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Ayame to Yurika from Otome Shintou - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensa

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xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 02, 2014 at 3:00:16 AM

Artist: Ayame to Yurika from Otome Shintou
Title: Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size)
Source: Jinsei
Tags: 人生 opening The Sensation of Solving Uneasiness Tajiri and Yakahashi 人生相談テレビアニメーション「人生」 momochikun pan P_A_N
BPM: 149
Filesize: 19518kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Insane (4.07 stars, 368 notes)
  3. Mochi's Hard (3.24 stars, 233 notes)
  4. Normal (1.9 stars, 154 notes)
  5. P A N's Insane (4.34 stars, 433 notes)
Download: Ayame to Yurika from Otome Shintou - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size)
Download: Ayame to Yurika from Otome Shintou - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Jinsei anime opening song.

My 4th ranked map!

Easy, Normal, and Insane by me
Hard difficulty by Momochikun
P A N's Insane difficulty by P A N





Best accuracy NA

BAT's:
Lanturn metadata and new video
Xinely
Desperate-kun
DakeDekaane
Garven
Natsu
jonathanlfj
Last edited by xxdeathx , edited 44 times in total.
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
general advice.
22:12 Tari: ok.
22:12 Tari: I can mod your map
22:12 Tari: is it still the same one.
22:13 xxdeathx: whoa, i asked you quite a while ago lol
22:13 Tari: well
22:13 Tari: I had over
22:13 xxdeathx: my skyreach map is getting BAT's right now 
22:13 Tari: 30+ requests
22:13 Tari: in my queue
22:13 Tari: so
22:13 Tari: lol
22:13 xxdeathx: i know i got other mods though
22:14 Tari: yooooo
22:14 xxdeathx: i can do m4m's with you though
22:14 Tari: no
22:14 Tari: I can mod your map
22:14 Tari: don't need to mod mines
22:14 Tari: cause
22:14 Tari: if you don't want
22:14 Tari: +
22:14 xxdeathx: i'm mapping another song right now but it's still WIP
22:14 Tari: I don't want to give you any trouble
22:15 Tari: with modding my maps
22:15 xxdeathx: you sure you wouldn't like me to mod one of your maps?
22:15 Tari: if you can find stuff
22:15 xxdeathx: we've done an m4m before a long time ago when i first started mapping but i hope i've gotten better
22:15 Tari: lol
22:15 Tari: uhhhhh
22:15 Tari: sure
22:15 Tari: ^^
22:15 xxdeathx: yeah when i modded your map i think every single one of my changes got rejected >.>
22:16 xxdeathx: but it was one of my first few mods so i guess that was to be expected
22:16 Tari: you know kihhou really well too
22:16 Tari: lol
22:16 Tari: and he sent a good word about you
22:16 xxdeathx: really?
22:17 Tari: can you give me your map
22:18 xxdeathx: do you want to see the pending one with BAT's or the WIP one that's almost done?
22:18 Tari: lol
22:18 Tari: I can look at any
22:18 Tari: depends
22:18 Tari: trust me
22:18 xxdeathx: sure
22:18 Tari: I will find
22:18 *xxdeathx is editing Ayame Tajiri and Yurika Takahashi - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size) [Easy]
22:18 Tari: 100000+ things
22:18 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/470021 Ayame Tajiri and Yurika Takahashi - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size) [Insane]]
22:18 Tari: and
22:18 Tari: you don't have to mod my map
22:18 Tari: cuz
22:19 Tari: you already modded my maps before
22:19 Tari: I need new eyes to look at it
22:19 Tari: :P
22:19 Tari: not eyes of people who think its good already
22:19 xxdeathx: only roplay star girl i think
22:22 Tari: ok
22:22 Tari: I'll look
22:22 Tari: :x
22:22 Tari: its too hard.
22:22 Tari: you need an easy
22:23 *xxdeathx is editing Ayame Tajiri and Yurika Takahashi - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size) [Easy]
22:23 xxdeathx: it's 89% done :3
22:24 Tari: uhm..
22:24 Tari: map needs work still
22:24 xxdeathx: work as in neatness things or overall structure/flow?
22:24 Tari: uh
22:24 Tari: everything
22:25 Tari: your rhythms are overmapped.
22:25 xxdeathx: i thought i followed the rhythms pretty well o.o
22:25 Tari: no
22:25 Tari: its 
22:25 Tari: too much.
22:26 Tari: your mapping to every vocal sound in normal
22:26 Tari: which makes it seem more like a easy hard.
22:26 Tari: 00:45:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
22:26 xxdeathx: don't map all the 1/2 beat vocals in normal?
22:26 Tari: stuff like that are really good for normal
22:26 Tari: 00:13:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
22:27 Tari: Stuff like tht are overmapped.
22:27 Tari: you didn't leave any pauses for players.
22:27 Tari: also rhythms like these
22:27 Tari: 00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
22:27 Tari: they're really hard to play
22:27 Tari: I don't reckon players of that skill level can play very well.
22:28 Tari: try to use more sliders than circles still.
22:28 xxdeathx: delete 00:43:023 (3,7) - ?
22:28 Tari: it requires less clicking
22:28 Tari: do you want me to map you a sample
22:28 Tari: to show you how to map normals
22:29 xxdeathx: i suppose a map of this song's normal would be more helpful than looking up any random normal
22:29 Tari: I understand your following vocals
22:29 Tari: but they can be simplified
22:29 Tari: 00:52:083 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
22:29 Tari: you did same rhythms there
22:29 Tari: but you don't need
22:29 Tari: 00:53:090 (2,3,4) - 
22:29 Tari: one of these circles
22:30 xxdeathx: what do you mean?
22:30 Tari: you can remove 1 circle from there
22:31 Tari: to simplify the rhythm.
22:31 xxdeathx: removing any one of the circles makes the rhythm sound awkward, since it's not like 2 circles stacked on a slider so you could remove the middle one
22:32 xxdeathx: there's no middle circle for a group of 4 objects stacked together here
22:32 Tari: you can turn that all into 1 slider then.
22:32 xxdeathx: just a 1/2 repeating slider?
22:32 Tari: a regular 1/2 slider
22:32 Tari: since you only need to show emphasis on the first vocal.
