1. Easy (1.5 stars, 188 notes)
2. Hard (2.61 stars, 398 notes)
3. Normal (1.68 stars, 235 notes)

Thanks modders! >~<

[-Sophie-]
Mystyk
Yuthuil
pandorawindy
Angelin Dash
-Famous-
Kritikally
litoluna
[-MrSergio-]
Kibbleru
-Chata-
luxoDeh
xLoupGarou
LixRei
KokoroStudiox3
Hollow Wings
HootOwlStar
Miramono
No_Gu
-Nya-
Kihhou
NoHitter
OscaR CUBE
Moo-Chan
Ylinestra44
CrazyrabbitKGE
Lanturn
kakifly
pkk
Kenezz
icelemons
TicClick

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[Normal]
Map needs an epilepsy warning. No need. There's no quick changing colors, or sprites.
00:52:060 - Extra note doesn't need to be there . Removed the note.
01:08:310 (4,5) - 4 Over lapping 5, may wanted to change. I'll keep it the way it is.
01:27:310 (2,3) - ^ 2 Overlaps 3 Same here.
01:28:060 (3) - Sounds late to the beat or vocal It follows the vocal.
02:13:310 - ^ It sounded weird, so I change the pattern.
02:40:060 - Remove this note, its extra I'll keep this one.
02:42:310 - Remove theses annoying green lines. Removed.
03:20:685 - A small spinner could work. Make sure auto can achieve at least 1000 score on this. The final beat is at 03:20:310 . And I don't want to add a spinner.
As Requested

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Mod from my queue!

General:
I think you should change the combo colors to something that fits better to the background. Just an example: http://puu.sh/9Zv3E/afab2c9632.png Fixed

Easy:
Nothing, this diff looks really nice :3

Normal:
00:32:310 (1,2) - very nazi but I think you could improve this blanket - http://puu.sh/9ZELo/f9253db959.jpg Fixed the blanket.
00:48:310 (1) - add finish? I can hear a finish sound in the music too so it would fit well imo Ah, I forgot this one, I think. Added.
02:56:810 (1) - this new combo looks a bit unnecessary to me, so I would remove the NC from 02:58:310 (1) - Fixed.

Nothing else, this difficulty looks very nice as well, good job!

Hard:
00:23:810 - add hit circle, it feels too empty without it, since there is a beat in the music too Added.
00:47:810 (4) - very nazi but rotate this about 13 degrees (selection centre) so that it will be similar to a blanket with (3) Fixed.
http://puu.sh/9ZHbl/cd46e561ff.jpg
02:07:810 (5) - rotate this a bit for better flow - http://puu.sh/9ZIaq/10de199680.jpg Fixed.
02:15:185 - add hit cirlce, it will fit to the vocals and it feels a bit empty without Added.
02:18:685 - same as above ^ Added.

That's all, there is not much to say, the difficulties are already very nice, good luck!

MisakiYuri wrote:

M4M

Easy:

00:45:810 (2) - This note sound later than when the actual sound comes. Extend the slider before it slightly and get rid of it? Extended the slider.

Normal:

00:59:310 (5) - Just wondering whether you forgot the hitsound here...? Hmm... Maybe not?

This is all I can see, I'm more for helping first time mappers since I'm so bad at looking deep into a map.
Have my star.
And just to say you are not obliged to mod my map since this was such a petty mod.
I'll take a look yours. Since I took M4M, and since you mod my map, I should return a favor. This way, we'll be equal. I don't care if the mod is little, not really helpful, I'll mod yours. It feels like you waste your time for this.

1. No big issues in your diffs is my first impression since i played your all diffs.Nice work ! man,i have to admit you are a so great mapper with experience.

1. nice diff for beginners.

1. pretty good diff.I cant check out some issues in it;

1. 00:49:060 (2) - slider ll be fitter or add one circle in 00:49:310 ;If you slow down this song,you ll hear this rhythm more clearly.
2. 02:11:310 - why not add one circle,i feel empty in here.
3. why not add some triplets into your kiai time?such as add one circle in 01:03:185 ;
   If i were you i ll make my kiai harder. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ll become:
   img

   
   I think it s very important to make the kiai higher than rest time.

pandorawindy wrote:

Hi,At your request,i come here for m4m.Your suggestions in my map is very helpful,thank you so much!

