normal

00:05:360 (1) - lower it to ease the angle of movement
00:05:360 (1,1,3) - blanket them
00:50:606 (3) - add a (drum) whistle at the end of the slider as well
00:54:540 (3) - drum clap/finish on start of slider
01:00:442 (1) - whistle

Cupcake

00:16:548 (4) - the held word is at 00:16:671 so using the same pattern as 00:12:614 (5,6) would be good
00:25:032 (1,2) - could blanket better
00:42:737 (1,2) - by changing the angle of rotation of them you can blanket each other
01:26:999 (3,1) - could blanket better

Good Luck
riffy

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:05:360 (1) - lower it to ease the angle of movement yeah, nice idea
00:05:360 (1,1,3) - blanket them why? I can't see any reason to do it.
00:50:606 (3) - add a (drum) whistle at the end of the slider as well sorry, it doesn't fit here, imo
00:54:540 (3) - drum clap/finish on start of slider sorry, I don't think that it will fit here
01:00:442 (1) - whistle same as above
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356,292,34376,2,0,L|352:232,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,34868,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,132,35360,2,0,P|256:124|184:156,2,110,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,156,36589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,36835,6,2,L|372:16,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,60,37819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,160,38311,2,0,P|436:188|364:208,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,39048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,39294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,156,39786,2,0,L|200:40,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,44,40770,6,2,L|412:36,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,72,41507,2,0,L|504:68,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,42245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,208,42737,2,0,P|424:216|480:188,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,152,44212,2,0,P|264:144|228:144,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,168,44704,6,2,L|208:40,2,110,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,46180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,256,46671,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,164,47163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,47655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,152,48147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,48639,6,2,P|220:316|76:328,1,220,6|12,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
44,244,50114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,180,50606,2,0,L|108:56,2,110,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,51835,2,0,L|170:262,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,52573,6,0,P|272:332|340:300,2,110,2|0|12,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,284,53803,2,0,L|224:220,1,55
208,132,54540,2,0,P|192:112|104:100,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,55278,2,0,P|64:152|64:184,1,55,0|12,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
140,244,56016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,204,56507,6,2,P|276:192|392:304,1,220,6|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,57737,2,0,L|304:348,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,352,58475,2,0,L|472:340,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,304,58966,2,0,P|512:248|484:188,1,110,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,164,59950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,196,60442,6,0,P|252:196|208:144,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,61426,2,0,P|176:88|104:104,1,110,12|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,60,62409,2,0,L|-4:8,2,55,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,63393,2,0,L|52:220,1,55,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,248,63885,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,308,64376,5,6,0:0:0:0:
248,268,64868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,184,65360,2,0,P|312:144|272:76,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,72,66344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,148,66835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,244,67327,2,0,P|184:268|264:264,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,68311,6,0,L|332:144,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,69048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,69294,2,0,L|396:344,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,70278,2,0,P|488:208|480:120,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,88,71016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,68,71262,2,0,P|400:92|408:180,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,72245,5,2,0:0:0:0:
388,284,72737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,240,73229,2,0,P|264:236|188:264,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,328,74212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,244,74704,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,148,75196,2,0,P|84:104|136:68,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,76180,6,0,P|280:84|332:48,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,44,77409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,64,77655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,160,78147,2,0,P|174:215|131:272,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,304,79130,2,0,L|-8:300,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,80114,6,0,L|256:336,1,110,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,364,81098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,304,81589,2,0,L|484:308,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,236,82573,2,0,P|340:200|352:128,1,110
404,48,83557,2,0,L|460:40,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,84540,6,0,L|184:28,1,110
112,84,85524,2,0,P|104:112|108:148,1,55
132,180,86016,2,0,P|136:224|92:288,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,352,86999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,384,87491,2,0,L|188:372,1,55
220,348,87983,6,0,P|244:316|248:244,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,176,88966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,92,89458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,124,89950,2,0,P|372:124|428:84,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,92,91426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,156,91917,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,236,92409,2,0,L|196:352,2,110
248,208,93639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,93885,2,0,P|352:240|400:216,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,94868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,95360,2,0,P|342:51|304:61,1,55

Thank you for modding!
Topic Starter
AlexaBM

neonat wrote:

Cupcake

00:16:548 (4) - the held word is at 00:16:671 so using the same pattern as 00:12:614 (5,6) would be good ашчув
00:25:032 (1,2) - could blanket better yes
00:42:737 (1,2) - by changing the angle of rotation of them you can blanket each other I want to leave it at that
01:26:999 (3,1) - could blanket better yes

Good Luck
Thank you!
DexFrild
Привет вам :з Давненько я не моддил, так что мод не будет особо полезен. Как по мне, мапа выглядит очень хорошо, а то что я укажу, лишь мои "придирки" и нехотение оставить место пустым :D Или то, как бы сделал я, если бы мапал эту карту.