22:33 xxdeathx: wow that actually works
22:34 Tari: you don't need to map everything honestly
22:34 Tari: just the beats you really want.
22:34 xxdeathx: it's a little trouble choosing them 
22:35 Tari: just play the map
22:35 Tari: and
22:35 Tari: decide yourself
22:35 Tari: not really trouble
22:38 Tari: you should
22:38 Tari: play safe
22:38 Tari: and put 1/2 breaks everytime and then
22:38 xxdeathx: 1/2 breaks?
22:38 xxdeathx: or breaks of at least 1 beat?
22:38 Tari: I mean
22:38 Tari: just
22:38 Tari: place
22:38 Tari: make sure there is a red tick
22:39 Tari: between the current and next note
22:39 Tari: or one white tick between the two notes
22:39 Tari: just like 1 1/2 tick apart
22:39 xxdeathx: huh?
22:39 Tari: meaning you can map every 1/2 tick
22:39 Tari: mapping every 1/2 tick is fine
22:39 Tari: thats recommended for normals
22:40 Tari: you can add some 1/4 too
22:40 xxdeathx: http://puu.sh/aBbzd/ca668be737.png?
22:40 Tari: but not often
22:40 xxdeathx: i thought 1/4 only for hards
22:40 xxdeathx: maybe 1/4 sliders
22:40 Tari: you used 1/4th's alot
22:40 Tari: omg
22:42 Tari: here's a sample
22:44 Tari: http://puu.sh/aBbM5.osu
22:45 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/470099 Ayame Tajiri and Yurika Takahashi - Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size) [Normal tari]]
22:45 Tari: 00:06:982 (1,2,3) - 
22:45 Tari: same rhythm as
22:45 Tari: 00:10:204 (1,2) - 
22:45 Tari: but
22:45 Tari: I wanted to emphasize the big finish sound at 00:10:808 (2) - 
22:46 Tari: so I did a different rhythm00:07:586 (2,3) - 
22:46 Tari: cause there no sound at here 00:08:392 -
22:46 Tari: but here 00:11:613 -
22:46 Tari: there is a really loud sound
22:46 Tari: so I changed rhythm a bit.
22:47 Tari: also
22:47 Tari: 00:06:982 (1,2) - 
22:47 Tari: both have same vocal sound at start
22:47 xxdeathx: i thought there's quite a loud sound at 00:08:392
22:47 Tari: there is a drum sound
22:47 Tari: but if you compare it with 00:11:613 -
22:48 Tari: You notice 00:11:613 sounds much much louder
22:48 Tari: oops
22:48 Tari: 00:11:613 - 
22:48 Tari: sounds much louder
22:48 Tari: + it has vocals
22:48 Tari: the vocals are there too
22:48 Tari: + the louder sound
22:48 Tari: oops
22:48 Tari: ignore the vocals 
22:48 xxdeathx:    yeah
22:48 Tari: just the finish sound
22:48 Tari: it
22:48 Tari: sounds louder
22:48 Tari: `more like the finish hitsound
22:48 Tari: so its shows you should map it
22:49 xxdeathx:  that would have finish instead of clap?
22:49 Tari: yeah
22:49 Tari: also
22:49 Tari: 00:06:982 (1,2) - 
22:49 Tari: good place to do 1/4
22:49 Tari: thats the 1/4 I mean
22:49 Tari: the next note is 1/4 apart from previous
22:49 Tari: wait
22:49 xxdeathx: at least i got that one right
22:49 Tari: 1/4 is
22:49 Tari: white to red tick right?
22:49 Tari: or is that 1/2
22:50 xxdeathx: 1/2
22:50 Tari: and white to white tick is 1/1
22:50 Tari: yea
22:50 xxdeathx: 1/4 involve sblue
22:50 Tari: oh yea
22:50 Tari: thats 1/2
22:50 Tari: 00:06:982 (1,2) - 
22:50 Tari: Both have same vocals
22:50 xxdeathx: i've never seen 1/4 circles in normal though
22:50 Tari: if you hear the beginning of each slider
22:50 Tari: they both have same sound
22:50 Tari: yeah don't do that
22:50 Tari: ignore me
22:50 Tari: I got confused
22:51 Tari: 00:06:580 (5,6) - 
22:51 Tari: You can do stuff like this
22:51 Tari: to show the start of music change
22:51 Tari: cause you notice music changes drastically
22:51 xxdeathx: why you ignore 00:06:378 though
22:51 xxdeathx: 00:06:378
22:51 Tari: at 00:06:982 (1) - 
22:51 Tari: cause
22:51 Tari: we need some breaks
22:52 Tari: and the piano doesn't kick in till 00:06:815 -
22:52 Tari: its poorly mapped lol
22:52 Tari: I mapped it like 10 seconds
22:52 Tari: so e.e
22:53 xxdeathx: lol
22:53 xxdeathx: so your emphasis is on selectively ignoring certain notes to give breaks in the song
22:54 Tari: nope
22:54 Tari: its to make this a normal
22:54 Tari: reason you don't map every single vocal in easy.
22:54 Tari: LOL
22:54 xxdeathx: yep i'm forcing myself to ignore things in easy
22:55 Tari: if your going make a good normal
22:55 Tari: you need to get use to not abusing circle spams
22:55 Tari: if you do 1/2 rhythms
22:55 Tari: make sure they're sliders
22:55 Tari: and use circles carefully 
22:56 Tari: if your going do 1/2 rhythms
22:56 Tari: on strong finish notes
22:56 xxdeathx:   okay
22:56 Tari: lol
22:56 Tari: other people are going to mention this to you
22:56 Tari: anyway
22:56 xxdeathx: i hate circles too
22:56 Tari: so its best to get it from me
22:57 Tari: lol
22:58 Tari: and
22:58 Tari: you can do more harder rhythms in kiai
22:58 Tari: but don't overdo
22:58 Tari: kiai is suppose to be harder
22:58 xxdeathx: thanks
22:58 Tari: cause
22:58 Tari: its chorus of the song
22:59 Tari: ahhhhh
22:59 Tari: too much
22:59 Tari: explaining
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
M4M MY QUEUE

[General]
  1. Where is Hard diff?
  2. Where is BG? lol
  3. remove 'anime' tag please. anime is genre. so, will add genre spot. so, not need. pending anime song usually haven't anime tag.
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:191 (3,6) - add clap. drum sound.
  2. 00:19:868 (1,2,3,4) - 4circle stack bit lazy. so, (3,4) - move (x:123 y:137) - more fun play.
  3. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish slider head.
  4. 00:56:915 (1) - this overlaps really hard to read for normal.
  5. 01:26:714 (3,4) - (x:235 y:49)
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbal sound. really fit.
  2. 00:26:311 (1) - ^
  3. 00:33:157 (2,3,4) - try add some hitsound bit sad. I suggest (2) add clap slider head and end. (3,4) add clap slider end.
  4. 00:48:459 (4) - overlaps bad for easy diff. beginner player confuse.
  5. 00:54:902 (1,2) - same y:grid better. seems beautiful.
  6. 01:09:801 (1) - add finish slider head.
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish.
  2. 00:44:835 (3) - ^
good luck~ :)
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