I am a new mapper and modder with inexperience.So i usually can find just a little issues in other mappers' map.I wanna say sorry about this point. But i ll try my best to mod yours. It's okay.

[In general]

1. No big issues in your diffs is my first impression since i played your all diffs.Nice work ! man,i have to admit you are a so great mapper with experience.

[Easy]

1. nice diff for beginners.

[Normal]

1. pretty good diff.I cant check out some issues in it;

[Insane]

1. 00:49:060 (2) - slider ll be fitter or add one circle in 00:49:310 ;If you slow down this song,you ll hear this rhythm more clearly. 00:49:310 - doesn't have a beat, but I added a circle here.
2. 02:11:310 - why not add one circle,i feel empty in here. There's no beat here. And it doesn't fit well.
3. why not add some triplets into your kiai time?such as add one circle in 01:03:185 ; Why? That's so random. There's no beat on the blue ticks. Adding notes to place with no beats makes the map overmap (t/125409)
   If i were you i ll make my kiai harder. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ll become:
   img

   
   I think it s very important to make the kiai higher than rest time.

that s all. good luck man, you r the best mapper i ve ever seen.

Angelin Dash wrote:

Hi from #modreqs. My 2# modding
Okay here is my suggestion, more like my opnion.

HARD:
00:15:810 (1) - Move this circle here. 256,300 Moved it, but it needs a reason.
00:17:060 (2) - ^ 124,192 It'll be ruined.
00:17:310 (3) - Move this slider here. 284,192 I changed the placement of 00:17:060 (2,3) to another value.
00:20:060 (4) - Move this circle here. 104,312 No.
00:20:310 (1) - ^ 224,312 ^
00:20:560 (2) - ^ 344,312 (A tiny jump) ^
00:37:560 (3) - Move slider here. 340,140 It'll ruined the distance.
00:38:310 (1) - ^ 288,64 (A tiny jump) ^
01:15:310 (3) - ^ 260,172 No
01:17:810 (3) - Move circle here. 60,272 (A tiny jump) ^
01:18:060 (4) - ^ 107,192 Still ruins the distance.

Lovely beatmap, hope this get ranked someday. Good luck ;u;

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Easy

1. 00:42:810 (4) - Make the slider more like this? I want to make it "smooth", so no changes has been done.
   
   Picutre

   
2. 01:18:310 (1) - Move that slider to x:184 ; y:320. The distance won't be same.

Normal

1. 01:16:310 (3,4,5) - More like this? Curved to the other way.
   
   Picture

   
2. Copy and paste 01:26:310 (1), ctrl + G and replace 01:27:310 (2) with the copied one. Meh. The one used has a better look.

Yea that's it... It's a very good mapset. Too hard to find something to change. I hope my mod could help you somehow. Good luck!

Kritikally wrote:

Returning the favor from your detailed mod on my thread ♥

[Easy]

00:44:310 (1)- Slider seems to be a bit unnecessarily complex. If you don't feel it needs the bend at the first tick, remove it. I slightly edit the slider, though I didn't remove it.
01:22:310 (1,2,3,4)- LOVE the waving slider effect here. You did this in the other difficulties, too. DON'T EVER CHANGE IT! (Who says modding needs to be purely negative?) Ah, okay. Maybe this pattern might give ideas in your future maps.
02:42:310 (3)- Might want to replace that slider with a spinner. I don't want to.

[Normal]
02:53:185 (1)- Spin the slider the other way (leave first point, second point @ 392 x 132, last point @ 392 x 56) and it can blanket (2) in the same manner that (3) does. Blanketed with 02:53:810 (2) .
03:13:310 (4)- Nitpicking, but slightly bend slider to keep the same pattern the adjoining sliders on each side are using (add a point @ 210 x 90). I don't like when it's bend on the up.

[Hard]
00:39:810 (4)- Not sure if intentional, but if that slider is supposed to be longer, move second point to 112 x 32. If you were following the bass line, ignore this. There's no beat on the red tick (maybe). Plus, it fits better when it ends on the blue tick.
01:23:560 (4)- Check jumps to and from this point -- not sure if ~2.1x jump is intentional. I'll see what other modders think. I'm not sure.
03:01:310 (3)- 2.25x jump -- this does look intentional though. Same here. We can add jumps in hard difficulties.