ПоехАли :D

Easy

• 00:13:229 (1) - Мне кажется, не стоит его так закручивать. Будет лучше, если он будет сочитаться по амплитуде с предыдущим слайдером ( 00:11:262 (3) - ) По этому, предлагаю его передвинуть на х:352; у:216, вторую точку на х:385; у:195, и третью на х:428; у:184.
• 00:56:507 (1) - А тут было бы неплохо конец слайдера (волнистый, который) изогнуть под басс. Долго будет писать координаты каждой точки, по этому, я просто скопирую его код. Вставь, если не понравится, то оставь как есть. Так тоже неплохо с: Вот, собственно, и код:
SPOILER
36,48,56507,6,0,B|84:48|84:48|124:72|124:72|188:68|188:68|212:80|212:80|236:68|236:68|260:80|260:80|280:68|280:68|304:80|304:80|332:68|332:68|332:68,1,320,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
(Самая длинная строчка в .осу. Найти будет просто)
• 01:16:180 (1) - А вот здесь можно чутка исправить бланкет с: Прости мою лень, держи код слайдера :D 420,344,76180,6,0,B|434:295|413:263|413:263|428:228|408:184,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 01:26:016 (3) - И вот тут тоже самое. По моему, так будет лучше: х:144; у:336, х:100; у:271, х:129; у:197

Bakari's Normal

• 00:15:934 (4) - Это совсем необязательно, но что если передвинуть на х:136; у:144? Но и так хорошо смотрится.
• 00:21:835 (2) - Тут, я бы тоже посоветовал сделать как на 00:15:934 (4) . Но это такое незначительно изменение. Так что лучше оставь как есть.
И на этом все, пожалуй. Очень качественная дифа :) Больше и добавить нечего.

Cupcake

• 00:15:196 (1) - Будет лучше смотреться, если ты развернешь его в сторону следующего слайдера. Вторую точку на х:488; у:96.
• 00:31:917 (1) - Честно говоря, не ожидал и сбился на этом моменте. Советую убрать и довести спиннер. Или же, наоборот, укоротить спиннер до 00:31:426
• 00:40:278 (5) - Попробуй поставить бит снэп на 1/3 и поставь либо слайдер с реверсом, либо слайдер и серкл. • 00:41:753 (3) - Лучше убери на нем реверс и на 00:41:999 - поставь еще один такой слайдер. • 00:56:507 (1) - Закончи его на 00:57:245 Там как раз звучит закрытый хэт. Можно на хвост софт поставить. И опусти немного предпоследнюю красную точку. • Разная дистанция у 00:58:475 (1,2,3) - и 01:02:409 (1,2,3) - так и задумано? Я бы сделал как на втором варианте. Бо есть еще один такой паттерн. 00:50:606 (1,2,3) - На твое усмотрение, в общем с:
• 01:27:983 (1) - Тут можно сделать чуточку ровнее :з Начало на х:40; у:200, вторую точку на х:44; у:140, третью на х:88; у:100
Ну.. Вроде бы все что мог, отметил. Удачки~~
Меньше кексов, больше секса! XD
Topic Starter
AlexaBM

DexFrild wrote:

Привет вам :з Давненько я не моддил, так что мод не будет особо полезен. Как по мне, мапа выглядит очень хорошо, а то что я укажу, лишь мои "придирки" и нехотение оставить место пустым :D Или то, как бы сделал я, если бы мапал эту карту.

ПоехАли :D

Easy

• 00:13:229 (1) - Мне кажется, не стоит его так закручивать. Будет лучше, если он будет сочитаться по амплитуде с предыдущим слайдером ( 00:11:262 (3) - ) По этому, предлагаю его передвинуть на х:352; у:216, вторую точку на х:385; у:195, и третью на х:428; у:184. сделано!
• 00:56:507 (1) - А тут было бы неплохо конец слайдера (волнистый, который) изогнуть под басс. Долго будет писать координаты каждой точки, по этому, я просто скопирую его код. Вставь, если не понравится, то оставь как есть. Так тоже неплохо с: Вот, собственно, и код:
SPOILER
36,48,56507,6,0,B|84:48|84:48|124:72|124:72|188:68|188:68|212:80|212:80|236:68|236:68|260:80|260:80|280:68|280:68|304:80|304:80|332:68|332:68|332:68,1,320,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
(Самая длинная строчка в .осу. Найти будет просто) да, так лучше
• 01:16:180 (1) - А вот здесь можно чутка исправить бланкет с: Прости мою лень, держи код слайдера :D ага420,344,76180,6,0,B|434:295|413:263|413:263|428:228|408:184,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 01:26:016 (3) - И вот тут тоже самое. По моему, так будет лучше: х:144; у:336, х:100; у:271, х:129; у:197 точноо