P o M u T a wrote:

M4M MY QUEUE

[General]
  1. Where is Hard diff? momochikun still making it
  2. Where is BG? lol looking for a good one
  3. remove 'anime' tag please. anime is genre. so, will add genre spot. so, not need. pending anime song usually haven't anime tag. fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:191 (3,6) - add clap. drum sound. fixed all diffs
  2. 00:19:868 (1,2,3,4) - 4circle stack bit lazy. so, (3,4) - move (x:123 y:137) - more fun play. fixed
  3. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish slider head. fixed
  4. 00:56:915 (1) - this overlaps really hard to read for normal. fixed
  5. 01:26:714 (3,4) - (x:235 y:49)fixed
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbal sound. really fit. fixed
  2. 00:26:311 (1) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:33:157 (2,3,4) - try add some hitsound bit sad. I suggest (2) add clap slider head and end. (3,4) add clap slider end. good idea
  4. 00:48:459 (4) - overlaps bad for easy diff. beginner player confuse. not very big overlap, good flow
  5. 00:54:902 (1,2) - same y:grid better. seems beautiful. fixed
  6. 01:09:801 (1) - add finish slider head. fixed all diffs
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:090 (1) - add finish. fixed
  2. 00:44:835 (3) - ^ fixed
good luck~ :)
thanks for modding!
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
M4M from my queue

change volume to 70% is better for me

[Easy]
00:00:540 (1) - should be a light finish.add finish and add a green line with low volume
00:01:546 (2,2) - overlapped.why not try a neater one like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1892263
00:39:600 (2) - forget clap?
00:40:808 (3) - better to add whistle in the middle imo
00:42:419 (1) - the music here begins with 1/2 snare drums.I think something like this will fit the music better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1892270
00:55:305 (2) - better to delete this cuz of the music
01:23:090 (1) - clap

[Normal]
..I found timing wrong when modding this...offset should be 526(-14)
I use new timing modding below
00:08:579 (4,5) - add clap on red line
00:13:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:740 (1,2,4,5) - clap for the end
00:45:626 - orz why you don't add any clap in this part
I personally suggest using 1.6x ds(no overlap for 1/2 notes) in kiai time.cuz you mapped a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this part.and to be honest,your arrangement with overlapped notes is really untidy...using 1.6x can be neat and more readable for newbies.of course it's rankeable to change ds for kiai time
this song is full of high tempo 1/2 snare drums which makes this song lively.but you missed a lot of them that the hitsound sounds empty

[Insane]
00:06:566 - should start 5 1/4 notes from here
00:07:371 (3,4) - why so near orz
00:12:606 (4,5,6) - same spacing?
00:17:438 (3) - ^
00:19:854 (1) - 1 grid right
00:43:411 (5) - 1 grid right
00:59:921 (3,1) - not so good imo..but orz I donno how to deal with it too

hmm..totally speaking,your map doesn't have big problems but you need to pay attention to the details(like hitsound,slider shapes).about hitsound,at least I think you should switch the volume to 70% and as I said in normal diff.the song is full of high tempo 1/2 snare drums.but you miissed a lot.that makes the rhythm empty
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

change volume to 70% is better for me

[Easy]
00:00:540 (1) - should be a light finish.add finish and add a green line with low volume done
00:01:546 (2,2) - overlapped.why not try a neater one like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1892263 done
00:39:600 (2) - forget clap? don't think clap belongs here because this part sounds like the other parts i'm not clapping
00:40:808 (3) - better to add whistle in the middle imo kept whistle at start, added whistle in middle
00:42:419 (1) - the music here begins with 1/2 snare drums.I think something like this will fit the music better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1892270 good idea
00:55:305 (2) - better to delete this cuz of the music completely delete sounds weird so i deleted (2) and replaced (1) with 1 beat slider
01:23:090 (1) - clap changed for all diffs

[Normal]
..I found timing wrong when modding this...offset should be 526(-14) thanks, i'm bad at timing myself
I use new timing modding below
00:08:579 (4,5) - add clap on red line done
00:13:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ done for all diffs, also same part at kiai
00:32:740 (1,2,4,5) - clap for the end done
00:45:626 - orz why you don't add any clap in this part added some
I personally suggest using 1.6x ds(no overlap for 1/2 notes) in kiai time.cuz you mapped a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this part.and to be honest,your arrangement with overlapped notes is really untidy...using 1.6x can be neat and more readable for newbies.of course it's rankeable to change ds for kiai time ok i followed your advice and changed kiai to use 1.6 DS. although i think it's a pretty big change. i hope it's not too drastic of a DS change for normal but you are experienced and say it's okay so i'll trust you.
this song is full of high tempo 1/2 snare drums which makes this song lively.but you missed a lot of them that the hitsound sounds empty sorry i don't notice those orz

[Insane]
00:06:566 - should start 5 1/4 notes from here done
00:07:371 (3,4) - why so near orz rearranged this and other similar placements...i was trying to copy wcx mapping style where he puts similar patterns next to each other
00:12:606 (4,5,6) - same spacing? okay
00:17:438 (3) - ^ done
00:19:854 (1) - 1 grid right done
00:43:411 (5) - 1 grid right no need
00:59:921 (3,1) - not so good imo..but orz I donno how to deal with it too if you don't like the distance spacing, i changed it to http://puu.sh/aFt1A/1d28b38962.png

hmm..totally speaking,your map doesn't have big problems but you need to pay attention to the details(like hitsound,slider shapes).about hitsound,at least I think you should switch the volume to 70% and as I said in normal diff.the song is full of high tempo 1/2 snare drums.but you miissed a lot.that makes the rhythm empty i don't know about the 1/2 snare drums but my hitsounding skills are bad. increased kiai volume to 70% though
thanks for modding again!
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
Mod from my modding queue :3

Easy

Beginning rhythm is a bit uneven and i personally feel it doesnt go well with the music; i suggest something like this
SPOILER

00:11:197 (2) - better if you moved this to x296 y336, better flow and doesnt overlap ( i know u did intentional overlap though )
00:48:445 (4) - move to x168 y224 same reason as above, if you do this then move 00:49:653 (2) -
01:13:009 (1) - move tail point to x164 y176 for perfect blanket
01:16:230 (1,2) - IMO dont stack, because the next slider is on a red tick if you stack its easy to lose your combo because it feels a bit offbeat
01:21:062 (2) - move to x308 y4

Normal

00:26:297 (1) - move this so it doesnt overlap
00:40:794 (1,2) - you can have these as sliders, like this
SPOILER
00:54:687 (2) - should be a repeat if you are going to follow the vocals here, if you do that i suggest you take out 00:55:291 (1) - since the music there is really faint and you would overmap a bit
00:56:901 (1,2) - blanket better
01:01:734 (4) - move a few grids to the left so it doesnt overlap
01:11:398 (1,2,3,4) - IMO i dont like having this rhythm in a normal
01:28:713 - add a note here, there is a drum sound at the end. You could also do it for easy but maybe its a bit hard for easy (was hesitating wether to say it on the mod for easy or not ._.