[Summary]
The flow in your beatmaps are outstanding, and you were quite creative in all difficulties with your choice and placement of sliders. Maps on all difficulties are at a very refined state considering the number of modders -- this goes to your expertise and the modders' abilities to influence your beatmap (or your ability to see improvements, or both). 9.5/10! Good luck getting approved!

1. 00:29:310 (2,3,4) - I think a curved line had better
   00:29:810 (3) - x:296 y:60
   00:30:310 (4) - x:200 y:91
   
   I think beautiful blanket diff

1. 00:40:310 (1,2) - blanket 00:39:810 (5) - ?
   00:41:060 (2) - move at x:233 y:25
2. 00:57:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:57:810 (2) - selected move at 00:55:810 (5) - stack note.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:25:810 (4) - I think move at center is better.
   following next spinner

1. 00:23:810 (3) - add clap
2. 01:45:310 (7,8,9) - change Rhythm?
   
3. 02:00:060 (4) - move at x:270 y:120 01:59:310 (3,4,1) - a curved line
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:310 (6) - NC
5. 02:20:310 (6) - ^

litoluna wrote:

for m4m
[Easy]

1. 00:29:310 (2,3,4) - I think a curved line had better
   00:29:810 (3) - x:296 y:60
   00:30:310 (4) - x:200 y:91
   Fixed
   I think beautiful blanket diff

[Normal]

1. 00:40:310 (1,2) - blanket 00:39:810 (5) - ?
   00:41:060 (2) - move at x:233 y:25 Fixed
2. 00:57:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:57:810 (2) - selected move at 00:55:810 (5) - stack note. I don't understand this one.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:25:810 (4) - I think move at center is better. Mmm... I'll keep the way it was.
   following next spinner

[Hard]

1. 00:23:810 (3) - add clap Added
2. 01:45:310 (7,8,9) - change Rhythm? Changed the rhythm.
   
3. 02:00:060 (4) - move at x:270 y:120 01:59:310 (3,4,1) - a curved line Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:310 (6) - NC Fixed
5. 02:20:310 (6) - ^ Fixed

I think beautiful mapset and song
gl

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Hi ! Mod request from my Modding queue

[General]

- I know someone already told you this, but since the AIMod pointed it out you should put the epilepsy warning. Does it really is such a bother? It's not like it affects your map in any way.... Hmm... I'm not sure about this, though the storyboard doesn't have really quick change elements.
- I usually prefer Japanese lyrics, or at least in their mother language...but it's a personal opinion I think I'll add it.

[Hard]

01:48:810 (2,4) - Stack them properly Nazi, but okay.
02:17:935 (4) - Stack this note properly ^
02:40:310 (1,4) - Stack them properly ^

[Normal]

00:43:810 (3,2) - Aren't stacked properly Still nazi, but fixed.
00:55:810 (5,2) - Same ^ ^

[Easy]

00:23:810 (4,2) - Aren't stacked properly Same here, but fixed.
01:05:810 (4,3) - Same ^ (maybe they're too far away, though) ^

Alright, that's all
Good Luck with your map

1. okay first thing i noticed right off the bat is you missed alot of the instrument sounds like 00:17:560 - 00:18:060 -
   which honestly, i guess its okay if you really love vocals or something but uhgg srsly it bothers me t-t i'd rather map those over vocals since the harmony line is more interesting to follow. 00:44:810 (2) - oh nvm i guess you don't love vocals that much
   i'm not gunna suggest you go and fix everything you've undermapped (well u can if you want, it would make me happy ) but please for next time don't miss any strong sounds like this
2. 00:24:310 (1,3) - hm why not make a better blanket here Oo
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:310 (5) - needs nc? are you doing nc ever 1 downbeat or 2 downbeats? you should stick with one, don't switch back and forth
4. 00:31:810 (3) - do something similar as 00:39:810 (4) - ? maybe you can add a repeat to get the vocal
   02:05:810 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (2) - super optional but this looks better imo owo
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:19:560 (4,5) - i think a more appropriate place for a jump is 01:19:810 (5,1) - instead due to the downbeat. so space 01:19:810 (5) - with 1.3 and space 01:20:310 (1) - with 1.4 also it might be nicer if you can stack 01:18:810 (2,1) -
7. 01:25:060 (3) - angle this to the right a bit more atm it looks too similar with 01:24:560 (2) -
8. 02:56:060 (9,1) - nazi but, blanket
   
