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petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea

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ak74
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ak74
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年3月13日星期日 at 13:07:37

Artist: petit milady
Title: Koi wa Milk Tea
Source: 六畳間の侵略者!?
Tags: プチミレディ rokujouma no shinryakusha ending TV Size yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana buhei ak74qbz95xm8
BPM: 122
Filesize: 21853kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. buhei's Insane (3.77 stars, 301 notes)
  2. Easy (1.24 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Hard (2.81 stars, 212 notes)
  4. Normal (1.65 stars, 126 notes)
Download: petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea
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3rd ranked map made in 2014.
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buhei's Insane by buhei

and tkx Ringating for BG&video&mp3
mintong89 for hitsounds editing

Also you can try moe lgdry15's and Ts8zs' Insane diffs here
Last edited by ak74 , edited 117 times in total.
lgdry15
205 posts
Joined November 2013
lgdry15
嗯……你的红线啊……
可以这么改吧……：

把 BPM=120 的那根红线删掉~ 然后把 BPM=122 的那根红线移到 00:00:868 也就是 Offset=868
这时你打开AiMod会发现有Unsnapped的音，调一下就好了……
绿线和 Preview Point 也调一下，因为很有可能就和白线对不齐了……
然后就是Kiai time…… 时间好短啊……
把 00:50:048 之后所有的绿线里的 Kiai time 全打开，然后在 01:25:458 加个绿线，这个绿线的功能是取消Kiai Time，把 Kiai time 的勾勾掉就好了……
你的视频…… Offset 调成159ms 会更好吧……

调好之后，开始的那个转盘…… 移到 00:00:868 ，尾部伸到 00:02:344 ，再加个Clap音。因为毕竟是转盘，不需要那么的精确。。。而且我柑橘这么整也挺好的……

你的前奏部分用的是 1 3 Clap ，没什么问题，但我柑橘用 2 4 Clap 更好……
00:22:016 (6) - 头为啥要加Clap，不懂…… :? 。。。哦……听你后面的我好像明白了，把clap加在 00:21:524 (5) 头上吧……
00:33:327 (5) - 这……是什么声音？好突兀的说…… 把Finish去掉吧。。。
00:36:278 - 00:49:064 这一段用 2 4 Clap 试试，非常赞的…… 这样这段结尾的几个Clap就不突兀了。。。你的高潮部分就做的很好额……
00:56:278 (2,2,2) 还有 01:15:622 (1,1,1) - 把clap去掉吧……还是突兀的问题……

至于note的排列……我柑橘挺好的……可能是因为我不经常摸图吧…… :lol:

哦，对了。。。我柑橘把所有timing线（包括Preview Point别忘了……）整体前移 3ms 会更好，柑橘timing就完美了……
做法是打开 Timing Setup Panel ，然后把右边列表里的所有东西全选，这时，左面会出现 Move Selected Offsets by ，输入-3，点move，再点OK就好了。然后呢，你的所有note就unsnapped了。。。 :cry: 这时，菜单栏里有个Timing，点开之后有下拉菜单，里面有红字写的 Move all notes in time... ，点开，输入-3，点OK就好了…… 最好再打开 AiMod 确认一下所有note是否都snapped了。。。

我的GD就是这个timing，而且是这么做的。。。你可以看一眼，柑橘挺不错的。。。如果你感觉不行的话，可以告诉我，我再改回来……

本帖仅供骗kudos用~ :D
GD在下一帖~ ;)
Last edited by lgdry15 , edited 2 times in total.
lgdry15
205 posts
Joined November 2013
lgdry15
GD: lgdry15's Hard
http://puu.sh/awXxj/784c4b89c6.osu

呜……puush用不了惹…… :(

网盘：
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQBvd9g

:)
lgdry15
205 posts
Joined November 2013
lgdry15
简单改了改。。。 :D

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mguTUkC
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
复制了一下加了点音效
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ED1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49307
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Koi wa Milk Tea
TitleUnicode:恋はみるくてぃー
Artist:petit milady
ArtistUnicode:プチミレディ
Creator:ak74qbz95xm8
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:六畳間の侵略者!?
Tags:rokujouma no shinryakusha ending yuki aoi taketatsu ayana
BeatmapID:470026
BeatmapSetID:196674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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既然做了就要负责到底._.
ak74
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Topic Starter
ak74

ts8zs wrote:

复制了一下加了点音效
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Title:Koi wa Milk Tea
TitleUnicode:恋はみるくてぃー
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Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:六畳間の侵略者!?
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293,233,61848,2,0,P|353:232|408:256,1,120
488,240,62217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,62340,2,0,P|377:152|317:153,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,62832,2,0,P|148:168|93:145,1,120
37,81,63200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,65,63324,2,0,P|171:88|231:87,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,63815,6,0,P|408:104|384:216,1,180
192,152,64307,2,0,P|264:120|328:144,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,64799,2,0,P|120:312|8:288,1,180
72,96,65291,2,0,P|104:168|80:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,65783,6,0,P|368:128|400:152,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,196,66151,2,0,P|144:127|149:87,1,120
295,251,66520,2,0,P|255:320|218:336,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,67135,2,0,P|248:187|284:234,1,120
416,256,67504,2,0,P|364:227|305:234,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,68119,6,0,P|328:118|277:148,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,184,68487,2,0,P|444:136|443:77,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,69102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,69225,2,0,P|356:256|309:292,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,69717,6,0,P|192:256|112:248,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,312,70086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,70209,2,0,P|212:336|267:313,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,216,70700,2,0,P|361:161|362:101,1,120
386,29,71068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,83,71192,2,0,P|443:142|466:197,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,240,71684,6,0,P|237:240|182:217,1,120
168,200,72053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,176,72176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,152,72299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,72422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,72545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,80,72668,2,0,P|228:79|283:102,1,120
456,224,73159,6,0,P|397:224|342:201,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,73651,2,0,P|178:279|118:278,1,120
48,328,74020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,360,74143,2,0,P|188:360|243:337,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,288,74635,2,0,P|432:233|431:173,1,120
398,93,75003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,160,75127,2,0,P|345:219|322:274,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,200,75618,6,0,P|152:208|104:200,1,80
48,96,75946,2,0,P|88:88|136:96,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,160,76274,2,0,P|384:164|423:156,1,80
480,56,76602,2,0,P|441:51|402:59,1,80
240,104,76930,2,0,P|201:111|162:107,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,64,77340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,77586,6,0,P|111:231|88:312,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,384,77955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,320,78077,2,0,P|196:263|190:204,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,120,78569,2,0,P|335:127|416:104,1,120
488,136,78938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,202,79061,2,0,P|364:222|304:216,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,216,79553,6,0,P|113:238|54:237,1,120
38,213,79921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,189,80044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
30,165,80167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,141,80290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
54,117,80413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,96,80537,2,0,P|127:72|187:72,1,120
384,128,81028,6,0,P|330:151|270:151,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,233,81520,2,0,P|135:232|80:256,1,120
0,240,81889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,82012,2,0,P|111:152|171:153,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,82504,2,0,P|340:168|395:145,1,120
451,81,82872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,65,82996,2,0,P|317:88|257:87,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,48,83487,6,0,P|80:104|104:216,1,180
296,152,83979,2,0,P|224:120|160:144,1,120
312,288,84471,2,0,P|368:312|480:288,1,180
416,96,84963,2,0,P|384:168|408:232,1,120
240,144,85455,6,0,P|160:144|128:168,1,120
344,212,85823,2,0,P|384:143|379:103,1,120
233,267,86192,2,0,P|273:336|310:352,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,86807,2,0,P|280:203|244:250,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,87176,2,0,P|164:243|223:250,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
既然做了就要负责到底._.