Insane

00:04:049 (2) - remove this and just add one more repeat on 00:03:747 (1) - .... then you would have to flip over the entire combo :>
00:15:626 (4) - move 3rd point to x408 y48 for better blanket around next circle
00:51:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest having this entire combo a repeat slider or a stream or stack you currently have : stack, repeat slider, stream which is a bit messy and confusing imo

thats all~ good luck on your mapset :3
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

kakifly wrote:

Mod from my modding queue :3

Easy

Beginning rhythm is a bit uneven and i personally feel it doesnt go well with the music; i suggest something like this 1/2 notes are too hard
SPOILER

00:11:197 (2) - better if you moved this to x296 y336, better flow and doesnt overlap ( i know u did intentional overlap though ) it's fine as is
00:48:445 (4) - move to x168 y224 same reason as above, if you do this then move 00:49:653 (2) - ^
01:13:009 (1) - move tail point to x164 y176 for perfect blanket changed both sliders
01:16:230 (1,2) - IMO dont stack, because the next slider is on a red tick if you stack its easy to lose your combo because it feels a bit offbeat it's not about whether something's on a red tick but rather the distance between the two objects. since both of these are on red ticks, there are 2 beats between them which is a whole number, and that's what matters
01:21:062 (2) - move to x308 y4 no

Normal

00:26:297 (1) - move this so it doesnt overlap 1/2 notes are distance snapped to overlap until kiai
00:40:794 (1,2) - you can have these as sliders, like this circles are there to emphasize the important beats and give longer breaks between objects
SPOILER
00:54:687 (2) - should be a repeat if you are going to follow the vocals here, if you do that i suggest you take out 00:55:291 (1) - since the music there is really faint and you would overmap a bit not following vocals
00:56:901 (1,2) - blanket better wasn't trying to blanket but okay
01:01:734 (4) - move a few grids to the left so it doesnt overlap done
01:11:398 (1,2,3,4) - IMO i dont like having this rhythm in a normal it's fine, fits the music
01:28:713 - add a note here, there is a drum sound at the end. You could also do it for easy but maybe its a bit hard for easy (was hesitating wether to say it on the mod for easy or not ._. i thought about it but there are actually 3 1/8 drum sound between the blue tick and this one and i'd have to map at least 1/4 to cover both ends, which is too hard for normal

Insane

00:04:049 (2) - remove this and just add one more repeat on 00:03:747 (1) - .... then you would have to flip over the entire combo :> this wouldn't be an improvement
00:15:626 (4) - move 3rd point to x408 y48 for better blanket around next circle done
00:51:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest having this entire combo a repeat slider or a stream or stack you currently have : stack, repeat slider, stream which is a bit messy and confusing imo the stack part is weaker in the music than the repeat slider and the stream, but it should be readable. i will be on the lookout for better patterns though.

thats all~ good luck on your mapset :3
thanks for modding!
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

Hit sound modding from m4m

[Easy]
00:13:411 (1) - end notes add Sampleset Drum clap [suggestion]
00:16:029 (3) - start notes add Sampleset Drum clap [suggestion]
00:44:217 (3) - end notes add clap + finish
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:445 (4) - end notes add finish / ^

[Normal]
00:26:297 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:39:989 (2) - end notes add clap
00:44:821 (6) - add clap + finish
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:848 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:06:364 (1) - add clap
00:22:673 (5) - add clap or Sampleset Drum clap
00:32:338 (6) - 1st notes add whistle
00:33:143 (2) - start notes add clap
00:33:546 (3) - ^
00:34:351 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:38:782 (5) - 1st notes add whistle
00:39:586 (2) - start notes add clap
00:39:989 (3) - add clap
00:40:391 (6) - start notes add clap
00:42:405 (1) - end notes add clap
00:43:009 (3) - add clap
00:43:411 (5) - ^
00:43:814 (7) - ^
00:44:015 (1) - end notes add clap
00:44:418 (2) - ^
00:45:223 (4) - add clap
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:848 (1) - ^
01:28:713 (5) - hmm add clap or finish [suggestion]

I hope this is useful modding.
good luck
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from here:

Using the original image you provided I applied a filter to blur similar colors slightly in order to reduce the image's artifacting then downscaled it to the proper res. here you go:
sdfghnfcbdfvxdf

jpg this time cause it looked practically identical to the png (I always save a png first) and was ~200 KB smaller

no kudosu
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx
thanks for the background ringating!

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding from m4m

[Easy]
00:13:411 (1) - end notes add Sampleset Drum clap [suggestion]
00:16:029 (3) - start notes add Sampleset Drum clap [suggestion]
00:44:217 (3) - end notes add clap + finish
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:445 (4) - end notes add finish / ^
all fixed

[Normal]
00:26:297 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:39:989 (2) - end notes add clap
00:44:821 (6) - add clap + finish
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:848 (1) - ^
all fixed

[Insane]
00:06:364 (1) - add clap
00:22:673 (5) - add clap or Sampleset Drum clap drum clap
00:32:338 (6) - 1st notes add whistle
00:33:143 (2) - start notes add clap
00:33:546 (3) - ^
00:34:351 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:38:782 (5) - 1st notes add whistle
00:39:586 (2) - start notes add clap
00:39:989 (3) - add clap
00:40:391 (6) - start notes add clap
00:42:405 (1) - end notes add clap
00:43:009 (3) - add clap
00:43:411 (5) - ^
00:43:814 (7) - ^
00:44:015 (1) - end notes add clap
00:44:418 (2) - ^
00:45:223 (4) - add clap
00:45:626 (1) - start notes add finish / bc original sound is also the finish sound
00:48:848 (1) - ^
01:28:713 (5) - hmm add clap or finish [suggestion] clap
all fixed

I hope this is useful modding.
good luck
thanks, this hitsound mod was very useful!
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
FCK I lost my mod and have to repeat it...

