Crazyravers - Wonderland (Dj Satomi Remix) · forum

ztrot

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ztrot 2010-01-27T09:01:17+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 31, 2010 at 6:31:31 PM

Artist: Crazyravers
Title: Wonderland (Dj Satomi Remix)
Tags: trance
BPM: 156.7
Filesize: 5837kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.06 stars, 165 notes)
Hard (4.97 stars, 388 notes)
Jericho2442's Dreamland (5 stars, 476 notes)

Download: Crazyravers - Wonderland (Dj Satomi Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I wiped my comments AGAIN! T.T

Last edited by ztrot 2010-02-01T00:31:34+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-01-29T11:23:02+00:00

Easy:

Oh god you suck. Also, the kiai is sort of broken.

Hard:

00:10:053 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:15:796 (2) - New combo.
00:39:919 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:451 (1) - New combo.
00:41:642 (4) - New combo.
00:43:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
Actually, fuck it, nobody cares about this and there are no real errors with either of the difficulties. Oh, wait.
02:10:666 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - Whistles, yo.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-01-29T19:53:34+00:00

yooooo here's an epic SB for ya

put both the .osu and the SB folder into the main folder for the song
Download: Wonderland SB.zip

also star and i wont ask to make a diff since you dont want a insane

XepherX3

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Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2010-01-29T21:24:51+00:00

alright

i really like this map

maybe full lenght the Hard difficulty or shorten the mp3

star from me

Lilac

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Lilac 2010-01-29T23:19:14+00:00

I want to go. I want to run. Run to the places that I can be.

Hard song to map and in progress.

EDIT: Let me put the new one here.

Download: Crazyravers - Wonderland (Dj Satomi Remix) (ztrot) [A Very MB Normal].osu

Last edited by Lilac 2010-01-31T00:04:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-01-30T17:40:45+00:00

ok here an SB update and the Insane diff you asked me to map

Download: SB and Difficulty.zip

still got a few changes to do with the SB yet but need to catch you ingame so i can make sure you will like them

Azure_Kite

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Azure_Kite 2010-01-31T13:36:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-01-31T13:57:36+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2010-01-31T14:13:32+00:00

- General:

I still think custom colours are a bit too dark >.<
The part in which the BG is darkened is almost impossible to see D:

- Easy:

.Opinions:
01:08:636 (1) - make the shape better? xD

- Hard:

.Suggestions:
02:24:450 (3,1) - i think swapping new combos here is better

- Jericho2442's Dreamland:

.Opinions:
Nothing to complain here ^^

Awesome job for this mapset. As i said before i don't like the custom colours D:
Here's a star. Ask me when you reach at least 8 and i'll protobubble

HakanaiUtopia

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Joined September 2009

HakanaiUtopia 2010-01-31T17:46:40+00:00

First mod ever

General :

Nice skin and BG, lovely ambiance Nice hitsounds, too. And a mini mini fix, I think BPM is better in 156.68 or 156.69, but not very important Kiai times are well placed.

Storyboard

I like it But...

http://img18.imageshack.us/i/screenshot018oe.jpg/

http://img94.imageshack.us/i/screenshot019tq.jpg/

Fix it if it's possible

Easy :

58.292. Maybe add a circle ?

Hard :

My favorite diff

39.919 (3) & 41.451 (3) : Align those circles.

Jericho's Dreamland :

23.071 Maybe add a circle in the middle of the grid ?

That's all, star

Armin

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Armin 2010-01-31T20:42:37+00:00

Add the tag "Jericho2442" on all the difficulties?

[Easy]

Overall: Very clean and nice for an Easy difficulty. Good job on this.

00:06:607 (1) Make the shape of this slider better, like in the sreen:

02:04:539 (1) As above
01:11:699 (1) Whistle
01:59:562 (1) Make this 1/1 shorter
02:14:877 (4) New combo?
02:20:621 (1) Finish

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Hard]

Overall: As above I can't find major problems.

00:30:538 (x) Add another spinner here (end= 00:31:495)
01:17:060 (5,6,7) Bad position, considering the previous triplet. Try something like that (I fixed the spacing of the next hitobjects, which is better now):

01:21:559 (6) New combo?

Overall Rating: 9/10

[Jericho2442's Dreamland]

Overall: Well done, for the mapset and especially for the hitsounds.

00:22:306 (10,11,12,13) I don't like the place where the hitobjects are; it seem a little random: try something like this?

00:27:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) The position of this stream is very UGLY, particularly the position of the last two hitobjects. Make them better, please. (See the picture for an explicit example:)

01:38:119 (2) Clap at the end
01:39:651 (2) As above

Overall Rating: 9/10

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-01-31T23:31:07+00:00

Jeri
00:10:053 (7) - [Nazi] - line up with the end of 6
00:40:876 (4) - 1 grid down
01:19:549 (x) - insert note here?
01:19:645 (4) - remove this
01:43:863 (5) - maybe center this between (4) and (6)
01:45:395 (5) - ^
02:12:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wut is this supposed to be

Hard - Can you make the whistles softer overall?
00:10:436 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:471 (1) - make this look like (2) and (3)
01:11:317 (3) - up 1 grid
01:15:911 (5,1) - move left 1 grid
01:22:038 (4) - up 1 grid
01:49:798 (1) - make this slider look like (2) and (3)

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-02-01T00:29:28+00:00

Azure_Kyte wrote:
[Jericho2442's Dreamland]
00:10:723 - Unnecessary timing section? fixed
02:26:939 (1) - Kiai at the end, please. i dont like kiai bursts 1 bit

Sushi971 wrote:
[Jericho's]
00:40:876 (4,2) - align fixed

that's all

pretty cool~

Nightangel wrote:
Storyboard

I like it But...

yea the prob with the fog is it was very hard to do, anyway ztrot has changed it a bit and although not as dramatic, its just as nice and fixed

Jericho's Dreamland :

23.071 Maybe add a circle in the middle of the grid ? no

That's all, star

Armin wrote:
[Jericho2442's Dreamland]

Overall: Well done, for the mapset and especially for the hitsounds.

00:22:306 (10,11,12,13) I don't like the place where the hitobjects are; it seem a little random: try something like this? no

00:27:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) The position of this stream is very UGLY, particularly the position of the last two hitobjects. Make them better, please. (See the picture for an explicit example:) no its my style

01:38:119 (2) Clap at the end no
01:39:651 (2) As above no

Overall Rating: 9/10

ouranhshc wrote:
Jeri
00:10:053 (7) - [Nazi] - line up with the end of 6 fixed
00:40:876 (4) - 1 grid down fixed in diff mod
01:19:549 (x) - insert note here? no
01:19:645 (4) - remove this no
01:43:863 (5) - maybe center this between (4) and (6) ......there aint even a (6) at this point >_>
01:45:395 (5) - ^ ^ also both are how i want them
02:12:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wut is this supposed to be what it looks like

thanks very much to the mods, even the ones i didnt agree with, thanks for taking the time

Download: Crazyravers - Wonderland (Dj Satomi Remix) (ztrot) [Jericho2442's Dreamland].osu

whymeman

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whymeman 2010-02-01T01:10:31+00:00

Alright then, bubbled.

Mafiamaster

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