Many Tks.
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Mod from modding queue~

[General]
Check all blankets you set throughout your map, you haven't adjusted them all correctly yet.
Also, what's up with these new combos at 01:05:783 - and 01:25:455 - ? Please check again where you set your combos, it's not recommend to set new combos after every 2 objects (I'm overexxagerating a bit sry).

[Normal]
Do you even use DS here? This song doesn't follow the usual 1/2 beats so you can't map it like it is one like you did in 00:02:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
Keep in mind that normal maps is still for beginners. ;)

00:52:750 (5,6) - blanket of 6 needs to be improved
01:04:307 (2,3) - ^
01:05:783 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so many new combos? slider+circle should be one combo only.
01:25:824 (1,1) - blanket improvement

[Hard]
00:02:833 (1,2,3) - This distance might be confusing, use clearer distances
00:24:472 (4,5) - really really sharp dropoff flow, maybe put slider 5 a little bit to the left
00:25:947 (6) - this looks crippled. improve: http://puu.sh/aPxNa/59d2c49301.jpg
00:31:357 (2) - you should check the blanket of this slider again, it doesn't align with the approachcircles
00:37:504 (1) - dunno why, but this looks like a slider abomination to me (not meant to be mean) xD improve the blanket
00:40:578 (1) - make this a backslider starting at 00:40:455 -
00:52:013 (6,7,8) - too close to each other, bigger distances
00:53:488 (1,2) - you want a blanket slider here? then set slider 1 at x:80, y:312
01:01:849 (2) - check the blanket again http://puu.sh/aPyaD/0b45023695.jpg
01:02:587 (1,2) - ^
01:21:029 (1,2) - ^

Please check all blanket's again ^^ Otherwise it's fine.
[Ts8z's Insane]
00:29:143 (3) - is this offscreen?
00:38:242 (2,3,4) - i think this destroys the flow in this map a bit, why not go with these sliders http://puu.sh/aPwXz/3180aec6fc.jpg ?
00:46:602 (3,4) - the distance between these two sliders is different to 1-2 and 5-6, this is inconsistent.
00:50:045 (2,3,4) - i feel that you have way too many of these patterns around the 2nd half, try to vary a bit more. Here an example for another possible pattern http://puu.sh/aPxqv/251fb82c62.jpg
01:25:455 - it's probably just me, but i feel that you used this windmill pattern up some times already, so this last one feels a little bit repetitive

Otherwise really nice map, i like how you put in so many dropoff flows in it. :)

[lgdry15's Hard]
00:08:734 (9) - NC
00:12:669 (7) - ^
00:39:718 (6) - reposition at x:216, y:144 for non-overlap and better shape of 4-6-1
00:41:193 (4,5) - avoid overlap
00:43:160 (4,6) - ^
00:55:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is playable, but the pattern doesn't look that great. go with an oval flow pattern http://puu.sh/aPvR5/2e35d2ebab.jpg
01:15:619 - ^
00:56:930 (7,8,9,1) - you missed some notable beats, try this http://puu.sh/aPw0c/f5d0dd4eae.jpg (9 is on red beat, you need to switch to 1/4 for this)
01:06:150 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ugh, this whole part is a mess, plus you don't need that many new combos. Use one triangular pattern, and vary it only a bit between the combos http://puu.sh/aPwnv/619156f532.jpg
That coul be a solution... although i still think it's better to just replace the doubles with a slider here.
01:27:177 (1,1) - unstack

Good maps, but they still need a lot of refinement. Get more mods! :)

Greetings,
paseli
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
00:46:602 (3,4) - the distance between these two sliders is different to 1-2 and 5-6, this is inconsistent.
fixed
帮我差不多改成这样就ok https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1920731
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
hi
Last edited by CET 6 , edited 1 time in total.
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
hi ~