[General]
- You have to put the actual Japanese in the Artist, Title and Source parts. Leave the English translations and transliterations in the Tags.
Title: 凸凹（でこぼこ）解決せんせーしょん (Not sure here if you need to remove the part in the parenthesis)
Romanized Title: Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation
Artist: 田尻あやめと高橋優里花
Romanized Artist: Ayame Tajiri & Yurika Takahashi
Source: 人生

[Insane]
- 00:02:539 (3) - I hear a 1/4 in between the slider here. Change into a triple of notes or a repeat slider?
- 00:07:371 (3) - Add a whistle here sound nice since it complements the music. Same with other parts like: 00:07:975 (6) - , 00:10:593 (3) -, 01:00:525 (2) - , 01:03:747 (3) -, 01:03:747 (3) -, 01:06:968 (3) -, 01:19:854 (3) - etc. I didn't mention all, but you can probably know from the ones I gave which ones fit.
- 00:10:794 (4,5,6,7,8) - (7,8) plays oddly since I expected mirrored sliders here.
- 00:22:069 (3,4,5) - Purely straight patterns play dully. Titling them makes them more appealing to the eye and the diagonal flows player better. [See 01:28:109 (3,4,5) - ]
- 00:23:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - See above. Tilt them maybe 5 - 10 degrees?
- 00:25:693 (6,7,8,1,2) - Doesn't make a perfect shape here. Maybe http://puu.sh/aL5ay/3727b036e6.jpg ?
- 00:28:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is the spacing inconsistency between (3,4,5) and the rest intentional here?
- 00:40:794 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Straight patterns.
- 00:44:015 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:51:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 00:53:076 (2,3,4) - Drum sampleset? You can hear the drum here.
- 00:54:687 (2,3,4) - - Same as above.
- 01:09:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Straight patterns

[Normal]
- Same comment re: hitsounds and straight patterns here.
- 00:02:338 (1,2) - I recommend making this into a slider. The current pattern is kind of confusing. You jump from 1/2 to 3/2, to 1/1 spaced objects in the timeline.

[Easy]
- 00:44:015 () - The heavy beat is here, so the 00:43:411 (2,3) - will be confusing for new players.

[Mochi's Hard]
- I had a few changes here but when I redid the mod, I couldn't find them.
- Well, either way, it's a very good diff :)
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:02:942 (4) - 3/4 slider?
  2. 00:12:002 (1,2,3) - actually here's a 1/8 stream, maybe replace those two notes with 1/8 sliders. same to patterns like this as well, like 00:22:069 (3,4,5) - or others. of course stuff like 00:58:311 (5,1) - is fine as well
  3. 00:18:042 (7,1) - missed stream here?
  4. 00:13:009 (7,8,9,10,1) - perfect this stream's arc with the slider
  5. 01:19:049 (8,9,10,11,1) - ^

Mochi's Hard

  1. 00:14:217 (3) - a bit offscreen, move it up
  2. 00:28:713 (1,2) - why not blanket?
  3. 00:51:666 (4,1) - ^
  4. 01:28:109 (3) - change to 1/1 sldier+2 note's stream?
  5. good map, star

Normal

  1. 00:42:807 (2) - change to 1/2 slider
  2. 00:44:619 add 1/2 slider here and delete 6
  3. 00:48:042 (5,1) - blanket
  4. 00:56:901 (1,2) - blanket each other
  5. 00:58:512 (3) - nc
  6. 01:00:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - remap this part, i think it's not that good with those overlap and unorganized composing. like u can just try to stack 01:00:727 (2,5) - for better stuffs setting
  7. 01:21:666 (5,6) - not a good overlap
  8. well, why so much overlap r set in this low diff? thou it's not that recommended orz

Easy

  1. 00:10:190 (1,2) - i prefer avoid this overlap in the lowest diff, and all of them in this diff
lol those stuffs themselves r just good to me...

good luck
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

NoHitter wrote:

FCK I lost my mod and have to repeat it... argh that actually happened to me a couple times including when i was modding your ignite. now when i have a long mod to do, i always select all and copy/paste into notepad in case i accidentally close the browser tab

[General]
- You have to put the actual Japanese in the Artist, Title and Source parts. Leave the English translations and transliterations in the Tags.
Title: 凸凹（でこぼこ）解決せんせーしょん (Not sure here if you need to remove the part in the parenthesis) i'll leave the title as is until we figure out what to put in it
Romanized Title: Dekoboko Kaiketsu Sensation
Artist: 田尻あやめと高橋優里花
Romanized Artist: Ayame Tajiri & Yurika Takahashi
Source: 人生

[Insane]
- 00:02:539 (3) - I hear a 1/4 in between the slider here. Change into a triple of notes or a repeat slider? repeat slider
- 00:07:371 (3) - Add a whistle here sound nice since it complements the music. Same with other parts like: 00:07:975 (6) - , 00:10:593 (3) -, 01:00:525 (2) - , 01:03:747 (3) -, 01:03:747 (3) -, 01:06:968 (3) -, 01:19:854 (3) - etc. I didn't mention all, but you can probably know from the ones I gave which ones fit. yep i figured it out
- 00:10:794 (4,5,6,7,8) - (7,8) plays oddly since I expected mirrored sliders here fixed
- 00:22:069 (3,4,5) - Purely straight patterns play dully. Titling them makes them more appealing to the eye and the diagonal flows player better. [See 01:28:109 (3,4,5) - ] alright, it's angled now
- 00:23:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - See above. Tilt them maybe 5 - 10 degrees? ^
- 00:25:693 (6,7,8,1,2) - Doesn't make a perfect shape here. Maybe http://puu.sh/aL5ay/3727b036e6.jpg ? tried
- 00:28:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is the spacing inconsistency between (3,4,5) and the rest intentional here? yes, the first few are close because they are on very quiet instruments
- 00:40:794 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Straight patterns. angled
- 00:44:015 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
- 00:51:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
- 00:53:076 (2,3,4) - Drum sampleset? You can hear the drum here. okay
- 00:54:687 (2,3,4) - - Same as above. ^
- 01:09:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Straight patterns don't like angle here

[Normal]
- Same comment re: hitsounds and straight patterns here. i changed some of them, but for easy/normal i generally like straight patterns because they look a lot neater
- 00:02:338 (1,2) - I recommend making this into a slider. The current pattern is kind of confusing. You jump from 1/2 to 3/2, to 1/1 spaced objects in the timeline. done