   more rants.
   the rhythm just doesn't feel too consistent imo, like some places you decide to map out the guitar or base and some places you decide to skip it :/
   but i guess thats just me

• 
  im just gunna give a general rant, for this you should choose a set of strong sounds and only map that. fak i cant explain
  so for example
  00:17:060 - the vocal here isnt any weaker than 00:16:810 - but you decided to skip it.
  00:18:560 - same issue here, it makes it really hard to read if people play on hidden cuz they have no idea which vocals you would have skipped and which ones you actually decided to map out.
  
  this is why i like mapping the harmony lines cuz the harmony lines usually have simpler rhythms that can support things such as a normal or easy diff.

-Chata- wrote:

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

1. Clear

[Easy]

1. 01:24:310 (3,4) - I these slider are too close to the HP bar
   img

   
2. Clear

[Normal]

1. AR+1
2. 01:25:310 (4) - Nazi. below under 1 gird. it more make blanket according to your previous
3. 01:42:310 (2) - New combo. same as 00:15:810 (1,1) - and other difficulty
4. 03:10:310 (1,3) - swap new combo. 03:10:310 (1,3) - and remove new combo here. in order to unify with Insane
5. 03:16:810 (1) - It's a strange, why not? It should start here 03:17:060 A beat starts here.

[Hard]

1. HP-1, OD-1.
2. 01:04:310 (5) - 01:12:310 (5) - add new combo. 01:08:310 (1,1,1,1,1) - refer to this
3. 02:07:810 (5) - Unrankable. reverse arrow is out of playground
   img

   
   This is correct
4. 02:59:060 (1) - Remove new combo

it's over. Good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

ok so m4m i guess

[Hard]

1. okay first thing i noticed right off the bat is you missed alot of the instrument sounds like 00:17:560 - 00:18:060 -
   which honestly, i guess its okay if you really love vocals or something but uhgg srsly it bothers me t-t i'd rather map those over vocals since the harmony line is more interesting to follow. 00:44:810 (2) - oh nvm i guess you don't love vocals that much
   i'm not gunna suggest you go and fix everything you've undermapped (well u can if you want, it would make me happy ) but please for next time don't miss any strong sounds like this
2. 00:24:310 (1,3) - hm why not make a better blanket here Oo
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:310 (5) - needs nc? are you doing nc ever 1 downbeat or 2 downbeats? you should stick with one, don't switch back and forth
4. 00:31:810 (3) - do something similar as 00:39:810 (4) - ? maybe you can add a repeat to get the vocal
   02:05:810 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (2) - super optional but this looks better imo owo
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:19:560 (4,5) - i think a more appropriate place for a jump is 01:19:810 (5,1) - instead due to the downbeat. so space 01:19:810 (5) - with 1.3 and space 01:20:310 (1) - with 1.4 also it might be nicer if you can stack 01:18:810 (2,1) -
7. 01:25:060 (3) - angle this to the right a bit more atm it looks too similar with 01:24:560 (2) -
8. 02:56:060 (9,1) - nazi but, blanket
   
   more rants.
   the rhythm just doesn't feel too consistent imo, like some places you decide to map out the guitar or base and some places you decide to skip it :/
   but i guess thats just me

[Normal]

• 
  im just gunna give a general rant, for this you should choose a set of strong sounds and only map that. fak i cant explain
  so for example
  00:17:060 - the vocal here isnt any weaker than 00:16:810 - but you decided to skip it.
  00:18:560 - same issue here, it makes it really hard to read if people play on hidden cuz they have no idea which vocals you would have skipped and which ones you actually decided to map out.
  
  this is why i like mapping the harmony lines cuz the harmony lines usually have simpler rhythms that can support things such as a normal or easy diff.