Easy


消除note音效应该是不允许的 特别在低难度 没有note音 对于新玩家来说找节奏不容易
00:06:766 (1,2,3) - 像00:02:832 (1,2,3) - 这样摆下来如何？ 感觉会更整齐又有种梗的感觉
00:09:717 (4) - easy最好不要有遮挡吧
00:12:176 (2) - 这个要包的话好像没包好也
00:16:602 (1,1,1) - 是觉得好看才用NC吧？不过还是不建议这样也哈哈
00:17:586 (1) - 最低难度最好不要有这种间距的大变化 最好保持间距一致 00:24:471 (1) - 这里开始的一段间距变化太多了点吧 整齐强迫症者无法忍受- -
00:46:110 (1) - 要包吗？如果不的话觉得移到00:45:127 (3) - 的左下更顺flow些
00:53:487 (1,2,1) - 个人不喜欢这样看起来像随便连起来的一串毛毛虫- - 觉得要连一串也要用下对称滑条或者好看造型的滑条 显得看起来是有认真想过怎么摆的样子哈哈
ps. 有的地方挤在中间了像这样00:06:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1) - 觉得可以让排列适当均匀分布在各个方向 因为以前自己会把note挤在一起 所以摸图的时候总会想提一下哈哈

嗯 粗体字是大概要注意的地方



Normal

和Easy差不多的points 对照着修改一下
间距一致些 可以有些变化 但至少是一小段一小段有规律地变 不要一下0.8又1.2又0.7又1.5··· 不然不整齐
副歌部分的蓝线滑条听起来感觉有点··· 觉得还是拉到白线比较好 第一次test还以为是滑条没对准时间轴


先把Easy和Normal修改好了 我再来看Hard吧


加油~ :D
ak74
236 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
ak74

CET 6 wrote:

hi ~


Easy


消除note音效应该是不允许的 特别在低难度 没有note音 对于新玩家来说找节奏不容易
00:06:766 (1,2,3) - 像00:02:832 (1,2,3) - 这样摆下来如何？ 感觉会更整齐又有种梗的感觉
00:09:717 (4) - easy最好不要有遮挡吧
00:12:176 (2) - 这个要包的话好像没包好也
00:16:602 (1,1,1) - 是觉得好看才用NC吧？不过还是不建议这样也哈哈
00:17:586 (1) - 最低难度最好不要有这种间距的大变化 最好保持间距一致 00:24:471 (1) - 这里开始的一段间距变化太多了点吧 整齐强迫症者无法忍受- -
00:46:110 (1) - 要包吗？如果不的话觉得移到00:45:127 (3) - 的左下更顺flow些
00:53:487 (1,2,1) - 个人不喜欢这样看起来像随便连起来的一串毛毛虫- - 觉得要连一串也要用下对称滑条或者好看造型的滑条 显得看起来是有认真想过怎么摆的样子哈哈
ps. 有的地方挤在中间了像这样00:06:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1) - 觉得可以让排列适当均匀分布在各个方向 因为以前自己会把note挤在一起 所以摸图的时候总会想提一下哈哈

嗯 粗体字是大概要注意的地方



Normal

和Easy差不多的points 对照着修改一下
间距一致些 可以有些变化 但至少是一小段一小段有规律地变 不要一下0.8又1.2又0.7又1.5··· 不然不整齐
副歌部分的蓝线滑条听起来感觉有点··· 觉得还是拉到白线比较好 第一次test还以为是滑条没对准时间轴


先把Easy和Normal修改好了 我再来看Hard吧


加油~ :D
按照意见修改了一点。。
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hello

Easy

Why your spacing is variating from 0,80x to 0,70x and 1,00x?
Use the same spacing on whole map please
  1. 00:08:239 (2) - I'm not a big fan of overlaps on easiest diffs but this may be ok, if someone else point it out better considerate it
  2. 00:15:370 (2) - huh this slider is really short, newbie players will be like oh what is this, a good option is just delete the slider and add a circle on 00:15:616 -
  3. 00:17:583 (2) - overlaps~
  4. 00:18:569 (3) - this is a nice place to put a finish!
  5. 00:19:796 (1) - a whistle may sounds better on the end of the slider instead of a clap, why? because of the bass effect on the song, the clap make everything sounds a bit empty on this part and the whistle will give a better sound here
  6. 00:20:537 (1) - finish on the start of the slider if you added the whistle suggested up, you will notice a change on the sounds
  7. 00:21:520 (2) - check spacing! previous is 1,07x and the next 0,76x
  8. 00:23:979 (1,1) - why new combos? I don't usually care about new combos but this is just off, why make this?
  9. 00:27:422 (2,3) - short sliders... replacing this with circles on 00:27:422 and 00:27:914 doesn't affect your pattern and make it more readable, really the 1/2 sliders are pointless, add whistles to these circles
  10. 00:28:405 (1) - finish on the start of the slider sounds good, try it out
  11. 00:34:307 (1) - why new combo
  12. 00:38:979 (2) - 1/2 notes are not really recomendable for an Easy diff, even if you remove this the map will sound good, try it please
  13. 00:40:701 (4) - short slider... again, make it just 1 circle please and 00:41:438 (1) - to the previous white tick
  14. 00:43:160 (1) - finish only on the start and end of this slider sounds better with the vocals, the clap sounds off, btw why new combo?
  15. 00:44:143 (1) - finish on start of this slider
  16. 00:44:881 (2) - 1/2 notes, please avoid to use them, check the sound without this note, it doesn't affect the pattern too
  17. 00:47:832 (1) - move to next white tick and make it end on 00:49:061
  18. 00:50:045 (2) - spacing... why it is increasing?
  19. 00:53:487 (1) - replace with 1 circle on the start of this slider
  20. 00:54:717 (1) - move it to next white tick the vocal have a triplet and not a duplet here, it will sounds better with the vocals if you move it to next white tick and make it 1/2 shorter
  21. 00:59:635 (2) - ~ remove please, it is not needed
  22. 01:05:783 (1,1,1) - please avoid overlaps like this, it is confusing for new players why not make some beautiful slider patterns instead?
  23. 01:12:422 (2) - same as 00:54:717 (1)
  24. 01:15:619 (1) - it overlaps with 01:13:651 (1) - try something else please
  25. 01:17:094 (1) - 1,42x previous wtf
  26. 01:21:028 (1) - 1 single circle
  27. 01:22:258 (3) - move to next white tick and make it 1/2 shorter
  28. 01:26:438 (1) - why new combo? and make it 1/1 duration and add a repeat way more simple than current pattern