[Easy]
- 00:44:015 () - The heavy beat is here, so the 00:43:411 (2,3) - will be confusing for new players. changed
thanks for modding! sorry you lost your mod =/
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:02:942 (4) - 3/4 slider? i'm trying to avoid 3/4 slider overmapping especially if the 1/2 tick has music on it
  2. 00:12:002 (1,2,3) - actually here's a 1/8 stream, maybe replace those two notes with 1/8 sliders. same to patterns like this as well, like 00:22:069 (3,4,5) - or others. of course stuff like 00:58:311 (5,1) - is fine as well i only hear 1/4 here. 00:22:069 (3,4,5) has 1/8 but i hope i can deliberately ignore it because the 1/4 circles are better to play
  3. 00:18:042 (7,1) - missed stream here? had a look at this part. there is only 1/8 between 00:18:143 and 00:18:244 (1) - so i'm gonna use a triple
  4. 00:13:009 (7,8,9,10,1) - perfect this stream's arc with the slider tried a little
  5. 01:19:049 (8,9,10,11,1) - ^ ^

Normal

  1. 00:42:807 (2) - change to 1/2 slider done
  2. 00:44:619 add 1/2 slider here and delete 6 ^
  3. 00:48:042 (5,1) - blanket done
  4. 00:56:901 (1,2) - blanket each other fixed a little
  5. 00:58:512 (3) - nc done
  6. 01:00:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - remap this part, i think it's not that good with those overlap and unorganized composing. like u can just try to stack 01:00:727 (2,5) - for better stuffs setting don't need to remap, only move a few things around
  7. 01:21:666 (5,6) - not a good overlap it just goes with distance snap
  8. well, why so much overlap r set in this low diff? thou it's not that recommended orz the intentional overlaps are good for flow

Easy

  1. 00:10:190 (1,2) - i prefer avoid this overlap in the lowest diff, and all of them in this diff infrequent overlap should be okay
lol those stuffs themselves r just good to me...

good luck
thanks for modding and star!!
DizzeY
39 posts
Joined July 2013
DizzeY
Hi~ For your m4m que :^3 Damn, learning this form of art is hard.
Insane
00:00:828 (1) - Pretty hard, consider removing it
00:04:049 (2) - ^
01:28:713 (5) - Add finish
Normal
Check AIMod
Easy
00:01:734 (2) - i feel like it should start on a white thick
Mochi's Hard
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

TheDizzeY wrote:

Hi~ For your m4m que :^3 Damn, learning this form of art is hard.
Insane
00:00:828 (1) - Pretty hard, consider removing it not at all
00:04:049 (2) - ^ what's hard about these?
01:28:713 (5) - Add finish doesn't go with finish sound
Normal
Check AIMod these are all acceptable. videos are now allowed to be 720p so that AIMod is outdated, and the kiai time thing is also ignored.
Easy
00:01:734 (2) - i feel like it should start on a white thick the red tick is much stronger
Mochi's Hard
no change, but thanks for trying~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
M4M from my Queue




  • General
  1. as i found on myanimelist, the title should be use japanese words http://puu.sh/aMyJf/cfa00456f7.png so please add it altho the title is kinda weird lol
  2. imo default combo colours don't fit with the BG, i would suggest like http://puu.sh/aMyVN/1e9252b8c7.png
    SPOILER
    Combo1 : 128,64,0
    Combo2 : 153,77,77
    Combo3 : 174,174,0
    Combo4 : 191,0,0
  3. 00:00:526 - how about use this custom finish for this time? imo the sounds fits a lot with music here


  • Easy
  1. 00:03:344 (2) - just a taste, how about move to 308,140? it appearently has better flow
  2. 00:11:197 (2) - the overlap might make newbie confuse imo stince the head covered with previous slider's body. move to 292,352 for avoid it and better flow too. don't forget to fix next inconsistecy spacings if you fix this one
  3. 00:12:203 (3) - imo on the repeat not really need clap since both vocal and music are slower than 00:13:009 -
  4. 00:16:029 (3) - nazi, please avoid 00:13:411 (1,3) - overlap here. it would make the design neater
  5. 00:17:841 - the music on this time is loud. i guess you must to map it even just 00:17:036 (4) - make this become sldier repeat is fine
  6. 00:29:519 (2,1) - since both of musics are cymbal + drum here. how about change whistle become clap instead? it would emphasize the drums more fit imo
  7. 00:33:143 (2) - try rotating 20 degree here? the flow would be smoother here and feel better to follow for me
  8. 00:35:962 (1,1) - same as 00:29:519 (2,1) - , but i highly suggest for 00:37:572 (1) - since the music is kick drum
  9. 00:43:411 (2) - finish on tail, cymbal~
  10. 00:39:586 (2) - how about clap on tail? the music is loud drum here
  11. 00:42:405 (1) - ^
  12. 00:48:445 (4) - bad overlap :< , i guess try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913715 and fix spacing for next objects if you follow this one
  13. 00:52:069 (1) - maybe you can add finish for both head and tail since on that times have cymbal sounds
  14. 00:53:680 (2) - ^
  15. 00:56:901 (1) - finish on head since it has cymbal sound
  16. 00:59:720 (4) - how about add additions drum and add clap here? just to emphasize the drum sound lol
  17. 01:04:351 - add note here to follow vocal since you're following vocal mostly here. and keep the gap 1/1 rhythm to make newbie easier to understand ww
  18. 01:16:230 (1) - ^ (but the music is loud as well so yeah)
  19. 01:22:069 (3) - add drum clap at head to have consistecy with 00:16:029 (3) -
  20. 01:24:284 (3,4) - sometimes stack making confuse for newbie. i would say to arrange these circles like http://puu.sh/aNiCH/2604993b47.jpg
  21. 01:28:713 - add note here with clap since the drum sound is end in here. kinda empty to skip here imo
  22. Reply all hitsounds that you fix from this diff to Normal and Insane. i'm totally tired to mention again