Bakari's Normal

По просьбе Баки исправляю все за него
• 00:15:934 (4) - Это совсем необязательно, но что если передвинуть на х:136; у:144? Но и так хорошо смотрится. оставлю как есть
• 00:21:835 (2) - Тут, я бы тоже посоветовал сделать как на 00:15:934 (4) . Но это такое незначительно изменение. Так что лучше оставь как есть. тоже без изменений
И на этом все, пожалуй. Очень качественная дифа :) Больше и добавить нечего.

Cupcake

• 00:15:196 (1) - Будет лучше смотреться, если ты развернешь его в сторону следующего слайдера. Вторую точку на х:488; у:96. да
• 00:31:917 (1) - Честно говоря, не ожидал и сбился на этом моменте. Советую убрать и довести спиннер. Или же, наоборот, укоротить спиннер до 00:31:426 да, так лучше
• 00:40:278 (5) - Попробуй поставить бит снэп на 1/3 и поставь либо слайдер с реверсом, либо слайдер и серкл. хорошая идея! • 00:41:753 (3) - Лучше убери на нем реверс и на 00:41:999 - поставь еще один такой слайдер. оставила как есть • 00:56:507 (1) - Закончи его на 00:57:245 Там как раз звучит закрытый хэт. Можно на хвост софт поставить. И опусти немного предпоследнюю красную точку. исправила• Разная дистанция у 00:58:475 (1,2,3) - и 01:02:409 (1,2,3) - так и задумано? Я бы сделал как на втором варианте. Бо есть еще один такой паттерн. 00:50:606 (1,2,3) - На твое усмотрение, в общем с: сделала меньшую дистанцию
• 01:27:983 (1) - Тут можно сделать чуточку ровнее :з Начало на х:40; у:200, вторую точку на х:44; у:140, третью на х:88; у:100 фиксед
Ну.. Вроде бы все что мог, отметил. Удачки~~
Меньше кексов, больше секса! XD
Больше кексов!! :'c и спасибушки большое за мод <3
Myxo



  • General
  1. Since I don't understand russian, it's hard for me to find it out, but telling from a youtube video the title seems to be СЕКС И КЕКС Елены Малышевой (Hard Dubstep Edit). If that is correct, add (Hard Dubstep Edit) to the Romanised Title as well. If you changed it, you can remove dubstep from the tags.
  2. Your preview point is unsnapped. That's not unrankable I think, but you'd be on the save side if you snap it correctly.
  3. Seems fine otherwise :3


  • Easy
  1. 00:07:819 (4) - Moving this a bit more down would create a better flow for 00:07:327 (3,4), since (3) would fit the curve of (4) better. You can move it so that it creates a nice blanket with the following slider, like this:
  2. 00:16:671 (4) - What happened to the spacing? o:
  3. 00:26:507 (2) - The spacing difference to the previous and following object is very noticeable. Please move it a bit, so that it's 1,1x for both :3
  4. 00:56:507 (1) - This object's end is not snapped!
  5. Not much to say. Great Easy!


  • Bakari's Normal
  1. 00:17:655 (2) - The spacing difference to the previous and following object is very noticeable. Please move it a bit, so it is 0,9x for both :)
  2. 00:38:311 (3,4,5) - Very minor, but the movement for the 1/2-circles is a really strong curve - it seems a bit unusual and would look a bit better if it was somehow like this:
  3. 01:16:180 (1,2,3) - Same.
  4. Perfect.


  • Cupcake
  1. You could try keeping your 1/4-spacing a bit more consistent, in order to give the map more structure. You've been using 1,3x, but it variates between 1,25x and 1,35x. It's pretty minor, but it does look a bit untidy.
  2. 00:40:278 (5) - NC would make the 1/3 more obvious and better to read :)
  3. 00:49:622 (2,3,4,1) - It would have been cooler if you mapped the 1/3, but okay :(
  4. 00:57:491 (2,3,4,1) - Same.
  5. Awesome ^-^

Okay. What do you even need me for? Go rank it already xD
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