Normal

The difficulty values are too high!! use a 3~4 values combination
SV is also high, maybe 1,40
Random spacing change again
Check your hitsounds, I can't listen a solid pattern anywhere
  1. 00:13:037 (4) - I know you are trying to follow that bell on the song, but moving to next tick will follow it better and also it will be on the downbeat
  2. 00:24:471 (1,2,3) - Im not really sure about blue ticks on a Normal diff
  3. 00:26:930 (1) - make this more "curvy"? for avoid the spacing issue and better flow
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:356 (2) - Avoid jumps on a Normal diff please, micro jumps are okay but this it is not okay
  5. 00:31:356 (2) - spacing!... the next blue tick makes the spacing looks off
  6. 00:34:307 (1,2) - jumps...
  7. 00:38:242 (3) - why the sudden end of a blue tick? make it end on the next white tick and it will feel better with the next pattern
  8. 00:41:438 (1,2) - this doesn't follow anything, try making something like this instead
    SPOILER
  9. 00:46:479 (2) - delete the next circle and add a repeat to this, blue ticks are just...
  10. 00:56:930 (1) - the vocal is higher here, so why not making it a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/3 bounce? check it out please
  11. 00:57:422 (1) - you are missing some vocals unnecesarly, check this
    SPOILER
  12. 00:59:881 (1) - make it end on the next white tick please
  13. 01:06:766 (1) - dem jumps...
  14. 01:09:225 (2) - same as 00:57:422 (1)

Hard

Lol this have a lower SV than the Normal diff.......
  1. 00:17:955 (1) - almost unreadable change, maybe something like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:25:455 (2) - ctrl + g it, it will have a better flow with the previous slider
  3. 00:47:341 (1) - you have some nice sounds on the backbround, why not use them?
    SPOILER
    176,216,47094,2,0,L|160:96,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    120,104,47463,2,0,L|240:80,1,89.9999972534181
    216,40,47832,2,0,P|288:112|296:128,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,176,48324,2,0,L|352:232,2,44.999998626709,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,200,48815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    152,176,49061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:52:873 (1) - absolutelly unnecesary, please remove this
  5. 00:56:931 (1,2) - doesn't go well with vocals, look at the simmilar suggest on Normal
  6. 01:15:128 (3) - sounds really off, I'm not sure what to suggest tho
  7. 01:17:095 (1,1,1) - the spacing change and combos are just annoying

lgdry15

This tends to be more like an Insane, consider change the diff name, it also have more notes than the current Insane GD

  1. 00:08:734 (9) - maybe add a new combo here? for the spacing change I mean
  2. 00:22:505 (1) - adding a new combo to the SV changes will give a warning to the player, considerate doing the same thing for 00:22:505 (1) - and incoming SV changes
  3. 00:34:800 (2) - make it a bit overlapped with the next circle, so the player will inmediatly notice it is a stream
    SPOILER
  4. 00:55:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that making them a propper column will be more readable, up to you tho
    SPOILER
  5. 01:06:152 (1) - about the new combos, Im not really sure, I preffer 1-3 1-3 1-3 for this pattern
I like your jumpy style, but I don't like the SV changes for this

Ts8zs

AR 8? due low bpm...
  1. 01:07:504 (5) - check the repeat arrow please
Not too much to say since I don't like this mapping style for this bpm and calmed song
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
fixed all
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ED1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49307
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Koi wa Milk Tea
TitleUnicode:恋はみるくてぃー
Artist:petit milady
ArtistUnicode:プチミレディ
Creator:ak74qbz95xm8
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:六畳間の侵略者!?
Tags:rokujouma no shinryakusha ending yuki aoi taketatsu ayana lgdry15 Ts8zs
BeatmapID:470026
BeatmapSetID:196674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"f85793119313b07e9f1c8bba0cd7912396dd8c00.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"ED.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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112,272,87176,2,0,P|164:243|223:250,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
ak74
236 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
ak74
[quote="ikari_kyon"]hello

Easy

Why your spacing is variating from 0,80x to 0,70x and 1,00x?
Use the same spacing on whole map please
  1. 00:08:239 (2) - I'm not a big fan of overlaps on easiest diffs but this may be ok, if someone else point it out better considerate it
  2. 00:15:370 (2) - huh this slider is really short, newbie players will be like oh what is this, a good option is just delete the slider and add a circle on 00:15:616 -
  3. 00:17:583 (2) - overlaps~
  4. 00:18:569 (3) - this is a nice place to put a finish!
  5. 00:19:796 (1) - a whistle may sounds better on the end of the slider instead of a clap, why? because of the bass effect on the song, the clap make everything sounds a bit empty on this part and the whistle will give a better sound here
  6. 00:20:537 (1) - finish on the start of the slider if you added the whistle suggested up, you will notice a change on the sounds
  7. 00:21:520 (2) - check spacing! previous is 1,07x and the next 0,76x
  8. 00:23:979 (1,1) - why new combos? I don't usually care about new combos but this is just off, why make this?
  9. 00:27:422 (2,3) - short sliders... replacing this with circles on 00:27:422 and 00:27:914 doesn't affect your pattern and make it more readable, really the 1/2 sliders are pointless, add whistles to these circles
  10. 00:28:405 (1) - finish on the start of the slider sounds good, try it out
  11. 00:34:307 (1) - why new combo
  12. 00:38:979 (2) - 1/2 notes are not really recomendable for an Easy diff, even if you remove this the map will sound good, try it please
  13. 00:40:701 (4) - short slider... again, make it just 1 circle please and 00:41:438 (1) - to the previous white tick
  14. 00:43:160 (1) - finish only on the start and end of this slider sounds better with the vocals, the clap sounds off, btw why new combo?
  15. 00:44:143 (1) - finish on start of this slider
  16. 00:44:881 (2) - 1/2 notes, please avoid to use them, check the sound without this note, it doesn't affect the pattern too
  17. 00:47:832 (1) - move to next white tick and make it end on 00:49:061
  18. 00:50:045 (2) - spacing... why it is increasing?
  19. 00:53:487 (1) - replace with 1 circle on the start of this slider
  20. 00:54:717 (1) - move it to next white tick the vocal have a triplet and not a duplet here, it will sounds better with the vocals if you move it to next white tick and make it 1/2 shorter
  21. 00:59:635 (2) - ~ remove please, it is not needed
  22. 01:05:783 (1,1,1) - please avoid overlaps like this, it is confusing for new players why not make some beautiful slider patterns instead?
  23. 01:12:422 (2) - same as 00:54:717 (1)
  24. 01:15:619 (1) - it overlaps with 01:13:651 (1) - try something else please
  25. 01:17:094 (1) - 1,42x previous wtf
  26. 01:21:028 (1) - 1 single circle
  27. 01:22:258 (3) - move to next white tick and make it 1/2 shorter
  28. 01:26:438 (1) - why new combo? and make it 1/1 duration and add a repeat way more simple than current pattern