  • Normal
  1. 00:01:331 (2) - i guess the rhythm on this part can improved since the main sound in 00:01:432 - , so i would say try follow drum instead here with 1/1 slider start from 00:01:532 - ? i know this isn't the best ><
  2. 00:12:002 - if you're mapping the music too please add note here since the drum sound is really strong
  3. 00:13:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - i guess the rhythm is kinda hard since so much 1/2 gaps here. i guess you can remove 00:14:619 (3) - and change with circle on whitetick instead since you did it at 00:08:177 -
  4. 00:16:633 (1) - you can still use 1,0x spacing here so please keep the consistent of spacing by moving to 456,140
  5. 00:18:244 (4,5) - hmm too much 1/2 gaps again, you can remove them and use 1/1 slider instead http://puu.sh/aNjBg/f0d3ea53d3.jpg
  6. 00:36:767 (3) - nazi, imo the flow could smoother with try 1 grid down /runs
  7. 00:40:794 (1,2) - maybe some newbie can get a trap in this part since the gap of rhythm changed. to make easier to understand, change these circles become one slider instead ><
  8. 00:42:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uh oh i feel the rhythm too complex here. feel hard to Normal. make more simple rhythm with follow all important musics here, i guess like http://puu.sh/aNkDj/b5d36c6e3f.jpg
  9. 00:45:223 (7) - try add finish and cla with drum sampleset? the hitnormal still feel kinda empty here
  10. wtf from start kiai until end kiai are totally hard for Normal, and i don't find why need increase spacing here. altho maybe it for make neater design but it totally hard. i guess you must to remap the rhythm on Normal start from kiai until end


  • Hard
  1. OD 7 is really hard baka, duduk insane iki. OD 6 instead
  2. 00:12:103 (2) - tau sih ada suaranya tp imo kurang cocok di map. remove aja terus bikin little jump buat 00:12:203 (3) - so jd emphasize vocal nya jg kan
  3. 00:13:210 (5) - err finish di tail pdhl cymbal itu imo gak pas krn menurut teori mah cymbal kan kuat jd di map nya sampe ngejump. ya maybe jadiin 2 circles dan jump ke stanza?
  4. 00:16:633 (5,1) - swap NC. both stanza sama cymbal bener2 maksa NC disini. jgn blg NC di circle krn beda pattern?! msh bisa di baca sempurna kok circle nya walau tanpa NC
  5. 00:19:854 (1) - well just taste tp gue lebih suka mengurangi overlap disini. stack kepalanya sama 00:19:150 (3) - 's endas e. kalo lek ancen gak gelem overlap. 00:19:854 (1) - mlaku'no nang 152,300
  6. 00:39:989 (3) - sometimes jadi tipuan krn 1/4 stream. gra2 gw lebih lihat lu ngemap vocal disini jadi e http://puu.sh/aNlve/f221e16ce5.jpg gw prefer ritme kek gni sih
  7. 00:46:029 (1) - anti jump disini imo bikin tipuan jg krn spacingnya terlalu deket. stack atau anti jump spacing 0,20x would be better
  8. 00:49:653 (5) - NC here jadi nya tau kalo ritme dri 1/4 jadi pny gap 1/2 disini. pas gw testplay gw kira 1/4 (krn kebiasaan byk lihat Insane kek gni sih)
  9. 00:51:062 (2) - gw lebih prefer ctrl+G. sometimes lebih gampang dibaca dan di catch sih tp emang dasarnya gw gak suka pembacaan kek 00:50:458 (1,2) - sih
  10. 00:52:673 - finish, cymbal e gede. pitch e malah
  11. 00:54:284 - ^
  12. 01:00:123 (3) - NC NC NC NC NC NC NC for reading as kiai + jump
  13. 01:10:794 (2) - whistle feel random disini walau emang musiknya ada unsur whistle tp lihat dari pattern hitsound kerasa random, remove it i guess
  14. 01:13:915 (2,3) - terlalu byk 1/4 dri pattern sebelumnya, imo tangan player baru dari Normal trus coba hard lgsg kiting nang kene. 1/4 slider instead
  15. 01:14:821 (1,2) - taste, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913836? , ancene aku lebih suka flow e mlaku2 dripada lurus wae
  16. 01:15:828 (4) - flownya rada kaku dri sini ke next, also fak high jump ;w; , try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913840 instead?
  17. 01:27:505 (1,2,3) - nazi, bisa lebih rapi kalo slidernya bener2 ditengah, i mean as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913844


  • Insane
  1. 00:03:344 (5) - from the music, it should be a jump here. ctrl+G for it
  2. 00:19:049 (5) - NC here. all player won't be know if (6) still a 1/4 jump here
  3. 00:21:465 (1) - from the music it should be a jump :<
  4. 00:29:519 (1) - here too. 256,88 instead?
  5. 00:34:351 (1,2,3,4) - ooh the spacing are inconsistency, the sliders look so bad here. make 00:34:754 (2,4) - further. around 1,5x spacing or 1,7x spacing
  6. 00:44:015 (1) - since cymbal so jump instead to emphasize it. move to 184,88
  7. 00:59:519 (1) - the flow could more interesting here, try move to 184,100
  8. 01:15:828 (5) - feel too plain too for the flow, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913862 ?
  9. 01:26:096 - 01:26:499 - 01:26:901 - 01:27:304 - i guess its really empty w/o any note. i guess add circles and do like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913865 would be nice
  10. the diff is fine but the jump altho normal spacing feel so plain on the flow example 00:42:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (mostly on circles here)

Good Luck
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
hey。
Thanks for mod for mod
[Insane]
00:00:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1914090 although 00:01:029 - have a bass,but it start from 00:00:727 - ,this bass was ignored so should ignore it again
00:05:962 (6) - shorter 1/4
00:12:002 (1,2) - 1/6 here？
00:18:042 (7,8,1) - ^
00:22:572 (4,5) - ^
00:29:217 - a 1/4 slider?
00:41:197 (5,5) - del?
00:48:848 (1) - I think should Ctrl+J to fit music
01:18:042 (2,3) - 1/8?
01:28:613 (4,5) - 1/8
00:17:338 - note?
00:51:566 (5,6,7,8) - change to 2 slider?
00:54:687 (2,3,4) - ....keep it?
[Hard]
00:29:116 (2) - blanket
00:33:344 (2) - 440,116?
00:52:069 (1) - blanket
01:28:109 (3) - a red point at slidertick?
[Normal]
00:03:948 (1) - end at 00:06:062 -
[Easy]
00:03:948 (1) - ^
00:00:526 (1,2) - Rhythm Ctrl+G
00:52:069 - Rhythm http://puu.sh/aNwZ9/b523d8b821.jpg
xxdeathx
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M4M from my Queue




  • General
  1. as i found on myanimelist, the title should be use japanese words http://puu.sh/aMyJf/cfa00456f7.png so please add it altho the title is kinda weird lol used it as title, kept romanized title the same
  2. imo default combo colours don't fit with the BG, i would suggest like http://puu.sh/aMyVN/1e9252b8c7.png good idea but i switched 3 and 4 so you don't have two similar colors next to each other
    SPOILER
    Combo1 : 128,64,0
    Combo2 : 153,77,77
    Combo3 : 174,174,0
    Combo4 : 191,0,0
  3. 00:00:526 - how about use this custom finish for this time? imo the sounds fits a lot with music here done


