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ParaDoX - Alcatraz

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Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Mismagius
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 20 de fevereiro de 2010 at 01:32:10

Artist: ParaDoX
Title: Alcatraz
Tags: keygen chiptune
BPM: 125
Filesize: 1627kb
Play Time: 00:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Difficult (4,99 stars, 149 notes)
  2. Medium (4,24 stars, 84 notes)
  3. Relaxing (0,47 stars, 31 notes)
Download: ParaDoX - Alcatraz
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Last edited by Mismagius , edited 13 times in total.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Keygen music, lol.

[Timing]
Yes, there are two sections. This song is repeat twice, and the repeats are not connected right (listen to 00:30:794-00:31:752 with 25% BPM, you can see the timing is right and them immediately wrong).

I am by no means BPM expert, but this for 100% has two sections (although the second one should be placed ~10 second earlier, where the offset really changes).

[Relaxing]
Sloooow.
00:06:377 (3) - shorten by 1/2. The tick is not visible when playing and it looks like it was ending earlier.
00:44:048 (2) - feels bad. Split it into two sliders. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337)
00:54:342 (1) - place the silencing section immediately after spinner beginning - it is weird when you first can hear "bings" and then can't.

[Medium]
00:05:419 (4,5,6,7) - decide about the spacing, man.
00:08:292 (2,3) - not stacked correctly. To do it, reverse (3) (Ctrl+R), place it on grid, and then reverse it back.
00:13:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - slowdown doesn't make sense.
00:17:628 (5) - FFUUU-      ^
00:21:458 (1,2,3,4) - yet another bad slowdown.
00:29:119 (1,2,3) - space them further.
00:41:415 (4) - slowdown, spacing.
00:54:342 (1) - see [Relaxing].

[Difficult]
Win.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Background's too large. Like your mother.
.osb file can be deleted. Like your mother.
Photoshop can be removed as a tag, since it's already in the source. Like your mother.
Black hitcircles can sometimes blend in with image and the sides of the screen on widescreen, so I recommend using a different colour or a dark grey. Like your mother.
Timing is too fast. Like your mother. Try BPM 125.08.

[Relaxing]

It's okay. Like your mother.

[Medium]

00:13:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing change is kinda random. Like your mother.
00:40:218 (2,3,4) - Spacing is messed because of the 1/2 BPM section, which doesn't fit that well either. Like your mother.

[Difficult]

00:40:936 (5) - A bit too concealed, since there was just another slider there.
00:44:048 (6) - ^

Looking forward to this map. :) (don't worry, your mother's already ranked and played and in-the-dark SSed)
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Difficult:
00:15:497 : for me, it don't look like a jump, but it's ok if you say that this is insane diff

anyway, it's a good map itself, u can avoid mine
star+
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
Oh god, I remember when I use this keygen. It's a nice map. ç_ç
Aeris_old
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Aeris_old
Here, a star for you =***
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's ONLY LINE mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

The only thing I have to say is to add a warning at the 0,5 sections, orz.

Done. Star. Lol.
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
So easy, a caveman can do it

James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
make background 1024x768 not 1228x768

relaxing: hp+10 overall diff+10 plzzzz make it harderrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....ok nvm
increase overall diff by 1?
00:06:383 (3) - extend by 1/2
00:42:839 (1) - move up slightly

medium:
00:40:921 (3,4) - make 4 further away from 3 (distance snap doesn't know what its talking about :P )

difficult:
00:07:342 (12) - add clap to the start of this?
00:10:220 (9) - add clap?
00:18:346 (12) - doesn't sound good when it isnt on white tick...so change this somehow
00:26:007 (13) - ^

*star*
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
SPOILER
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Oh yeah, source should probably be Photoshop, not PhotoShop, which looks weird.

Bye~ (no kds, obviously)
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Relaxing]
00:50:51(1,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?

[Medium]
No problem :3

[Difficult]
No problem :3



Good song :3
But... Ahh...
/me is sad at DSQ...
Anyway, good luck :3

Here's my star.

ps. Don't give kudosu to this reply plz
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Relaxing
SPOILER

00:02:545 (x) : Add a beat here.

I'm bored.

Medium
SPOILER

00:07:102 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:07:582 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:15:257 (7) : One grid to the left.

[*] The diff.'s name reminds me of buying salsa, name it "normal"

Difficult
SPOILER

Bueno.
mm201
osu! Alumni
4,495 posts
Joined August 2008
mm201
Offset: 132
BPM: 125.000

Blue Dragon wrote:

Also, hidden sliders at Difficult are COOL.
No they are not. Nonetheless, I FCed Difficult on my first run so whatever. Keep them if you like.

So this music is from a Photoshop keygen? :lol:
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[relaxing]
00:19:812 (1,2,3) - spacing is a lil out here, also feels wierd to play this pattern but ive no idea why, prolly just me >_>


[Meduim]
00:27:252 (1,2,3) - (2,3) are too far away
(suggestion) 00:52:212 (1,2,3) - i think this could look nicer, atm it feels a bit like messed up placing

[Difficult]
(suggestion) 00:48:612 (12) - new combo
(suggestion) 00:56:292 (7) - new combo

_____________________________________-
nice clean maps, good job :)
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Resize the BG; it's still too big. like your mother It's currently 1228x768. Max size is 1024 x 768.

Lower hitsound volume a bit? Some of the hitsounds (like the clap) are quite jarring. (such as this one 00:01:092 (2) on Medium)

Extend the end spinner on Relaxing by 2 bars (8/1) and the end spinner on Medium by 3 bars (12/1)? Just to be consistent with Difficult, which I don't really want to shorten.

The grey hitcircle colour can become a pain in tag coop, consider changing it. (you could use white, no kiai here)

Hum di dum.

Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
What's that, Frodo? The map got a proto?
mtmcl
mtmcl
Bubb.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Chiptunes, eh?

Novel.

Ranked.
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