Normal

The difficulty values are too high!! use a 3~4 values combination
SV is also high, maybe 1,40
Random spacing change again
Check your hitsounds, I can't listen a solid pattern anywhere
  1. 00:13:037 (4) - I know you are trying to follow that bell on the song, but moving to next tick will follow it better and also it will be on the downbeat
  2. 00:24:471 (1,2,3) - Im not really sure about blue ticks on a Normal diff
  3. 00:26:930 (1) - make this more "curvy"? for avoid the spacing issue and better flow
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:356 (2) - Avoid jumps on a Normal diff please, micro jumps are okay but this it is not okay
  5. 00:31:356 (2) - spacing!... the next blue tick makes the spacing looks off
  6. 00:34:307 (1,2) - jumps...
  7. 00:38:242 (3) - why the sudden end of a blue tick? make it end on the next white tick and it will feel better with the next pattern
  8. 00:41:438 (1,2) - this doesn't follow anything, try making something like this instead
    SPOILER
  9. 00:46:479 (2) - delete the next circle and add a repeat to this, blue ticks are just...
  10. 00:56:930 (1) - the vocal is higher here, so why not making it a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/3 bounce? check it out please
  11. 00:57:422 (1) - you are missing some vocals unnecesarly, check this
    SPOILER
  12. 00:59:881 (1) - make it end on the next white tick please
  13. 01:06:766 (1) - dem jumps...
  14. 01:09:225 (2) - same as 00:57:422 (1)

Hard

Lol this have a lower SV than the Normal diff.......
  1. 00:17:955 (1) - almost unreadable change, maybe something like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:25:455 (2) - ctrl + g it, it will have a better flow with the previous slider
  3. 00:47:341 (1) - you have some nice sounds on the backbround, why not use them?
    SPOILER
    176,216,47094,2,0,L|160:96,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    120,104,47463,2,0,L|240:80,1,89.9999972534181
    216,40,47832,2,0,P|288:112|296:128,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,176,48324,2,0,L|352:232,2,44.999998626709,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,200,48815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    152,176,49061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:52:873 (1) - absolutelly unnecesary, please remove this
  5. 00:56:931 (1,2) - doesn't go well with vocals, look at the simmilar suggest on Normal
  6. 01:15:128 (3) - sounds really off, I'm not sure what to suggest tho
  7. 01:17:095 (1,1,1) - the spacing change and combos are just annoying

Almost ALL correct.Tks
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[Easy]
  1. for easy-diff, you should not change SV. that's confusing for beginner
  2. 00:02:832 (1) - move near the center. because of after spinner, it's hard for beginner
  3. 00:26:438 (1) - end at 00:26:930
  4. 00:40:209 (3,4) - combine into 1 slider. hard to find rhythm
  5. 00:49:553 (1) - I prefer to delete
  6. 00:54:963 (1) - end at 00:55:455- . blue line rhythm is too hard for beginner
  7. 01:07:258 (1) - remove NC
  8. 01:13:651 (1) - end at 01:14:143
  9. 01:14:635 (2) - end at 01:15:127
  10. 01:22:504 (3) - end at 01:22:996
  11. 01:26:438 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change to reverse slider. a little hard to find rhythm
[Normal]
  1. for normal, you should conform DS as far as possible
  2. 00:02:832 (2,3) - I recommend to change to reverse slider
  3. 00:04:799 (5,6) - ^
  4. 00:06:766 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:19:061 (2) - I prefer to delete
  6. 01:07:135 (2,2) - avoid overlapping
  7. 00:52:012 (4,5) - maybe hard to find rhythm. how about reverse slider?
  8. 01:11:684 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:19:553 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:25:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - it is better to avoid NC rush. that's so confusing
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:487 (4,5) - blanket correctly
    SPOILER
  2. 00:15:373 (5,7) - it is better to stack correctly
  3. 00:40:210 (6,1) - hard to find rhythm. just a suggetion~
  4. 00:48:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - not suit to backmusic, imo. how about this?
  5. 00:52:258remove clap?
  6. 01:15:127 (3) - I prefer to move to 01:15:373
[lgdry15's Insane]
  1. mmm... I recommend to increase difficulty parameters than hard-diff
  2. 00:04:554 (4) - NC
  3. 00:08:734 (9) - ^
  4. 00:12:668 (7) - ^
  5. 00:32:341 (4,5) - how about blanketting?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:39:226 (4,6) - I prefer to avoid overlapping
  7. 00:43:160 (4,6) - ^
  8. 01:25:455 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel very confusing. I suggest to remove NC of the following
    01:25:824 (1) -
    01:26:193 (1) -
    01:26:808 (1) -
    01:27:176 (1) -
[Ts8zs' Insane]
  1. 00:35:291 (1,2) - I prefer reverse slider
  2. 00:48:201 (6,7,8) - rhythm suggetion
  3. 00:55:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - these sliders are 1/3 rhythm. so I think it is better to add some different style form the others. for example, change to straight slider?
  4. 01:15:619 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
~Good Luck~
ak74
236 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
ak74