  • Easy
  1. 00:03:344 (2) - just a taste, how about move to 308,140? it appearently has better flow moved to 328, 132
  2. 00:11:197 (2) - the overlap might make newbie confuse imo stince the head covered with previous slider's body. move to 292,352 for avoid it and better flow too. don't forget to fix next inconsistecy spacings if you fix this one done
  3. 00:12:203 (3) - imo on the repeat not really need clap since both vocal and music are slower than 00:13:009 - removed
  4. 00:16:029 (3) - nazi, please avoid 00:13:411 (1,3) - overlap here. it would make the design neater can't see the overlap since they're far apart in time but still fixed
  5. 00:17:841 - the music on this time is loud. i guess you must to map it even just 00:17:036 (4) - make this become sldier repeat is fine slider repeat
  6. 00:29:519 (2,1) - since both of musics are cymbal + drum here. how about change whistle become clap instead? it would emphasize the drums more fit imo done for all diffs
  7. 00:33:143 (2) - try rotating 20 degree here? the flow would be smoother here and feel better to follow for me done
  8. 00:35:962 (1,1) - same as 00:29:519 (2,1) - , but i highly suggest for 00:37:572 (1) - since the music is kick drum done for all diffs
  9. 00:43:411 (2) - finish on tail, cymbal~ done
  10. 00:39:586 (2) - how about clap on tail? the music is loud drum here done
  11. 00:42:405 (1) - ^ done
  12. 00:48:445 (4) - bad overlap :< , i guess try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913715 and fix spacing for next objects if you follow this one done
  13. 00:52:069 (1) - maybe you can add finish for both head and tail since on that times have cymbal sounds done for all diffs
  14. 00:53:680 (2) - ^
  15. 00:56:901 (1) - finish on head since it has cymbal sound ^
  16. 00:59:720 (4) - how about add additions drum and add clap here? just to emphasize the drum sound lol ^
  17. 01:04:351 - add note here to follow vocal since you're following vocal mostly here. and keep the gap 1/1 rhythm to make newbie easier to understand ww done, but then they won't have a 2 beat break for a while
  18. 01:16:230 (1) - ^ (but the music is loud as well so yeah)
  19. 01:22:069 (3) - add drum clap at head to have consistecy with 00:16:029 (3) - done all diffs
  20. 01:24:284 (3,4) - sometimes stack making confuse for newbie. i would say to arrange these circles like http://puu.sh/aNiCH/2604993b47.jpg i think it fits the music
  21. 01:28:713 - add note here with clap since the drum sound is end in here. kinda empty to skip here imo done and also in 10% volume section
  22. Reply all hitsounds that you fix from this diff to Normal and Insane. i'm totally tired to mention again i mentioned if i fixed hitsounds for all diffs


  • Normal
  1. 00:01:331 (2) - i guess the rhythm on this part can improved since the main sound in 00:01:432 - , so i would say try follow drum instead here with 1/1 slider start from 00:01:532 - ? i know this isn't the best >< ok i'll try that
  2. 00:12:002 - if you're mapping the music too please add note here since the drum sound is really strong i barely notice it; easier to ignore it and focus on the loud parts
  3. 00:13:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - i guess the rhythm is kinda hard since so much 1/2 gaps here. i guess you can remove 00:14:619 (3) - and change with circle on whitetick instead since you did it at 00:08:177 - done and also added circle after 00:15:626 (5) - to stay consistent
  4. 00:16:633 (1) - you can still use 1,0x spacing here so please keep the consistent of spacing by moving to 456,140 fixed differently after adding circle
  5. 00:18:244 (4,5) - hmm too much 1/2 gaps again, you can remove them and use 1/1 slider instead http://puu.sh/aNjBg/f0d3ea53d3.jpg
  6. 00:36:767 (3) - nazi, imo the flow could smoother with try 1 grid down /runs ok
  7. 00:40:794 (1,2) - maybe some newbie can get a trap in this part since the gap of rhythm changed. to make easier to understand, change these circles become one slider instead ><
  8. 00:42:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uh oh i feel the rhythm too complex here. feel hard to Normal. make more simple rhythm with follow all important musics here, i guess like http://puu.sh/aNkDj/b5d36c6e3f.jpg took a while but managed to fix these 2
  9. 00:45:223 (7) - try add finish and cla with drum sampleset? the hitnormal still feel kinda empty here done for insane too
  10. wtf from start kiai until end kiai are totally hard for Normal, and i don't find why need increase spacing here. altho maybe it for make neater design but it totally hard. i guess you must to remap the rhythm on Normal start from kiai until end it used to be same spacing but No_Gu's mod told me to increase it for neater design


  • Insane
  1. 00:03:344 (5) - from the music, it should be a jump here. ctrl+G for it did something different
  2. 00:19:049 (5) - NC here. all player won't be know if (6) still a 1/4 jump here makes sense
  3. 00:21:465 (1) - from the music it should be a jump :< i wouldn't want them to get confused by the spacing since there's 1/2 and 3/4 in this area
  4. 00:29:519 (1) - here too. 256,88 instead? done
  5. 00:34:351 (1,2,3,4) - ooh the spacing are inconsistency, the sliders look so bad here. make 00:34:754 (2,4) - further. around 1,5x spacing or 1,7x spacing done and made the sliders look nicer
  6. 00:44:015 (1) - since cymbal so jump instead to emphasize it. move to 184,88 ctrl-g'ed both sliders to be more interesting, moved first one a little further but its head is not as far as your suggestion because of ctrl-g
  7. 00:59:519 (1) - the flow could more interesting here, try move to 184,100 i do want a tougher pattern for the lead-in to kiai, but this would confuse distance snap and it's already nicely overlapped with 01:01:130 (4) -
  8. 01:15:828 (5) - feel too plain too for the flow, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913862 ? done
  9. 01:26:096 - 01:26:499 - 01:26:901 - 01:27:304 - i guess its really empty w/o any note. i guess add circles and do like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1913865 would be nice tried something like that
  10. the diff is fine but the jump altho normal spacing feel so plain on the flow example 00:42:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (mostly on circles here)yeah, i tried to make this a fairly easy insane but maybe in the future i will figure out some more interesting circle patterns for parts like this

Good Luck
thanks for modding!
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