tsukamaete wrote:

Hard:
hitsounds - no silence

00:45:680 (3) - 要和前面节奏一样00:34:771 (4,5,6,7) - 这样会比较舒服

00:48:408 (7) - ^

00:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太丑了

01:24:203 (10) - Newcombo

00:12:953 (1) - No NC

00:13:294 (1) - ^

00:33:408 (1) - ^

00:00:340 删除绿线

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• Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
  1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
  Offset: 350
  Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.

• .Suggestions:
  01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short

• .Suggestions:
  01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?

1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
   看到你osb文件里有这个code
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88

   我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
   请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?

1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了

2. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始

xierbaliti wrote:

- - 这歌音效声太好了0.0 按歌来+没错
建议:添加 空白音效 soft-sliderslide.wav 和soft-slidertick.wav
00:29:828 (6) - 去掉这个 然后在00:30:169(7 8中间)放1个circle 如图[attachment=0:d1f8b]002.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
00:55:567 (?) - 在00:55:908 (1) -的位置添1个note?
01:00:680 (10,11) - 去掉这2个 在10的位置+1个折返的slider 如图[attachment=1:d1f8b]001.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
01:09:203 (?) - 这里+1个note听起来不错
01:26:930 (1) - spinner结束在01:28:294比较好

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:

• Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
  1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
  Offset: 350
  Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.

- Normal:

• .Suggestions:
  01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short

- Hard:

• .Suggestions:
  01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?

Map is fine, but there are some things to fix, like video and lead-in.
If you have other questions, feel free to ask me.

Breeze wrote:

鬼鬼o.o

比人的post对你有用的话应该给kudosu吧o.o

[General]

1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
   看到你osb文件里有这个code
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88

   我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
   请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?

[Normal]

1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了

[Hard]

2. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始

其他不错
star

lesjuh wrote:

Your BG is a little too big, 1024x768 is the max size for beatmaps, just cut a small part of the width

Hard:

00:37:869 (5) - Place it right under the previous sliders end.

Fix and I'll proto-bubble :>