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]
  1. for easy-diff, you should not change SV. that's confusing for beginner
  2. 00:02:832 (1) - move near the center. because of after spinner, it's hard for beginner
  3. 00:26:438 (1) - end at 00:26:930
  4. 00:40:209 (3,4) - combine into 1 slider. hard to find rhythm
  5. 00:49:553 (1) - I prefer to delete
  6. 00:54:963 (1) - end at 00:55:455- . blue line rhythm is too hard for beginner
  7. 01:07:258 (1) - remove NC
  8. 01:13:651 (1) - end at 01:14:143
  9. 01:14:635 (2) - end at 01:15:127
  10. 01:22:504 (3) - end at 01:22:996
  11. 01:26:438 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change to reverse slider. a little hard to find rhythm
[Normal]
  1. for normal, you should conform DS as far as possible
  2. 00:02:832 (2,3) - I recommend to change to reverse slider
  3. 00:04:799 (5,6) - ^
  4. 00:06:766 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:19:061 (2) - I prefer to delete
  6. 01:07:135 (2,2) - avoid overlapping
  7. 00:52:012 (4,5) - maybe hard to find rhythm. how about reverse slider?
  8. 01:11:684 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:19:553 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:25:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - it is better to avoid NC rush. that's so confusing
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:487 (4,5) - blanket correctly
    SPOILER
  2. 00:15:373 (5,7) - it is better to stack correctly
  3. 00:40:210 (6,1) - hard to find rhythm. just a suggetion~
  4. 00:48:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - not suit to backmusic, imo. how about this?
  5. 00:52:258remove clap?
  6. 01:15:127 (3) - I prefer to move to 01:15:373
correct most.
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
fm4a93au04
Hi hi , 摸 ( mod ) 圖來著 .

注意事項
音效的建議如果你喜歡 , 請自行套用到其他難度的相應位置上 …… 舉一反三 ( 因為我可能會漏掉 , 例如在 Easy 講到了一個建議 , 可是 Normal 卻沒有在相應位置提醒 …… 畢竟音效上的更動是整張圖所有難度都適用的 , 所以就 …… )

總之我想說的是 , 其他部分的更動都沒關係 , 但唯有音效部份的建議請先把整篇都看完並審慎評估過後再針對全難度來調整音效 , 避免改到一半深陷泥淖 …… ( 自己GG過特別有感 ) . 感謝您 ~.~

Easy
00:18:569 (3) – 為甚麼這邊變成 x0.9 ?

00:36:274 ~ 00:37:012 : 改成滑條吧 . 像 00:40:209 (3) 一樣去對應背景音效 .
然後就會變成 :



“噹~~~噹” , 啪 東 啪 冬 啪 . < - “ 啪 ” 是 Soft clap .

“噹~~~噹” , 啪 東 啪 鏘 鏘 . < - “ 鏘 “ 是 Soft finish .

這應該是最直白的講法了 ……

00:44:143 (1) – 這個感覺可以拉長一點 , 因為 vocal 在這裡拉長了 . 例如到 00:45:127 , 後面 00:45:619 放個 note .

00:59:881 (4,1) – 這裡感覺可以換個排法 , 太近了 . 在此圖的其他地方幾乎沒有這種設計 , 所以才會如此提議 . 當然若你有意要這樣 , 那就無視吧 .



01:18:569 (3) – 這是blanket的話 , 要嘛旋轉角度要嘛改一下位置 , 例如 改到( x,y ) – ( 388,64 ) .

01:21:520 (2,3) – 這兩長得那麼像 , 乾脆作成一對 .

01:23:487 (1) – 距離改一下 ( x0.58 ) .

Normal
00:03:815 (3,4) – 不如 blenket ? 在跟 1 保持距離的情況下同時向下移動2 , 3 . 最後讓 3 blenket .



00:04:799 (4,5) – 要不要合成單次折返滑條 ( 總覺得 , 應該要盡量避面讓物件相隔 3 小格 …… 要嘛 2 小隔半拍要嘛 4 小格一拍或 6 小格一拍半 …… ) ?

我的感覺是 , 可能會有人誤把相隔 3 小格的物件當成相隔 4 小格的物件然後按下去 . 這部分我自己也還不太確定 …… 覺得無所謂的話 , 就不要理我吧 .

00:37:258 (2) – 要不要提早到 00:37:012 ? 後面 00:37:750 再補個 note . 個人認為那個背景音不去對到會很可惜 =..= ( 另外 , 建議用 Soft Finish 去對應 , Easy 也是 ) .

00:44:512 (1) – 主觀感覺效果不佳 . 00:43:897 加個半拍短滑條 , 聽起來好像順一點 . 後面比照辦理 .



00:50:045 – 各人認為改 Finish 比較好 .

00:52:012 (4) – 感覺可以轉一下 , 像是 :



使用 rotate - selection centre 去轉就行了 . 另外頭加 Finish .

00:52:996 (5) - 頭加 Finish .

00:53:979 (1,2) – 要不要合成一個單次折返滑條 ?

00:56:930 (1) – 開頭加 Clap 對應一下 .

00:57:422 (1) – 感覺可以改成紅點滑條去呼應 00:49:553 (1) . ( 因為有折到 , 讓人感覺好像有個音在那裡 ) . 尾巴加上 finish .

個人推測 , 應該是因為不太合 , 所以沒有放 Finish . 我在別張圖裡面有聽過一個疑似或許可能應該 ( 因為我也不肯定到底適不適合 …… ) 蠻合這裡的音效 , 但因為那是尚未Rank 的圖 , 你要的話再給連結吧 ^ ^ ” . 或者 , Normal Finish 也不錯啦 .

另外一種可能性是 , 作者忘了加 XㄦX ”.

00:59:881 (1,2) – 這兩個的開頭 , 感覺可以個加甚麼來強調一下 …… Soft Finish ? 然後再漸升音效 ( 因為背景音剛好有升上去 ) .

01:01:848 (2,1) – 這邊要不要合成單次折返 …… 滑條 @ㄦ@” ?

01:01:848 (2) – 頭加 Soft Finish 同 00:59:881 (1,2) .

01:04:799 (3) – 改成折返滑條對應 vocal ?

01:15:619 (1,1,1) – 頭都加上 Clap , 感覺不錯聽 ~~~ 或者試試 Drum 系列 .

01:05:783 (1) - Finish .

01:06:766 (1) - Finish .

01:07:751 (1) - Finish .

01:08:733 (1) - Finish .

我注意到你用了漸升音效 , 再加 Finish 就超超帥的阿 ~~ ( 不會真的忘了吧 …… )

01:09:225 (2) – 尾加 Finish .

01:11:684 (1,2) – 頭加上 F ( inish ) .

01:21:520 (1) – 這樣會不會好看點 ( ctrl+j 再轉角度 ) ?



01:24:471 (3) – 改成一個點 , 作一個有力的結尾 . 如何 ?

01:25:455 (1,1,1) – 1 都加上 F 吧 .

Hard
音效的建議大多都在 Normal 提過 , 就不再提了 .

00:48:078 (1,2,3,4,5) – 個人認為這樣比較好 :



00:54:349 (3) – 尾巴放C ( lap ) .

00:55:333 (2) -尾巴放C .

00:55:947 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – 這 …… 打起來不大舒服阿 =ㄦ= . 滑條後接 x0.4 的低速移動之後直接接上高速移動 , 這 …… 再加上 note 本身有讓人” 停一下 ” 的效果 , 後面又接很快的移動感覺不太順 …… 改成先 note 後 slider 的設計會好點 . 跟隨slider的滑動做 jump 比較好 , 或者讓note跟slider距離拉大一點 , 像01:15:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 就比較好打一點 .

00:52:873 – 這要不要加 note ?

01:02:833 (2) – 這個好像可以 ctrl+G . 後面再把 01:03:570 (1) 移到 01:03:816 (2) 右邊 , 這樣好像就會有帥氣的 Flow …… ( 沒有的話就算了 =..= ) .

01:05:783 (1) – 這邊就有加 F …… 看來 Normal 肯定是忘了吧 @ㄦ@” .

01:05:783 ~ 01:08:733 – 這裏的滑條加上drum 的音效好像也不錯 ( F , C ) . 多方嘗試吧 , 不喜歡再按 Ctrl+z 倒帶回去 …

01:14:390 (1) – C .

01:15:373 – 好像可以加 note . 有要加的話此note加上 C .

01:15:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – 滑條頭都可以 C 跟前面 Normal 提過的一樣 .

沒能挑出甚麼 , 僅能置上誠摯的祝福 :

Good luck to your map ~~
ak74
236 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
ak74

fm4a93au04 wrote:

Hi hi , 摸 ( mod ) 圖來著 .

注意事項
音效的建議如果你喜歡 , 請自行套用到其他難度的相應位置上 …… 舉一反三 ( 因為我可能會漏掉 , 例如在 Easy 講到了一個建議 , 可是 Normal 卻沒有在相應位置提醒 …… 畢竟音效上的更動是整張圖所有難度都適用的 , 所以就 …… )

總之我想說的是 , 其他部分的更動都沒關係 , 但唯有音效部份的建議請先把整篇都看完並審慎評估過後再針對全難度來調整音效 , 避免改到一半深陷泥淖 …… ( 自己GG過特別有感 ) . 感謝您 ~.~

Easy
00:18:569 (3) – 為甚麼這邊變成 x0.9 ?

00:36:274 ~ 00:37:012 : 改成滑條吧 . 像 00:40:209 (3) 一樣去對應背景音效 .
然後就會變成 :



“噹~~~噹” , 啪 東 啪 冬 啪 . < - “ 啪 ” 是 Soft clap .

“噹~~~噹” , 啪 東 啪 鏘 鏘 . < - “ 鏘 “ 是 Soft finish .

這應該是最直白的講法了 ……

00:44:143 (1) – 這個感覺可以拉長一點 , 因為 vocal 在這裡拉長了 . 例如到 00:45:127 , 後面 00:45:619 放個 note .

00:59:881 (4,1) – 這裡感覺可以換個排法 , 太近了 . 在此圖的其他地方幾乎沒有這種設計 , 所以才會如此提議 . 當然若你有意要這樣 , 那就無視吧 .



01:18:569 (3) – 這是blanket的話 , 要嘛旋轉角度要嘛改一下位置 , 例如 改到( x,y ) – ( 388,64 ) .

01:21:520 (2,3) – 這兩長得那麼像 , 乾脆作成一對 .

01:23:487 (1) – 距離改一下 ( x0.58 ) .

Normal
00:03:815 (3,4) – 不如 blenket ? 在跟 1 保持距離的情況下同時向下移動2 , 3 . 最後讓 3 blenket .



00:04:799 (4,5) – 要不要合成單次折返滑條 ( 總覺得 , 應該要盡量避面讓物件相隔 3 小格 …… 要嘛 2 小隔半拍要嘛 4 小格一拍或 6 小格一拍半 …… ) ?

我的感覺是 , 可能會有人誤把相隔 3 小格的物件當成相隔 4 小格的物件然後按下去 . 這部分我自己也還不太確定 …… 覺得無所謂的話 , 就不要理我吧 .

00:37:258 (2) – 要不要提早到 00:37:012 ? 後面 00:37:750 再補個 note . 個人認為那個背景音不去對到會很可惜 =..= ( 另外 , 建議用 Soft Finish 去對應 , Easy 也是 ) .

00:44:512 (1) – 主觀感覺效果不佳 . 00:43:897 加個半拍短滑條 , 聽起來好像順一點 . 後面比照辦理 .



00:50:045 – 各人認為改 Finish 比較好 .

00:52:012 (4) – 感覺可以轉一下 , 像是 :



使用 rotate - selection centre 去轉就行了 . 另外頭加 Finish .

00:52:996 (5) - 頭加 Finish .

00:53:979 (1,2) – 要不要合成一個單次折返滑條 ?

00:56:930 (1) – 開頭加 Clap 對應一下 .

00:57:422 (1) – 感覺可以改成紅點滑條去呼應 00:49:553 (1) . ( 因為有折到 , 讓人感覺好像有個音在那裡 ) . 尾巴加上 finish .

個人推測 , 應該是因為不太合 , 所以沒有放 Finish . 我在別張圖裡面有聽過一個疑似或許可能應該 ( 因為我也不肯定到底適不適合 …… ) 蠻合這裡的音效 , 但因為那是尚未Rank 的圖 , 你要的話再給連結吧 ^ ^ ” . 或者 , Normal Finish 也不錯啦 .

另外一種可能性是 , 作者忘了加 XㄦX ”.

00:59:881 (1,2) – 這兩個的開頭 , 感覺可以個加甚麼來強調一下 …… Soft Finish ? 然後再漸升音效 ( 因為背景音剛好有升上去 ) .

01:01:848 (2,1) – 這邊要不要合成單次折返 …… 滑條 @ㄦ@” ?

01:01:848 (2) – 頭加 Soft Finish 同 00:59:881 (1,2) .

01:04:799 (3) – 改成折返滑條對應 vocal ?

01:15:619 (1,1,1) – 頭都加上 Clap , 感覺不錯聽 ~~~ 或者試試 Drum 系列 .

01:05:783 (1) - Finish .

01:06:766 (1) - Finish .

01:07:751 (1) - Finish .

01:08:733 (1) - Finish .

我注意到你用了漸升音效 , 再加 Finish 就超超帥的阿 ~~ ( 不會真的忘了吧 …… )

01:09:225 (2) – 尾加 Finish .

01:11:684 (1,2) – 頭加上 F ( inish ) .

01:21:520 (1) – 這樣會不會好看點 ( ctrl+j 再轉角度 ) ?



01:24:471 (3) – 改成一個點 , 作一個有力的結尾 . 如何 ?

01:25:455 (1,1,1) – 1 都加上 F 吧 .

Hard
音效的建議大多都在 Normal 提過 , 就不再提了 .

00:48:078 (1,2,3,4,5) – 個人認為這樣比較好 :



00:54:349 (3) – 尾巴放C ( lap ) .

00:55:333 (2) -尾巴放C .

00:55:947 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – 這 …… 打起來不大舒服阿 =ㄦ= . 滑條後接 x0.4 的低速移動之後直接接上高速移動 , 這 …… 再加上 note 本身有讓人” 停一下 ” 的效果 , 後面又接很快的移動感覺不太順 …… 改成先 note 後 slider 的設計會好點 . 跟隨slider的滑動做 jump 比較好 , 或者讓note跟slider距離拉大一點 , 像01:15:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 就比較好打一點 .

00:52:873 – 這要不要加 note ?

01:02:833 (2) – 這個好像可以 ctrl+G . 後面再把 01:03:570 (1) 移到 01:03:816 (2) 右邊 , 這樣好像就會有帥氣的 Flow …… ( 沒有的話就算了 =..= ) .

01:05:783 (1) – 這邊就有加 F …… 看來 Normal 肯定是忘了吧 @ㄦ@” .

01:05:783 ~ 01:08:733 – 這裏的滑條加上drum 的音效好像也不錯 ( F , C ) . 多方嘗試吧 , 不喜歡再按 Ctrl+z 倒帶回去 …

01:14:390 (1) – C .

01:15:373 – 好像可以加 note . 有要加的話此note加上 C .

01:15:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – 滑條頭都可以 C 跟前面 Normal 提過的一樣 .
:lol:
沒能挑出甚麼 , 僅能置上誠摯的祝福 :

Good luck to your map ~~
Nice mod，只有几条没改，Thx
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
简单说一下主要问题...
[Genenral]
先最好把sliderslider用44kb的无声wav替换掉，带着那个声音不好听
tag中yuki aoi拼写有误，悠木碧应该是yuuki aoi
[Easy]
Slider Vilocity用1.1太快了，最主要后面的kiai部分还变成了1.5倍，相对Easy来说太快了，请将SV降低到1.0以下，并且后面kiai的SV仍然保持1倍而不要用1.5倍之后重新排版
NC方面，建议有些系统性一点，固定好比如:kiai前两个大白线1个NC，kiai里一个大白线1个NC 等，总之像00:59:881 (4) - 这种过长的combo要避免
[Normal]
AR6太高了，飞球的OP 190bpm 它的normal都才AR5
同样，Normal用1.4的SV也较快，1.2足够了
NC问题也一样
00:45:619 (1,2) - 类似这种blanket影响谱面整体美观程度，建议将图摆放整齐一些
00:56:930 (1,1) - 而像这种超大间距同样也影响了谱面的质量，间距应该按照DS统一下来
[Hard]
NC问题严重
Hard做的太难，不符合spread，建议去除一些1/2大跳
比如 00:34:308 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:439 (1,2,3) -
01:25:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - 像这种NC spam用处不大，还会影响读图，应该remove
01:01:725 - 这里的SV1.5没有什么用，只会让图变得更蛋疼
[tsbzs]
00:29:143 (3) - 滑条尾clap，音乐有声
00:34:553 (1,2,3) - 这里等距是不是会好一些.
没了
[lgry15]
我不太知道怎么摸...
这图可能在可读性方面，节奏方面都需要下一些功夫才能到达rank标准
tick2没太大用
另外SV的改变不要这样频繁，会让整个图很乱
注意下flow的问题，就是移动的时候顺不顺手

that's all
Moeri_old_1
Moeri_old_1
从 t/233414来的！

综合

首先，我觉得你应该只变NEW COMBO每4个1/4节奏拍，现在的话看起来没有规律。
不过，你自己做的图都做得很好哟～

Easy

00:59:881 (1,1) - 这里的flow断了。
这个难度里没什么其他的问题了。

Normal

00:49:553 - Kiai移到这里。
应该没问题了。

Hard

这里的物件确实没有对时间轴，解决方法是:按CTRL同时用鼠标滑轮向上滚，把时间轴变成1/8。然后再调正物件位置。像这样

Ts7zs's Insane

这里我觉得重复的pattern太多了。感觉玩来玩去都是同一个pattern。。

下一个insane没有找到什么错误，只是有点难读图。
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